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Swasan- A complicated love story!! (39)

Episode-39
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@Hospital-

Morning….

Sanskar was shown sleeping in sitting position holding swara’s hand n his head on the side table..

Swara is still shown sleeping.. or u can say unconscious..

Sanskar wake up listening to swara’s phone.. (u know na mother daughter morning phone call, vhi )

Sanskar saw the caller id.. MAA

Sanky- (thinking) omg!! its swara’s mom.. what will i say to her about her daughter.. ??
(looking towards swara) Wake up yr swara.. aab to subah bhi ho gayi.. plz yr wake up na..(teary eyed)
I cant tolerate u being quite.. (sanskar’s voice became heavy due to his tears)

He somehow picked the call…

Sujata- are swara.. why u took so much time in picking the call??.. soo rhi thi kya?? tumhari ye aadat kab jayegi.. i know my child dont wake up before listening my voice.. Accha ok now.. get up.. its morning.. n you know whati need to give u a good news too….
Are puttar.. Why r u not speaking??.. aab tak soo re h kya??

Sanskar was numb listening to the voice.. he felt the voice somewhat similar..(ofcourse afterall its his mom only)

Seeeing her care towards swara.. he couldnt even say a word about swara n is just listening to her..
How can he tell her about her daughter,s condition..

Suji- are puttar.. Uff this girl na.. get up na puttar..
Aacha chal jo m khuskhabri tujhe de re hu na usse sun ke tu abhi utha jayegi..
U r listening na chori..
aaj m tere papa aur tera bhai with ur beloved bhabhi n ur sweet cute neice are comming mumbai to meet u..
tere bhai ki koi meeting h aur usne bola ki hum bhi saath chalein.. aakhir humari swara se mile hume kitna time ho gaya h..

He to asked me not to tell u anything but u know na na ki mere pet me koi baat nhi pachti.. he he ..
ok ye humara top secret h kisi ko batana nhi.. aur jab hum log aayange na.. to surprised look dena taki sabko lage ki tujhe kuch ni pata tha.. (giggled saying this)

Otherwise u know ur papa n bhai…
Okk OK now get up fast..

Our flight is landing at 12.. we will meet u at 2.. ok
Aur baccha.. how is ragini now…. sab theek h na..??

Yeh ladki bh na.. m kini der se bole ja re hu aur ye h ki koi jawab hi ni de re…
Baccha.. u r there na..

Samnskar somehow got some strength n tried to speak..
(he looked towards unconscious swara n closed his eyes tightly gaining some strength to tell her family who love her so much about her being critical)

Sanky- h.. helo.. m vo sw.. swara..

Sujata- kaun?? ye to swara ka phone h na..??
Who is there.. n where is my swara. (she didnt recognise the voice of his kid due to his heavy voice with continuous weeping, samajh jao yr)

sanky- ji vo.. vo sw.. swara ka acc.. accident .. kal.. she is in .. hospital..

Sanky- Kya?? kya hua swara puttar ko.. vo theek h na.. aur tum kaun ho?
Baat karni h meko Shona se..(in shaking voice n tears flowing from her eyes)

Sanky- ji vo abhi.. city hospital.. unconscious.. aap aap plz yha aa jaiyae..

Sujata- hey babaji?? ye kya hua.. beta plz take care of her.. we will reach there as soon as possible..

Sanki- ji ji..

Saying this sujata cut the call.. n rushed to inform everbody about swara.

sujata- suniyae ji.. adi, pari..

Everyone rushed to hall listening to sujata’s voice..

Adi- kya hua mom.. why r u crying??
Everything is ok na?? .. today to we r going to meet ur swara na.. then what happened??….

RP- ha sujata … kya hua??

sujata- ji vo.. vo sw..ara ka accident..( saying this this sat on floor crying)

Abi- What?? but how?..

Sujata told about her convo with a guy when she called her in morning..
everyoe rushed for mumabi.. (uttra was not her as she went for her college tour)

@hospital–
Swara is still unconscious..
nurse n doctors are checking her and raglak n sanskar are waiting outside icu..(as her condition has not yet improved)

Doc came from icu..
Everyone rushed to him..

Doc- See, mr sarna.. As i have already told u.. she is really critial..
10 hours have passed already and if in next 10-12 hours she will not gain her consciousness.. then i m sorry to say but you may loose her .. just pary for her to get consious soon..
Listening this everyone became numb n doc left from there..

Sanky- bhai.. ragini.. aaisa kaise ho sakta h.. vo aaisa kaise kar sakti h..

Ragini- (cring continuously holding her baby bump)

sanky- ragini tum to swara ki best friend ho na.. plz ask her to open her eyes.. ..
vais ebhi usse abhi aapka khyaal rakhna h.. comittment di h usne mujhe.. aaise kaise vo apna promise tod sakti h..

lucky was also not in condition of thinking anything seeing ragini and sanskar in this condion ..
but then also he gatherd some courage.. n went towards them..

lucky- ragini, sanskar.. deko swara ko kuch bhi ni hoga.. we still have 12 hours left.. plz calm down..

sanky- (hugging lucky) pakka na bhai.. usse kuch ni hoga na.. (asked innocently)

lucky kept his hand on her head n signalled ragini to be strong for swara n their child..

RAgini nooded.
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Kaisa laga friends..
i know thoda boring h..
but plz mujhe jhel lo thode time uska baad sab interesting hi hoga…
agar aap logo ko plot aacha nhi lag ra h to plz tell me but dont reduce the comments as i already told u its the support system for me which encourage me to wrirte.. hope u understand..
n yes if anyone wanna give some suggestion regarding upcoming story then its also invited..
vaise i have upcoming story in my mind but if i like ur suggestions n it would somewhat match my story ..
i would like to continue with ur views..
afterall its u only who are gonna read the story.. but plz dont reduce ur support…
Accha okk.. bye … fir milange jaldi hi… bbyee 😉 🙂
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Monaa

There are lots of people I admire and respect, but I don't necessarily want to be like them. I'm too happy being myself.:) ?

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