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Chap
It was dark outside… As well as in swara’s life too…in a small village of rajasthan… Swara has become like an stranger….this was her own village.. Her own family members are spitting on her…her own husband..although she never felt a feeling of love for him…but still as society says..husband is everything for a married girl….and she followed the same..what was her fault..she just followed what social customs said…then why this is happening with her….
Swara was married at the age of 10 to a man lakhan singh ranawat… He was 25 at that time…she Was not able to understand the word marriage that time…all she knew was marriage means two people become friends n live together.. But everything changed…she wanted to study…but no study for her…she wanted to become a singer…but no singing for her…gradually she accepted her fate…but 1 week ago..life took a u turn…n everything lost…her matermal home…her husband… Her family… Everything..
It was morning… Ladies were beating swara’s door….
Lady: come out…u filthy call girl…i said come out….
Another lady: leave this society now only…our girls will get bad impact…
Suddenly door opened….swara was standing….. A bag in her hand…she didn’t look at the ladies…. But their words were echoing in her ears…
Lady: finally u r gping….do one thing.. Go to allahabad…n jump in the sangam of ganga yamuna….at least ur sins will be reduced
Another: no…u just don’t touch ganga water…otherwise it ll become impure too…
And all the ladies start laughing… Their laughs were troubling swara…but she kept mum…
Suddenly a man came out from his hpuse
Man: ohh…swara ji…where r u going… Give me a try…
Swara started running from there….tears dripping down her eyes…she went to railway station… N sat in a general compartment…. Her husband’s words were echoing in her ears…..WAS I NOT ABLE TO SATISFY U..WAS I NOT ENOUGH FOR U… GO U CALLGIRL.. NEVER SHOW YOUR FACE TO ME…
Tears were streaming down her face… N this way she slept…suddenly her sleep was broken by some noise… She opened the eyes….she looked at the station… It was varanasi… She came down from the train…she started walking aimlessly… She came to a bridge…. She saw river ganga…holy river….she closed her eyes….n jumped… As soon as her body touched ganga water…she felt a relief … Now all her trouble ended…now she ll get peace..
Somewhere in lanes of kolkata…
A woman was trying to wake up his son
Woman: laksh beta…wake up…
Laksh: two mins ma….
Suddenly he felt a splash of water on his face…he opened his eyes….n saw the hitler of the house….
Laksh: bhai…. Aap…when did u return feom London…
Man: when u were sleeping my dear lucky… Now get ready… We ve To join office from today onwards…
Laksh: ok sanskar bhai…
Precap
Sanlak go to varanasi
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