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swasan… dont hate me chap 6

Hello everyone…

Precap
Swara cried in front of sanskar n laksh.. Sanskar consoled her..raglak talk..

Chap

At agrawal mension..
ragini was scolding laksh and sanskar … BOth were making puppy face and listening her scolding…. Swara was listening to all this and was amazed and laughing at the sane tym…
Swara: didi… Stop it na…he is ur would be husband
Ragini: he is my friend first…where it is written that one should not scold her husband… Haa…ask him why he ssent aunty uncle and papa to village…
Swara: didi… Jiju wants to spend time with you na…dats y

Laksh when sae swara taking her side got happy
Laksh: ha…dats lyk my sali sahiba… See…ragini… Ur sister is far better than u..huhh
Ragini: m gonna kill u lucky monkey… If u utter a single word…
Sanskar: ragu…cool down…
Ragini gave a death glare to sanskar… Like if she could she will eat him with eyes…sanky gulped…
Sanskar: hmm.. Swara.. Woh.. Can u please show garden to me..i mean i want to see…bye bye both of u…
Swara: ohk..as u please…
Swasan went out and ragini again gave a death glare to lucky…
Laksh: sorry na baba…
Ragini: see laksh… We will get married in three months… Then i ve to leave papa…u dont know.. My each n every minute with him..means a lot..
Laksh: ragini… M really sorry… I will not repeat this mistake… Never.. N by d way..who told u.. Dat u will leave him…we will take him with us too…
Ragini: laksh…
Laksh: shhh…now wipe ur tears..
Ragini: tears…m not having tears in my eyes…
Laksh: sometimes tears don’t come from eyes…they come out from heart too…
Ragini melted hearing this..an unknown feeling engulfed her heart…
Laksh: u know… I know k u dont love me…but i love u…n m nt able to see u cry..
Ragini hugged him unknowingly… Laksh too hugged her back…

@ garden
Swara was telling sanskar about flowers… N sanskar was listening to her..
Swara: see… This flower…. Its so beautiful na… U know… It didn’t bloomed till evening… It has bloomed after your coming…
Sanskar: acha swara… Tell me one thing.. Why did u ever thought k we will break the alliance… I mean…. U cried…
Swara was unable to answer… Words wanted to come out from her mouth but…
Swara: mr.Maheshwari… Woh…actually… Actually i ve seen people who do this type of thing
Sanskar: ohh swara swara… Those people who do this type of thing are cheap…they are not human..they are devils…
Swara: may i ask one thing
Sanskar: ya sure
Swara: woh… According to you what should be the criteria of marriage
Sanskar: criteria… Hahaha… Love is the base of marriage… If there is true love… Understanding… Care.. Everything comes on its own….
Swara looked on…she was really confused to see such type of people… She has only seen dowry as the criteria of marriage…. But now….. It is a new world for her…
Swara: your thoughts are actually very good…
Sanskar: your eyes say a lot swara… It seems that you have went through a lot of turmoil…
Swara was mum.. Her eyes became moist…
Sanskar: i know you lied about your parents… I can catch lies very easily..
Swara looked at him…
Sanskar: but i can trust on u…as your truth is reflecting from your eyes…
Swara: woh…
Sanskar: no….m not forcing you to do tell me the truth… Tell me whenever you feel like…
Swara smiled faintly…. Suddenly they heard Rag screaming from the kitchen…swasan ran towards the kitchen…

@ kitchen..
Ragini burnt her hand while doing something… Suddenly laksh came…
Laksh: what happened… Are.. Take care na…hiw many times i ve told u…
Ragini: woh…
Laksh: no woh…let me see…

Swasan reach there…but they thought its better to be silent…. Swara was watching each and everything that laksh is trying relieve ragini pain….a flashback roamed in front of her eyes

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A 15 year old swara was making rotis for the family… Suddenly her hand burnt….
Swara: aahhhh
A woman in her late 50s came….
Women: what happened
Swara: wo dadi sa…my hand…
Woman: haven’t ur parents taught you anything…. Haaa…15 year old and don’t know how to make rotis…
The woman kicked swara….she fell near her feet…
Woman: make meals fast…otherwise we will burn you and eat you….
An afraid swara tried to make meals as fast as she could….
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Raglak were busy in their romance… Suddenly ragini saw swasan….
Ragini: laksh…. Bhai
Laksh: ragini…. M nt your bhai….
Ragini: laksh… Sanskar bhai….
laksh: oh come on haa…don’t Ininclude that monkey bhai here…
Suddenly he felt a searing pain his ear….he turned n saw sanskar was pulling his ears…
Laksh: bhai…. Why are u trying to take my ears of my body…u ve ur own na…
Sanskar: ohoooo….monkey bhai haa…let ma papa come…i will tell them…y u sent them to village…
Laksh: ohhhh….no bhai…. Who is monkey…. Its me who is monkey…. Aap to mere pyare se bhaiya ho….
sanskar: tujhe toh mai dekh lunga…by d way r u fine ragini…
Ragini: mujhe…. What happened to me
Sanskar: ohhh..ur hand was burnt na…
Ragini: hand….
Sanskar: yeaah…sry…i ve seen…actually we have seen ur romance… Ragini
Ragini turned and saw swara standing there…laksh saw swara then sanskar..
Laksh: woh i suppose my phone is ringing…
Ragini: woh…i ve to do some imp work…

Both tried to go but… THUD…
At the next moment ragini was on laksh… N laksh was lying on the floor….
Sanskar laughed and went away from there….swara too followed..

@ night
Sanskar was sitting on the dining table along with laksh and ragini….
Ragini: swara has made the food…she is a very good cook u know
Laksh: haa…thts y she chose pressure cooker to beat my bro…
Suddenly lakSh felt a smell….a sweet smell of food…sanskar too felt the same….both of them turned and saw swara who was coming with a pot filled with kheer..
Sanskar: wow… It smells good…
Swara placed the pot and served everyone….
Ragini: ur plate….
Swara: you all eat…i will eat afterwards….
Sanskar: why…i suppose u must be hungry…
Swara: woh…
Suddenly sanskar stood up and held swara’s hand…. He forcefully made her sit on the chair
Sanskar: ragini serve miss pressure cooker plate…
Ragini served her plate…swara was again anazed to see this….again a flashback started in front of her eyea.
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A 16 year old swara was standing while all the other people were eating food…only his sasu ma was not there…swara was too hungry…. But she had to wait till all the other members have eaten…. She went to kitchen and saw a piece of sweet lying there….. She casually saw it and ate it….suddenly her sasu ma came
Sasu ma: u idiot…. Dont u know all the elders have not eaten…n u ate….maharani hai kya kahi ki….
She slapped her hard…suddenly she felt some others presence too… She looked above and was hell scared….it was her husband…. He held her hair…and dragged her to room…and locked her there….for the whole night….after all her fault was big na….she ate before others because she was hungry…. Wow what a family that was
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Everybody went to sleep…but sleep was a thousand mile away from swara…she was remembering her past….she was also amazed to see such a family which she has seen in movies…. She was restless…. Suddenly she heard a voice…a male voice….he was singing…. Swara woke up from the bed…She saw from the window….. A man was singing
Bato ko teri hm bhula sake
Hoke juda ham na juda ho sake
Dil me hai zinda har ghadi tu kahi…
Hoke juda ham..na juda ho sake…

Swara was trying to see his face….suddenly he turned…. It was sanskar… Tears were clearly visible from his eyes…. He continued to sing
Kitni chahat hai dil me tu jane na
Kaise dil ko samjhaye dil mane na

Suddenly laksh came from behind…. Swara saw both of them…
Laksh: bhai…. U are again crying….
Sanskar: nah…bas thoda sa….bs…i remembered her….
Laksh: bhai….. Plz try to move on..u have to…she is not gonna return… N i suppose if she will see you in such condition…. She will also not feel good…
Sanskar: hmm u r ryt…chl sote hain….
They went but raised a question in swara’s mind….who was the girl they were talking about….. She slept thinking about this….

@ morning….
Swara was busy doing arrangements for ragini’s engagement….. She was decorating the hall by herself…. Laksh saw her….he and sanskar were seeing her from a distance
Laksh: m amazed to see how can a girl get attached to someone in just 2 days…
Sanskar: those who are deprived of love….behave in this way only when they get even a drop of affection from anyone….
Laksh: what do you mean
Sanskar: i think there is a deep story behind her eyes….
Laksh: whatever….. But she is really very good…
Sanskar: yaa…
Suddenly they hear a sound of stopping of car….
Laksh: mom dad have come…
Sanskar: lets go…. To recieve them….

Sanlak went out…..
Sanskar: papa….
Dp: yes beta….so u two have not teteased Rag i suppose….
Ap: ya…n if u ve…then u will pay….
They all laugh….
Arjun: are are….ab sari bate yahi kr loge kya…let go in… I ve to introduce u to my yyounger daughter….
Dp: younger daughter….

They move inside…
Arjun: swara….ragini….. Come….fast….
Ragini came down…she was wearing a saree of red colour….. And laksh was mesmerised to see her….
Ragini: pranam uncle…pranam aunty….
Arjun: no uncle aunty from now
Ap: yes…call me ma
Ragini blushed…. Her face was red and seeing this laksh was about to fall….
Ragini: ji….. Ma..
Dp: by d way arjun….. You were talking about your younger daughter…. But i suppose ragini is the only…..
Arjun: some relationship are made by heart…. She is my adopted daughter….
Dp: its good…. Introduce her to me….
Arjun: ya…ragini where is swara….
Ragini: oh…she was getting ready…i ll call her…
Suddenly swara came out….in a white and pink anarkali suit….
Arjun: this is my swara….
Swara came and touched dp and ap feet…
Dp: are wah…khush rho bachhe…. N no need to touch my feet….. U r daughter and daughters dont touch feet…
Swara: ji..

On the other hand sanlak were shocked to see this behaviour….
Laksh: bhai….. This is miss pressure cooker na
Sanskar: most probably. … But kal tak ye mahamari….aaj sanskari…its not swara…it is ddevi ma….she took 4 forms in less than 24 hrs….

Precap
A leap of 15 days….. Sanskar past…

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