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Recap
One year leap… Raglak trouble
ChP
Sanskar was sitting in his cabin… suddenly a knock…
Sanskar: come in…
Ashutosh steps inside…
Ashutosh : Sir…
Sanskar looked at him..
Sanskar: hey ashutosh… How are you…
Ashutosh: m good sir..
Sanskar: any imp work…
Ashutosh: yes sir… Woh.. I wanted to take a break… I mean leave from here… My mother is ill…
Sanskar: ohhh sure…
Suddenly laksh entered his cabin… Sweat drop were clearly visible on his face…
Laksh :.Sanskar… Chal…. Jldi…
Sanskar: where….
@ hospital
Ap n dp were standing outside a cabin… Ragini was checking the patient inside….
Sanskar n laksh came…
Laksh: what happened mom…
Sanskar: why u called us hospital at this tym….
Suddenly a hand tapped their shoulders….
Sanskar: commissioner uncle….
Comm: i called u here….
Laksh: but… But why
Suddenly ragini came out… Tension was clearly visible on her face..
Ap: beta… Who is she… What is commissioner saying….
Ragini turned towards commissioner…
Ragini: sir… She is in coma….
Comm: what…
Ragini turned towards dp
Dp: beta.. What happened…
Ragini lowered her gaze…
Ragini: bade papa… She is uttara didi…..
Hearing this name sanlak were shocked…. Ap sat on the ground with a thud… Dp held his head…
Ap: uttara…..
A flashback started infront of him….
10 year ago
Sanskar was 16 years old…. Laksh was of 17….
A deadly night some terrorist came to their house seeking shelter…. Dp n ap were out of station… his younger bro n sister in law.. Rp n sujata were there… Sanlak n uttara too were there….
Rp: i will not give shelter to u all…
Suddenly a gun shot… Then again…. Terrorists shot rp n sujata…. Sanskar n laksh tried to run towards terrorist but uttara locked them in a room…
Sanskar: didi plz…. We ve to fight….
Uttara: i cant let anything happen to u both… I will see them….
Sanlak Were watching this from a window…
Uttara: if u both consider me as ur di… Then don’t utter even a single word…
Uttara went down…
Terrorists: who else is in the house..
Uttara: noone… U ve killed my family.. Now kill me too….
Terrorist: we ve a better treatment for beautiful girls like u….
They dragged her with them……
Dp ap tried to find her out but in vain… Dp ap gave all love to sanlak…
Flashback ends…
Sanlak entered the ward… The face was same… But in thses 10 years destiny gave many marks on her body… It was clear that she had undergone from a lot of torture… Tears escaped from the corner of laksh’s eyes… Sanskar held her hand…
Laksh: sanskar…
Sanskar hugged him…. He wanted to seek peace in the embrace of his brother…
Sanskar: how did police found her out…
Comm: she was found near a temple… It seemed that someone has hit on her forehead with a heavy object…
Laksh clenched his fist…
Sanskar: whoever he is… He has to pay….
Laksh came out…. Suddenly he collided with Someone and d next moment he was lying on the floor…. But wait… He was not able to feel the coldness of floor beneath him but a warm soft touch… he opened his eyes n sAw the girl once happened to be his life… His ragini…. Her face.. Her beautiful eyes… Her breathe…
Laksh looked into her eyes… Those once used to be bright but are now red… Dark circles were saying the story of her sleepless night… Her face had become pale…
Suddenly laksh remembered swara n all his love once again faded
he stood up n went from there without even looking at her… Without even noticing that ragini has not only wounded her hand but had fallen unconscious too……
Laksh was going suddenly he felt noise in the corridor… He turned n saw ragini was being placed on a stretcher… His legs automatically turned back… He ran towards her while a hand blocked him….he looked… It was shekhar…
Shekhar : No… No mr maheshwari… Why are u bothering about her haa….
Laksh: uncle plz… Let me go… She is…
Shekhar: whats ur relationship with her haa…
Laksh: kaisi bate kr rhe h uncle… She is my wife…
Shekhar chuckled at this…
Shekhar: wife… Do u even know d meaning of wife… Sirf sat phere lene ka mtlb wife nhi hota…. Got it….
Laksh looked at him..
Shekhar: u r giving swara’s punishment to her… Haaa… What was her fault… She is taking side of swara because she knows her very well… n let it be… Why are u giving punishment to my daughter….
Laksh : but….
Shekhar: she never told me anything about ur trouble but her eyes clearly say that she is not well there… DP ji n apji told me….
Laksh lowered his gaze…
Shekhar: now enough… The one u considered ur life was unconscious n u were just moving away… So now move away n get out of my daughter’s life…
Laksh was shocked…
Ap came from behind..
Ap:.Shekhar ji… We will send ragini’s belonging to u… She has no right to spoil her life for a person like laksh…. M sry for all her troubles… But she will always be my daughter…
Laksh was shocked to hear all these things…. Shekhar left from there… Ap too left from there…. Laksh moved towards ragini’s ward…a nurse cane out…
Laksh: sister..how… Hez she…
Nurse: she is fine now…
Laksh: what… Why she was unconscious…
Nurse: are… Sir this is not the first time she had fainted…. This had happened many times before too….
Laksh: what…..
Nurse: yes sir…. Due to stress… Even last time when she fainted na..Doctor asked her not to take stress this much otherwise she might suffer from brain haemorrhage… N she again took stress…. This tym toh we saved her but if this will continue then worst can also happen….
Laksh felt as if someone snatched everything from him… Really… What was her fault…
His heart started to beat very fast… His eyes started to become moist….
Ap n shekhar were watching this from a distance…
Ap: shekhar ji u didn’t tell us about ragini’s condition..
Shekhar: she forcefully gave me her swear.. But now its the time… Its the topic of life n death…
Laksh entered ragini’s ward… She waa lying on bed… Her eyes were closed.. Her hair were spread around his face.. A flick was resting on her chin…. Laksh looked at her fingers…. The engagement ring was embracing her finger… He touched her fingers.. After a long time he felt as if someone has sprinkled some life in his dead fingers…
He caressed her hair… Her long hair were always the thing of facunatuon for laksh… Suddenly he heard his name.. Ragini was muttering his name in her unconscious state….
Ragini: la…laksh…… Laksh….
Laksh felt as if someone pierced his heart with a dagger… he was solely responsible for her condition… He was not able to tolerate anymore… He went away from there but suddenly felt a tug on his Hand…. He looked and saw ragini has opened her eyes…..
Laksh: ragu….
Ragini: again u r going na… Again leaving me na. ..
Tears escaped from laksh’s eyes….
Ragini: don’t go na… Dont….. Nhi na… Mat jao na….
Saying this ragini again closed her eyes.. She again went in deep sleep…. Laksh sat near her… Tears were streaming down his face. But again swara’s cheat came in front of him… He rushed out leaving ragini alone once again…
Chap
Swara in police custody
19 Comments
interesting
update regularly
what is the matter of swara?
Nice part dr….but waiting fr next part……if u can plz update it today……
Awesome dr…..
nice..continue soon..
awesome
Awesome very nice…. Post next soon dr
wow….. Raglak part was really awsome…. ?idiot laksh…… plz post soon if possible
Awesome dear… Loved it ?????
amazing…!! It’s really soo intersting…!! Waiting for next part…!!
nice update soon..
yeeeepiiiieeeee!!!???? see i said na that she cant be Swara… m so happy… ?? thnx for d chappy…☺
Amazing dear!
Plz don’t do this with ragini
And don’t separate swasan !
Plzzzzzxx
nice dear……thanks for updating it today itself….pls update the next the part soon….
aah many secret still behind.. luv it soo much, ty
Nice Loved it❤️
Awesome
Nice chappy….. …..m curious abt d revelation of reason behind swara’s betrayal…..update soon dear….
Amazing
Nice chapie.. feeling bad for ragini.. she has no fault in it still she suffered alot… she shud not forgive laksh so easily… n abt my swasan ehrly w8ng for truth rvltn
ohhhh cant wait….plz update next part asap