Hai guzzzzz this is my firs ff
In kolkata:
it was heavily raining two boys were standing near a car they are none other then lucky laksh and and sweet sanskar
Lucky-bhai i would like to eat pani puri
sanky-are u sure?
lucy-yes
sanky-Then lets go
sanlak went to pani puri
they ate one lucky got teary eyes
sanky(smiling)-my dear lucky are ok
lucky-y are u smiling bhai its so hot.I can’t eat this
sanky-that’s why i make u to sure but u won’t listen to me
sanlak paid mony to himand moved from there
luky-bhai u stay here i wiil bring car here
sanky-ok cme fast
lucky-ok my sanskar ji
sanskar smiles,lucky move from there
sanky-where are u lucky its too late where u went
sanky starts searching for him in parking area finally he found him
sanky-lucky?
sanskar beat him on his fore head he get in to concious
lucky-bhai…….aap…. yaha……
sanky-lucky what happen to u?
lucky-pehele aap bataw aap ko kya ho gaya and he starts smilling
sanky(in angry tone)-stop it lucky
flash back-one girl give dash to sanskar then he fall in to muddy waterhe stares her seriously but se even look him she ran from there (flash back ended)
lucky-how could u leave her like that
sanky-if she meet me again i will teach her lesson.lucky stop smiling
lucky-ok…………..
sanky-what happen to my car.How many times i told u be carefull with my car its my favorite it totally damaged
lucky get tensed seeing sanskar serious mood
screen freezes at lucky
PRECAP:in laksh bedroom
3 Comments
awesome start…
plz make it swasan n raglak as pairs
its awesome..
love it but when swaragini wil enter