Hi guys,Swasan fan fiction episode 36…,please read 34 and 35 before reading this..34,35,and this are back to back…
Scene 1:Sanskar is shifted to room from ICU..
Laksh is pushing the wheel chair,family members have all gathered,Swara wants to go near him,but hesitates,Sanskar also looks at Swara and then looks elsewhere,all of them chat and passes jokes,Laksh and Adarsh helps him sit on the bed,he jokes saying that,”if getting injured gives so much V.I.P treatment,I think I should make this a habit,Sujatha and A.P scolds him,Annapurna tells him that “yea patient will get good care,but relatives were living with wounded hearts,look at your wife,she has lost a few kgs”,Sanskar looks at Swara and smiles,she smiles back and they share an eyelock,she wants to go near him but stands still,relatives slowly starts leaving after some time,Laksh and Ragini are the last to leave,he hugs him and says , “welcome back bhai,I am sorry for everything,Sanskar hugs him and says, “I am the one who should ask sorry,sorry Lucky,for everything”,Ragini and Swara watches this with moist eyes,Laksh wipes his tears and jokes, “If I show my brotherly love with a tighter hug all that has started healing will start bleeding ,so we will pay the bill and buy some food for us and come,u are V.I.P ,no?so you will get special food from hospital,enjoy..”,he smiles and goes,Ragini comes near Sanskar and holds his hand and just looks at him,she says, “good to see you back Sanskar,thank God”she quickly leaves the hand and goes,in the corridor both Laksh and Ragini looks at each other with moist eyes…
Scene 2:Staff brings Lunch
Swara is about to go near Sanskar,staff brings the lunch and asks Swara to give it as there is injection following,Swara smiles hearing injection and gives a naughty look to Sanskar,she gives food to him and in between tells him, “somebody who was scared of injections would have got rid of that phobia,because this time would have got numerous na,Sanskar shows an angry expression and shows the cannula and says, “through this, it wont hurt,ok”,Swara raises her eyebrows and gives a “oh great”expression,their usual nok jhok continues,after some time nurse comes and takes a test dose on his arm and marks the area,he shows an angry expression to Swara,after the nurse leaves,Swara goes near him and slowly holds his hand and massages his palm and tells him, “for my hubby to be back in healthy form,he has to go through a few struggles and once he is back ,he and his wife will enjoy a lot of good moments together and his wife will not allow him to think about this pain ,even “,Sanskar looks at her and says, “then please tell my wife to do some magical charm and rescue me from here”,Swara replies, “but your wife is a poor human being,she doesn’t have magical powers,but her heart is full of love for her husband and she has offered all her love to God and asked for her husband’s cure”,saying this they look into each other’s eyes,she comes to hug him but her phone rings,Sanskar smiles and asks “who is the one with this right timing”,Swara shows her phone and says, “your bhai”,Laksh had called to ask what to buy for her lunch..she comes back and holds his shoulder and asks him if it is paining,he says, “actually Swara,stab wounds wont have pain at all,now only I realised that,especially after surgery,no pain,”Swara understands that he is teasing her for her question,she turns to him,stands opposite him and asks him to close his eyes,he tells that if she has some grudge she may take revenge later as he is already a damaged body,he feels the warmth of her lips on his forehead,Swara kisses his forehead and moves back,he holds her hands and brings her closer to him and says, “actually this medicine is good,he shows actions as though his whole body is paining and asks for more medication of the same type,Swara tells him that she will tell doctor to give it,she hits him and says Laksh and Raagini may come anytime…
Scene 3:After three days, evening, in hospital garden
Sanskar is seated on the wheel chair,Swara takes a bunch of flowers of multiple colours from the weeds and tells him, “look,history is repeating,you gave me yellow bunch,but I have all colours because our love has multiple shades,she hands it over to him,then goes behind him and hugs him from back and both click a selfie together…….checks it and Sanskar says, “Oh,I look so good with this beard avathar”,Swara replies, “yea,like a bear”,he tries to hit her and she runs..
Scene 4:Raglak,after a few days…
Laksh has brought Ragini to a their farm house,the farm house is well decorated,he closes her eyes and makes her walk forward,he brings her to the centre of the room,he takes his hand off and asks her to remain with eyes closed,he ,after a few minutes asks her to open her eyes,she opens and finds him on his knees,he extends his hand and tells her, “Myself, Laksh Maheswari ,wants to ask you Miss ,sorry,Mrs.Ragini Maheswari if you are ready to accept my love and be my loving wife ,Ragini looks at Laksh in surprise,she keeps her hand in his and nods,he kisses her hand and says “Thank u”,he gets up and takes her face inside his hands and says, “I love you Ragini,”tears roll down her eyes,he wipes it and she tells him, “I love you too Laksh,they keep looking at each other and Laksh hugs her,she hugs him back and they share a tight hug…………
Scene 5:Sanskar is back home after a few days
Sanskar is back home in the evening,Annapurna does the arathi and welcomes him,they all spend quality time together at the dining table,after the dinner DP says that they will throw themselves a party the next day,no outsiders,only them and they will sing and dance till late night as after a long gap,everything is fine in their home,after a chat for around an hour they have dinner ,wishes good night and goes to their respective rooms……..
Scene 6:Swasan
Swara is back after a shower,she sees Sanskar playing games in his phone,he tells him that radiation hazards,wound has healed but that doesn’t mean you can do anything,she tells him to sleep,she makes him lie down,he pulls her hand and asks her to sleep beside him,she says ok and wishes him goodnight,he tells her that “good night kiss…”,she smiles and hits his face slowly and kisses his forehead and wishes him good night,he pulls her hand and tells her, “I have counted ,shall return it all with interest,so don’t worry ,ok,”She hits him hard on his shoulder and asks him to take rest…
Scene 7:After few days,Sanskar is absolutely fine and back to normal….
Sanskar and Swara are in their car,Swara asks him “where are you taking me,this early,atleast say the place yaar”,he tells her to keep quiet for some time as they are going on a pilgrimage and he doesn’t want to get angry on her,after some time,they reach somewhere,Sanskar asks Swara to come out,it is a temple ,there is big banyan tree at the entrance,temple is at the top,it resembles the temple in Chottu maa’s village,he tells her that this temple and atmosphere resembles that of our village temple,but this has around 20 steps only leading to it,and it is not at all crowded,I had come here many times before,he tells her, “ from now, keep your mouth shut”,telling this ,he carries her in his arms,he tells her, “this time number of steps is less but I am carrying you not with my arms,but with my heart and it is my vow before we begin our life”,Swara looks at him with moist eyes,they reach the top,does the rituals ,he gives something to the pandit,he prays,blesses and gives it back,Sanskar asks him if they are too early,Pandit tells him that a few people may come after some time,he blesses them and goes,Sanskar takes her hand and makes her stand in front of the idol,he kneels down on one knee and asks her, “Swara,I am inviting you to be part of my soul,I am inviting you to be my wife,I am inviting you to be the mother of our kids,I am inviting you to be the centre of my life,will you be there with me for the rest of my life and births ,if that exists,she takes his face in her arms and tells him, “yes,any number of births,I will be yours…I accept all your conditions, because, I love u……..he gets up and opens his hand which has a small sindoor box,a ring and a chain which he got blessed a few minutes back,he puts sindoor on her forehead and hands the box to her,he takes her hand and puts the ring on her finger,he takes the chain and makes her wear it and Swara closes her eyes and prays and tears roll down her cheeks,he wipes her tears with his hands and cups her face and kisses her forehead,she holds his hands,Swara hugs him and they share a long hug,suddenly they comes back to senses,he holds her hand and comes down the stairs,there is a strong wind,the leaves of the Banyan tree are moving with it,a few falls on them,both of them looks at the tree and the wind,Swara says, “this wind is a medium of God’s blessing on us,together they look up and feel the wind,Sanskar holds Swara by her shoulder,they share an eyelock,after some time…they reach their car,gets inside,car moves……………………………………………
(And here begins, a pilgrimage of LOVE………………………..)
Signing off-Vini Ross(Veena).
101 Comments
Mind blowing episodes
Loved all three parts 🙂 🙂
I just can’t believe it ended. Oh my God. You made me cry.. Damn man.! Did it really end?? I still can’t get over the fact.
Trust me, I can’t think of anything to say.. These 3 back to back episodes were way too good for me to handle.. Well, they did leave a strong hangover.! You. Are. Awesome. I am a voracious reader and trust me, very few Indian writers could move me till today. And girl, you did it too. I still can’t believe how crazy I was for your ff. I literally waited the whole day, checked my phone every 20 minutes. I “craved” for your updates, to be very precise. Your language, it’s magical. You have a long way to go, trust me 🙂
hope to see you with another ff. And your made me fall in love with SwaSan all over again 🙂 (I don’t watch the original episodes though 😀 )
take care and never stop writing 🙂
wow u are just amazing , u are a great writer , ua ff is superb
What the words in bracket at last mean and it was good
Will miss you dear and ur ff too
Its just awesome I wish I could see these scenes in swaragini waiting for these scenes yaar
Wow vini.. it was amazing!!! I hope you’d be back with another wonderful ff 🙂
Your ff is fantastic di!!!! Earlier I had commented by mistake in another ff. I am totally speechless!!! Pls keep writing!!!!!!
Pls do not end your ff di!!!!!!! It is my earnest and humble request !!!!!! I literally waited for your ff everyday di !!! I don’t why but I have always thought of u as my sister. Pls don’t end it??
Di super super super.after reading this my eyes are filled with tears.iam gonna miss u and ur ff to a very great extent.actually i dont like current track of swaragini.just watching this show for swasan.but ur ff from the start to the end with evry episode u just made me to love this pair even more.there love care bonding fight evn there small gestures u wonderfully conveyed to us .u r a fabulus writer di.without any experience u just rocked this ff.thank u di for this wonderful story. Iam telling u should try a hand on this proffession.my first comment ever was for u,bcoz after reading ur ff u left no option for me.once again super di.gonna miss ur ff.wish u a very happy and beautiful life ahead.thank u for this imaginary treat .luv u di
Actually,Vini Ross is my real name,had been writing under the name Veena,and the above is the last part of my ff,these 36 episodes is dedicated to each and every one of you who read and commented under mine (m not taking names now,sorry,but I will come back to comments column to thank u)and whatever I do is always dedicated to my parents, husband and last but not the least,to my best friend,Dr.Jinu Jose…
ff is completed…. no ….. I miss them….
really awesome….
i dnt have any words to give any complement to u….
i love ur ff….
plz come back wid another story bcz i love ur ff.
plz come back…..
missing u
It was jest amazng..i had tears in my eyes…..hope u wll soon come up wid new ff…
Awwwww soo cutteeee di..☺☺..kya yey last episode h Di???..hpe 2 c u wid anthr ff..di aapko pta h har roz mein aapke ff k liye br br chck krti thi..i knw waha bht sare ff the bt sbse phle me sirf aapki ff pdhti thi
I misssssss U di n ur ff toooo??
Aapki ff sbse bst bst bst bst h…n ya i lvd all d three prts…SWASAN rockssssszzzzzzzzzzźzz 4ever
Goooood luck for ur future life n may u alwz be happpyyy…As U r a nice person,no matter wat,God is alwz wid U..
Hv a bright future ahead…lv u Di…mmmuuuaahhh???
Omg its over….one my favorite ff…very decent n impressive ff….meaning of love its ur ff sis..will miss u sis…love u loads…pls try to give another ff….by the way waiting for know ur good name..
Sorry vini ross nice name ….pls keep in touch..bye sis
Wow di its so cute and good ending di and i will really miss your Ff.
Its a bumper offer for all ur readers for 3bck to bck episodes…but I can’t believe that its over…..im soo sad dear…..but the three episodes were awesome..superb nd mind blowing…..u express the small feelings in a great way.. .im sure that u will become a great writer…all d best ….miss u yaar….make another ff if possible….i would be the one to be happy if you do so….
will miss them sooo muchhhh :'(
dear. . I’ve no words to express my happy. .
it’s just amazing. . i’m read the whole 3 ff simultaneously without any time gap..
don’t know I was holding my breath till reading. .
u r really toooooo good in writing. ..
Veena plz don’t stop…i love ur ff..even though I wont comment bt I will read ur ff…I love to read yaar…plz don’t stop….
Enikku arilla vallatha oru sangadam vannu.sarikkum karanju poyitto veena or vini Ross .can’t believe its just finished.will miss u badly..dr ,I came here telly updates for missed episodes of my serial, den noticed ur ff, I started reading from 3rd episode, found it intresing ,had different storyline, read previous 2 episodes too. Now it ended in 36th episode, I rember once ,u said that u actually planned only for 5 episodes, thank u for this 36 beautiful Rose petals of swasan moments.
Wat . . . mudincha . . . nampa mudila . . . I really miss u . . .
We will surely miss your FFs
I didn’t think tat u will giv us a big shock…yaar ..really I am unable to believe tat ur ff has ended ..i was enjoying ur ff so much I was different frm all others,.,.plz write some other ff ma ….u hav an immense talent yaar …keep rocking …miss u swasan?
I didn’t think tat u will giv us a big shock…yaar ..really I am unable to believe tat ur ff has ended ..i was enjoying ur ff so much I was different frm all others,.,.plz write some other ff ma ….u hav an immense talent yaar …keep rocking …miss u swasan? miss u too veena? a lot
You have really done a great job veena..I had a lot of imapact of ur fiction on me but now I am unable to digest that it has finished.. I think I may fall sick for a couple of days…miss u veena
Vini di I will miss your ff. Your way of conveying every small emotions is so good. I don’t know whether true love exists or not but after reading your ff I understood that it exists in some or another form. Today’s episode brought tears to my eyes. May god bestow all his gracious blessings upon you and may have a wonderful life. I hope you will come up with another ff. We will miss you di… Oh! I just noticed one thing that our names are similar… Vini and Vinita
wow awesome, excellent, fantastic yaar. backtoback 3 episodes. I cried while reading. u r such a fantastic writer. wish u all success. ll miss ur ff a lot. try to come back with a new one
OMG!!! I can’t belive its just finished…. Plzzzzz don’t stop it. i miss ur ff;(.
Wonderful…i was in tears…hope the same happens in the real show.