Hi guys,Swasan fan fiction episode 36…,please read 34 and 35 before reading this..34,35,and this are back to back…
Scene 1:Sanskar is shifted to room from ICU..
Laksh is pushing the wheel chair,family members have all gathered,Swara wants to go near him,but hesitates,Sanskar also looks at Swara and then looks elsewhere,all of them chat and passes jokes,Laksh and Adarsh helps him sit on the bed,he jokes saying that,”if getting injured gives so much V.I.P treatment,I think I should make this a habit,Sujatha and A.P scolds him,Annapurna tells him that “yea patient will get good care,but relatives were living with wounded hearts,look at your wife,she has lost a few kgs”,Sanskar looks at Swara and smiles,she smiles back and they share an eyelock,she wants to go near him but stands still,relatives slowly starts leaving after some time,Laksh and Ragini are the last to leave,he hugs him and says , “welcome back bhai,I am sorry for everything,Sanskar hugs him and says, “I am the one who should ask sorry,sorry Lucky,for everything”,Ragini and Swara watches this with moist eyes,Laksh wipes his tears and jokes, “If I show my brotherly love with a tighter hug all that has started healing will start bleeding ,so we will pay the bill and buy some food for us and come,u are V.I.P ,no?so you will get special food from hospital,enjoy..”,he smiles and goes,Ragini comes near Sanskar and holds his hand and just looks at him,she says, “good to see you back Sanskar,thank God”she quickly leaves the hand and goes,in the corridor both Laksh and Ragini looks at each other with moist eyes…
Scene 2:Staff brings Lunch
Swara is about to go near Sanskar,staff brings the lunch and asks Swara to give it as there is injection following,Swara smiles hearing injection and gives a naughty look to Sanskar,she gives food to him and in between tells him, “somebody who was scared of injections would have got rid of that phobia,because this time would have got numerous na,Sanskar shows an angry expression and shows the cannula and says, “through this, it wont hurt,ok”,Swara raises her eyebrows and gives a “oh great”expression,their usual nok jhok continues,after some time nurse comes and takes a test dose on his arm and marks the area,he shows an angry expression to Swara,after the nurse leaves,Swara goes near him and slowly holds his hand and massages his palm and tells him, “for my hubby to be back in healthy form,he has to go through a few struggles and once he is back ,he and his wife will enjoy a lot of good moments together and his wife will not allow him to think about this pain ,even “,Sanskar looks at her and says, “then please tell my wife to do some magical charm and rescue me from here”,Swara replies, “but your wife is a poor human being,she doesn’t have magical powers,but her heart is full of love for her husband and she has offered all her love to God and asked for her husband’s cure”,saying this they look into each other’s eyes,she comes to hug him but her phone rings,Sanskar smiles and asks “who is the one with this right timing”,Swara shows her phone and says, “your bhai”,Laksh had called to ask what to buy for her lunch..she comes back and holds his shoulder and asks him if it is paining,he says, “actually Swara,stab wounds wont have pain at all,now only I realised that,especially after surgery,no pain,”Swara understands that he is teasing her for her question,she turns to him,stands opposite him and asks him to close his eyes,he tells that if she has some grudge she may take revenge later as he is already a damaged body,he feels the warmth of her lips on his forehead,Swara kisses his forehead and moves back,he holds her hands and brings her closer to him and says, “actually this medicine is good,he shows actions as though his whole body is paining and asks for more medication of the same type,Swara tells him that she will tell doctor to give it,she hits him and says Laksh and Raagini may come anytime…
Scene 3:After three days, evening, in hospital garden
Sanskar is seated on the wheel chair,Swara takes a bunch of flowers of multiple colours from the weeds and tells him, “look,history is repeating,you gave me yellow bunch,but I have all colours because our love has multiple shades,she hands it over to him,then goes behind him and hugs him from back and both click a selfie together…….checks it and Sanskar says, “Oh,I look so good with this beard avathar”,Swara replies, “yea,like a bear”,he tries to hit her and she runs..
Scene 4:Raglak,after a few days…
Laksh has brought Ragini to a their farm house,the farm house is well decorated,he closes her eyes and makes her walk forward,he brings her to the centre of the room,he takes his hand off and asks her to remain with eyes closed,he ,after a few minutes asks her to open her eyes,she opens and finds him on his knees,he extends his hand and tells her, “Myself, Laksh Maheswari ,wants to ask you Miss ,sorry,Mrs.Ragini Maheswari if you are ready to accept my love and be my loving wife ,Ragini looks at Laksh in surprise,she keeps her hand in his and nods,he kisses her hand and says “Thank u”,he gets up and takes her face inside his hands and says, “I love you Ragini,”tears roll down her eyes,he wipes it and she tells him, “I love you too Laksh,they keep looking at each other and Laksh hugs her,she hugs him back and they share a tight hug…………
Scene 5:Sanskar is back home after a few days
Sanskar is back home in the evening,Annapurna does the arathi and welcomes him,they all spend quality time together at the dining table,after the dinner DP says that they will throw themselves a party the next day,no outsiders,only them and they will sing and dance till late night as after a long gap,everything is fine in their home,after a chat for around an hour they have dinner ,wishes good night and goes to their respective rooms……..
Scene 6:Swasan
Swara is back after a shower,she sees Sanskar playing games in his phone,he tells him that radiation hazards,wound has healed but that doesn’t mean you can do anything,she tells him to sleep,she makes him lie down,he pulls her hand and asks her to sleep beside him,she says ok and wishes him goodnight,he tells her that “good night kiss…”,she smiles and hits his face slowly and kisses his forehead and wishes him good night,he pulls her hand and tells her, “I have counted ,shall return it all with interest,so don’t worry ,ok,”She hits him hard on his shoulder and asks him to take rest…
Scene 7:After few days,Sanskar is absolutely fine and back to normal….
Sanskar and Swara are in their car,Swara asks him “where are you taking me,this early,atleast say the place yaar”,he tells her to keep quiet for some time as they are going on a pilgrimage and he doesn’t want to get angry on her,after some time,they reach somewhere,Sanskar asks Swara to come out,it is a temple ,there is big banyan tree at the entrance,temple is at the top,it resembles the temple in Chottu maa’s village,he tells her that this temple and atmosphere resembles that of our village temple,but this has around 20 steps only leading to it,and it is not at all crowded,I had come here many times before,he tells her, “ from now, keep your mouth shut”,telling this ,he carries her in his arms,he tells her, “this time number of steps is less but I am carrying you not with my arms,but with my heart and it is my vow before we begin our life”,Swara looks at him with moist eyes,they reach the top,does the rituals ,he gives something to the pandit,he prays,blesses and gives it back,Sanskar asks him if they are too early,Pandit tells him that a few people may come after some time,he blesses them and goes,Sanskar takes her hand and makes her stand in front of the idol,he kneels down on one knee and asks her, “Swara,I am inviting you to be part of my soul,I am inviting you to be my wife,I am inviting you to be the mother of our kids,I am inviting you to be the centre of my life,will you be there with me for the rest of my life and births ,if that exists,she takes his face in her arms and tells him, “yes,any number of births,I will be yours…I accept all your conditions, because, I love u……..he gets up and opens his hand which has a small sindoor box,a ring and a chain which he got blessed a few minutes back,he puts sindoor on her forehead and hands the box to her,he takes her hand and puts the ring on her finger,he takes the chain and makes her wear it and Swara closes her eyes and prays and tears roll down her cheeks,he wipes her tears with his hands and cups her face and kisses her forehead,she holds his hands,Swara hugs him and they share a long hug,suddenly they comes back to senses,he holds her hand and comes down the stairs,there is a strong wind,the leaves of the Banyan tree are moving with it,a few falls on them,both of them looks at the tree and the wind,Swara says, “this wind is a medium of God’s blessing on us,together they look up and feel the wind,Sanskar holds Swara by her shoulder,they share an eyelock,after some time…they reach their car,gets inside,car moves……………………………………………
(And here begins, a pilgrimage of LOVE………………………..)
Signing off-Vini Ross(Veena).
101 Comments
Speechless ff gr8 job yr I mean it’s incredible as me also read the other ff too but u nailed it yr the beginning n ending is just owsum hats off to u .. all the best n w8ing 4 ur next ff plz write another one as I view this site only for ur ff
Superb
Mind blowing yar
Thank u Riya, Abhi,I have always noticed your comments,thank u yr, can’t believe you love ff’s though u don’t watch original,thank u once again for the good words,Akshita, Mary,thank u guys,thank u Neha,will miss u all,thank u Johanna,Vinia,I read the three comments,thank u dr,oshadharon ,won’t forget that word and you,I also noticed,our names are similar and at school always after Vini the next would be somebody by name Vinita,thank u Appu,I have seen this name always under my ff,and your comment brought a so called lump in my throat,Shanthi/Appu ,thank u for reading n liking,shall miss u,yes kashis,it is over,Joya,thank u for all the comments thus far,u n Appu are the ones who asked telly team under written updates to upload my ff when it was late,won’t forget u and the comments n lyrics u posted in a few,Vivi, thank u ,I think first comment of yours…
Rupsikha,what to tell u my dear,thank u for your good wishes,will miss you dear,you are the first one who brought personal touch under my comments,Kirti started of with Di,bt through your msg u spoke as though you are talking to me n your comment in Assamese,I remember reading it to my Hus,all the best for your studies….thank u,and u,Appu,Vinita and all should be of the same age as my cousins and so I could feel your comments…
Leku,thank u dr,ever since you started commenting u haven’t missed any,thank u dr for the good words,won’t forget,thank u Lucky, Many/Manija,if I am not wrong,I think one of the few people who were there in the comments column,right from the start,remember all your words,thank u very much,Amilu,I will miss writing as well,thank u Akku,glad that u liked it,Khushi,u have commented under a few of my ff before,I think,thank u yr for reading,thank u Sethooty,Tripunithura, Oru close friend undu enikku,ithu vare paranja Oro nalla vakkinum nandi,ff commentsle consistent namesl onnayirunnu,will miss u guys,rs,you had reminded my 25th episode and told will remind before 50th,actually,didn’t want to drag too much,dats y stopped,trisikha,you commented under a few bt have noticed,thank u.
Harani,didn’t want to prolong this ff simply,had planned this ending after writing the 10th one,honestly first five and this ending was planned,rest just came with the flow,thank u for the good words,Lucky, oh,even,I was a little emotional this time after reading all your comments,keep smiling yaar,thank u,Sri,yet another consistent name under my ff,thank u very much dr,will miss u guys,Aman,new name,good to know that you were reading,thank u ,Saljaz,all the way from Kenya,right,thank u dr,Hadi,I have a friend Hadiya whose pet name is Hadi,u had told not to harm Sanskar,hope I did justice to what I wrote,it is an honour ,good to know that you were reading ,Surbhi,ever since you started commenting u were a consistent name under my ff,thanks dr.
Manu/ Manoja, I mentioned your name wrongly in one of the above comments,sorry,bt I meant what I wrote..
Hey veena! (I’ll write this comment in my own language because I think one can convey feelings in their own language best)
First of all! Jab main ne apka ff daikha to starting se hi interesting Tha, but jaise jaise Main parhti gai, veena yeh har likhaz se bahtreen hai, be had khubsurat, behad kamil aur bohat khubsurat andaz se jazbat Ki tarjumani Ki hai AP ne! Aur sub se main chiz jo mujhe apke ff main sub se Zayada passand k yeh ek pakizgi(chastity) ka ahsas dilata hai! Batata hai k kuch jazbat batane k liye alfaz Ki zarurat nahi hoti, khamoshiyan hi sub kuch kah daiti hai aur yeh khamoshiyan ap ne bilkul sahi tarha se is ff main explain Ki hai! Mujhe khushi bhi hai sath main udasi bhi k swasan ka end ho gea mgr main umeex karti hun k ap ek new ff k sath aaen ge isi khubsurti k sath aur Haan thank you so much for giving us such a nice thing and all the best for your next life. May god bless you with happiness
Saba,thank u yr,yes you conveyed it perfectly in your language and I get it in the right sense another ff,I don’t know dear,and I will read your ff and if u don’t see my name under ur ff it will just mean that I haven’t read that,I have to read the initial episodes of yours ,today night we are going to my Hus’ home town,once m back,I shall read your ff,and I like the way you do justice to your story and I like your writing also,all the best for your exams and if u see this comment and if u don’t mind,where are u from?
Thanks veena! It will great pleasure if you read my ff and do comment on it.
I’m from Karachi(Pakistan) I hope after knowing that you will not stop to read my ff. ?
Ohh I’m just kidding, I know you won’t
Ok yaar,no,I won’t stop reading and it is too cool to know that people from various parts of the country and outside are reading and supporting each other…keep writing ya..
And at college,one senior was there by name Saba,actually, is the name common to boys and girls,and would like to know the meaning…
Vini! There are only girls have this name. And this word of Arabic, Persian and Urdu! If you used to read Urdu poetry, you’ll familiar of this word. Well saba meaning is “wind of morning or wind from east”
Di plz try write another ff with swasan.plzzzzz
Awesome ending…..this was my favourite ff …..Gud job…..will miss u a lot….thanks veena for giving such a wonderful ff ….swasan rocks….keep writing yaar…
Di plz cme here naaaa….plz wrte anthr fffffff plz plz…misssss U
Di missing.even now i took phone to check ur update.cant believe it ended.now i read a ff by kashis.it is super.it resembles alot with ur writing style.i mean the way she is conveying the feeling to us.my favourite ff is ur’s and saba’s.di plz try to write one more ff plzzz
Plz di come back with another ff. It can be about swasan or any other serial of your wish…. I am sure everyone will read it. Your ff always reminded me of the song jab koi baat bigar jaye jab koi mushkil par jaye………. Most of my cousins call me vini and I will always recall you when I will hear this… I want to thank telly team because they made me come across such a nice person like you. You regard Appu di , Rupsikha and me as your cousins so pls come back di…. I am terribly missing your ff
Appu and Rupsikha,I had a feeling that you both will have posted something under this today and so I checked and your comments are here,as of now we will enjoy others ff,yea,Saba’s I like and Kashis has written well,the song she included in between is one of my favourite lyrics…
Vinita,that is so sweet of u,if I say that I will write one I should do it,that is y m not saying like that,I don’t watch any other serials,not really a fan of daily soaps,but if I can frame a entirely new track on Swasan..then..bt as now of now nothing is there in my mind but I will surely be commenting under the ff’s that I read and if u don’t mind which course u r studying,Appu is doing engineering, Rupsikha B.A…
Thank u Saba for the information ,actually my senior was a boy and that is why I asked.By the way nice name ya and if u happen to read this,ur ff is a cool breeze touching our face when we keep our eyes closed and stand still,and the way u highlight the importance of marriage,very good….
Haha…di aaapko hamare bajah se dstrb toh nhi hota na???xuley mere sbse fvrte toh aapki ff thi …n dn saba di ki ff n now kashis…
No probs Rupsikha..absolutely no problem.
I mean absolutely alright.. At least good to know that you people thought about me when u logged into this site,m happy.
And though I wrote ,I forgot what all I wrote except my favourite scenes,so I am going to sit back and Google search ‘Swasan fan fiction episode 1 to 36 and read at a stretch,let me see how that feeling would be..
nice ending veena.. i have never commented you before… bcz.. i recently read your ff.. that too some episodes only.. so i gonna read others too… and i also wrote one ff… want you to read that… my ff about ishra(yeh hai mohabbatein) and arshi(iss pyar ko kya naam doon)…
Thanks dear for appreciation veena! All the best for your life, and seriously I’ll wait for your next ff
Veena ..Vini Ross nice name yaar.will miss u dr..will miss ur ff ….u and Saba’s ff r my favourite.Vini plz try another story u r such a talented writer .Vini did u heard about Deep a teacher ,she is a professor from Kerala varma college , and recently she had posted a story on fb and it turn to be a viral hit. Vini enikithre parayan ullu..ororutharude ullilum mikacha srushtikal urangi kidappundakum ..athinae purathekku konduvannam..
Di I am doing B.A. If you don’t mind can you tell me which subject you pursued????
Arshi,thanks yr,shall read it,probably Monday,thank u Saba,I don’t know dear,Sethooty, thank u dr for the good words,yes I have heard of her,Deepa Nishanth,very talented,actually during days,some small scribblings and matter for compering and all have done but story poem n all ,haven’t attempted,not that talented,Sethooty,are u a student?Vinita,ok dr,all the best for your studies,ah,myself,I am a dentist dear.
Vini..u r a dentist great dr…now become a writer too, I really appreciate ur effort for finding some time for writing, from ur bcy schedule.well am a software developer, working here in kochi.
Woww?.
Di aaap dentist ho..wah di…