Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 18
Scene 1:Next year,school reopening day.
Swara ,Ragini and Laksh has come early,Laksh tells them he is very excited to join them from that year,they wait at the usual place where Swaragsan meets daily,Ragini tells, “but where is this Sanky,I wana go and check if we all are in the same division,they see Sanskar running and coming,he says,”hi”,Ragini replies, “your hai,come here”.They go A division and their names are are not there,then to B and sees Laksh there,Laksh is sad,then they go to C and don’t find the the three names and is super excited and says, “so me,Swara and Sanky are in IX D,Lucky ji better luck next time ji…”Laksh shows anger seeing Ragini’s happiness,he says, “Don’t think I will leave u all,but now don’t come behind,let me go to my class ,”,Ragini says, “haha,only during free time and tuitions we will have to bear you,thank God”,Laksh again gets angry.Sanskar holds his shoulder and says, “come baba,new boy na,we will make you sit and then only we will go”Laksh again gets angry,other three smiles and leads him to his class.
Scene 2:Same day,afternoon after class
First day,so only half day,all four gather at the parking area,Swara reminds them, “tuitions will start tomorrow only,no?but don’t forget to come home today,Chetan is going to LKG,lazy he is,no body else will be there,a small get together,only you three are invited,so should come and boost him up,they agree and smile….
Scene 3:Evening,Swara’s house
Swara tells them that Chetan is now very excited to go to school,he has come to show them his new bag and books,SANLAKRAG smiles,Ragini goes and lifts Chetan up in the air,they spend some good time with the kid,they give him a small gift and after some time Laksh and Ragini leaves,Mukesh has taken taken Sanskar with him to the library at their home and tells him, “Swara had once told that only u have reading habit,u may take books from here,it is an old collection,u can read and return as per convenience,they then come out,Mukesh and Sumi asks Swara to take him to entertainment room,on the way to it,Swara shows her room to him from the corridor,through the door,Sanskar sees Shekhar’s photo on the wall,he asks her who that is?
Swara says , “I had always thought about telling you this,he was my role model,my best friend,my life,my Papa,left me alone and went away when I was in first standard,you know something Sanskar,we were in debt that time it seems,business graph was fluctuating,mom was forced to marry our G.M and he is my dad now,I know he is not a bad man,but still,I don’t even talk to him much,it is not because I hate him but I cant imagine anyone in my Papa’s place so I don’t give him space,you were right that day,I’m a bad girl,I hurt my dad,but at the end of each day after hurting everybody I used to get hurt myself,each day,Papa reminded me that I was wrong,wet pillow reminded me that my heart was wounded ,but now, I am atleast trying not to hurt others purposely,Sanskar stands there without knowing what to tell her,he just softly says, “Swara,if u don’t mind I want to go near Papa’s photo,”he goes inside and comes back after a minute, “Swara,I wanted to apologise to him first for hurting you,I had felt some sorrow was hidden in your eyes,but then thought u were a spoilt,stubborn girl,didn’t know the pain hidden inside your heart,I don’t know what to tell,but I know something,if you had somebody to be your support u at that time,atleast you would not have had to go through this pain,I am very sorry for mentioning about you not respecting dad,I am sorry for all the harsh words I have spoken to you,I mean it Swara,forgive me,She smiles and says, “leave it Sanskar,don’t spoil your mood,I am very happy,now I have three good friends to share everything and a best friend,Sanskar asks ,who is that best friend?She looks into his eyes and says, “you,Sanskar”,Sanskar is surprised as well as happy,he doesn’t know what to say,he tells her, “I don’t know if I deserve that status but thank u Swara,”Swara smiles looking at him,after some time ,Sanskar leaves.
Scene 4:Swara’s room
She goes and stands in front of Shekhar’s photo and tells him, “you saw Sanskar na papa?today I told him that he is my best friend,I wish I could tell him that I love him,but Papa,it is ok,but now itself tell God that I want him as my partner ,tell ok,God will listen to you,gudn Papa”,she goes and holds her pillow,she imagines all the moments with Sanskar,she smiles and hugs the pillow and lie down,now u r not getting wet ,u know why?because I am not sad,I feel I have a purpose in life,I will study well and I will wait for him ”…………
241 Comments
Fantastic story dear…
Thank u dr.
Ohh no I can’t wait…
Vini dr..u should update 2 episode per day..for compensation of 5 days..
wish u Happy new year Dr…31st nu Fort kochi full karangan plan cheythatha..but leave tharathe ente Project Manager um , fever vannu ente friend um enne pattichu..hum eppo enthaaa Ff only After 4 Jan …haha
Sethooty,onnu thanne type cheyyaan madiyavunnu,time enganelum spare cheythalum,but nokkatte dear,thank u dr,wish u a very happy new year too,ah,I miss Kochi,just two days only I could stay there,miss my loved ones n the celebration there,so ur plans got spoiled cos f them n telly site also is on a long vacation, I can understand…tc..
Nice name dear,I repeat…
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This episode is so good. Loved the last part where swara told that she will wait for sanskar and she will study hard and her love will not be an obstacle for him. Sanskar’s apology to shekhar was amazing and totally unexpected. Mukesh remembered that Sanskar likes reading. The entire episode was OSHADHARON!!!!!!!!!! Your ff has an inner meaning, one has to read each and every line and every line has an emotion concealed in it.
Today my exams ended and I am so happy!!!!!!! After giving the exam, I wnet shopping with my mom, aunt and cousin, then we watched a film and returned i home a while ago. I am feeling so elated!!! After so many days I will have a good sleep. I know that I am sounding like a mad person now but I am feeling so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joya di you are absolutely correct. Di told that simply but we are quite serious regarding it!!!
Your analysis is too good. I like your hindi. Even saba’s urdu was excellent.Loved the shayari which she wrote at the beginning of each episode.
Rupsikha!!!!!!!!!!! Tomar ki khobor??????? Mur khobor valo. Tomaleo nonoborkhor bohut subecha!!!!!(I knw that I am writng something rubbish, my assamese is not at all good. Actually there is a deal between me and my friend. She is from Assam and since we both like to learn different languages, i teach her bengali and she teaches me assamese but at the end we mess up everytihng and get confused) Haha!!! Di, rupsikha is not scolding me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you so much vinita…..
ya u r ri8…saba’s urdu is very nice….
Hei dear,finally ur xams are over,a big hug and pat on your back from my side to celebrate ,m humbled by the good words abt my ff,thank u,writing,I m not bring modest ,I don’t think m a good writer,bt one thing I agree partially,many things will be said between the lines hereafter,it will be having relevance in future episodes, hope those who read word by word will make out…so u enjoyed shopping and some time wid ur loved ones,good wayvto end a year,Joya,if u r reading this, m a fan of whatever u write dear…wish to read in Hindi, give it a try,learning new languages,very very good Vinita,keep it up…
fan????????
dis is not fair di………
u said u dnt like dis word….
then y r u using……..????
actually is baat pe punishment milni chahiye aapko……4th jan ko 4 episode………….(kidding ha….)
kuch jyada bolte hai na hum……..
haye par kare kya aadat hai….
bardasht kar rahe hai yaha sab hume (heheheheherhehe)
sorry guys…………
No problem, I don’t wish to c others being fans of my ff bt I like to admire others n no arguments,haha,I repeat,m a fan of ur writing…n I haven’t felt that u talk too much n I won’t mind if u talk more also…
This is such a long comment!!!!!!! You all will get a severe headache after going through it.
Di will b able to handle, she is a doctor but rupsikha and joya di pls dont get panicked after seeing such a lengthy comment.
no no no no….
cuteness se kisi ko headache ho sakta hai bhala……..
tumhe laga ki tumhara comment lengthy hai par humne nahi laga….
are kuch episodes pehle to humne isse bhi lengthy comment likhe the…shayad tab sabko jarur headache huaa hoga……hehehehe….
No problem Vinita dr, with the length n number of comments,not cos I belong to fraternity but cos I value u and ur comments..and Joya,I didn’t get head ache ,I know u didn’t mean that abt me…
Before commenting for the episode..I would like to say something didi. You know what you really have magic in your fingers which results in this type of episodes. I always wonder at your way of describing each and every incident whether a minor one or a major. You always steal my heart with your words.and one more thing is the family environment that you create here.I really feel relaxed after reading your replies here..seriously di it shows how good you are at your heart. And regarding episode..I am speechless asusal. Everyday I will fix my mind to comment on your episode but after reading,I fell short of words to describe my feeling. But today,this family environment made me to comment. I love you so much from the core of my heart.
And pleydint take any tension regarding the plot didi..everyone here are your fans and are ready to accept anything written by you..by the way can I join here??
And please don’t * last para
Completed my BDS dear…thinking abt preparing for MDS,dono know…there also,laziness…
First of all most welcome to this comments column dear,pls feel free,then ,thank u for the good words n love dear,wish u a very happy new year,no magic dear,during school days I used to say that I wish to become a director,then had prepared a little for CSAT after my graduation, bt I think destiny wanted me to become part of medical profession n I ended up in my current profession,my best friend still believes that I will become a director some day,it won’t happen,reason Num 1,m not talented,no 2 ,I’m not doing anything to pursue that, but I partially fulfill that thru my ff,though it is an ordinary plot I visualise the frames and how our characters will play it if this was the real story,so I know there is no magic at my finger tips,there are a few good writers among ff writers,who describes well n writes in the style of a novel,I’m not going into detailing cos m not that talented and second reason is I enjoy writing this like a written update in a ‘mini’ script style though I know this is not the style of script writing,regarding family environment here,all credits to my dear reader friends(pls dont mention the word fans I dont like that under my ff)especially (just scroll up and down ,you will understand who all),thank u guys,Harini,keep in touch..
Oh wow didi..so your a doctor. I really respect them a lot and even I too prepared for that but ended up as microbiologist.
Haha diiiii???? m nt sclding vinita..it’s a new year wish…n thank u??
Haha vinita i knw yeh bht long cmnt h..par hamare liye toh bht chhoti h ryt??…hum headache lete nhi,dete h..
U r my little rowdy n I repeat that Mickey..
N vinita ur assamese is so gud dr:)..waise 2m assam aayi ho kvi?
N thnx vinita ..mur khbr vale…
Hello vini Di…Hii joya..shraddha n everyone..,
After reading ur comments i also want to share my experience..i am percuing CA..i m CA final student..so in my life there is no masti at all entering in this profession..i remember all my school n class days which was full of Masti..dhamal..Drama..Friendship..tension..n wt not..this is the main reason that i am diehard fan of uf this ff vini di..
i do comment but i don’t read others comment in any other ffs but in this ff i used to read certain people’s comment like joya..rupshikha..shraddha..etc..i love to read ur comments..ya specially joya apki comment padhneka maja hi alag hai..
as i hv already told you vini Di that ur ff was the very first ff which i hv started to read..i used to visit this site for ur ff only..though there were many other ffs..then due to bakavas story of original track..i stop watching real serial..n me ye ek hi serial dekhti thi..so for me there is no source of entertainment..so after reading ur ff i started following this site whenever i got some free time..now i follow many other ffs..
I do afraid from this online cheating n all so i was not commenting..as i thought it ws all fake only..i don’t have fb or instagram accounts also..but when i first time comment i get to know that these all r genuine readers..so i also started commenting but with my nick name..ya just like joya..Niti is not my real name..my name is Niyati..
this is the first time i am communicating with peoples online..i am glad ki muje ye chance mila..thank u soooooooooooooo much vini Di..
ab pata nahi 4th Jan tak kese wait karenge..uff
Wish u all n ur family…a very..”HAPPY NEW YEAR”..
all the best for ur studies……..
thank you so much for good words……
my bro is also preparing for CA.
but he is not serious like u yeh alag baat hai (heheheheheh)
thank you so much niti….niyati also sweet ha……
take care dear…….and all d best….
thank u soooooooo much joya..
App ki wishes ki muje bahhot jyada jarurat hai….App k bhaiya Ko bhi All the best…bz u kn in CA everything is depending upon luck only..take care dear..bubye
Heyya niti!!! 1st of all NIYATI is such a lovely name? niyati means destiny rite? Happy New Year BTW n ur a CA student omgggg its so hard no? I ve heard a lot from my family members there are a few …… Like they say if u clear in 1st attempt ur genius anyway All the best …. Take care
humri wishes humesh tumhare sath hai………
Hei dear,oh,wat a name dear,Niyati, loved it…my friends r into your profession,tuf it is no?all the best dear,even I was prejudiced dear,but now I know many r so genuine n to an extent frank also and it is reflected in their comments,thank u for the good words u spoke about my ff,truly ,humbled n honoured dear,thank u …Happy new year…
And one more thing,hinestly,m happy that I don’t have to type ff till 4th,dat lazy m feeling right now…
thank u soooooooooooooo much Di..ya its very tuf..:'(
ya even i feel the same that all r becoming frank now..n me agar personally meri bat karu to i want to maintain these relations with u all as long as i can.. but how ?? that u guys have to tell me…as i don’t use fb n all..
plz plz plz vini Di..u hv to gives at least 3 part on 4th Jan..Akhir hum logo Ko intzar Karne ka ku6 to phal milna chahia na..so take a full rest n make ready at least 3 part to upload on Monday..bubye..tc
Dear,even I was thinking abt the day wen this ff will end,I don’t think I will write a new one,will surely miss u all,u need three parts on Monday,don’t make me faint ,dono know how I will type next cos of my laziness, shall try to write two,let me c..
“Three parts on Monday don’t make me faint” haha vini di I loved this line but now looks like pressure is being builded ha?see all of us are starving n ready to pounce on 4th
Hi niti..ur name is soooo cute yr???
Wlcme dr?@joya…waise ek baat kahu mjhe nhi pta 2m kisiliye thnx kh rhi ho???
?..n ya phle mjhe v fake lga tha..n phle bar jb cmnt kya tha toh thodi c dar gayi thi..bt now allll okkkkkaayyyy dr??..soo ur name is sheetal ryt..it’s so swt nme yr lyk U☺☺???…Happy new year dear?..lv u
Whre r u my cute diiii??miss u??
M here dear n yea for me u r a cute rowdy ,dono y,don’t hit me..
OMG,so many comments to be read was my first reaction when I opened this page,read it at a stretch,truly,u all touched my heart today,u guys share a very special bond, so happy to see that,I will reply ok,a lil busy,have to go to church after dinner,here,prayer service is a little early at church,once again all of u,wish u a very happy new year,a big hug to u all…
Happy new year didi.
Thank u and wish u d same dear…
Wow…aap church ja rhi ho..???..plz di wish 4me na☺☺…lv u diiiii…mmmmuuuuaah?????…haappyy happy happppytttt new year di:)
Happy new year guyz??????
The comment underneath s for u …
Happy New year to u all especially to my dears who filled this page with ur lovely comments, tomorrow,as soon as m free, under each comment of urs, I will respond ok…Mickey baba, I have prayed for u all n after seeing ur comment have prayed again.. Some say that we should not tell others that we have prayed for them bt here since u tol to make a wish,I replied ok…
Happy new year Dr… This new year brought some happy news and excitements for me yaar.my best friend my sis going to be a mother , njan oru chitta akan pokunnu…haha..
Engine undarunnu new year..epo Bangalore ano..Today holiday anu enikku..I have enough time ..BT fan fiction mathram illa vayikkan
Happy New year dear,convey my congrats to ur sis,n congrats to u too would be Chitta,njangal Kerala Anglos,chechiye aanu Chitta ennu vilikkunnathu,wen I read I thought abt that,m at Bangalore dear…m feeling lazy to type ff
Happy new year to all my didis and friends!! may this year bring lots of happiness to your lives… May God bestow His divine blessings on all of you!! even a big thank you to telly team because it is due to them i got so many elder sisters like di, sheetal di, niyati di(both sheetal and niyati are beautfl names) and a nice frnd like rupsikha ….. Initially i was extrmly scared to comment but to the warm response from di and the persnl touch added by rupsikha i felt so comfortable. its a plea
Hi Vinita ,Happy new year dear,may God bless u too,yea,even I wish to thank telly team cos it s thru this platform that we all got to know each other,now wen the name of each state comes to mind there is surely somebody to remember…(not forgetting my cousins and friends residing outside Kerala)…
It is a pleasure to read your comments joya di. there are alot of typos in the above cmmt pls ignore it
Wish U all a very HAPPY NEW YEAR..hv a healthy n successful n rocking new year..n all the best u all for ur respective study..cerier..job..any kind of works..take care..
thanks vinita n rupshikha for commenting on my name..i am also glad for this site..that i get friends n sisters..:-*:-*
I call u vini Di as Di because once i read that u r merried..n so i love to call you as Di..n
i love when vinita call me as Di..(i hope u r younger then me..;-)) n i will love to call all of u as Di whoever is elder then me..bz it gives me feeling of attachment with u guys..n all youngers r like my sis n friends..
lots of luv n big hug to u ALL..keep smiling n stay blessd..love u vini Di
Hei Niti,Happy new year dear,no probs dear,as u said wen u guys call me di it really makes me feel attached to u all,then to ur comment above,I will respond there…lots of love and a big hug to u too…
Oops sry sry Niti di n joya di..u r eldr thn me..mjhe nhi pta tha ki aaplog bade ho..sooo srryyyyyyyy??..xuley mne aap dono ko ek bar nm se pukara tha..bt jab vinita ki cmnt chck kya tab pta chala.so aaj se di khuga aap dono ko????
Yes u r ryt Nitu(Vinita,sry ha mne 2mhre nm short kr diya??)..telly team ko ek bada wala thnx toh jarur krna chye…thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu telllllllllyyyyyyy teeeaaaammmmmmmmmmm….??…
For me 2015 sbse bst year h..i m lcky 2 hv a frnd lyk uu??.n of course Meri choti si pyari si Cute si Vini di ko kaise bhul skti hu…Mera bhaya toh dono h par sis nhi thi koi..Toh humsha wish krti thi ki God plz ek sis djie..n seeeee mjhe wo v mil gaya..aur wo v ek nhi,bht sareeeee(Vini di,joya di,niti di ….??.)
Waise mjhe bro v chahiye?????…haha..sb lg soch rhi hogi ki yeh pgl h???…aab toh mjhe v lg rha h ki me soch me pgl hu
Happy new year dr..Rupsikha
Actually,after reading this I felt u r a lil crack,just kidding,haha,even I had wished for a sis older to me,but I love my bro..and yea,have two younger cousins n now thru this site a small army….very happy…
hey guys…….
happy new year……..
aapke palakon ne sajaya har sapna pura ho…..
khushiyon se daman hmesh hara ho……..
bas itna hai kehna,
har kisi ki har duaa qubool ho……
thank you rupsikha,niti,vinita,vini di,shraddha for ur support and love…….
rupsikha,koi bat nahi….tumhe jo achchha lage.di kaho ya naam lelo……
and vini di itni aasani se humse pichha nahi chhutne wala………
vinita it’s my pleasure dt u always read my stupid comments…..
good Morning and have beautiful day…
Happy new year joya.. Ur lyrics is so nice..
Happy New Year Sethooty…
happy new year dear…..
thank you so much dear…….
happy new year sethooty…
thank you so much.
Wish u d same dear,fan if ur writings,though brief,take care,and yea,no probs,always be there…
To u Joya…
Halo evry1
Hello and happy new year was reply to ur comment…
Thnk u Sethooty n happy new year 2 u tooooooooooo dr…ur name is sooooo cute dr?God blss u
Hello,Happy New Year..
Hi janu
Vini Di..me too agree with u..after reading ur comment i think u r Dramaqueen…i am also happy to have sis like u…u know we r two sisters..n i m elder than my lil princess.. n now i get many elder n younger sis..i m so happy 4 that..as till now i hv never made any girl as my sis..ya i hv made many boys as my bro ye alag bat hai..bubye dear..tc
My above comment is in reply of ur comment dear rupshikha..
Joya,Shraddha,Mickey,Vinita,Sethooty,Niti,Harini,I think I have responded to almost all comments of yours…take care…
154 comments,haha,we r good at chatting…
Now 157 cmmnts di????..n cute rowdy…wah!??i lyk it yr?????..
Don’t know y bt I feel like that,haha…cute rowdy Mickey….