Hi guys,SWASAN fan fiction (Season 2) episode 22
Scene 1: Next day afternoon,Sanskar’s house
Sanskar is leaving for college,his classes will start the next day,there is almost 5 hrs travel to his college,Ragini’s father Arnab is accompanying him as Sanskar’s father is ill,Sanky prays before the idol in the small in house temple,Laksh’s mom and brother,Ragini’s parents and Sumi and Chetan has come,Sanskar seeks blessings from everyone,he hugs his mom and kisses her forehead,she wipes her tears,he goes to dad’s room,touches his feet,he is very sick and tired after the second stroke,he needs support ,Sanskar moves closer to him and hugs him and tells him, “Papa,don’t worry about me or anything,I know you will pray for me,and your prayers and blessings will be my light,don’t think about anything and stress yourself,I will come every fortnight,and Lucky will be here,I didn’t tell anything but he himself told he will take you for check up,then Rags and Swara,everyone will be there”,his dad’s speech is not clear,he just nods to say that he will not worry,he touches his son’s forehead,Sanky hugs him again and kisses him on his cheek,he comes out,Swara has come to that area to drink water,she sees Sanskar coming out of dad;s room and quickly wiping his tears,Sanskar comes near her ,winks at her and tells, “not because of dust,I cried,but Papa didn’t see,but u saw,it will stay between us na,Sanky cant cry,no?Swara is about to hold his hand but he just hits her shoulder gently and says,”come,we wil go” and walks away,Swara realises that she is in tears and wipes it off quickly….
Scene 2:Bus stop
In three two wheelers they have come,Arnab-Ragini,Swara-Meera(Sanky’s sister),Laksh and Sanskar..The bus arrives,Mukesh goes to check the seats,Laksh keeps Sanky’s luggage,he comes out and punches Sanskar on his stomach,Sanskar says, “ouch”,Lucky moves forward and hugs him tightly,Sanskar hugs him back and then Laksh tells him, “aree yaar,why no good colleges here in town,will miss you yaar”,Swara and Ragini moves closer to them,Snaskar says, “hei, Lucky boy has tears in his eyes,Oh,didn’t know you have so much love for me,”he turns to Swarag and tells them, “and you two,girls,don’t taunt my Lucky ,ok”Arnab calls from window and tells Sanskar to get inside,Swara moves a step backwards,she feels her heart heavy,she to hide her restlessness,looks elsewhere,Sanskar hugs Meera first and tells her to take care,then he goes near Ragini and tells, “hei Rags,don’t trouble aunty”,Ragini hugs him and wishes him good luck and says, “why are u going man,don’t go,na”Sanskar smiles ,moves back and is about to leave,he then turns and walks towards Swara,she stands there not knowing wat to say,they look into each others eyes, Swara softly tells him, “all the best ,Sanskar,”,he moves closer to her,Swara is surprised,he hugs her gently and then quickly takes his hands off and says, “enjoy your college days,keep smiling,and……I hope u wont forget me” ‘ Swara’s eyes are filled and a tear rolls down,Sanskar sees it, “Hei ,now you too,M not going away for ever,we will meet every fortnight or atleast once a month”,Swara replies, “once a month,you wont understand,now go,Arnab uncle is waiting,Sanskar says, “yea,going,bye…and don’t forget,keep smiling”,Swara nods…he walks away,she feels as though a portion of herself is getting detached from her body,she walks towards the bus,Sanskar has a window seat,he waves to everyone as the bus moves,he looks at Swara ,shakes his head with an ’I’ m going’ expression………..bus has left and Ragini breaks down,Swara hugs her and stares in the direction where he left……..
Scene 3:Swara’s house
Swara is standing in front of her dad’s photo,she goes and hugs the photo and tells, “Papa,he left,I am happy for him,he has joined a professional course,mechanical is his favourite branch,glad that he got the same in a good college,but I cant console myself Papa,cant imagine that I wont see him tomorrow,this week,for next two weeks,I already miss him so much,Papa,I hid my love for 5 years,haven’t tried to express it,but yesterday and today,somewhere ,I was getting a feel that he too feels for me,but I’m not sure,cos twice or thrice I felt so in these two days but the next moment his expression made me feel that I am mistaken,I don’t know Papa,but as I remind you daily,tell God that Sanskar is the only blessing that I want from him”,suddenly her phone rings and she goes to check it,an unknown number flashes on the screen,Swara attends,the caller says, “it is me Sanskar and this is the first outgoing call,save this number,thought to call the person who suggested and selected this gift for me,so how r u,had supper?what were you doing?”Swara says, “if you want an honest answer,I was thinking about you,infact,Raglak should also be thinking about you,we miss you”,Sanskar says, “Swara,I know,now let me cut the call,have to call mom,Rags and Lucky also..,bye goodnight”,Swara turns to her dad’s photo and says, “this is what I told,I don’t get this boy at all,I am going to call him back,may be he has recharged for a small amount only”………she calls back and says, “Sanskar,forgot to tell,you have gone there to study,don’t go behind girls,in mech there wont be many but in other branches ,there will be a collection but remember we three will kill you,we are your buddies and we have the right”,Hearing that Sanskar laughs loudly and says, “ok,ok,you called to tell this,ah?,Swara is surprised to hear him and tells him, “first time I am listening to you laughing like this, “Sanskar says, “and ,you made me laugh that way,thank u,Swara seniors are coming,I am going to cut the call,bye,”Saying that,he cuts the call…….
Scene 4:After two weeks,bus stop
Lucky has come early and is waiting for Sanskar,Sanskar gets down, Lucky runs to him and says, “hei,man,how r u,”,Sanskar says, “this time u came early,cant believe,Lucky boy ,on time”,Laksh replies, “that is Lucky’s love and loyalty…”Sanskar says, “ok ok,then where is Swarag?,had sent sms that will also be there,Laksh says, “actually both couldn’t come,had told to tell a big sorry,now let’s leave”,they reach Sanskar’s house….He goes to his mom n dad,hus them,hugs Meera and goes to his room,he finds Swara and Ragini seated there, he is surprised, “Oh,so you two wanted to surprise me,not bad,I am surprised”.They sit and chat for a long time,Swara and Sanskar looks at each other in between though Sanskar quickly looks away when Swara looks at him,Sanky’s mamma brings coffee and snacks,they spend some good time together,decides to meet the next day………..After Laksh and Ragini left,Swasan goes for a walk in the garden,Swara checks for the blue pot that she had planted,she tells him that it was there the last time when she came,trimmed and maintained,Sanskar replies that before leaving he had replanted many,pulled out a few and painted the pots afresh,may be by mistake ,would have thrown that,Swara is sad to hear that,Mukesh comes to call her,on the way home,she keeps thinking why he forgot to maintain it in blue colour,is it a bad sign,will I lose him ??she tries to keep those thoughts away and for that looks outside the window and takes a deep breath,still,she becomes more restless and keeps asking herself in her mind, “why he forgot that he had maintained it all these years,though he had trimmed it periodically…..Mukesh notices her restlessness…………….
(Guys,I typed this just for the sake of posting something today,I know ,wud not have liked this,sorry…..)
165 Comments
Ah oh this was not expected plz bare with me all of u I’m sorry for such long 1 I actually din realize ?
No probs dear, a few of ur identity under my ff itself s length of your comments
N didi I was going to tell u about my singing no BTW ya sso… It was also my farewell n just like sanky even I sung a song n den I requested my teachers to allow me sing for my friend s i had actually planned n chosen songs n the sequence in which I should sing them also n chose pictures accordingly to display on projector so the songs were these……. 1st “Woh pehli baar jab hum mile Hatho me Haath jab hum chale” n den our Lkg ukg pictures were displayed den I sang a Telugu song from movie Happy Days”O my friend “its beautiful song…. Den “Yaadei yaad aati hai” from film yadein n den lastly again Happy Days title track I sang….. By this time all my friends were crying so badly even I controlled because I had to sing …heehhe this is a memory I will cherish forever thought of sharing with u all that’s why I said wen I read sanky singing it became extremely nostalgic moment for me??
Hostel was fun dear,u r a day scholar?? Haha,topper comment u still remember?seriously,track will be stupid dear, ah,leave it,let’s see,pictures on projector,lots of memories flashed by and the songs that u mentioned, beautiful, happy days,I have watched original and the dubbed version in malayalam,among the dubbed movies that I have seen,I like the malayalam lyrics of happy days the most,once during interdental festival(students of three govt dental colleges gather once a year for a three day event,and venue rotates between the three government colleges,now two more govt colleges have started in Kerala,bt wen we were in college,just three),ah,wat I was saying is,during a break during cultural programmes at night ,before a UV show,they switched off all lights,and this song was played,’manassinu marayilla….Oh my friend ‘ from happy days n all switched on their mobile screen lights and waved in the air,twas a magical moment ,still afresh in memory…so I can imagine how it wud be singing for a farewell…
Wow even I have done this mobile flash light wala thing its a visual treat ssly ? I ve picture taken from top view by coll photographer its just beautiful… N Happy Days is 1 of my fav movies really like all songs from dat movie I actually understand Telugu quite a bit so normally watch dat if any version available…..Coll cultural fests are always fun n memorable ssly ??
Pls vini… Make it regular…. Pls
Daisy ,minimum one update will be there from Tuesday,bear with me if site uploads it late,I will promise on time…
Finallllllyyy u r back shraddha??…hw r u dr???
I’m fine dr thank you tellyupdates ne itne ache dost diye mujhe?
Haha….itna long commmmmmnntt?….xuley mne socha ki aaj d ko thodi c rst krne du..???..
Acha kiya tumne nahi toh didi ko overload hojata lekin tumhare comments padne ka alag he maza hai mai toh enjoy karti hoon aur unme mujhe choti shraddha dikhti hai ek dum tumhare jaise natkhat??????
I agree with u Shraddha,u both sounds similar though younger s a rowdy n older s like Ragini of this ff…?
Oho,u gave me rest,danks…haha,length doesn’t matter …
Joya, Shraddha,Niti……statue……dont touch keypad until I say….haha.. just kidding…now I think if I see short msgs from u three I may feel disturbed..Shraddha ,welcome bk,Joya dr,I had replied to ur msg but it is not displayed,or I didn’t press post comment ??mild fever dear,better now..
statue……………!!!!!!!!
bdw thank you….
kal ke comment k liye….
but i m not like u…u r d best person…..
reply kiya tha par shayad aapne padha nahi hoga waha………
thank you so much…….
I’m not the best baba,I have replied there,check 37th comment or the date Jan 10…
statue..ha ha ha..!!
but Di ap likhte hi itna achcha ho hum kya kare..khud Ko rok hi nahi pate..vo humare bas me hi nahi hai..its all because of ur excellent writing..apna khayal rakhna Di..bubye..tc..
Niti,m not a good writer,I know that,but there are good writers among ff writers,if I point out a few,others may feel bad,but m happy u all like mine too n more than that this second ff paved way for our chats…
Statue haahahaha good one didi.……?? lol OK now I’m absolutely fine but ur not ohho virus transmitted via net hehe? take care didi no need to rush we are here only u take care
Haha,virus via net, thank u dr,from Tuesday ,for minimum one,I will try.
I luved this episode.sanky starts to feel for swara .super luv u di
Thank u Appu,please keep in touch,hws ur studies??
It’s awesome..vini keep it up.
Thank u Amy, think ur first comment under my ff,thanks.
In college day have any tqist like entry of kavitha
No big twists dear,some small small moments from the life of Swasanraglak…
Haha,.. Previous episode she missed that hug..but before leaving he simply huged her ..nice.. And d most funniest part is swara called back ..warn him to keep distance.. wid other girls in college and he laughed at her…haha that was superb
Hi i commentd on ur previous episode Dr…haha i am d last one
Eagarly waiting for d next episode Dr…bz want to know whether he maintained that blue pot and plant or not.swara ye pole njanum epo upset anu…
Thank u dr,upset aayathu ithu vayichittu aano,glad to know that u liked those scenes,last episode comments,I have to respond to a few more,I will,blue pit scene njan paathi urakkathil type cheythatha,athivide varanullathallarnnu…
Haha BT athu click ayi
Not at all….it was awesome as always…hope sanskar will also realise his love for swara soon….update soon
Thank u dr,ur feedbk s regular nowadays,thanks,m satisfied if u all liked this cos this was written that casually,in the middle of sleep..
Love u di…..eagerly waiting for next episode
Thank u dear,love u all,especially for the feedbk,next one, tomorrow.
Hi di!!!!!!;
I have no wrds to describe the ff.
It’s so good
I am fine rupsikha . How are your studies going on?????
Hi joya di!!!!!!!
When my friend read your comment
yesterday her expression was” even I fooled you in the same way”
Hi Niyati di!!!! I have alot of relatives frm Gujarat. Actually my family is like a mini India. You can find ppl from almost all the communities of India .
Hi shraddha di!!!? Glad to know u are fine.
Take care di. You really bring a smile on my face everyday. I commented in your ff yesterday. Mine was the second last one probably….????
Hi Niyati di!!!
I have alot of relatives from Gujarat
Actually my family is like a mini India
You can find ppl from all across india
hi vinita…….
ur friend also read that comment……..
wow………..
they fooled me….uska bhi alag maza hai na…………………….
but i m happy k wo dono pehle si apni feeling share kar chuke the…..
bdw
how r u????????
Hi Vinita tq dear tum logonke comments ke waje se I recovered soon so much we are chatting des days I was missing not being part of it …?? so wat do u do vinita?
Hi dear,u come late nowadays bt u r in thoughts,I will respond to your comment there,ok,thank u for being there dear,next season of exams??vacation?
My comment for niti di got typed two times!!
Bt not displayed??above was to u..
Luvd ur epi…eagerly waiting fr next epi..
Thank u dea, next one tomorrow..
Vinita,Joya,Sethooty, I will check previous ff n reply to all those asap,same with the ones under this ff,hope u will give me some time…I will respond for sure…
Waiting for ur epi vini… and all bst for ur future…
I will send it tomorrow, and thank u very much dear.
hi dii
l am commenting for the first time…
Ur ff makes me remember my frnds…
i feel both sad and happy at a timenl…
the sad thing is i am staying in hostel(kerala) far away from my hometown(hyderbad) i cant meet my frnds for 4 months
but feels happy to read ur story which makes me remember my frnds and gives a strong feeling that they are near me…
Now also i am eagerly waiting for my sem hldays in may
if u can plz post the next episode today only…
waiting for ur next ff
Hei,Akshita, I remember, u have commented before once or twice, oh u r in hostel,m from Kerala though living in B’lore now,which course u r studying,ITV’s tuf being away from home n friends, m happy u could recollect some memories..
nc episode waiting foe next episode…
Thanks dear,haven’t typed next one,shall do it asap.
Hi!!!!!!!!
Right guess di… My exams are starting frm Wednesday. The above chats were so hilarious.. Especially abla par ilzam lagana and statue. I was laughing while reading those comments.
Shraddha di I am doing BA.good to see u back.
Joya di aapke Hindi par Mai fida ho gayi………
Haha dear,m also enjoying reading ur chats with me n more than that between u guys..the bond,it s amazing,oh,next season of exams??all the best dear,God bless,and Joya ‘s Hindi,even ,m a fan…
Helllooooop di….sry ha…xuley mne prvs ff chck kya toh aapki cmnt dkha…yes he is a singer(zayn)…. i don’t knw y bt i lyk vampire stories…xuley mujhe bachpan se vmpre n horror stories psnd h…
U knw di jab me class 2 me thi,dt tym ek hrr srl diya krti thi DD national par”Aa biti” raat 10 bje…hmsha wt krti thi 10 bje tk…mere doni bhaya bht darti thi bhoot se…so jb ai srl shuru ho jti thi wo dono bhaag jti thi..n i think mne sbse jyada vmpre n hrr story pdha h bchpn se…shayad isiliye…par abhi pdhna chod diya h…raat ko bura spna dkhti thi…so mummmma ne bht gli d
yr hum bhi wo serial dekhte the………
national tv pe aata tha…..
aur aankhe,surag,100,hawayain……
wo song aaj bhi hume yaad hai
honewala hai kya koi jane nahi….
aisa kuch tha……
Hei ,even I used to watch Surag and aankhe..name sounds familiar ,I think I used to watch that too but I don’t remember exactly…
Ok dear,horror movies are exciting to watch,aa dat was the serial I mentioned in reply to Joya,it was dubbed in malayalam n my cousins used to watch it seems,wen they used to come for vacation aunt used to narrate how scared these fellows were,yet watched, I was also at school dat time bt class I forgot ,I used to feel that funny, but my lil cousins used to narrate with much enthusiasm and I used to be a listener ,haha ,mom interfered ,ah?good,good,and brothers were scared that time,so sweet…
Even I used to watch alot of horror shows like ssh…phir koi hai, akela with my dad. My ma always comments that both father and daughter are alike and like to watch paranormal soaps. I have twin brothers and whenever I see any horror show they always run away and scream didi se bachao
Haha dad n daughter watching horror series together,so funny,wat my dad used to do wen were kids is some dance steps in front of TV while we are seriously watching something n me n bro used to say,Pappa pls move,we will watch ur dance latervbut this won’t be retelecasted so pls let us ,recalling that itself is making me smile..
hi rupsikha! are u a directioner?? Glad to know evn u are a fan of zayn
rupsikha, have u read twilight?
di how are u? Take care…..
I am fine dear..fever has subsided,busy days …
Yes vinita…i lv one drctn sooo much..spcly zaynnn??…he is sooo cute naaaaaa…
Hmm…twilight flm dkhi h mne
Evn I love 1d
Wow sanskar looks at swara and when she looks he averts his gaze away from her….. Liked it… I think he too feels something for swara….
Thank u for the comment,I guess ur first comment under my ff,thanks ,hope u will keep reading.
Didi…wat abt next epi….when u ll update di….i m waiting…..di update daily pls…u know i m feel like restless without reading all swaragini fan fiction…
I haven’t typed next one,most probably tomorrow. Yea,I can understand dear that there are many ff’s n u guys are supporting us,so it s not right to make u all wait..shall upload tomorrow.
he Divi me to
Seeing new names under our ff s motivating, knowing that there are many who read our ff will make NY ff writer happy n under this episode there are many new names…m happy n I thank each n every one if u who supported me thus far.