Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 28
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Actually,yesterday’s comments,honestly didn’t expect you all will like that episode,was randomly written n I was not satisfied,they were around 15 new names,those who comment daily,I know the names now,in reply to a silent reader under 27th episode ie. yesterday’s ,I have written,that ,now I truly wish all silent readers commented ‘once’ under my ff,it is just out of a curiosity to know how many of you are reading my ff,don’t know if u all will consider this,ah,then coming to the story,as I have quoted Christopher Booker before,there are just 7 basic plots,all stories said so far falls into it,there are debates for and against that view,I am not a writer (don’t think,I am thinking low,it is a fact),so your guesses may be right,let’s see whose guess matches closely with my thought,please keep reading,thank you for the support,Swasan will be united but how,when,where….?quite predictable ,but let us see…..
Scene 1:Next day evening,beach……….
Sanskar is waiting for Swara,Swara arrives after some time,her face clearly shows her heart ,Sanskar looks into her eyes,the puffiness around clearly conveys the amount of tears the previous night and that day witnessed,Swara asks him, “Sanskaar,one last time,I am asking,tell me,what you told me yesterday,is it a lie?if yes,I know all your responsibilities,I know you are not ready for a marriage now,but,one word,Sanskaar,please,not for me,to convince my family,if you think it is for my well being,don’t ask me to go,please,”Sanskar just listens silently and then tells her, “Swara,shall we go that side,you think I am lieing to make u go from my life?no dear”,he takes her along with him,he opens the door of a blue car parked there,a girl steps out,she looks at Swara,Swara looks at her in shock ,her eyes are filled but she is struggling to hide it,she feels like running away but composes herself and smiles,Sanskar tells the girl, “Sanjitha,this is Swara,”,he slowly turns and tells, “ Swara,this is Sanjitha”,Swara is struggling to hide her pain.she looks at her and brings a forced smile and says, “Hi”,Sanjitha responds, “Hai Swara,Sanskar has mentioned about the three of u,SwasanRaglak,that’s how he says,nice to meet you,I am so sorry Swara”,Swara says, “Oh,please don’t say sorry,I am sorry,I wished for,actually I don’t deserve,sorry,I am happy to meet you,you both make a very good pair together “her lips are shivering while saying that,she continues, “Actually,now ,I will leave,before making a decision wanted to….later ,should not feel,no?,that I went wrong,still,don’t know,if it is right or wrong ,but….have to….ok,nice meeting you Sanjitha,you are leaving this week,no?,all the best ,bye”,she turns to go,then quickly goes back and holds Sanjitha’s hands,she removes her ring from her finger and makes Sanjitha wear it and says, “you should be knowing clearly,he must have told you yesterday,I have loved your guy all these years,but it is my mistake,I should have thought from his angle too,I am very happy for you,I will also pray for all the obstacles to vanish,your parents will agree,his parents and sister,they are very nice people,wont hurt you,wont hurt any one,then,don’t know when we will meet again,this is a small gift from my side and all good wishes in advance ,she hugs her and takes permission to leave……
She calls Sanskar to a side and tells him, “I am happy that you got a very good girl,this life ,you belong to her,but in next life,will you be mine?”,a tear rolls down from her eyes,she wipes and says, “I am so silly,no?how can I ask that?,you will wish to live all your lives with Sanjitha,no?sorry,ok,may be we were not born to be together,it is ok, sorry,I am unlucky ,good wishes to both of you,today I will agree to what mom and dad told,only for you,only because you made me promise that I will agree”Swara waves a bye to Sanjitha and walks away,she goes to the direction where her scooty was parked,she is walking but crying her heart out closing her mouth with one hand and is also trying to compose herself to prevent Sanskar and Sanjitha from seeing her shoulder moving ,she reaches near her scooty and stumbles,Sanskar was watching her,seeing her going to fall,he calls Swara and moves forward but Swara is at a distance where she couldn’t hear that,he sees Swara leaving and goes near Sanjitha and thanks her..
Sanjitha tells him, “Sanskaar,tell me honestly,you brought me here to meet her because you don’t love her and wants her to move on in her life,are you sure,you don’t love her and that is why you made me pretend like this?”,Sanskar replies ,”Yes Sanju,I don’t love her,I don’t want her to wait for me,I want her to accept the proposal which her parents brought,but thank you so much for helping me,for coming to see her”,Sanjitha responds, “Sanskaar,before leaving I had plans to meet you,what you have done for me and Vicky,I cant do anything in return for that but I came and promised that I will never let Swara know the truth of our friendship for you,because you’re my good friend,if you had not supported, me and Vicky would have never been able to carry our relationship thus far,though bitterness is still there between families,atleast ,you could turn his mom in our favour”,Sanskaar smiles and says, “yea,those moments,still,don’t know ,how aunty agreed to meet you and all,ah,thank God,and,thank you Sanju ,once again ,for this big help,should I come along?”,Sanjitha continues, “You know something Sanskaar,I met your family today,na?they are so loving,Swara is right,and you just now told me that you don’t love her,but look at you Sanskaar,you are talking,you are smiling,but your heart is not here,I am telling about my friend who I have known for the past 4 years,Swara was in pain but you looked more hurt,Swara stumbled,you moved forward to hold her calling her name,I wish she noticed it but poor girl ,can understand her heart,what is it Sanskaar,is it that you haven’t realised your love for her?or am I totally mistaken ?your heart ,really,doesn’t want to stop her?please think about it, my friend,if there is a chance,don’t let her go,12 years,poor girl,accept her,na?when I return I wish I could see you both together,please think about it,now,let me leave”she leans and hugs Sanskaar,Sanskaar opens the door for her,he again asks her if he should accompany her,she tells him again to think about it,suddenly she opens the door and steps outside again,removes the ring from her finger,holds Sanskaar’s right hand and places it in his palm and tells her, “Oh,I would have left with this,the girl who walked away a few minutes back with a broken heart, doesn’t know that I don’t deserve this,but you know that,I wont take this,I feel, this belongs to that same girl in all its sense,whether you agree or not,I feel so,ask your heart Sanskaar,before it is too late,I will surely pray for you both”,she gets inside the car after saying this and wishes him bye and leaves……
Scene 2:Sanskaar is seated at the seashore
The sea is very calm,he looks at the sea,he has Swara’s ring in his hands,he stares at it,tears blur his vision,he slowly kisses the ring and looks at the sea and says, “best friend,no?very calm today,but all the waves are inside my heart,I wish I died this moment,can you help me?can you come angrily and take me along with you now?no,cant wish for that also,have a family who needs me,but,life?do you have the slightest idea about the condition of my heart now?I am tired,I am tired ,the day she came home for the first time,felt she was born to be mine,every moment spent with her made me feel,we were destined to be together,wanted to spend this life with her,wanted to give her all happiness,her name was attached to every dream that I saw,from one end I was struggling to untie the knots but from the other end destiny brings a new challenge,now lakhs for Papa’s renal transplant,his condition is bad,don’t know if his body is ready for another surgery,but have to,because I want him,all I have with me to give to Swara is my love,but that is not enough,I don’t want her to struggle with me,Akshay’s proposal is a really good one for her,let her move on,love is not always about living with the one you love,it is also about letting your love live happily,I broke her heart,but,after marriage,she will accept him,she will get all the love… now what more will you give me life?,what is new challenge in store for me,I have never complained,have I?now also,no complaints,no demands, can accept any number of pains again ,because the biggest is losing my Swara,already did,I made her walk out of my life,she is my heart,I cant accept that she wont be mine but give as much pain as you want in this life,but if there are 6 more lives,I want 6 more,to spent with my Swara,give me the blessing to give this love back to her,to hold that hand which I just now rejected,she has loved me for 12 years,I wish I could go and tell her that I have been loving her since the day she came home when we were in 8th standard,that I had understood her heart even if she had not told anything,that distance was never a problem in understanding her,because I carried her in my heart,,that I was born to be hers,life………..why are you making me helpless?,it is enough ,you broke my heart,but all my pains,God ,I am not questioning you,I know you give struggles to people who you love the most and I know you love me God,so ,please keep my Swara happy, after her marriage,let Akshay give her all the love and happiness that she deserves..he again kisses the ring and keeps it inside his fist and keeps his hand on his chest,he closes his eyes and tears roll down ,after some time he gets up and walks towards the water,he stands there still ,for a long time,then comes back,kneels down,takes the beach sand in his fist,slowly opens it and allows the sand to fall down,he then cries,looking at the sky…………….
140 Comments
Hi niti…yes prctce…
JOYA di aap kitne acche likhte ho yarrrr???….sach me aap bhttt cuutteeee hooo….
Vinita m fine dr
…n 2din tk holiday h…n mnday se clg wk??
thanks yr rups……..tumne padha yr…..thanks….
hello vini..i was silent reader till now..but i hv not missed any single epi of ur ff..i like ur ff very much..this epi was very heart touching n emotional..i cried today also..i agree with Niti..u r awesome writer..i hv seen that u guys used to chat also..joya..Niti..shradhdha..rupshikha..vinita..good to see that being stranger u guys hv shared many things about yourself..plz unit swasan soon..
hey kriya,
welcome in group chatting………..
we r not strangers…… we r a Reader friends of vini di’s ff…..
m i ri8 di????????
I agree with u joya!!!! It all started with Vini di’s ff its like this necklace where in we all are pearls n the string is Vini di n her ff….. How are u all I saw epi 28 29 today Oh God so amazing? hello kriya nice name u got BTW tc……..
hii kriya..ye bhi koi pu6 ne ki bat hai..i agree wid joya..we r readers friends..wow shradhdha kya likha hai yar..necklace n pearls…cha gaye guru..
Thanks niyati yaar mujhe sachi me aiss he lagta hai? hum sab dost bangaye jaise ek grp form hogaya unki ff ke waje se na sooo… Phir CA madamji kyya haal chal hai,?
I just read reply for my previous ff comment u dont want to plead to read ur ff its me pleading to u to more ff in a day .ya plzzzzz
thank you so much vini for this beautiful n lovely ff..school life..friendship..family supports..clg life..maturity of characters..unconditional love of swasan..raglak cute love..these all things were beautifully described..i hv thought to comment many time..now at last i hv commented here..mindblowing job dear..hope you and ur army will allow me to enter in ur group chating..
Really ausm mindblowing…veeeryyy emotional yaar…aajj bhii ruladiya yaar mujhee…continue yaar this ws really hrt touching…pure feelings..lv u swasans frevr
super dear
Wooow.
Nice episode…waiting 4 next part..
I am a silent reader from ur first ff….today I got tears while reading
Thank u diiii 4 a nice episode
such a heart touching epi..you wrote well. .
Hii Kriyaà….yeh v koi puchne ki baat h kya…koi v aa skte h…plzzz dr…u mst wlcme???
Niti 2mhre dono storyyy bhttt hi cute hhh yar sachme??
ha ha..thanks for reading it dear..hv a nice weekends..
Wow so much comments..I can see new names . Atlast silent readers breaked their silence.
yup..congratulations Di finally you made lots of silent readers to comment on ur ff..
Its really awesome i did nt miss an episode of this series n today its the first tym i commented
dear i had decided to quit up reading bt u know wat ur ff had made me so addicted that here i m again back to read ur ff…nd wat 2 say dear u made me cry…u were as awsm as alwz…luved it…
Hiii di i have no words to express my feelings …it was just awesome u made me cry di..
vini superb epi amd emotional, finally u let us know that sanskar has felt her love and he was in love… but im vry sorry for replying u very late… and nw wts gonna happen in swasan and raglak life… very eager to know….
98 comments,didn’t expect,I will respond for sure,tomorrow, next episode link ,http://googleweblight.com/?lite_url=http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-29/&lc=en-IN&s=1&m=213&ts=1453487078&sig=ALL1Aj5tnfj0WLqIyQosDezUDazpFSRHog
Oh my God didi I’m so happy for uuu!!! See told u der are sooo many who love u sooooo much now it’s clearly proved? ah now lets see yest I mean day before yest u gave me tonsils n now on top of that ur giving me ice cream softdrink gola n looks like in upcoming episodes u will provide with fried items as well eh? Irada kya hai meri maaa ?? so much pain in just 1 episode mummy??????!!!
Swaraaaa I pity u my dear but poor sanky is rite in his own way ?
To start with swara meeting sanjitha(hey BTW nyc name I really liked it never mentioned because u said sankys gf though I knew she’s not still had sm kind of ? feeling lol…..) Well I can imagine what swara must ve felt the moment sanju stepped out of car poor girl!!! But swara is such a nice person in spite of her pain she told such lovely things to sanjita brave girl!!!! N dat ring she gave I was like ddii stop it ? I hardly new what’s gonna come next n the way swara spoke to sanskaar I gotto know u ve made ur mind to make us cry again Wen she said am so silly no u would wish to spend all ur lives with her… …. Dat was it I started
? how many give reply the way she did ….
N den came major pain till now I was feeling dat poor swara felt heart break now I was feeling oh God he has an option of choosing her but he’s letting her go ? cheating he deserves happiness how much more should he suffer……
Sanjita spoke so well looks like wer ever sanky goes he just spreads happiness makes friends for life…. Really the way u portray him is just fantastic….. It was so good to see their friendship the way he said sanju hoe sweet!!!
Oh God didi why do u write in so much depth ? sanky convo with his best friend is soooo deep the way he address it entire conversation gave goosebumps u know?? how can smbody be so good till now was feeling bad for swara but every time I read him addressing her as “My swara” I felt soooo bad? I can’t tell you all those lines That he spoke” i wish idied rite now but cant no ” ” i am tired i am tired” ” felt she was born for me??” every moment spent with her made me feel we were destind to be together “” her name was attached to every dream tthat i saw” his misery his dad’s condition his helplessness his selflessness? no words to describe! I’m so touched n den how he spoke to God” no complaints no demands ” have I ever complained no no?” N this one ” BIGGEST PAIN IS LOOSING MY SWARA” how can smbody love sm1 this selflessly ??? His unconditional love for her touched my heart !!!! Bravo didi u truely are a great narrator!!!?? i ve ni words to tell u how much I love u n ur ff!!!?? just glad that u wrote this 1