Hi guys,I know ,I am not at all punctual in posting updates,sorry,then,though I haven’t replied to the comments under the last two ff episodes,I truly value every comment and feed back and a big thank u to all silent readers who made me realise that so many are reading this ff,then,next sentence is not meant for my friends ,Mickey,Joya,Shraddha,Niti,Vinita,Sethooty,Appu and Leku.I told so because since we chat thru comments,they must be fed up of reading what I am gonna type,from this or next episode ,the so called stupid track,as I often say is gonna begin,and,from a realistic ff(as a few readers have told),this is gonna become a predictable,messed up fan fiction,my apologies in advance,not proof read,here we go,SWASAN Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 30……..
Previous link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-29/
Scene 1:Previous day of Swara’s wedding,Sanskar’s house
Sanskar’s mother asks him if he is not going to Swara’s house,she reminds him that MUkesh had told them all to reach there in the morning itself,she also tells him that she called Ragini’s mom,and all elders have decided to reach by afternoon, “since everything was in a hurry,Sumi is tensed,she called and told that all of us have to participate in the sangeet”,Sanskar just listens to his mother’s words,he feels every word like a stone falling on his heart,he just goes near his mom and tells her, “Mamma,I am going to take bath,after that I will leave,Chetan had called and told us to reach now,actually Mukesh unce is also busy,so,my mumma ,give me some food,I will come now after taking bath,ok”,His mom turns and tells him , “ah,don’t forget,Swara had told that day itself that u have to wear the kurtha she gifted ,so wear that or take that along with you”He says, “ok,mamma”.He comes out after taking bath,he opens the cupboard and takes the gift which Swara gave him,he remembers how Swara had come home with it,he slowly opens it and moves his hand on it and says,
“Swara,your choice is so nice yaar,except your first love,you could have opted somebody else,if u had done that,your heart would not have been broken like this,I am very sorry,my love…saying this he turns and takes the chain that he had removed and kept on the bed,he wears it ,he looks at the locket,it is the same key chain which Swara had gifted on his birthday celebration held at Ragini’s home,he remembers how she told that she had kept it safely for two years after their 10th standard tour,she, showing their names(Swara and Sanskaar) on the grain and telling him that it will remind him about a friend who considers him as her best friend,how he had incorporated it into a locket later with his pocket money,he understands that his eyes are filled,he slowly lifts it and kisses the locket and says, “Sanskaar is Swara’s,but Swara cant be Sanskaar’s ,loss is Sanskaar’s and only Sanskaar’s,but u will always remain ,close to my heart,like this,always,every beat will be heard and felt by u first,I love u Swara”he quickly wears the kurta and goes in front of the mirror,he looks at himself ,smiles and tells to himself, “one more day,have to hide my heart from her,wish I could run away from here,be brave ,Sanskaar….for your Swara,he quickly corrects,himself,no,for Aksh…ay’s Swara……….
Scene 2:Swara’s house,afternoon
Sanskar has reached,Sanraglak are actively involved in the final round preparations,Sanskaar wants to see Swara,he sees her coming down,he goes near her,he tells her, “so,all set,bride?Swara just smiles and says “,kurta suits you,handsome…all set?yes,except, heart..”,Sanskaar feels like a sword piercing his soul,he quickly asks, “where is Mukesh uncle,not returned”?Swara says, “no,hasn’t reached,dad is tired ,actually,that is my only tension,everything in a hurry,he was busy managing everything,I think hasn’t even taken his tablets properly,ah,everything will be over by tomorrow,no?Sanskaar, should once in a while come this side and meet my family,ok,”Sanskaar says, “sure ,dear,don’t worry”,a relative and family arrives,Swara excuses herself and goes,Sanskaar looks at her leaving,just then he receives a call,he attends it and quickly goes from there.
Scene 3:Beach
Sanskaar arrives ,he looks around,he dials Mukesh’s number,he goes to the other side of the road,the sea is very violent,the roaring sound of the waves disturbs him,he looks the sea and quickly goes to the car parked there,Shambu,Swara’s driver,hints to Mukesh that Sanskaar has arrived,Mukesh quickly steps out,holds Sanskaar’s hands and takes him to a side,Sanskaar sees him sweating profusely,he feels worried and asks Mukesh if he is fine,Mukesh holds Sanskaars hands and says, “Sanskaar,I need your help,I don’t know who else to ask for a favour at this last minute,Sanskaar ,will you marry Swara?Sanskaar is shocked,he is standing there not able to believe what he just heard, he calls, “uncle”,Mukesh leans on to him and says,
“I want to tell you a few things,all knows a successful business man Mukesh,but no one,not even my Sumi knows a Mukesh,who was an utter failure,who was on the verge of suicide due to debt,that time,had to accept an offer which came from Akshay’s father,I became his partner,partner in all his illegal business,all means all,it was like a whirlpool,I was forced to,didn’t have any power to resist it,later became successful,money was the only gain,haven’t slept a day peacefully after that,but had to ,to keep my Sumi and kids happy,without letting them know anything,managed all these years,when Akshay’s proposal came,wanted to say a no,but his father told that he has no interest in business,I also thought my Swara will refuse,but no,I was thinking that you both were in love,would have happily given her hand in yours,but she agreed,that time also,had a hope that the guy is good,why to bother about his dad,today,I had gone to their guest house here,saying this Mukesh shows signs of palpitation,Sanskaar gets worried,he tries to hold him,
Mukesh continues, “today,today only I heard the father son conversation,God made me hear it,that Akshay,he is a womanizer,his dad was doing a gambling by asking for my daughter’s hand in marriage,to bring his son to the right path,more than that,I heard him saying how he rescued Akshay from going behind the bars for killing his partner with whom he was in living together relationship,I couldn’t believe my ears,I don’t know what to do,I don’t have the power to fight with him,if my Sumi comes to know about this,I will lose my family,I will lose everything,also Akshay’s dad,he will do anything for his son,Sanskaar ,I know I am being selfish,I am asking for your life,marry my daughter today,please,I beg you..take her away,may be ,others will think that you were an obsessive lover,yes,that is what I am asking from you,I know,I know that I am being selfish,but please,I will arrange everything,just bring her to the place that I say,pandit and all arrangemets I will do,I don’t have the power to fight with Akshay’s dad directly,but I will protect you both and your family,that I can do,have a small gang of loyal subordinates who will manage,I will make them,already talked to them,but..trust me,give me some time,I will set everything right,need some time to settle a few things ,but cant let this marriage happen tomorrow ,at any cost”
Sanskaar holds Mukesh’s hands and says, “uncle,I don’t understand anything,it is not a film,it is Swara’s life,how can I do this to her,she values her self respect a lot,I can’t do this to her,if you want ,I will take her safely somewhere,after telling the truth,but marrying her forcefully,I don’t find any logic, uncle,this is life,she will never forgive me,she will never forgive herself for letting you all down,also,how long can we hide truth? how long can you protect my family,uncle, all this doesn’t make any sense,please,I cant,we will find some way to stop the marriage,we have a few with us,there will be some way out”,Mukesh holds his chest and says, “Sanskaar ,I know what I am going to say is not at all right,but I have to,do you remember the promise you gave in the hospital,that even after years,you will be ready to do anything for me,today,I am asking you to fulfil it,marry my daughter,today evening,please”,
Sanskaar listens to him in shock,he stands there still, the sound of waves brings him back to his senses,he holds his head,he sees Mukesh holding his chest and taking deep breaths,he holds him,Mukesh goes on pleading ,“please,please,my son,marry her and rest I will manage…I know it is not easy,but at this last moment,don’t have any other way,I want my daughter to be in safe hands,being a selfish father,I am asking for your life,for my daughter,but ,I know she wont get any one better than you,her name wont be destroyed,I will arrange everything,please,go bring her to the place that I say”.Mukesh folds his hands and pleads,Sanskaar shakes his head in a no,Shambu watches all this…Sanskaar comes and asks Shambu to give the keys and go home…
Scene 4:Swara’s room
Sanskaar comes inside,Swara turns and sees him,she notices his tension,she asks him if everything is alright,he tells her, “Swara,do you trust me?”,Swara says, “yes ,Sanskaar,why are you asking this now?”,Sanskaar says, “you should come with me,now”,Swara says, “Sanskaar,I would have happily come along with you, but this,this is not the right time,sangeet function in a short while ,Mom is already worried ,she has been trying Papa’s number,Shambu uncle also hasn’t reached,don’t know where they are,it is not right to come with you now”,Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and says, “if you have ever loved me,come…”,Swara resists,he tightens the grip and she unwillingly follows him,he takes her out through the back door,Laksh sees them and runs behind,but before he could reach them,he sees the car moving,he stands there thinking where they have left ,he decides to talk to Ragini…
Scene 5:A large ground with a small ,minimally decorated mandap
Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and takes her to the mandap,Swara looks at him in shock,he sees four people wearing mask,he sees the pandit,a man is pointing gun at his head,Swara stands there not able to understand her eyes,Sanskaar comes near her and says, “Swara,I am going to marry you,now”,Swara looks at him in shock, “Sanskaar,what are you saying,and who are these people,mask and gun and all this,what is your connection with all this?are you sure about what you are saying?,I need to go now,I have promised my dad that I will never let him down,please,come back to your senses,I need to go,come with me”,she turns to go,Sanskaar angrily pulls her and says, “you wont leave now,you have seen only one side of Sanskaar,these are my men,no,I am one among them,had to be part of this,was dragged into this world,why should I tell you the details,right now,I am doing what I feel is right for me,I am going to marry you,and that is it,I don’t have to explain more,don’t try to resist,wont be good for you,we need your dad’s empire and you are the key to that”,Swara stands there not able to believe what he heard,she tells him, “Sanskaar,are you the one who I have loved for 12 years,are you the same Sanky who is my best friend?,please,don’t act,trying to give me a surprise,?then where is our Raglak?she looks around,
Sanskaar comes near her,holds her hand forcefully and orders the pandit to start the rituals,Swara tries to free herself,she is not able to believe what is happening ,she tells him, “Sanskaar,I love you,I would have happily agreed ,but now it is late,what you are doing is not right,for money,no,no,Sanskaar cant be like this,my family,they wont be able to face the society,please,leave me “suddenly she pushes him and says, “Sanskaar,Sanju ,what about her?Sanskaar,your girl,don’t this to her,think about her,please for her,leave me..”,Sanskaar forcefully holds her hand and completes the rituals,Swara pleads to the pandit to stop,she sees him helpless and cries,she pleads,Sanskar makes her sit,he makes her wear the mangalsutra and fills sindoor in her maang ,Swara stares at him in shock,she feels her vision is getting blurred,she is about to hold Sanskaar’s collar ,she slowly closes her eyes and falls to a side,Sanskaar shouts “Swara “ and holds her,he tries to wake her up ,she doesn’t open her eyes,he quickly lifts her in his arms…………..”
(Guys,very sorry for this,I didn’t like this and know that it is a predictable story ,sorry once again for the stupid twist,this is why I say I am not a ‘writer’,but I am proceeding with this…you have complete freedom to be silent …”
198 Comments
Thanks diii…At last swasan marriage. ….how when I read swara’s marriage I think this is my end….diii ini kuzhappamila eniku samadhanamyi poyi exam ezhutam …e ffinu vendi njan kathu irikukaya ayirunnu. ..so happy 4 swasan. . And di adyamayitta kadha vayichu najn karayunathu last 3 episode um njan karanju….
Hello dear,thanks for the comment,then ,u r from Kerala,ok,ee kadha vayichu karanjo,@ctually,ezhuthiyathu conveyed aayi ennarinjathil santhosham,Pinne, all the best for ur exam,ethu course aanu padikkunnathu? and Keralathil evideya?reveal only if u don’t mind.
I am frm trivandrum. ..and course bsc computer science. …and chechi evideya..I think not trivandrum. ..isn’t. ….chechi oru karyam ariyooo najn first season vayichapol chechi keralthil ninnu annennu vijarichthe illa…but I am so proud to say we both are frm kerala………
Chechi writer alla enu ariyam pakshe enganya chechi enne ingane karayipichachu….njan athra sensitive alla enitum….hooo a 3 divasam eniku orkane vayya….ente chetan enne ethra kaliyakiyenno
Thnks diii
Ok dear,thank u for introducing itself,Peru Varsha ennano?Trivandrum,alle,ok,njan Fort Kochiyil ninnaanu,ippo Bangalore,oh,athrakku athu feel cheyyum ennu orthilla,pettennu type cheythu post cheyyunnathanu,it got conveyed to some extent ennu ningalde commentsnnu thonnunnu..thank u for this feed bk dear,then yea,under first ff. I had not given my details till 30th episode or something,then,somebody asked if m studying n where m from n then I responded,Veena was the name under which I wrote that,not saying pen name cos m not worth it,Veena was a dear friend’s name…so take care dear,keep in touch.All the best for ur studies.
I mean for introducing *yourself.
really spr….the way u r going through the story is awesome….swasan marriage is Spr…but dont create any misunderstanding btw them…..
Thanks for the comment dear,I wish I could write a good story,this ,I don’t like though m writing it,then, misunderstanding should be there to carry this forward,but to what extent, have to plan it..I value your comment yaar,but sorry if the track disappoint u.
hey vinni its a nice twist i am really happy for their marriage bt the way its so disturbing yar am sry to say bt am bit dissapointed actually i am fearing that all this may effect their friendship nd their bonding which is the best thing in ur f.f bt i hope u dnt drag this track tooooo much plzzzzz yar its a request actually i cant imagine swara’s hatred towards sanky her love for 12 years so plzzzz
Hei yaar ,thanks for the comment,I understood what u meant, but while writing,lots of limitations are there in pulling the story forward, may be cos m not a writer, I know it s quite boring,but if it is all zz well,then,ff will end in max 10 episodes,I had tried to keep it closer to life,but now brain is literally empty,I understand swasan fans will be hurt wen they see swasan fighting.Let’s see.
u r awsm vini… Was eagerly waiting fr ur update… And yes u r vry unpnctual… U should nt let ur frnds wait tis much… BTW plz brng out sanskar’s truth as early as possible… Can’t see swasan seperate
Thank u dear,yea,I know ,swasan fans can’t tolerate swasan separation n misunderstanding, but hope u all will understand my limitations, trying to add less masala as possible,let us see,if u don’t mind,where are u from n wat r u doing?
Awesome but can u tell me when will u upload next epi??
Thanks dear,hope u liked it, then I will repeat the question. Where are u frm n wat r u doing,reveal only if u don mind,next part,have to plan,after posting it,I will put a comment underneath .
Hey!! Actually im frm chandrapur, maharashtra. N what am I doing?? U will be shocked bt im in std 8…
Im sry I didnt ans ur ques b4 actually I didn’t see ur reply in previous epi. Again sry!!!
No probs dear,just now only I saw,good to hear from u little girl,u r little girl for us…don’t know if u liked the way I addressed u.
u r amazing yaar nd i agree that the story is a bit predictable but like this twist you can bring another one. ..you are an awesome writer
Haha dear,liked ur frankness,not a lil,a lot predictable,, I know,another one ,haven’t planned,since we see a lot in real swaragini ,trying to keep it as simple as possible.. Ah,don’t know,let’s c,thank u for the comment.
Vini Dr am very happy yaar..if any misunderstandings happens between dem..I don’t mind haha bz..kuch pane ke liyae thoda thoo dard sahna padegaa naa..after all this sanky hurt my swara , so he deserve some punishment na? Hahaha ( ys i knw he loves her deeply )
Happy republic day guy’s. .
Actually I don’t want to end this Ff very early if swasan unite den story will end ..we will surely miss their romance..these are only my predictions or things comes into mind , not any demand that I want in Ff..
.I like everything u write its suits the story and track..
Yaar waiting for next update. sabar ka phal thooo meets hota hai…
Haha,thanks dear,but don know if it be worth the wait,bt thanks dear,glad to know that u a few will tolerate misunderstanding track also,happy republic day to u too,thank u very much for this support dear,actually,even m not sure when,where n how this story will end,some times it may be abrupt,let us see..
Vini Di it was really unpredictable…. That locket scene cute one!!!!!!?????☺☺….loved it….I didn’t even imagine.. Did could happen…..but how will swara and her family accept sanky…..???…really exited for next part… I was silent reader but uhh broked my silence…. Ur a great writer….awesome???????❤?…hats off for uhh…
Oh,so happy to know that u were reading,I have seen your name,under whose ff I don’t remember,now,that wat m thinking,how to proceed exactly,m not a writer dear,just a humble attempt for u all,sorry if if the track disappoints u totally.
Ohh thank you thank you vini Di and everyone…
i want to thank ny mamma .pappa…my sis..god for this….but truly speaking from bottom of my heart that the who have right to take credit for this are my sweet vini di’s ff family…who gave me inspiration to show real niyati…me tahe dil se app sab ka shukriya karna chahti hu…
ha ha ha…how was my speech(its 4 giving me complement of being naughty) ….??
ya Di i can mixed with any one but my talking will be limited n formal untill muje samne vale person se appna pan nahi milta…jab muje lagata hai ki jisse me bat karti hu vo meri thodi si mature n baki jyada pagalo vali bate dil khol k sunega..then only i can show the real me…muje sabse pehle vo apna pan app se mila vini Di…fir joya..shraddha..vinita..rups..sethooty se mila…so i am very thankful to you guys for giving me this much of apna pan..btw fayad to app logo ka hi hua na you guys got chance to meet the real Niyati…ha ha kaha tha na jyada Der serious nahi reh sakti…
thank u sethooty for not hitting me with tomatoes n chappals..n liking it…joya said it correctly i can’t understand what you write in your comment..now a days you r writing more in English so i can understand half of your comment…so my suggestion is that you start posting 2 comments 1 for vini Di in your language…2nd for us in English..plzzzzzz
joya..tumne humari tarif kark Hume dhnya dhanya kar diya…aree pagli ye to bas shuruat hai..humare abhi kayi shade hai Jo bahar ane baki hai..ha ha just kidding vo to ase hi likh diya yar tera likha padhke..
hii vinita…finally exam over ha…how was it ? i am also missing you all…
wowwww..shraddha kya likha hai tumne..tusi bhi cha gaye yar..loved it..
hii rups…how r u ??
happy republic day to all…jay hind..vande matram..Bharat mata ki jai..
My dear,thanks giving speech brought tears,haha,as I commented above,Happy republic day dear,every year I make sure that I watch republic day parade on TV,a patriotic song always brings tears in my eyes,so u can imagine when I watch the tableau representing various states,howbI would be,and all my dearbl ones knows that I will cry,so proud to belong to this land,in fact,human beings and their emotions are the same everywhere ,no?wen I met u all thru this platform,I understood, people with same vibes exist everywhere, we are lucky that we all met thru telly site,now when Gujarat,Karnataka,Kerala,Bengal,Assam,Maharashtra comes to mind,there will be some one to remember,some one who we don’t have any idea about their appearance ,still,some memories are sure to last,waiting for your various shades ,glad that u felt that freedom to be real u,keep in touch dear..
me too vini Di….i used to visit CLG for dhwaj-vandan..muje bahut achcha lagata hai..jab national anthem bajata everything i got goose bamps..n a happy tear in my eyes..at the time of school days i used participat in drama..dance..singing..n till 10 i hv given speech on this day infornt of whole school..
you pointed out correctly…now i hv someone to remember whenever i will heard state names…i hv already gone through that you know yesterday only my offc sir told us that he is going kolkata for some Audit work…after meeting got completed..the first thought come in my mind that vinita is there in west Bengal…it will happen for u all..we all r far from each other unknow about each others appearance..but we all r sharing very beautiful bonding with each other…its true that we all r first India…after that only we r gujaraties..marathi..panjabi..Bengali..etc etc..
i used to think ki kya gujarat k alava other states me rehne vale log Jo gujarati nahi hai vo humare jaise hi honge..?? everytime i used to give myself answer in yes only..but was not having any proof..now i hv proven me absolutely correct…see I..you..joya..rups..vinita..shraddha..sethooty..we all are almost sharing same nature..we r very comfortable with each other…bz we all r Indian only…
Yes dear,same feelings here when I see flag hoisting n hear patriotic songs and I used to struggle to hide my tears,singing dancing drama speech wah…u r a very talented girl, I understood that ,now wen I read Calcutta Vinita came to my mind as well,yes dear,absolutely, how easily n unknowingly all got gelled,I think despite different nation ,creed,caste n all,human beings are the same everywhere.
Niti.. sure dr will comment only in English for u guy’s and for sometimes only for vini in my language..
Actually after reading ur comment ,den only I came to know about joya’s lines,scrolled bak read joya’s poem..awesome lines..loved it
Vini .. No need to say thanks .. In fact thank u for writig the ff and make us read such interesting ffs.. Waiting for ur next update
Ok dear,by the way,if u don’t mind,where are u from n what are u doing?reveal only i f u don’t mind,ff was just an attempt ,this second one only for the reader friends who commented under last episode of my first ff.next one,have to type dear .
Nice….update dear…..awesome twist….finally swasan together….i am having my exms….but still waiting for ur next update….
Oh,thank u dear,study well,next update will be in the evening or tomorrow morning,have to plan it, glad that u liked it.Which course n where are u from..?
It’s just amazing
Thanks yaar,new name,glad that u liked it.
One more thing sorry to call u vini because I guess u are my vini di.. So sorry I didnt knew
No probs dear,u may call anything,but.most of u all are a lot younger to me,I know.
Ohhoo vinni di di mai bilkul bhi bura nahi manungi apki preshn se ki ham kaha se hai …kyu ki ek na ek time pe maine bhi aapse yahi prashn puchi thi season 1 me yaad he kya…any ways I am frm hyderabad…nd I am student studying in inter 2nd year I mean 12th class
Ok dear,I remember ur name n emblem but question u had asked,ah?it was under 30th episode or so,shall check it,ok dear,all the best for your studies..so.feeling like another one s getting added to our small army.Keep in touch dear,and,all the best for your studies.
Now vini di of u don’t mind will u read 29 th episode par meri comment its at last its not dat imp but I want u to read it…
I will read it dear,asap ..n will respond,ok.
Hey vaishnavi nice name yaar..read ur comment on previous episode, happy to know that u want to join with us..welcome Dr..actually i rarely put comments on d chat..these guy’s mickey, joya ,shradha, niti, vinitha, vini are active members..
Well am from kochi Kerala, working here in IT firm
M fine niti…
Di aaap v naa?..yes aaj jldi uthgi…par avi tk ek kam krna bki h?..n wo me bilkul nhi bataongi….??…chalooo bata hi dti hu…pta h yaha pe bht cold h…nahane ka mn hee nhi h???..parkya karu??…mumma gli de rhi h…soooo
O ya n thodi c hair ki care kr rhi hu,u knw na????…
Niti pta h me v 2mhre jaisa hu thodi thodi
..me v sbko apna real fce nhi dkhati jb tak mujhe yeh na lge ki wo mere jaisa he pgl h
Shraddha beti kaha ho
Haha,Mickey, I guessed it right,wen I read first line itself ,understood u r going to say u haven’t taken bath,bt no probs,holiday,cold,baba can’t be blamed,ha,hair,yea,yea,remember, abt hair cut u had mentioned,no?
Vaishnavi se yaad aaya di
..aap plz epi 28 v chck kijiye ekbaar…waha pe Kriya ne kuch pucha tha aapse..chhoti c bt pr phir v plz chck na my swt jiji
Mickey Darling..how u..dr?
Teddy bear laya he thumare liyee…..just like u cute, and bubbly..
?????
Ok my darling,I will check it…
Toh rupsikha dii I am allowed to jion ur army…waise mai aapko didi bulasakthi hu kya kyu ki mujeh lagtah hai ki aap mujse badi hai
Hai dear.so welcome,naughtiness is going to increase…
Di….i liked it….
Thank u dr,hope u will keep reading.
Hooo niti mujhe shayari nhi aati yaarr..2m,joya di,shrddha kitne acche lkhete ho na…vry nice ha:)mujhe poem lkhna v nhi aati…bt ha kvi kvi stry lkh deti hu?
awsome.. nice twist.. mukesh united swasan… but i dont want swara to hate sanskar.. everyone misunderstood sanskar but not swara pls yar… swara cried alot for not getting her love now pls unite them..
Thank u for the comment,glad that u liked it,but let’s c dear,some misunderstanding is required, sorry if I will disappoint u totally,bt they will be united dear.
It was sooooooo good please no haterade between swasan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thank u for the comment dear,let’s c hatred ,mu n all,even I have to plan..hope u will keep reading.
hii vini Di….i hv first time commented on ur epistles 28..last few days i was bit bezy..today when i got chance to read ff.i have first read your last n this epi..epi 29 was also very very heart touching.poor sanky can’t express his love. today epi..bought mixed feeling in my heart. feeling of happiness that our swasan is together.but the way they get together was very painful.awesome twist.i like it very much.plz vini Di as a reader i want to request you plz don’t make swara to misunderstand sanskar.after all its all about 12 years friendship n love.waiting for your next epi.plz update soon.i just loved it
Hi dear,Mickey (Rupsikha) had mentioned above to read ur comment under 28th episode,just nw I read that,welcome dear to our army,then in that second msg there u had mentioned in two lines the essence I of this ff..thank u dear,glad to know that u got connected with it,and also very happy to read your comments,if u don mind,pls do mention,from where u r n wat u r doing…
vini Di i m from Surat..(gujarat)
right now i am perusing my b.com…after that i am planning to do llb…
Ok dear,all the best for your studies,Niti is also from Gujarat…
thank you so much rupshikha,joya,shraddha,Niti. you all have given positive response to me.i am glad if i will be able to part of your group.
Ohh god..joya.Niti.shraddha.rupshikha.vinita you all are very naughty.sachi muchi k dramebazz. when i read all your comments i was laughing like hell..ha ha.ha..my mom asked me twice.if i m ok or not. i tried to give ranking to all on ur naughtyNess but then i given up bz ranking can’t possible. u all r hell naughty. vini di pointed it correctly agar app 5 mil jao eke jagah pe to pata nahi kya hoga..
ha ha. Niti you want to faint in sanskar’s arm..
joya apne kya khubsurat likha hai.sach me padhke maze a gaya.shraddha,Niti,rupshikha you also tried very well.ap sab k comment padhk sach me bada maza ata hai.
happy republic day to all
U should be writer of swaragini u are awsm writer
Dear,if Swaragini writers hears this,they r gonna hit me,just kidding,thank u for the comment dear…
hiii vaishnavi….i also went n read your comment on last epi..dear ye bhi koi puchneki bat hai..each n every person r welcomed in our vini Di’ small army..m i right girls..??! to tumhara vini Di ki is ff pathshala me swagat hai..all the best for your studies dear..
sach me we all r sharing very beautiful bonding..just every one mast raho bindast raho khush raho..sab ko pareshn karte raho..apna n apni family ka nam roshn karte raho..n the most important thing dhyan se sunna….muje yad karte raho….bubye
U na Niti,impossible,yaar,I had expected this madness in Mickey n Shraddha,Joya ,Vinita n Sethooty,I thought will be a lil calm ,u I thot will be even more more silent ,but now u guys,all r equally violent n mad ,haha but m enjoying ur masti…
Nitiiii myyyy naughty cuteee c beeeeheeeennnaaaa????? sach me yr tujhe bht misss kya 2mhre baate sun kr???my cuteee nitu??
N ya niti u r ryt…hmre grp me sb aa skti h yaarr…wlcme vaishnavi..
Hei Kriya 1nce again wlcm yrrrr??…oh toh 2m bg thi ryt…tabhi me sochu pata nhi Yeh Kriya kaha gayab ho gayi…m sooo hppyy 2 c u dr???…
happy republic day !! vande mataram!!
meri pagli joya di!!
aap ho bari suhani aur pyaari
aapki kavita par kar
shabd ki kami cha gaya mere dimaag par
aap likhte ho lajawab
jisko parke sab bolte hai wah bhai !kya baat baat
isko parkar koi mat khichna mera kaan
sach mai joya di aap ne dil chu liya
mai shayaar to nehi magar joya di jabse yeh para
shaayari aa gayi
pls koi chappal mat marna !!
niti di and shraddha di u were superb!!
Ah,now u too,u guys ,all pen down something, and it is superb ya,hug to u too,and republic day wishes also..ur guys r funny n I enjoy reading ur chats…
Nice twist vini..it they happily married then may be there is no more story..hope raglak have trust on himand because of this hus family not suffer and last one swaras father is genuine concern for swara and he is not a like tv serials type who change face
One more thing pls don’t create too much understanding b/w swasan..and also ragluk have trust on sanskaar plssss
U have understood the crux n I think my situation too,daily soap writers can add twists n turns to any extent, since m not reading other ffs,dont know how those r proceeding,may be guys r extremely talented n so they might not be having an issue ,I think ,but my case,Im too lazy to add twists ,this one also,I am not satisfied.Thanks to u guys for supporting this ff,still.