Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2 ) episode 31,I know I have messed up the story,just feel free to stop reading and commenting if you all don’t like this and up coming episodes.
Scene 1:
Swara wakes up in a room,she realises that she is in bed,she quickly gets up,she finds a neatly arranged room,she rushes near to the window,moves the curatins and looks outside,rays of the rising sun falls on her,she finds a beautiful lawn with two white benches opposite to and at equal distance from each other,a lake is there at the boundary of the compound on one side,she understands that it is like a cottage,suddenly she remembers the previous evening ,she holds her head,she rushes out of the room,in the corridor she sees herself in a big mirror,she goes and stands in front of it,she touches her mangalsutra and sindoor,she is sad and disturbed,she goes in search of Sanskaar.
She sees him supporting his head with his hand and asleep on a chair,she gets angry seeing him,but composes herself and goes near him,she calls his name,he wakes up and quickly gets up and is about to ask something to her,he hides the concern on his face and shows a rude face,Swara goes near him and says, “Sanskaar,what have you done?who were those people?you did this for dad’s money?I know you,you cant do this,there is some other reason,who asked you to do it,those people wearing masks and holding guns,who are they,they put you under pressure to do it?did they cause any harm to your family and you had to do this?please say something Sanskaar,why are you silent?have not seen you like this,I am feeling scared to look at you,feels like I am standing in front of a stranger,not my friend”
Sanskaar goes near her and tells her,”you will be having many questions in your mind,I don’t find any need to answer it,accept the fact that you are now married to me and will have to live this life till I say,don’t worry,I am not going to touch you even,because I don’t love you,but our gang needs your dad’s money as you said,you are the clear route to that green pasture,he will do anything for your safety,so you’re going to be here with me,till we achieve what we want”,Swara stares at him in shock,she goes near him and holds his hand and tells him, “No,Sanskaar,you are not saying this,I am very sure,but tell me the truth,I beg you,many lives are going to be affected,I will forgive you for what you did with me,but this is going to affect your family,my family,my dad,I had promised him that I wont let him down,what would be his situation,there it is time for the wedding,one night they would have ran around searching for me,seeing me missing,what is all this?please Sanskaar,before I start hating you to the core,tell me,you don’t love me,I know that,wouldn’t have believed if I haven’t seen Sanju,but now,you left your Sanju and did this,I know there is some reason behind it,give me the answer,we have a chance to set things right before it is too late,I will walk away from your life,dad’s money,I don’t know,but if you have a genuine reason and need,I will talk to him,now,I am trying my maximum not to hate you,please,your best friend Swara is asking you,say something Sanskaar”,she shouts…
Sanskaar was standing there like a statue,listening to all what Swara said,he pushes her hand away and says, “you wont be able to solve anything,unless you are under our custody,our plans wont be executed,yes,you knew a Sanskaar who was your friend,but that person is dead,long back,circumstances killed him,these people helped me when I needed money,told mom,recent one is loan,no,source was illegal,I also want to live,how long can I spent my life paying off debts ,so chose this way,now,this is the right way for me,so don’t ask too much,keep your mouth shut,if I can do this with you,you can imagine what all I can do with your family”,Swara stares at him in shock,tears roll down,she tells him, “are you the person who I thought I understood everything about?are you the Sanskkar who I have loved more than my life?no Sanskaar,you cant be like this,please,I beg you ,don’t pretend to be cruel,you cant do this to your loved ones,you wont harm any one.Sanskaar quickly turns ,goes near her,holds her shoulder forcefully and fumes in anger, “Why cant you understand,why are you going on saying the same thing?
your friend Sanskaar is dead,doesn’t exist in me any more,don’t try to find answers,wont be good for your loved ones,I had warned your dad,multiple times,yesterday also,he didn’t listen,now let him bear the insult,who cares?one evening has changed your destiny,accept it and lie down in a corner,don’t come in my way,by this time ,your family would have known everything,our wedding photos would have reached the venue,your dad deserves this and more,”Swara pushes him away and says, “for some money,you forgot everything?family,friendship,everything?no,I wont believe you,all these days,u were acting?,no,no”,Sanskar shouts,
“you will be forced to believe that,before I do that,accept all this and stay away from me,strangers under the same roof,until my motives are fulfilled”,Swara says, “no,Sanskaar,you are scared,you wont be able to pretend anything if you stay near me,so you are pushing me away ,I will find out what is bothering you,don’t think I will be silent and allow you to continue all this ,no,and maximum,what will you do,kill me?you have already done that multiple times,in last few weeks,what more than this,I wont let our loved ones suffer because of your madness,friends we were, no? for 12 years,it is over,until and unless I find the reason behind this,no more friendship,strangers as you said,but don’t think you can push me away and do what you want,I will find out everything and if you are really bad,then ,I wont leave you for what you did to my family,and if you are not bad,then,be ready to spend your life with Sanju”
Sanskaar comes near her and pins her to the wall,holds her neck in anger and says, “shut your mouth Swara,if I hear one more word,he takes out gun from his pocket and points it at her forehead,Swara is shocked,she starts trembling,stares into his eyes,she sees the rage in it,looks into his eyes in fear…
Scene 2:
Sanskaar is standing under the shower,he hits his fist multiple times on the wall,he tells to himself, “God,what is happening in my life?I kept her away not to hurt her,but with these hands I am giving her pain,mentally,physically,emotionally,I am killing my Swara,every minute,where is all this leading us?many lives are involved,many relaionships,I will go mad if this continues,I am telling her whatever that is coming to my mind,how long can I defend all this,when will Mukesh uncle sort out everything?he has ordered to keep Swara here at any cost,Swara,how is she going to react again,I don’t know how to deal with her,I cant see her in pain,please,lead me out of this,he closes his eyes,stands there,getting drenched……….
Scene 3:
Sanskaar goes near Swara after some time,she is sitting on the floor,with knees bend close to her body and arms tightly held on it,she is crying her heart out,Sanskaar comes near her,sits down and says, “don’t think you can protest and go from here,I am going out,doors,windows are all locked,my man is there at the gate, nobody is there around to hear even if you shout,it is a lake side cottage,so,take bath if you want to and food is served at the dining table,when I come back,breakfast should be completed,fainted yesterday,took blood sample,doctor has told your Hb count is low,tablets are there on the table itself,take it,if you don’t,impact wont be here,it will be there,at your place,this is the last warning.Swara doesn’t look at him,she sits in the same position,he goes from there,from the door,just turns and looks at her and walks away,while walking through the corridor,his eyes are filled ,he shakes his head in anger and walks away…
124 Comments
Love ur ff….try to update early plz…
Thanks yaar, yea,will try to …
Thanks yaar,next one ,tomorrow.
Really nice…please update next part soon….
Thanks yaar,next one,tomorrow.
Pls change the situation.. Let swara comes to know about.. The truth..
This track requires this,I know it is tuf but as I said intention is not a feel good ff,sorry,proceeding as planned, thank u for the comment, I think ur first one.
Superb …first class dr ..loved it …update fast. .come on
U liked it,good to know that a few are liking this track,thanks yaar,next one, tomorrow.
Ohhhh kya ho gaya yey di??…awwwwww sooo sad!!!…but nice ha?
I know it is tuf n cruel, but hope u will understand dear,all zz well means ,end of ff.
Awesome di..I replied to ur ques in last epi..do check it..
Thank u dear,I saw it and I have replied.Good to hear from u,may u r the youngest, somebody else was also there, studying in 8th but forgot the name.
di………..
i told u dt there r many ques in my mind related to twist…….
unme se ek baat thi swara ki condition….evrey word is showing ur work on swara and sanskar’s condition…..
very good work di………………….
mirror k samne khade rehkar sindur aur mangalsutr ko check karna,sanskar ka pretend karna,swara k ques k upar ques,pehle se hi halat ka mara sanskar aur upar se swara ke sawal,unki baate,uski baton se najar aata bharosa,families ki condition,dad se kiya vaada,bathroom me apna frustration nikalne wala sanskar,swara ko yeh dikhna i dnt care for u par rudeness ka mask pehan ke uski care karna,sanskar ka swara ka dard mehsoos karna aur swara ka sanskar ki baton pe yakin na karke sach find out karne wali baat……….last lines swara ka sanskar ki aur na dekhna,corridor se jate wakt sanskar ki aankhon ka bhar aana sanskar ka gusse me sir hilana aur jana……….very nice……….. kal jo bate humne kahi thi unhe apne justify karne ki koshish kar ki hai…….
nice episode……….
I was waiting for u Niti n Shraddha’s analysis. What I wanted to convey,it is conveyed, I feel so,n m.happy,I don’t know abt upcoming episodes, forgive me if I totally disappoint u all with unconvincing episodes, thank u for analysing dear,I know it is an average episode,but what I tried to say,u guys got it,m.happy.
Nice
Thank u dear,glad to know u liked.
awww soooo sad..poor swara…sankys pain killed me.. imagining t scenes makes me to cry…dii can’t. able to see both of thm lik tis BT anyways luvd ur ff a lot
Thank u for the comment n for liking my ff,yes dear,I know, it is not pleasing to the readers,sorry.
You are a fantastic writer Vini … I am speechless. .out of words for an out of the box story
Wen somebody calls me writer,honestly,I feel ashamed dear,but,thank u for the comment, if u liked this story,m happy .
Oh God….
Finally dii u updated…
Awesome emotions…
Sanky and swara’s conversation was just simply superb…
Loved it…
Try to bring some ideas in your empty brain ( as u always say my brain is empty now) as soon as possible and update next part…
Love u…????????
Seriously dear,after each episode I sit n wonder how I wrote it,more than that what to type in the next, brain is not just empty,totally acid washed ,u know,hate,love and two more words is the so called one line that I often say,hope ,something will come with the flow when I sit to type.thank u for the comment dear,glad to know that u liked it.
Nice episode .Hamare Mr. Perfectionist ko kisi ki nazar lag gayi. U r too good at describing situations and di who is your favourite actor???I dont understand southindian laguages but have seen hindi dubbed south indian movies.i know some of the south indian actor and i really like Mahesh Babu.Most amazing part is u r well versed with hindi.Have u ever been to Uttar Pradesh?????
Thank u dear for the comment,yes Mr.Perfect is being tortured ,actually,by me,I haven’t been to U.P dear.But we have plans to visit a few places in the North,according to our leave n all that,relatives and friends are there in a few places, actually ,I understand Hindi dear but not well versed, south mainly five states,kerala,Karnataka,Tamil Nadu,Andhra,Telangana..I watch mal,Tamil English n some Telugu movies,in malayalam I like Suresh Gopi,Mammooty, Mohanlal ,then among youngsters Mammooty sirs son Dulquer,Fahadh Fazil etc..malayalam film industry is small compared to other south Indian states,but movies were more realistic,especially, in late 80’s n 90’s,but now trend is changing.
poor swara… di pls end this plot soon.. both r equally hurt… i cant see them like this..
Haha,dear if I end this and all zz well means ff will end in the next episode,cos m a bad and equally lazy writer,I won’t be able to pull the story forward,so.continuing with this,sorry if I hurt u,sorry,thank u for the comment.
di…….
u wanna know na from where i got it (polichu)…………….
aap kaise bhool sakti hai itni badi baat ko…..jayiye naraj hai hum aapse…….aap bhool gayi k i m talented girl…………… kaise di kaise kar sakti hai aap humre saath aise………(hehehehehehehehe………sorry just kidding ha……..)
actually di not fair ha……aap chor se puchh rahi hai ki chori kaha ki hai…………
chalo bata dete hai…..actually jis episode pe word humne use kiya wahi pad rahe the aur jab scroll kiya to sidha niche aaye humri phone ke blessing ki wajah se…..upar aa rahe the tab recent comment section me ek comment dekh kar ruk gaye…..waha kisi comment thi,” polichu…..means superb….i m from kerala..”
so waha humne yeh wor mila…..waise bhi apki tarif me dictionary chhan marne k bajay humne wo word use kar liya…….
and rups yr aisa nahi karte……di ko complain mat kar na………..humne socha pehle wo watch hum use kar k dekh lenge phir tumhe batayenge……….
suna na rups tumne khataron k khiladi k promos dekhe honge na….usme arjoon kapoor kehta hai ki jo sher nahi darte wo chuhonse darte hai….sahi hai….hum maut se nahi darte par injection se darte hau meri amma…..hehehehehehehe……aur tum apni joya di ko blackmail karogi…..?????
not fair hum tumse bhi naraj hai…..jao…baat nahi karenge hum ab………hehe
Haha.my dear,u na?actually polikkuka ,polichu etc in.malayalam means demolish,but these words we use out of excitement as synonym of superb, there is yet another word called adipoli in malayalam,that is the widely used synonym of superb but that word as such has no meaning,for fast numbers we say adipoli paattu where paattu means song,then if some performance was really good we say,adipoliyarnnu..means it was superb,same way now this polichu is.used frequently nowadays.was very happy wen I saw u using it,I thot u had some malayali friend from whom u learned it,u noticed it in comment means,ha,superb observation dr,sorry dear,for forgetting that u r so talented,very sorry,won’t repeat it ok,jokes apart,u r talented my dear,and yea,while responding to comments in a.hurry,my phone also blessed me many times today,haha,m gonna fill some syringes,I
Think I will need it very soon,cane and all is old fashion na, if u guys really had such a watch, people around wud have had a very nice time,such innocent kids na.
how many words u mentioned in comment………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i will use dt words definitely…………….
ur phone also blessed u…..heheheheheeh……..
yr…….apko yaad aa gaya…..kal aap hum talented hai yeh bhool gayi….aage kahi humne bhool gayi to…….????
bardasht nahi kar payenge yeh hum……….
syringes???????
no….no….no……humne abhi kan band kar liye hai……heheheheh
Really nice di….
Thanks dear.U liked it?
What is the logic behind sanskar to hide from swara really it does not make any sense… Just I told my opinion as sincere reader I can’t bear this,its looks like the swaragini CVs..
Your first comment under my ff, no?thanks yr,I understood your point, well logic,if u were reading all the previous episodes then I think it has all the answers from the way Sanskar’s and other characters were sketched,and from some regular comments from regular readers I have understood that what I have tried to convey has been conveyed,so,somewhere ,I think,u haven’t got the crux of previous and this episode in the sense I wish readers got it .Swaragini Cvs haha,that much twists and turns won’t be here in this ff for sure, by march the serial will complete a year and still swasan is apart ,so,that much,I won’t test my readers’ patience, as I said before,there are limitations in pulling this track ahead n it is not a feel good ff,readers have absolute freedom to discontinue reading if this is sheer waste of time,Im sorry if I sound arrogant but this ff is a mix of emotions and track will be slow,cos this is just an attempt,may fail miserably, but is ok,cos this ff is not for the majority,it is for a small lot who have been there from day one..I understand ur feelings seeing swasan apart here also,if u go thru my reply to cments below esp the one to Kriya u may get an answer,don’t know if it will be convincing to u.
its so sad thank god aab bhi swara ko kahi na kahi yakhin hai ki sanky galath nahi hai……nd vini tumne pechle episode me meri comment ko rply kiya ki ur going to stop in 10 episodes is it true…???
No yaar,how many more episodes not sure,what i meant is without some twists, misunderstanding n all,since I am not a writer, it is not easy to carry ff forward.So,if everything is set right in next ,there won’t be much scope in this ff,m not planning to write about every single characters and generation leap and all that,it is just a peripheral narration about a few incidents in the lives of our leads.
Why do u do this ya Vini di? How much pain u wanna give them ………n us too….
Sorry BTW I saw ur comments today shey I missed chatting ? never mind?
Swara oh poor swara …..
That moment wen she checks herself in mirror God if it had happened before she would ve been the happiest but not in this context rite? Wat she must be going through….. N den sanskaar s concern but suddenly realizing dat he his position n pretends? didiwell done!
didi 1 thing I really liked is that u din show swara reluctantly agreed or took sm time n accepted the way u showed that she’s just not ready to accept him like this n has such STRONG faith on him not only shows their love but most importantly their 12 years long loyal friendship??
Amazing the way she was sticking to point that no ur pretending It made me happpyyyy
But sanky my God Gun? gosh poor fellow so much he has suffered yet more ??? Noooo
Den shower scene frustrated he is? den again composes himself n starts showing his acting skills?? that rudeness my God must agree he’s doing pretty good job (ur doing for the fact)
I loved this journey from
“Stern stubborn swara n soft friendly Perfect sanky to
Loving friendly obedient (towards mukesh is appreciatable) Swara n Rude selfish Furious sanky(tough he’s not yet its part of journey tough)
Good job! N regarding ur previous comments as to what I expected I’ll reply here itself
Dear,I am happy that a few of you got what I tried to convey,thank u for this perfect analysis as always,quite indigestible this story line is for many, even to me,but taking this as a challenge ,may fail miserably,but no probs,can so something out of comfort zone,no?first ff i had writtwn as a feel good one,this I want it to be a mixture of emotions,if I will make everything right in the next episode and wind up the ff,then I will u and our small army,but as I have said before this ff is not for the majority..
No di may be sm are finding it hard to accept but as a general reader POV who has followed u from beginning I thing u did justice with each character n the track …… So no issues no demands just go with the flow as I always say?
So good
Thanks dear.many won’t be liking it,but is ok,hope u liked,thank u for the comment.
So sad he loves her so much but can not tell her…really superb….keep it up
Yes dear,I have created situation that way,cos after love confession there won’t be many episodes,don’t know if I will disappoint u all totally,thank u for the comment.
Hi..vini….this much hatred.. he injected to swara..ohh no .she already hurt a lot and our sanky too..I know he is helpless , BT he can tell d truth na..,nice episode yaar…
Dear,underneath to Kriya’s comment I have explained my point of view briefly, this is not a feel good ff,no?I know dea, but m going ahead as planned,I mean that stupid one line I have planned,not sure if u all will be totally disappointed.
No yaar, never ever say like dat, u know am an ordinary reader, I can’t analysis anything..may be I always deeply involved in story , in just typed wat came into my mind after reading..
As a writer u have full freedom, I want to go wid ur flow, I just loved watever u portray , it absolutely fit for d track.
Ys he is in pressure, Mukesh situation s , sanky already rejected her love, lied about sanju, so he can’t convince his love to swara, also he want to go away from her..u already hint many things, and swara is not ready to belive.
him.
omg vini Di.kya khatarnk epi tha.beautifully described.uff.swara’s pain.i loved it when she refuse to believe him.poor sanskar.no one is suffering only n only sanskar is suffering here.ohh god his role is very difficult here. one question vini Di, y sanskar is portraying himself as criminal ?? can’t he tell swara that he realise his love for her n can’t live without her or May be for any other reason he took this step..?
Haha ,y Sanskar is doing that,cos he is too immature to handle it he is suffering cos of one promise made to Mukesh,he doesn’t know how to deal with all this,Swara won’t accept him,cos she knows abt Sanju,she will go away,Akshay’s dad may put pressure on Mukesh again ,Mukeah doesn’t want his family to know his past, there he is in dilemma where Sumi and Swara will accept him knowing his bad side,human minds are complicated, some things may require only a conversation to get sorted out but people will be prejudiced and make it even more complicated.
Sorry vini Di i hv lied to you that i am from Surat gujarat..actually i al from ahmedabad gujarat only…i was one year junior of niyati during school time..as everyone in school know about naughty..if i would say shaitan niyati..as she was famous in school for being ranker n naughtyest student of school..we become very good friend..when she told about you all i thought to do something naughty with her just like she does with us..so i don’t reviled my identity..sorry for that..ya i am perusing my bcom n planning to do llb in future..thanks for your wishes..
It is ok dear,I enjoyed it,though I knew Niti was genuine,for a moment i thought of she n Kriya are the same or ,but next moment I felt,no ,Niti wont play a prank on us with a second account,sorry Niti for doubting u,but wen I read msg obce again,I fely it is u,have replied to your comments below,ok ,so regarding details,eductaional details u mentioned are the same,Niyati was this naughty,hmm,yea ,rank holder n multi talented she is,I have realised it in this short time,keep in touch dear,expecting more pranks from u all…
thanks vini Di..Kriya..tu meri tarif kar rahi hai ki meri pol khol rahi hai sab k samne..ab na put finger on your mouth..uumm.. called me devil..how cn u..!!?
vini Di..joya..shraddha..sethooty..vinita..rups…app log hi bataoo kya me devil lagti hu meri bato se…hayee Rama…meri best friend ne hi muje kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi chhoda..
abb app log hi batao..jo nanhi hi si Jan itni innocence ho ki use NAUGHTY ka meaning bhi na pata ho vo bhala devil kese ho sakti hai..?!! mene kaha tha na dosto Ghor Kalyug..!!
Superb
And I am from Ranchi
Ok yaar,I have always seen ur name and comment,though a word or two,u have always been there,I appreciate it,thank u so much,happy to hear from you.tc.
hello everyone..how r u all ?!
thanks rupshikha, vinita,sethooty n joya for welcoming me in ur pagal family..
hii vaishnavi,you r also new here..nice name yar.all the best for your studies.
omg..Niti r u from gujarat..wow..where r u from ?? Kem 6o ? majama..!? i think after reading this part you r going to cry. bz jaha tak mene tumhari last 2-3 epi ki comments padhi hai.you love varun very much.so while imagining today’s scenes i think you may hv cried for sure.so i am offering my hanky in advance..
shraddha.Niti where r u guys.doesn’t find your any comment today..?
ummmmmm….vini Di i will comment later..
Kriya ki bachchi….i m not going to leave you..i know its you only who posted this comment with my name…bz u only have my email id..pagal kahiki…mere nam se comment likhk usme mere hi bare me likhati hai…tuje to me..i m not gonna spare you..jangli kahiki..sab kya soch rahe honge..pagal..they don’t know about our relation..abhi to do din bhi nahi hua..n u played prank on me..pata hota to tuje is site k bare me batati hi nahi..kya badala liya yar tune..
girls..trust me its not me..its Kriya..ya she is my very good friend..i only told her about this site..and my bonding with you all..so she said she also wanna join us..n she only requested me not to tell you guys on her first comment about our friendship..agar pata hota ki ye pagal mujpe prank karne vali hai to me pehle hi app logo ko bata deti…ufff pehle to me Dar hi gayi ki mene comment kiya nahi to kaha se aya..n then uske upar usme mera hi nam mention kiya..Achcha kiya mene ajj dekh liya..varna app log soch te ki me pagal ho gayi hu…
Tabhi mai sochu niyati ki yeh logo toh apni niyati ka hai par yeh batein toh uski nahi hai?? den I was like shayad koi naya entry hai grp mai main 30 episode me chat nahi kithi toh laga phir I was like yeh bhi niti Woh bhi niti den I was like arey shayad yeh niti hai apni wali toh niyati hai …… Yaar kriya??????popat banaya tumne sabko but hum bhi dost hai janeman yeh niyati nahi hai itna toh confirm tha??? hahaha but ssly nyc prank yaar maja aaya
Niti,even I was confused reading that,saw ur name n that blue emblem,from the nature of that comment I felt it is Kriya,since from Gujarat ,she is the new one, so I commented under that to telly team to check it,oh,so u guys are friends ha,u fooled all of us,it is ok…
Hai ..niti happy to see u…were r u from?
Actually am little bit confused about u and niyati..haha both have same name
hey dear..i am Niyati only..i used Niti while commenting here..its one of my nick names.. i am from gujarat..ahmedabad..
the 1st comment is done by my idiot friend Kriya..she made prank on me by posting her comment by using my name with my email id..she is also from ahmedabad only..
I understood it should be Kriya,so I had asked telly team to check how Niti’s name n emblem came there, so,u guys are friends?
Awesome epi di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aapne toh Kamal kar Diya………..
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Regarding zodiac Sign I thought alot …….i think Ki aapka either watery sign zodiac hai or earth sign ka zodiac hai
Thank u dear,hope u liked it,sorry if it is disappointing u,zodiac sign,I know that it is Leo,cos b’day is on July 26th.
Ya..pls don’t make sanky seem like a criminal( else good going:)
Thanks yaar.Yea,little bit hatred is required for lots of love at last,Sanky of this story is helpless and confused,he can’t put any blame on Mukesh,so he is saying n doing whatever is coming to his mind…a few comments underneath made me understand that it got cconveyed in the way I wished it got.
Very nice dear.. You are amazing.. Again they both are in pain.. Hope everything sorted soon..and dear pls upload daily.. Thanks a lot.
Thanks dear,I had tol before ,no?it is not a feel good ff,still,many are supporting me,thanks,some pain ,some mixed emotions actually, and love,let’s see,even ,I wana c how many will connect with it.
nice part di …..
Thanks dear,hope u liked..
Vini Di, after reading this epi..i think our this swasan love story is gonna be very interesting…though i was not sure about my feeling but now for the first time i am liking this kind of twist..
lets start with haye vini Di jab apne mention kiya ki swara ne mirror me apna mangalsutra n sindur dekha..meri to dhadkan tezzz ho rahi thi..how she has felt at that moment..sanky and swara’s conversation took my bachi kuchi breath..i got tears in my eyes..not on swara’s condition but on my sanky’s condition..poor sweet cute little boy..his act is giving him billion Amt of pain..mera to vahi soch k ro ro k bura Hal ho raha hai..thank you soooooooooo much Di..swara trust sanky..she is not ready to believe his words..n Shona ka sanky ko kehna ki plz stop his drama before she start heating him..how he would have felt at that time..she told that she will find out reason behind his behaviour..n if he is doing it in number pressure then she will unit him with sanju..what a girl yar..! at that stage also she is thinking about sanju..sanskar ka bathroom vala scene yar..he is suffering yar..i can’t see him like this..uska kehna ki mai hi meri swara ko mentally n physically hurt kar raha hu…then uska swara ki care karna..bhale hi usne angry n cold tone me kaha ho par usne Shona ka breakfast n medicine ready rakhi…n last bahar nikl te time uska emotional ho jana…
you nailed it vini Di…now i m eagerly waiting how swara is going to find out the truth n cute fights..cute romantic moments..cute nokjok between swasan during this time…love u vini di..
I’m happy that u understood what I tried to portray ,actually, this ff m.pushing myself to add some negativity,some mixed emotions,some hatred and some untold love,I know only a minority will ,but that is enough,if only one reader is there who understands the effort in sketching these characters more than the story.I will be happy.Thank u my dear,feel free to give your feedbk.
Hi mickey , joya, shradha, Vinitha, vaishnavi..how u guy’s..? Welcome new members , …hey joya where is ur poem..?
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Hey sethoothy wassup!!! Btw sorry ha setu I still donno what u do??? better late than never so now I am?
Haha ..am a software developer here Cochin.Full name sethulakshmy.. Shradha u r a student na. .? Sorry yaar I couldn’t read ur many comments lack of time nd work schedule, may be u mensioned it before many times
Haww ur software developer which means ur working which means 1 more didi I got??? I am so sorry I called u by name many times ? shey sorry ha? lol….. Nyc u work n take time n read ffs too .? n yes I’m a 2nd yr engg student