Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2 ) episode 31,I know I have messed up the story,just feel free to stop reading and commenting if you all don’t like this and up coming episodes.
Scene 1:
Swara wakes up in a room,she realises that she is in bed,she quickly gets up,she finds a neatly arranged room,she rushes near to the window,moves the curatins and looks outside,rays of the rising sun falls on her,she finds a beautiful lawn with two white benches opposite to and at equal distance from each other,a lake is there at the boundary of the compound on one side,she understands that it is like a cottage,suddenly she remembers the previous evening ,she holds her head,she rushes out of the room,in the corridor she sees herself in a big mirror,she goes and stands in front of it,she touches her mangalsutra and sindoor,she is sad and disturbed,she goes in search of Sanskaar.
She sees him supporting his head with his hand and asleep on a chair,she gets angry seeing him,but composes herself and goes near him,she calls his name,he wakes up and quickly gets up and is about to ask something to her,he hides the concern on his face and shows a rude face,Swara goes near him and says, “Sanskaar,what have you done?who were those people?you did this for dad’s money?I know you,you cant do this,there is some other reason,who asked you to do it,those people wearing masks and holding guns,who are they,they put you under pressure to do it?did they cause any harm to your family and you had to do this?please say something Sanskaar,why are you silent?have not seen you like this,I am feeling scared to look at you,feels like I am standing in front of a stranger,not my friend”
Sanskaar goes near her and tells her,”you will be having many questions in your mind,I don’t find any need to answer it,accept the fact that you are now married to me and will have to live this life till I say,don’t worry,I am not going to touch you even,because I don’t love you,but our gang needs your dad’s money as you said,you are the clear route to that green pasture,he will do anything for your safety,so you’re going to be here with me,till we achieve what we want”,Swara stares at him in shock,she goes near him and holds his hand and tells him, “No,Sanskaar,you are not saying this,I am very sure,but tell me the truth,I beg you,many lives are going to be affected,I will forgive you for what you did with me,but this is going to affect your family,my family,my dad,I had promised him that I wont let him down,what would be his situation,there it is time for the wedding,one night they would have ran around searching for me,seeing me missing,what is all this?please Sanskaar,before I start hating you to the core,tell me,you don’t love me,I know that,wouldn’t have believed if I haven’t seen Sanju,but now,you left your Sanju and did this,I know there is some reason behind it,give me the answer,we have a chance to set things right before it is too late,I will walk away from your life,dad’s money,I don’t know,but if you have a genuine reason and need,I will talk to him,now,I am trying my maximum not to hate you,please,your best friend Swara is asking you,say something Sanskaar”,she shouts…
Sanskaar was standing there like a statue,listening to all what Swara said,he pushes her hand away and says, “you wont be able to solve anything,unless you are under our custody,our plans wont be executed,yes,you knew a Sanskaar who was your friend,but that person is dead,long back,circumstances killed him,these people helped me when I needed money,told mom,recent one is loan,no,source was illegal,I also want to live,how long can I spent my life paying off debts ,so chose this way,now,this is the right way for me,so don’t ask too much,keep your mouth shut,if I can do this with you,you can imagine what all I can do with your family”,Swara stares at him in shock,tears roll down,she tells him, “are you the person who I thought I understood everything about?are you the Sanskkar who I have loved more than my life?no Sanskaar,you cant be like this,please,I beg you ,don’t pretend to be cruel,you cant do this to your loved ones,you wont harm any one.Sanskaar quickly turns ,goes near her,holds her shoulder forcefully and fumes in anger, “Why cant you understand,why are you going on saying the same thing?
your friend Sanskaar is dead,doesn’t exist in me any more,don’t try to find answers,wont be good for your loved ones,I had warned your dad,multiple times,yesterday also,he didn’t listen,now let him bear the insult,who cares?one evening has changed your destiny,accept it and lie down in a corner,don’t come in my way,by this time ,your family would have known everything,our wedding photos would have reached the venue,your dad deserves this and more,”Swara pushes him away and says, “for some money,you forgot everything?family,friendship,everything?no,I wont believe you,all these days,u were acting?,no,no”,Sanskar shouts,
“you will be forced to believe that,before I do that,accept all this and stay away from me,strangers under the same roof,until my motives are fulfilled”,Swara says, “no,Sanskaar,you are scared,you wont be able to pretend anything if you stay near me,so you are pushing me away ,I will find out what is bothering you,don’t think I will be silent and allow you to continue all this ,no,and maximum,what will you do,kill me?you have already done that multiple times,in last few weeks,what more than this,I wont let our loved ones suffer because of your madness,friends we were, no? for 12 years,it is over,until and unless I find the reason behind this,no more friendship,strangers as you said,but don’t think you can push me away and do what you want,I will find out everything and if you are really bad,then ,I wont leave you for what you did to my family,and if you are not bad,then,be ready to spend your life with Sanju”
Sanskaar comes near her and pins her to the wall,holds her neck in anger and says, “shut your mouth Swara,if I hear one more word,he takes out gun from his pocket and points it at her forehead,Swara is shocked,she starts trembling,stares into his eyes,she sees the rage in it,looks into his eyes in fear…
Scene 2:
Sanskaar is standing under the shower,he hits his fist multiple times on the wall,he tells to himself, “God,what is happening in my life?I kept her away not to hurt her,but with these hands I am giving her pain,mentally,physically,emotionally,I am killing my Swara,every minute,where is all this leading us?many lives are involved,many relaionships,I will go mad if this continues,I am telling her whatever that is coming to my mind,how long can I defend all this,when will Mukesh uncle sort out everything?he has ordered to keep Swara here at any cost,Swara,how is she going to react again,I don’t know how to deal with her,I cant see her in pain,please,lead me out of this,he closes his eyes,stands there,getting drenched……….
Scene 3:
Sanskaar goes near Swara after some time,she is sitting on the floor,with knees bend close to her body and arms tightly held on it,she is crying her heart out,Sanskaar comes near her,sits down and says, “don’t think you can protest and go from here,I am going out,doors,windows are all locked,my man is there at the gate, nobody is there around to hear even if you shout,it is a lake side cottage,so,take bath if you want to and food is served at the dining table,when I come back,breakfast should be completed,fainted yesterday,took blood sample,doctor has told your Hb count is low,tablets are there on the table itself,take it,if you don’t,impact wont be here,it will be there,at your place,this is the last warning.Swara doesn’t look at him,she sits in the same position,he goes from there,from the door,just turns and looks at her and walks away,while walking through the corridor,his eyes are filled ,he shakes his head in anger and walks away…
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Wrong guess di!!!!!it’s not literature ……. Keep thinking ?………itna bol sakti Hu Ki yeh ek wise subject hai Ki sunte hi aap je hosh ur jaige……. Jab choti thi people used to ask me which subject I liked the most, after getting my reply they would simply look at me with protruding eyes ? it seemed that the person will faint just now and they used to ask me are u serious or you really like this subject????aiise bahut sare incidents hai….
Soch te rahiye di…. Put your thinking caps on…….
Thank god ?!!!! Vaishu tum mujshe chhoti Ho… Atlast muhe koi Vinita di bolega I am feeling so happy ?!!!!!
Even i agree with niti di and rupsikha Ki jab tak Mai sure nehi Ho jati Hu Ki samne wale person pagal hsi Mai bhi apna asli rup nehi dikhati Hu. Only my family knows that I am an entirely crack person
now u all know that I am pagal!!!!
U had told B.A na dear, subject u haven’t told,check swasan fan fiction episode 36 ,u had told only B.AA.,I think.Literature was Rupsikha’s subject ,no?now please tell me the subject,did put 7 hats but quite sure,u had not told the subject.
It’s not wise Subject it is aisa subject
again an awesome part… so nice…
Happy if u liked it,thank u for the comment dear.
Yar that’s not fair..niyati tune mere pure prank ka satyanash kar diya…
Okk vini Di n everyone..my name is kriyanshi urff Kriya…i am very good friend of Niyati urff Niti…she told me that her data pack has finished n will recharge tomorrow only ..n as i know she will be besy tomorrow for her office n classes she will not check this site till tomorrow night so i decided to made prank on her..
So i wrote that comment in which iabout thank you all for welcoming me in your family n then mentioned about her like where is she from n all that ..so u guys can get confused why she is mentioning about herself in her comment..n kal jab vo site khole to use Jordan ka jataka mile…
But all ruin bz she check this site today only before you all react…she again win in pranks..i don’t know y she always made perfect prank on other but we never be able to trap her in our prank..any ways sorry for all this..i don’t know what she is going to do with me now..god plz save me from this devil niyati…i am sorry niyu baby for this..plz don’t beat me..
Haha,very nice,perfect friends ,I enjoyed reading ur msgs,for a second I thought Niti was playing prank on us by creating a fake account Kriya,sorry,Niti,for misunderstanding u,by the way nice name dear,no need of a sorry to us,may be u will need some protection shield tomorrow,pranksters…. Good to hear from u dear.
its ok vini Di…any body can have doubted me due to Kriya’s comment…she has already said me sorry for many time by way of msg & wts app..u forgive you for this.. but kriyu darling you better take care of yourself..bz i m planning punishment fir you in the niyati style..
Vini Di…me bhale hi kitni shaitani kar lu..paglo vali bate kar lu..but i will not do such kind of prank like using different name n fake account…bz for me my bonding with you all is very important..jab me ye expect karti hu ki app log Jo thoughts share karte ho n personality portray kar rahe ho vo genuine hai..then i can very well understand ki app log bhi mujse vahi expect karoge..so i won’t let your trust break on me by playing such prank…i don’t know how long its gonna be but our friendship is imp for me..
plz guys don’t misunderstand my Kriya darling also..as she just try to do prank on me..she is very nice girl..this prank is nothing in comparison to the pranks i have played with her but i reacted this way bz i don’t wanna loose my friendship with you guys so soon..
Hei,Niti dear,doubt was for just a moment, then I thought problm is with the site n put a comment to telly team under that ,yea,I know you dear,and I have complete trust on u dear,did my comment hurt u at least for a moment,then,sorry dear..and,we won’t misunderstand Kriya also,haha,but waiting to know what that Niyati style punishment would be,yes dear,we may not see each other at all,bt ,thanks to Saba,saw a few in her group fiction lover,but will never forget meeting u guys thru this telly site…
hi kriya….,,,,
tumhare prank ka satyanash ho gaya……….
are re re……..
dear prank kiya tumne par pata hai perfect q nahi huaa…….bcoz u mentioned niti’s name in dt comment…….u said thank you for welcoming me in dis family….yeh keh kar tum fas gayi yrrrr……..bcoz humne kabhi niti ka welcome kiya hi nahi…..humri bate exact ek mahine pehle shuru huyi and then hum family ban gaye and after 1 month niti is saying thanks????????????? yr kuch weird nahi h??????
bdw tumhe laga niti kal recharg karegi…….is me tumhara fault nahi hai.yeh vini di aur hum sabbka fault hai unka update aur ekdusri k comments padhe bina hum logon ka khana hajam nahi hota yr………..
sorry yr……
bdw kem chho….maja na………..bus itni hi gujrati aati hai humne….kafi had tak samj lete hai lekin bolni nahi aati….kem chhi…maja ma and mharo mathi ghane dukhe che…….in tin lines k alawa kuch bolna nahi aata……………………..
bdw tum thik hona…???
agar niti ne tumhe pareshan kiya na to vini di complain kar dena jaise rups ne ki hai humari………..heheheehehe
What happened to Sanskar why don’t he express his love for Swara.
Situation has been created that way,Mukesh character has ordered him,requested him,to marry and keep Swara safely,if he tells her the truth in this story,Story will end in a love confession ,there Sanju plot also may come in between if u keep reading u may get ur answers,if u have read immediately previous one u may get a clear view, then Sanskar’s character has been etched in such a way only..
hello gud vali morning to all my dramebazzo..
hey shraddha thank u so much darling…tune pehchan liya ki vo me nahi hu…mera dil garden garden ho gaya yar…meri eyes se ganga jamna beh rahi hai abhi…tune sabit kar diya…that hum bato se hi pehchan sakte hai humare nautanki gang ko…aakhir 30 epi ki friendship ka saval tha…love you my cutiee piece
ohh..thank you vini Di apne telly update valo ko msg kiya…mera man praphoolit ho gaya…
hey joya…abb maf bhi kar de humari choti si rupshikha ko…itna kya naraz hona…vaise vo watch mere pass bhi hai…but kya kare ye dil a nadan use karna hi nahi chahta jab tak Di ka ff Chal raha hai..
joya..shraddha..vinita..sethooty..rups..vaishnavi..Kriyu..hv a nice n rocking day to all of you..you all have to miss me ha…n i will…umm..actually…kaise batau..pata nahi wt u all will think but…vo…hmm…i will also miss u dramebazzo..ha ha..ha
Vini Di it was awesome…. Uhh precisely described their emotions…I was stunned for a while that how did you blended these emotioms so perfectly??…. Sanskaar care!!…swara strong belief!!… Sanky rudeness was like wow… I srsly like bold and strong sanky than which is in the serial!!!….just waiting for their union.. Hoping mukesh will soon clarify everything. Loved it…uhh rocked Di.
vini Di…the story is going very good…i know some of readers are getting disappointed by this track….i also was not sure after reading epi 30 that in which way story will take turn..but after reading this epi ..all my doubt got cleared…some lines which hv been used by you to express sanky n Shona’s feeling give me crux of the story…now i am sure our story is going to be very interesting….bhale hi app swasan ko fight karvao but i think i got some idea about your story track….ha mere sanky ki condition dekhk rona ata hai but its ok i will use hanky while reading this..n 2nd most imp thing is that i don’t want this story to end so soon…just in love with this ff..
n one more thing it is not similar to story made by swaragini CV.. Di is far better than them…she has proved already about that…n i am sure she will prove in future also…
i want to request all the readers that this story is gonna be the one of the bestest story of swasan..so stay tune to know what will happen in our swasan’s life n how they will unit..what impact it will create in raglakswasan’s friendship..n their family…i m sure non of you will get disappointed after reading whole story…
hey Di…hv a bindast day ahead…tc..
i completely agree wid u niti…….
bas ek baat hai…..
di ko khud ko prove karne ki jaroorat bhi nahi hai………balki readers ko prove karna hoga ki woh yeh story samj sake utne mature hai wo…qki di ki story is d best story……
I agree too guys n ssly Jo di ko kuch bhi justify karne ki zaroota nahi hai di chill …….
n i donno why ppl why are u feeling dat sanskaar shud tell swra truth see
Point no 1) he can’t tell her truth because he’s scared she will probably start hating her father whom she accepted after a long time he’s promised to keep her der
Point no2) she will obviously ask why did he marry
Now dat he can’t tell abt her father neither can he tell abt his love He loves her but doesn’t want her to suffer with him so he hid dat n told sm other story abt sanju
So what can he tell her n make her stay n all this is happening so fast that he can’t take a proper mature decision so I think it is absolutely
Justifying what story he cooked up because does he have any other option?
Sorry but this is just my POV
whhh..joya n shrddha darling l..
kya correct point pakada hai…sab clear kar diya…i too agree vini Di don’t need to proov anything…after reading this epi sab pata Chal gaya hai ki isse Achcha twist ye story me ku6 or ho hi nahi sakarta tha..bt i don’t like anyone comparing vini Di with swaragini’s CV..bz me cvs tahe dil se nafarat karti hu..so how can i keep mum after reading something like that…this story is going awesome…u know na me na apna point rakhne me kanjusai nahi karti hu..so kisiko is nacheez ki bat ka bura lage to soorry..Di your army is with you..do age..do piche..4 sathme..go ahead..we will march together..
(ye vala comment telly update valo ne pata nahi kyu post nahi kiya..ya shayd ho sakata hai do bar ajaye..so ignore if it posted twist..bas meri bhavna o ko samjo)
Hi Vini!!
To be honest.. you did mess with the story.. but I like this mess. I am Sanskar Ki Deewani which is my FB id also.. So Sanskar getting hurt made me cry! :'( I can not see Sanskar in pain! 🙁 .. My heart pains seeing him like that. He loves her so much!! Sanskar doesn’t deserve to get this. He has already suffered a lot in his childhood and even now. I really can’t see him like this. I am just waiting for the day when Swara realizes why Sanskar did this.. She should be knowing that her step-father is the one at fault and not my Sanskar!! Btw.. waiting! Update soon
Hello everyone…i am so sorry yar i was thinking to prank on her so that you guys ask her questions.but i did not think k it may create misunderstanding among you.but i like k joya shraddha,vini Di you all trust her.sorry it wont repeat again.she is very nice human being.i am not telling this because i am her friend.but each n everyone who is in touch with her will say this only.she used to help other without thinking about herself.dosto k liye ku6 bhi kar sakti hai.
Joya, majama chu..your head is paining ha ? i am already suffering from her prank. Ya in just one night she has taken revenge from me, now you guys must be thinking how ?
we both are sharing 3 groups. One is of school,one of CLG n last remdom one. That devil niyati last night change group icon n name as
“congratulations Kriya for being committed in relationship”
Ohh god after that from last night i am replying to each n every member of our group that its her prank.nothing like that but everyone is like muje kyu nahi bataya,tu to chupi rustam nikli,i was not expecting this from you n what not.
Vini Di n everyone plz plz save me,plz tell her to leave me,she is just unbelievable.
Niyu baby i will not repeat it.plz cut down your punishment.love you na darling.
Ohh my Kriyu darling…its Okk..me tumhe kaha pareshan kar rahi hu…kyu meri complain kar rahi hai..ha…mene to sirf tit for tat kiya…tu chahti thi meri ye dramebazz family muje questions kare after your prank….so i too create the same situation but thodu sa flavor add kark…ja meri jan mene teri punishment cut down kardi…jile apni zindgi…
vaise sorry kriyu…mene thoda dant diya tuje..baby kan pakad k sorry bolti hu…meri is ff family ka saval tha yar…tu janti hai na muje me apne rishto ko kabhi ulajne nahi deti…n that’s y i reacted thoda bahut…sab k samne sorry bol rahi hu..
n ha abb na mere bare me tu ku6 mat bolna..bz i mereko lag raha hai ki tu meri tarif kam buraiya jyada karti hai…abb Dar lag raha hai kahi tujse…
btw sorry to maine tuje dantne k liye kaha hai ha…prank k liye nahi…kaisa raha tera din..?? after my prank..kahi jyada pareshan to nahi kiya na Maine..!!!?? ha ha ha…love you too na my sweety..
Hey Kriya God sachi mai I’m laughing hard ssly imagining ur position Gosh shaitaan she is??? but
On a funny note niyati?
I loved the entire concept of this prank ha ?
Kya idea hai sachiii????
I’m surely gonna try this on sm1???????????
Haha..kriya after reading this I can’t stop my laugh…lol..niti u r so cute..sorry kriya BT I like her naughtness. and hey niti.. poor kriya..uska thoo band bajaa hoogaa..abb thoo chod hi do na yaar..?????
Kriya and Niti,No misunderstanding dear,I have clear understanding about how naughty you all are,I had felt it is uu,@fter reading, thank u for welcoming me from that line I got it,oh,kriya,thanks for telling us Niti’s good qualities,my goodness,what a revenge yaar,Kriya,can imagime your situation dear,now,to come out of this,will have to answer many,and trust me,many wont believe,this brought a memory,a prank I played on my room mate but can’t share..she will kill me if she reads it,Niti,cut short the punishment na,leave Kriya..pls..
I will respond to rest of the comments asap.
Hello everyone how are u all!!!! I miss kriya omg sachi she did that????
Niyati baby ur wc dear sachh kaha 30+ episodes ki dosti hai ? itna toh pehchante he hai but after what kriya said
Ur truly devilish my dear????????? hajahahahah I mean ssly ?? Kya pranksters ho dono ke dono maza aata hai aise friendship me ?
Hey Jo wassup!✋ kai kartees….
Rups wru yr n why is joya angry with my pyari si cute si behna?
N hey sethothy how r u???
N everyone else its so nyc we have this SwaSan family?? give sm name no
Commander Vini di ??
hooo..shraddha kya tuje sach me lagata hai ki meri jaisi innocent bachchi..devil ho sakti hai…mene to bas choti moti..shararat kar Di after what she has done with me…sachi me mene jnbhuj k ku6 nahi kiya..vo to situation hi asi ho gayi thi ki humne iiitu sa majak kar liya uske sath…abb plz is nanhi sirf Jan ko devil mat bolo…
vini Di dekha apne ye Kriya ki vajah se sab is masoom ko devil bol rahe hai……hhayo rabba about me ki kara..menu to ku6 samaj na raha hai..me bichari abla ladki..
Hayy mera baccha? bass choti moti sharat karta hai? Rite lol ROFL??????? heyy bhagwan hass hass ke pagal hogayi itnaaaaaaaaaaaa jhut akhir koi kaise bol sakta hai??? nanhi si haan itseems innocent itseems?? oh God !!!!
Arey niyati devil Matlab acha wala devil re abhi hum sab bhi toh tumhare dost hai toh hum bhi devil se kam thodi na hai…. It’s on chill ha?
Yea,I have to read the comments above,but,yea,we know, u r so innocent,dont even know the word meaning of naughty.. So u won’t do anything, we know,dhyan se dekhiye is abla ladki ko…u still wana call her devil,no,no,I won’t tolerate it about my Niti,she is the most innocent of this lot…sorry Niti, for all the above,I didn’t mean any good word written above about u…????
But I enjoy reading ur comments yaar,u r our sweet baby Niti..ok.
Helloo guyzz..plzzz me sbse ek baat keha chahti hu Vini Di ki FF ki baareee me…
Guyzz mene aise bht cmnt dkha h jaha aap logo ne kaha h ki chnge d trck,unite swasan ya phir sanky o aisa mat banau…toh me aaako ek baat khna chti hu sbko ha
Guyzz yeh Vini di ki ff h..VINI GRACE ROSS ki ff h..mene di ki phli wali ff v pdha h…i hope aap sbne pdha ho ga…wo fff bst thi sbse…aaap log plz trst kijiye vini di ko…baki sb wrttr v acche lkhti h…agr unlogo ki fff me kuch vlln ya phir jo v do aap agr khe toh chnge d trck toh koi baat nhi…par yaha vini di bst writter h…guyx acche se pdho or bilkul tnsn mat lo swasan ek hongi…story ko jara dhyan se pdho…me khti hu yaarr agr vini di kuch v kre chahe vlln laye ya phir kisi ki mat ho jaye phir v end me yeh stry h bsr rhogi…bt plz aap log aisa mat kho…cozz vini di ne v toh iss stry ko lkr kuch pln bnaya h na…me prmz krti hu sbse isss ff ko lkr aalogo ko koi tklf nhi mlgi…aaap sb khush hogi…bas stry ko aur vini di ko samajhne ki kosish kijiye…agar aisa nhi hua toh jo chahe kar lena…par don’t worry me hi jitugi…i hope aage se aap kog aisa na kare..
Plx ha sryyy me kisi ko hrt krna nhi chhti
Mickey, my head touched the roof,so no need of praising me more,but,yaar,m so overwhelmed by the way u guys are defending my ff,some may not be liking dear,but it is ok,we will leave it.People are different,tastes n opinions will be different,but,the confidence u have in me,Mickey u r scaring me.I m feeling scared yaar,really,to proceed,what if u don’t like it at all n won’t be able to say thinking about our friendship,should tell,that time ,@lso,ok..
Hi shraddha…xuley kya h na lst ff me 2m gayab ho gayi thi na …toh humne joya di se pucha…usne kaha shraddha ne MR.India wali watch khrd li h n wo hat wqt uski pss rhti h n hume bas kvi kvi mlti h…toh mene kaha mujhe Q nhi bataya watch ki baare me ..hum toh ek hi ghr me rhti h na????…n isiliye mne vini di se cmpln kr diya uski???…toh wo naraz h humse
Joya my baby didi srrryyy naaa …??…u knw na me toh chhoti c 8saal ki bacchi hu…aur me jyada hi senti ho gayi thi toh vini di se cmpln kr diya???????????…plzzz na naraz mat ho mujhse…dkho na aapke liye me Chocolate laya hu???????????n ice crm v ha…aur wo v aapki fvrte bttr scts☺☺?..nw chalo na maaf v kar do…
Needhi kabaab aur biriyani????…wo ab toh hum jarroon jayenge lucknow
Oh ho maine abhi pada piche episode ke comments 1st of all I just can’t digest the fact ki koi tumhe didi bula raha hai rups I mean rupshika di sounds?????????? bura mat manana my sweet little cute sis but sachi muchi bohot hasi aa rahi hai??
Hey Vaishnavi✋ Hi this is shraddha nautankibaaz Rups ki Dramebaaz behen? wc to this Pagal khana ?
Joya ki bachii aaj kal zyada he dialoguebaazi horahi hai haa Teri Mr India Watch wat not??? shey tum kya jano ki mai tumhe kitna miss karti hu aur tum ho ki mera mazaak uda rahi ho??? yeh din bhi dikhana tha bhagwan ji?
Woh kya hai Jo abhi na Tech Fest start ho raha hai toh morning 8 se he coll me aur sham ko aise cultural sab rehta hai not real 1 but abhi week wise sab games sab start horaha hai toh sham ko late aati hu n sust hoke mast so jati hu lekin jab bhi free hoti hu tab 1st mai tum logon ke commts he padti hu?
Hei sethooo i m fine dr…??…n i knw 2m vvvv bhttt h acche ho ekdom bindasss??..
Hi niti,vinita,vaishu,needhi ,Kriya…☺☺…kaha ho sb…
Vaisu entry mar k kaha chali gayi ha bacchhooo?
Vini dr.. I told u many times this is my fav ff very very close to ma heart..i dont know how to explain u..last two three episode made me cry..from first episode to this 31 st episode it gave so much pleasure, nostalgia… Never ever tell me like dat its boring , not feel good ff. Ini paranjal idi vangum( if u say once again i will hit u)..
Actually i have a plan to visit banglore next week , wid ma family..so beware of me haha
I know dear that u like this ff,ini parayilla,actually ningalodalla,to others only I told,haha,coming to Bangalore,cool,appol idi nerittu kittum…yea,then me,??,welcome…
First of all, vini, congratulations on your success . Your writing skill is admirable. I appreciate the effort which you put in this fan fiction. Being a dentist putting such alot of effort and hard work for a fan fiction is really commendable.
Your plot is an unusual one. It has a realistic and pragmatic approach. It is not like the common ones which only revolve around a single plot and those type of plots are a drudge for the readers. Your fan fiction is endowed with all the factors which a story should have. The characters are properly justified and I am surprised to see the accurate analysis done by some readers.
From my perspective this fan fiction is a beautifully written one and my advice is do not rush with the story just because of some people are saying so.
I am Vinita’s masi and she always praises your fan fiction alot. She told me alot of times to read this one. Today I read all the episodes at a stretch. I do not know what will be Vinita’s reaction after going through my comment but vini it is my request to you do not under estimate your self.
Lots of love and best wishes to you.
I don’t know how to address you, I will call M’am,actually,I feel very honoured, truly humbled also,thank u very much for the good words and also for taking the trouble to read this fan fiction,writing was and never is my arena,it was just for a fun that I started and somehow reached thus far,so,kind of Vinita,I don’t if she added trouble asking u to read this ff,but,thank u very much for reading and leaving this comment,it really means a lot.Actually ,I am not at all confident about my writing,I consider it as writing a written update of a story that I have watched on screen, but thank u so much for the wishes.Thanku.
Sorry for the typing mistakes and some unwanted punctuations.
Hyy…!! I’m late to ready, it was too emotional. Sorry..!! Actually I was busy writing my own ff, so I didn’t get time to read till now..!! Waiting for ur next update…!!
It s ok dear,oh,u r writing ff,Wats the title?had posted episode 32,hope u will read.and thanks for the comment dear.
Arey rups tu 18 hai ki 19 Zara batana ???? Woh kya hai ki agar tu 18 years ki hui toh mai ek saal nadi behen lekin
19 years ki hui na toh dono hum Judwa behne ????????lekin behne toh fix hai dekh yaar??toh Zara batana badi choti ki judwa hai hum dono
Joya I guess mere se ek saal badi hai .den niti I donno but badi hai itna toh guarantee hai den sethoothy ooops asj se setu didi?den Vaishnavi choti hai den vinita bhi den aur kaun hai Zara batana koi?? Woh mai aaj kal watch pehenne lagi huna Mr India ki toh chats choit rahi hai???
Shraddha baba,pls don’t use that watch again.Joya,u too,none from our army is going to use it for some time,one watch n …hmm…Shraddha mention everyone’s age once again,u 19,Mickey 18 n half, Vaishu 16,Vinita 17,Niti 21?Kriya 20?,Needhi 16 or 17? Sethooty n Joya,dono…
Shraddha mere 18 year lst yr ho gaya . Avi me 19 me hu..matlb me 1st july ko puri tarh se 19 year ki ho jaugi…n tnsn mat le.hum dono judwa h…swara or ragini ki tarah????
Yaar sach me jab vaishu ne mjhe di kaha tha toh mjhe v bht hasi aa rhi thi???
If u were twins in real,????
Arey nahi re baba swaragini nahi abhi toh Woh Swara vs ragini hogaya hai ??
N mickiyyeee mai tujhse 9 months badi hu toh bade aur chote hai hum dono
9XM wale?????
U guys are practising for 2021 census,is it 2021,m I wrong?now we understood ur age..thank u?