Hi guys,sorry for this extra long first para,those who have followed this from the beginning should be knowing,I have told my limitaions regarding my writing skills and this story multiple times,also the fact that it is not going to be a feel good fan fiction,in my first ff,I had tried for that,to keep drama to the minimum,but,this ff,I know many would be disappointed,may be feeling that I am testing your patience,but this is just for a small lot dears,who I feel would get every word that I try to write,as I have told before,even,I am waiting to know how many will have the patience to read this ff and be there till the end,those who don’t like the track,I am sorry,but you guys have the absolute freedom to discontinue reading,hereafter,I wont feel bad about that,because,I know ,majority wont be happy with this ff,but,this is just an attempt,I may fail miserably but I wont be sad,because I know my limitations very well…but I am waiting to know, to how many, this will be conveyed in the way I wish it got conveyed,let’s see,and swaragini CVs have to please the production house,channel and audience,unfortunately,I don’t have such problems,so this ff wont continue for months,don’t worry,but wen this ff ends,I will surely miss a small lot who have always been there……
Previous 2 episodes link,would be good if u all read it before reading this:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-30/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-31/
Scene 1:
Ragini meets Sanskaar at a lake side restaurant a little away from the cottage,Sanskaar tells her, “Did you bring that sim card,I have to discard this one now,and did you have difficulty in reaching this place”?Ragini hands over the sim card to him and tells him, “Sanky,you know the impact of this deed of yours,why did u do this,tell me the truth,I know you loved Swara,but you wont do this,I know you nicely,you were going to sacrifice your love,but,at the last minute,Lucky saw you taking her away,where did you take her,and those snaps which reached the venue today morning,what is all this?she holds her head and is restless,she comes forward and holds his hands and says, “I know you very nicely,I know you wont do anything without a reason,but,this,what is the reason,you know something,I have just told dad and come here,he is sensible,he asked me to go and talk to you,and where is Swara?”,Sanskaar holds her hands and says, “Ragini,you are not just my friend,you were like my conscience,you had promised not to tell Swara or Lucky about my love for Swara,you have to stay with me in this,you should not tell anything to any one,I know,right now,all blames are on me,let it be like that for a while,I have faith in God,he will lead me out of this,yes,it is a tough situation,I am acting like a criminal in front of my Swara,but what to do,she is not leaving me,I may hide my heart from anyone but if I don’t wear this mask,I wont be able to hide my heart from her,still,not sure,if it will work,but have to,”Ragini tells him, “but Sanskaar,really,I don’t understand anything that you are doing,for whom did you do this,for not losing Swara,I know that wont be the reason,then for whom?
Ragini, “please,I don’t have answers to any of your questions,I need to be bad in everyone’s eyes for some time,u should trust your Sanky and stay with me like my conscience,I have only you to share all this,should not let a third person know about our conversation,and I am going to take you to Swara,don’t tell anything to her,just support her and be there,I know you have to join college in two days,I will leave you in the evening,till then,be there with her,and behave rudely to me in her presence”,Ragini tells him, “I don’t understand anything,is this happening right now or am I dreaming?Sanky you are making things more complicated”Sanskaar says, “I know,I know,but no other go,but trust me,be with me,everything will be fine”,Ragini tells him, “I know you told me this much atleast because of your trust on me,have always considered me your sister,no?ok,I will be with you,but ,why only you are suffering like this always,I don’t understand,the person who has always thought about family and friends,is now bad in everyone’s eyes,now,I don’t know what all is going to happen…
Ragini’s phone rings,it is Laksh on the other side,Ragini says, “what…?when?,OH my God,one after the other,ok”,Laksh asks her, “from Swara’s house,where did you go?,I thought you were in aunty’s room,your number was also out of coverage area,where are you?”,Ragini tells him, “ I will reach there in the evening,we will talk then,trust me,I am fine,ok,now I will cut the call…she cuts the call,turns to Sanky and tells him, “Sanky ,Mukesh uncle had a massive attack,he is in hospital,doctors told that condition is very critical”,Sanskaar is shocked, he looks up and says, “God,what will I do now?”He tells Ragini, “Ragini,I will leave you with Swara and go to the hospital,will come back soon”,Ragini tells him ,”but Sanskaar,if everyone sees you now,don’t know what all will happen”,Sanskaar says, “don worry,I wont go there directly,which hospital,did Lucky say anything?Ragini mentions the hospital name,Sanskaar says, “ ok,come,let’s go to the cottage”
Scene 2:
Swara is still seated in her room,Sanskaar finds that the dining table as such,he feels sad,he calls Ragini and tells her, “you go to Swara,I will leave now,and ,Ragini,she has not had anything since evening,please make her eat this food,”Ragini asks him, “which means,you also haven’t had anything,come,eat something and go”He tells her, “no,I will have something on the way,bye”,he leaves,Ragini goes to Swara’s room…
Scene 3
Ragini slowly opens the door,she sees Swara seated on the floor,she goes inside,Swara doesn’t turn,Ragini goes near her and sits beside,Swara sees her,she calls, “Ragu”,she hugs Ragini and cries bitterly.Ragini pats her back gently and says , “Swara,don’t cry ,everything will be alright”,Swara cries and in between tells her, “How,Ragini,I don’t know how everything is going to be alright,he,he is not our Sanskaar,he is somebody else,my heart is telling me he cant do this,but my mind cant ignore what I am seeing in front of my eyes,he is not saying anything,I know Sanskaar nicely,he wont say anything,very stubborn at times,”suddenly she stops,looks at Ragini and asks, “he brought you here?did he tell you anything,please Ragini,tell me the truth’’,Ragini says, “Swara,no,he didn’t tell me anything,he called me and told me that he will be waiting outside your house and that he wants to talk,when I was about to leave,I heard Sumi aunty crying seeing your wedding snaps,even,I am clueless about what is happening in our lives,”Hearing Sumi’s name,Swara asks, “They all came to know,how can they bear this,especially dad…..”,
Ragini says, “Actually,right now,I am not sure what is going on there,Mukesh uncle is in hos….she stops,Swara is shocked,”what happened to dad,tell me,Ragini,what is it?,Ragini realises that she has added to the trouble,she says, “no ,Swara,he had a BP fall,is admitted,but he is fine”,Swars looks into her eyes and says, “no,no.You are not saying the truth”,she holds Ragini’s hands and keeps it on her head and asks her to promise on her that what she said is true,Ragini is in dilemma,her eyes are filled,she tells her what Lucky told over the phone,”Swara leaves her hand unknowingly and cries loudly,Ragini hugs her and both weeps bitterly…..
(Sorry guys,once again…)
92 Comments
humne shayad pata hai aage kya honewala hai par batayenge nahi…….bus ek baat aap yeh twist khatm karne wali hai???????
I dont know why my replies are not displayed yet,Joya baba,tell na,I want to know what you feel,I am very clear about the track,just have to frame scenes,actually,I am proceeding as planned dear,only wen I write,I also will know what all scnes will come,trust me,have no idea about scenes but I have a very clear one line and it is a one line but I have faith on that.But no idea,if u all will like it,so ,I told sorry,in advance.
Hi vini, this is my first time that I’m commenting to ur ff, actually I’m a silent reader that not responding to any ffs, but this ff forced me to do this , it’s all bcoz of ur talent,u are fabs!!! I like ur nature which not overconfident about own talent, so keep it up,& coming back to this ff, I read it from the beginning , it’s amazing, nice concept.
Thanks yr,happy to hear from u,humbled n honoured by your words,writing is not at all my field dear n I have noting to be confident about,even,thank u for liking my ff dear.
Vini di ur ff is the best!!!!!!!!
I want to say some thing to the readers.
Please try to understand the sensitivity of this ff. The emotions hidden underneath each and every sentence is overwhelming. This ff is an extremely unique one. Sabra ka phal meetha hota hai!!!!YEH VINI GRACE ROSS di Ki ff hai.(I am quoting you rupu) di I am angry with you!!!!
You are constantly under estimating your self .
Vinita dear,I really was speechless wen I read ur Maasi’s comment,I don’t know how old she is but the word maasi itself brought a lot of respect in mind, and I was a bit scared to respond bt I have,what came to mind I typed there,but pls do convey my love and regards to her ,ok,I can’t believe she read all episodes at a stretch,u know my previous ff I mean first one I want to read all 36 episodes at a stretch, but haven’t ,even this one,sometimes,I don’t even proof read and only thing I do is is wen it get uploaded is count the number of scenes at a stretch to c if it is my ff under my name n wall paper,and wen our JoNiShra…analyse ,I read a few lines if I feel like,so..her effort,no words, and coming to ur comment,oh.don’t be. angry baba,m not a writer my dear,I will always say like that cos in my heart I don’t consider me a writer,for all the good words about my ff ,thank u my dear,and so sweet of u that u r telling readers ,also a big thank u for telling ur maasi about this ff…
Awesome di!!
Amazing
Joya di it is really my masi who has commented. Mujhpar vishwas kijiye.
Di dekhiye joya di is suspecting…??
Masi I think u have seen my reaction this morning tai ar likhlam na.. ?
Vaishu kaha vanish Ho gayi???
Di I am an Indian history student that’s why I got surprised when Nitti di mentioned that Jhansi Ki rani went to jail!!!!
oye meri amma……i m not suspecting……
wo jo bracket me I THINK hai na woh pure sentence k liye hai…… uska matlb hai ki humre khayal se aapki soch k liye agar koi perfect reply hai to woh vinita ki masi ka comment hai………..
dis not fair yr…………….
koi bharosa hi nahi hai hum par……….
Oh Indian history,wow.very good dear.study well n wat s ur ambition dear?,may I know…
Are wash rupu !! Even I am a cancerian. My birthday is 7 July.
Her bhagwan phir se I did a wrong guess regarding di ‘s zodiac. Each Mai pagalho gayi hun.
Ek hi ans 10 bar typ kr suki hu…kaha mera cmmnt ha??????????
Joya di i lv u tooo yrr???..n phir se narazzzzz ..bhul gayi mne lst ff me aapko chclte diya tha…awww aur chahiye na…yeh raha di???????????????????????????????☺☺☺…ab maan jao na di plzzzzzz …u r my swt didi na☺☺☺
thank you so much for chocolates………
love u tooooooooo…………………………..dekho maan gaye hummmm………..
Joya will become diabetic..u also eat,she needs company.
Vinita teri bday 7 july☺☺??…wah bhai wah…mera 1july n di ki 26 july …h na di???
N di pln toh accha h…???..waise mre nazar me ek ff h…waha hum baat kr skte h???…waha wrtr v baat nyi krti???…bht shanti h waha par???????
yr rups……punch of the year………hehehehhehehe…………..
bahot shanti hai waha pe……..hehehehehehehehehehehe………
itna hase hum tumhari comment padhake ki aankho me aansu aaye……has has k saanse atak gayi humri……….kab se khase ja rahe hum………
amazing…………
Hahaha..superb..I was laughing..
Ohhhh me toh ek baat bhul gayi ?…
Hi DIVYA SHANKAR…chalo me hi bata deti hu 2m h…di ki fb accnt h na???…Vini Grace Ross aise srch krogi toh mil jayega??…wo kya h na ek din di ghr par nahi thi…toh mne uski phli wali accnt blck krke iss nm par naya bana diya??????
My goodness..oh u created that account,I was thinking who did that,naughty girl Mickey, yes thats my account but m not very active.
Oh God pagal ladki ???
Kitni confidence ke saath jhut bolti hai koi bechara naya aaya ho toh hogaya kaam tamamm uska???rups ur so cuteee??
Guys,I finished typing the next one, going to post it ,then,have some more work but will come bk and respond to rest of the comments,ok.
Di never be upset for bad comments ….
Ur ff is awsome …. I didn’t missed single epi of urs … I like swarag sanlak frndship bond… N ya this twist is necessary in ur stry
So no problem di … We willl surely read ur ff watever maybe situation …
Not at all dear,I don’t want readers to get upset reading the negativity,so,wrote so,and thank u dr for telling that u will read whatever the track is.
Hi dii…1st let me say abt today epi …..di its really heart touching…..aapne sanskaar ka charecter bahut ache tarah se frame kiya……nd di ur ff is not at all boring nd its not time wasting infact it gives relaxation frm my studies…
I wish I could write a more entertaining ff for u,but sorry for the pain in this ok,still,u r liking means,my luck,hope ur exam ws easy,take care dear.
Hi diis voh kya hai na aaj mera xam tha prefinal aur ghar phar net connection bhi nahi tha is liye do din kuch comment nahi diya….
Shikha di pata hai meri bday bhi July mehi hai july 18 …