Hi guys,Swasan fan fiction (Season 2) episode 35
Previous link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-34/
(In that we saw a few swasan moments,swalak conversation,swasanlak and parents’ conversation,sanlak fight ,a mild change in San approach to Swara)
Scene 1:
Next day morning
Swara is working in the kitchen,she notices Sanskaar coming from behind,she gently turns,he also looks at her,she turns to go,he asks her to continue her cooking,she stops and removes the vessel from a burner and Sanskaar understands it was for him,he takes a sauce pan and keeps milk for boiling,he checks the rack for tea powder but doesn’t find it,Swara passes the container to him,he says thanks and accepts it,he is about to put the powder,suddenly Swara holds his hand and says, “for one cup of tea,don’t put it into the whole thing,concentrate on what you are doing”,saying this,she turns the burner to off mode and leaves from there,Sanskaar watches her leaving…
Scene 2:Same day evening
It is very cold outside,Sanskaar goes outside,Swara also comes out of her room,she notices him trying to light a fire outside,she watches this from the door,she goes inside and brings a small bottle of kerosene and goes near him,he accepts it and lights the fire,Swara turns to leave,Sanskaar calls her and says, “Swara,do you remember the last trip,that camp fire,how much fun it was ,no?Ragini ,Lucky……..that was enough,time should have paused there”,Swara listens and turns in his direction,he sits on the floor near the fire,she sits opposite to him,both move their hands over the fire and tries to keep themselves warm,Swara looks at Sanskaar,he ignores it and keeps looking at the movement of the flames,Swara softly asks him, “Sanskaar,have you informed Sanjitha about all what has happened?”,Sanskaar doesn’t show any change in his expression,he looks at her and says, “Sanjitha is a closed chapter…..have informed her”,Swara just feel some happiness hearing the word closed chapter but suddenly she remembers how Sanskaar had told that he don’t love her,will free her,wont even touch her until then,her eyes are filled but blinks frequently as though it is because of the smoke,she continues, “Sanskaar,you asked for some time yesterday,eversince they left,I can see that honesty in your eyes,I have seen it in my Sans….”she stops and says, “in my friend Sanskaar’s eyes,through out these years,though I can never forget the harsh words and your deeds since last week,because of that friendship,it should be,some where ,my heart is ready to give you that time,but,once you sort out the things,I know you will let me go,but that time,in return ,should give me the freedom to sort things out between you and Sanju,do u agree?”,Sanskaar just looks at her and nods slowly……
Scene 3
After two weeks,Akshay’s house
Akshay’s dad is reading newspaper,Akshay comes and sits opposite to him,he asks him, “Dad,you had gone to see Mukesh uncle?is he still in hospital?”His dad looks at him and says, “because of an obsessive lover Sanskaar,your marriage was stopped,it has not affected my relation with Mukesh,if I want to take revenge from him,there are many ways,his business is a sinking ship,we can take over as majority of the shares are already with us,but,cant forget that though we have benefitted the most ,his efforts have always ,no, the brain was always his,so cant let him go like that..didnt go to meet him,had heard that he got discharged..”Akshay tells him, “Oh,come on dad,why should you give up on something that will bring you profit?,you think I am heart broken cos my marriage didn’t happen,Swara was like any other girl who I have met,and marriage is never meant for people like me,I will also come with you,we will meet him today evening,ok,see u ,dad”
Scene 4: Same day evening
Akshay and his dad has come to meet Mukesh,Mukesh hides his anger and behaves normally,Akshay tells him , “Uncle,do you know where Swara and Sanskaar are?anyways,they are married,it wont be easy for you,but I think,you will make up your mind later,I don’t have any problem with them,Swara’s friend he was,no?Yea,I enquired,got the details,friendship can change into love,a girl like Swara,will definitely value her marriage,I think you should bring them back,sorry,it is your personal matter,I just told”,Akshay’s dad discusses about their business updates and enquires about Mukesh’s health,they spend some time there and leaves……
Scene 5
Night,Sanskaar receives a call,he goes out to attend it,it is Mukesh on the other side,Sanskaar asks, “Uncle,how are you now?,actually,I had given this number to Rajeev uncle (Mukesh’s best friend and subordinate),but was not sure if situation was favourable to make a call “,Mukesh is silent ,he says, “my son,I know,I am the most selfish man,and you are suffering because of me,how is my daughter Sanskaar?is she fine?”Sanskaar says, “yes uncle,she is fine,don’t worry,I will manage,your team has helped me a lot,this house,vehicle,security,everything was arranged by them and I know they are protecting my family too,”,Mukesh tells him, “how are you able to talk nicely to me,I dragged you into this pit,still,you are talking like the Sanky who was my daughter’s dear friend”,Sanskaar says, “I am not supporting your illegal business,but I am supporting a good father,a good husband,and above all it was for my…he stops,Mukesh understands that he was going to say Swara’s name,he pretends as though he has not noticed it and continues, “Sanky,today,Akshay and father had come,”he mentions all what they told,Sanskaar listens and says, “uncle,actually,I had applied only for a week’s leave,extended it,but,have been receiving mails,so I am planning to go from day after tomorrow ,have arranged a maid for Swara,our security uncle’s wife only,so,even if I have to stay away for a day or two,she will be here,no?Mukesh agrees,again apologises to him,promises to set everything right and cuts the call seeing Sumi coming with food for him…Sanskaar cuts the call and goes inside…
Scene 6:Next day morning
Swara wakes up and comes out,she sees Sanskaar dressed up and waiting for her,seeing her,he gets up and walks towards her, “Swara,I am going out,will be back only in the evening,bye”,he turns to go,then quickly comes back and says, “for almost three weeks,day and night you were locked up inside this small house,if you want,you can go out,just be careful when you go near the palm,as the security uncle had seen multiple snakes there,saying this he goes from there,Swara just looks at him,he leaves…
Scene 7:Same day ,around 4 pm
Security guard rings the door bell and Swara opens,he tells her that he is going out and will be back in a short while,he tells her that he shall lock the gate from outside,he also tells her that Sanskaar has another set of keys ,so,no need to worry if he arrives early,Swara just nods,she sees him leaving ,after some time,she locks the door and walks towards the direction of the lake,she sits on the white bench for some time,then gets up and goes near the water,she sits there on the ground,puts her hand in the water,takes a hand full and wipes her face,she stares at the lake,she recalls all what happened in the last few weeks,she notices that the surface of the water is calm,she gently puts her hand again and then sits there,staring at the opposite bank and the trees there………..
113 Comments
Shraddha i have read ur comment at previous epi……hum khush ho gaye yeh dekhkar ki tumhe niti vini di sabko achchha laga…
Thank you yr…………..
Yeh duniya bahot chhoti hai par kabhi kabhi usme kho jane ka dil karta hai…par kahi tum sab log humne bhool na jao is darr se wapas aaye……hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe……..just kidding……but thank you humri jindgi me aane k liye guyssssssss……………
Awesome epi di !!!!!
Superb superb superb superb superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rupsikha how are you????
Take care of you self and achche marks Lana..
All the best!!;
Joya di aapne apke writings Mai jadu hai. Each and every word is so beautiful!!!!!!!
Joya di u are superb!!!!!!!!!!!!
Niti di kriya di sethooty di vaishu shradha di how are you????
Joya di if u ever find that pagal person who found all these stupid days then inform ne. I will accompany you all.
Khud khush raho aur dusro ko bhi khushiya do toh sab din special ban jayega. this is my philosophy . Haste raho hasate raho!!!?????
Dil garden garden ho gaya janke ki tumhe pasand aaya………….
Bdw is baat pe roshogolla to banata hai na……………………..
Humne socha tha us person ko nani yaad dilayenge par lagta hai ab uska bharta banana padega…….
vini didi, it was just awesome,all the swasan conversations were fantastic. just like others me too think that akshay ch will not close so easily.hope mukesh will protect swasan n all families.waiting for ur next epi.
hello everyone. good evening.
vini didi you r also lazy ha. me too. kabhi kabhi asa hi bethi hoti hu firbhi kuch karneka man nahi karta.don’t worry jab apka dil kare tab likh dena.
joya kya mast likha hai tumne. maza agaya padh k. very well done. joya is back ha.
rupshikha dear. take care for yourself. n vese bhi tabiyat thik na hoto nahana nahi chahiye.asa kisi mahan insan ne kaha hai.
sethooty n shraddha app dono ne jalsa kar liya now its my turn. my family is also planning for 1 week trip. i am very excited.
niyu baby. tu plz Taru dhyan rakh j. mane aunty malyata Kale. amne kidhu taru schedul mane. te what’s app delet kari didhu ? n ha weekends ma malvanu fave m hoy to mane call karj.
vinita.vaishu where r u both ? how r u ?
vese i guess yaha sab velntine week k khilaf vale hi hai but firbhi friends app sab ko
“happy hug day “
ohhoooo Kriya darling so u r planning for family trip ha..not bad go nd enjoy alot..let me know where u r going ? u know agar muje us particular place ka famous ku6 mngvana ho to..
ha dear i have deleted my what’s app and will come back after Nov 16 only..
ha mamma a kidhu tu mane k tu Mali ti kale..ha Baka hu dhyan rakhu j 6u..don’t worry..n Kale hu besy hais..may b we can meet on sunduy so u do one thing humare school vale group mese sab ko pu6 lena na Kon Kon ready hai..n u all decide place also..i will call u 2moro..for confirmation..ok.?
Tumhe pasand aaya na…………thank you……..yes i m back…….. Bus isbaat ka dukh hai k kisine hume miss nahi kiya……..poor girl i m………….chhalli huaa na dil humra………….
Koi dekhe usse pehle dawai le lega lete hai challi huye dil pe…warna kuch log chhalani(wo jis se karwa chauthe pe chand dekhte hai) samjke istamal karnege…………
Hello didis….missed u all sooooooooooo much yaar .nd ya so my didis r back with thier masthi haaa aaj comments dekhne ke baad mere xpressions dekhna tha….!!!!!!!!! I thought ki so these people r bach with der masthi…..sab log regularly comment kar rahe hai jaha tak ki mere pyaari shraddha di bhi hahaha just kidding shraddha di….
finally joya di u r back with ur style haaa….waise joya di aapko selfie lena nahi aathi oooooww koi nahi mai sikhkado aapkho????
Shikha di kaisi ho aap ??? Is ur health ok now?? Pata hai same pinch mujeh bhi davayi bilkul pasand nahi hai uskho dekh ke hi mujeh rona ata hai aur me bachhe ki tatah rona start karthi hu ki mujeh davayi nahi chahiye aur mujeh aisa dekh ke my dad nd my bro take video of mine …..ha very bad na…..
Kriya di vinitha di setu di vinni di niti di how r u all missed me r not??? Mere maa xams chsl rahe he practicals tho ho gaye aur prefinals r gng on now so somr wat busy…but missed u all soo much
hey…sab log dhyan se sunlo..ab ye sabit ho gaya hai..stamp paper pe likhvalo..tum log mano ya na mano..humare pass proof hai..ab agar bhagvan bhi kahe k me Jo soch rahi hu vo galat to me nahi manne vali..sach keh rahi yaro..aree trust me na..juth nahi bol rahi..yelo kab se bakvas kiye ja rahi hu but ye to bataya hi nahi ki bat kya hai..to suno..
i think hum sab na kumbh k melee me bichdi hui behne hai…no dought in that..u know sab ka nature eke jisa hai..sab ki bate eke jaisi hai..sab ki almost liking eke jesi hai..(ha 1-2% ka liking me difference hai)..ab ye latest vala..Di..joya..shraddha..me..vinita..all most we all not like this days celebration..hasi ati sab pe..hena..so its confirm that humare eke dusre se koi na koi connection to jarur se hai..varna hum is anjan site pe ase mil k itni achchi bonding share nahi kar rahe hote…
me too wanna thank u all for coming into my life…vini Di specially u…bz of u only i got this beautiful relationship with you all..love u all so much..
agar bhagvan ne chaha to n if we will be (i am sure we will be ) in connect then i will defiantly come to ur places to meet u..joya ko puna me..Di ko Bangalore..vinita ko Bengal..rups ko assam..shraddha baby ko karnataka.sethooty ko bhi milne pakka ajaungi..
Oh many comments to be read,shall read and,next episode tomorrow.
Vini di u were awesome ,. As usual the fire and ice came together.. And oopsey what a wonderful bonding u guys have .. Nithi ur comment was super duper awesome. Hope u read my comment. And even shraddha di’s prose lines depicted her concern.. Nd joya di and shraddha di .. Uff all of u have such great bonding .. Most important vini Di u r the heart for these heartbeats.. U r the soul for the bodies.. U r the vision for these eyes .. U r the besties for these bests.. Really wonderful bonding.. I really miss my friend circle my bestirs after my father had a transfer
Hey riya thank you yr………..u r absolutely ri8………. U did not say anything about me?????? Angry wid u yr…….
Dnt take it seriously………. Just joking…….. Thank for ur comment………….. Bonding……………………whole credit goes to all member of dis family bcz everyone gave spl place in heart to our stupid family…………
Stupid nahi………………pagal and anokhi as well as lovely family……..
Hii Riya dear…its true we all r sharing grate bonding..n like joya said all credit goes to Di as well as each n every person of this crazy family…bahut hi jyada anokha bandhan hai hum sab ka..sab na geographically eke dusre se dur dur hai but mentally n hearty connected hai..n vo sach me bahut jyada mayne rakhta hai…
Jo koi bhi isss crazy family ka hissa banna chahta hai..uske liye humare dil k darvase hamesha khule hai..hena girls..? u even don’t required to knock also..just took a step in to dramebazz company…u r also part of this family only..Ohh u r missing ur friends ha..i can understand ur feeling..bz i hv also feel the same during my school time..don’t worry u will get new friends soon..along with ur bonding with ur old friends…nice taking to u dear..take care
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Hoooo……..
Niyati ne humri wajah se paglon wala dance kiya aur sharddha ki nind,laziness sab bigadi……. Yr kafi PUNYa kamaya aaj humne aaj na……..hehehehehehehe……….just kidding ha……….thank you guys for lots of love…………
I m not rock star yr shraddha…..all of u r Rock stars.m……….
Vinita,kriya,vaishu,sethooty tum sab ko pasand aaya………yeppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…….muhhhhhhhhh……………………………..
Hey kriya aur niti i understand gujrati ha……….
Dear kriya
Hum valentine week k khilaf nahi hai……… Par in dino me jo chijon ka atirek(excess) ya pagal pan hota hai uske khilaf hai…….no doubt days celebrate karnewalon k emotions ka respect karte hai par tumhe nahi lagta ki yeh har bar kuch jyada hota hai????
Hum agree karte hai ya shayad better one ki hum accept karte hai ki dil ki baat hum har roj express nahi karte…is dino k bahane shayad logon ko wo bahana bhi milta hoga express hone ka…..nahi mana to deewali ki har raat bhi andheri hai aur yakin kiya jaye to har raat deewali hai……….
Bus hug karne k liye spl day ki jarurat hai???? Humri friends ko humne yeh promise karne ki jaroorat hi nahi padni chahiye ki i will always there for u and all…balki usko yakin hona chahiye ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye hum uske sath hai…..itna hi kehna hai…….. In dino logon ko jo khushi milti uske khilaf Koi kaise ho sakta hai……aur har kisi ka celebration ka tarika bhi alag hai na……so chillll………….and enjoy ur trip and dnt forget us ha……………….nahi to rooth jayenge hum tumse……..so now smile plz……..Tum aur niyati milne ka plan kar rahe ho….hum log aayenge nahi par at least bulao to sahi…………………..
Vini di aap kaha reh gayi…….?????
Shraddha aaj aaram se so jana hai………niyati tum bhi thak gayi hogi na dance kar ke…………aur vini di aap yeh comment padhke thak gayi hongi…………..
Good morning. Aj subha subha saraswati puja tha. For the first time I wore a saree without anyone’s help!!!!!!!!! Joya di a roshogolla for you!!!!!!!!!
my dear sheetu tai the following lines are for you: samander peer ka ander hai lekin ro nehi sakta yeh aansu pyaar ka moti hai isko kho nehi sakta .
i simply thought to continue that poem. cant remember that entire poem but it is an eternal favourite of mine.thank you for writing those beautiful lines…
Thank you vinita yr……humne na yeh lines yaaad hi aa rahi thi….
Samundar peer ka andar hr lekin ro nahi sakta
Yeh aansu pyar ka moti hai isko kho nahi sakta
Meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le,
Jo mera ho nahi paya wo tere ho nahi sakta……..
Us audio ka end kuch is tarah se hai,
Bramar koi kumdani par machal baitha to hungama…
Humre dil me koi khwab pal baitha to hungama….
Abhi tak dub kar sunte the sab kissa mohbbat ka,
Main kisse ko hakikat me badal baitha to hungama…..
whhh vinita..mast line likha tune joya k liye…humane kal kar liya swarasvati pujan..vasant panchmi ka..
joya darling u again ha…bas ase hi likhte raho..n hume nachate raho..humare chehre pe muskurahat laya karo..
hi!! aj itna sannata kyun?? sab kaha kho gaye?
joya dear tum sab ko invitation ki kya jarurat hai..?!!!! u all r most welcome at any dam time…thanks ha me Dec 16 k planning kar rahi hu puna ane ka..so rupshikha ready rehna..
rupshikha how r u ? take care n all th best for exams..do well
vaishu all the best dear for exams..
sethooty..shraddha..vini Di..kriya..riya..how r u ?
hv a nice day ahead..happy Sunday in advance to u all..hv fun buddies..
hey joya u again ha..not bad..jaldi jaldi ase hi roz roz likha karo..mashaallaahh kya likha hai meri jaan..just loved it..so u cn understand gujju ha..u r most welcome dear..jab marzi a jao..or kisne kaha mene ap sab ko miss nahi kiya ha..i missed u all..
pata hai just because of niyati now i am reading many ffs on this site..n become addicted to ffs..mamma se kafi dant bhi khayi pata hai..
vaishnavi all the best for ur exams..
baki sab batao how r y all ?
Yeh kya hua? niti di kriya di aap dono ne mujhe kal ke liye nehi bulaya… Vinita udaas ho gayi
Sissy…i missed u and ur ff lot..i quit from tellyupdate itself…coz I didn’t saw ur ff …i,knew few members only ..u ,Saba,kashis n sethooty..then few ff writers…but IM addicted to ur ff..
Even I will off after giving comment…
Even IM not fb…anyways will search ur in google…
Coming to story…
As usual sissy…thw way u conveying each person feeling is perfect…poor sanskar..really strong fellow in this storyline…ragini is so good…keep going…sorry I,cant able to comment in few episode..but always in huge for ur writing….
Even I started new story on swasan in IF…
Waiting for ur next update….
Bye sissy