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Episode 24:
Both ragini and laksh searched for tarun….but he was no where in the house….both got tensed and ragini started to cry a lot….laksh got angry seeing her….
Laksh:y r u crying ragini???happy now????seeing us fighting he went somewhere….if anything happens to him i wont leave u ragini…..
Ragini:laksh what r u talking???its all bcoz of u…..if at all u dint drink alcohol then there is no need of fight…..
Laksh:r u insane ragini?????whether yesterday only we both are fighting????always we both fight……but i didnt say anything…..i just kept quiet that bcoz of our fight tarun shouldn’t get affected….if at all anything happened to tarun i will not leave u….
Ragini:laksh even i m warning u if at all anything happened to tarun i wont leave u…..
When both were fighting laksh got a call from shekar…..seeing his call laksh got tensed…..after gathering some courage he took the call…..
Laksh:hello papa….
Shekar:laksh u and ragini come to our house….
Laksh:papa wo….
Shekar:tarun is here…so come soon…
Laksh:papa what???tarun is there???
Shekar:ya laksh….so come here….
laksh:coming papa….(he cut the call)
Ragini:what papa told laksh???
Laksh:ragini get ready….tarun is there in papa house….
Ragini:what in papa house???how come he went there???
Laksh:even i m with u ragini…how come i know???
Ragini:after he come home i will give him nicely….is this how a small boy do by leaving his parents to cry….
Laksh:ragini even now wont u change???pls i m not in the mood in to fight with u…get ready fast….
After that both went to shekar house….tarun was playing with deepika….seeing raglak tarun went and hide behind deepika….that time even swara came down…..seeing them swara do no what is the matter….but went to tarun and hugged him and kissed his cheeks….he smiled seeing swara….At that time ragini came forcely to tarun and raised her hands to slap him…..but laksh caught her hand in the air and slapped her hardly….swara,deepika,shekar,shomi got shocked as laksh is a very soft person and tarun got frightened to c his dad with this much anger….
Ragini:laksh whats this???how dare u can beat me????
Laksh:i should have dared before itself….i should have given this slap before itself…..
Ragini:papa have u seen what he is saying???
Laksh:papa i m sorry….but i cant keep quiet….till yesterday i accepted everything quietly…hereafter i cant….
Ragini:papa see how he is talking???
Shekar:ragini laksh is correct….but one thing he is wrong….he shouldn’t have slapped u….i should have done this when u were small….
Ragini:papa???(shocked)
Shekar:tarun beta come here….
Tarun:nana….
Shekar:mm do u want to stay with papa or mama or both???
Tarun:(frightened seeing ragini)nana….
Shekar:beta dont worry no one will say u anything…..tell me….
Tarun:i want to be with papa….
Hearing this answer laksh looked angrily at ragini….ragini got shocked to hear this answer….she didnt expect that tarun will say such an answer….
Shekar:ragini is this enough????c how ur behaviour has affected tarun that now he doesnt need to live with u…..
Ragini:papa i was just strict….that too its for his goodness….whether thats wrong???
Laksh:shut up ragini….we are not saying u to not be strict….but everything has its limit….mind it….
Ragini:laksh….
Shekar:ragini we are saying u are wrong just change ur habits otherwise u will lose everything….
Laksh:ragini we just adjusted everything with u till now that doesn’t mean u r right…. We dont want any pblm thats the reason we have been silent….. But have u seen bcoz of ur this act now ur own son is hating u…. He doesn’t want to live with u….
After hearing everything she started to cry vigorously ad ran to her room and closed the door…. Laksh shekar and all went back of her hoping she shouldnt do anything wrong…. She told that she wants to have some time alone…. So they left her and went…. Laksh went to his office leaving tarun with swara and deepika….. At that time swara thought to talk to vishal about this marriage…. So she called him and asked him to come to the cafe…. After that she got ready and went to the cafe….
In the cafe…. Already vishal was sitting there in a table…. After seeing swara entering into the cafe vishal went to her and accompanied her to the table….
Vishal:waw!! I didn’t expect that u will call me soon for a date….
Swara:sorry vishal its not a date…. I want to talk something important to u…..
Vishal:what u have to talk to me swara???
Swara:actually….
Vishal:dont afraid u can say me anything….
Swara:oh i m sorry….
Vishal:sorry for what????
Swara:actually i m not interested in this marriage…. I m in love with someone…..
Vishal:what???? (Shocked)
Swara:i m sorry vishal…. I thought to talk to my papa but before i talk to him he accepted ur proposal…. I m sorry….
Vishal:oh swara come on…. No need of sorry and all….. I will talk to my parents…. May i know who is that lucky man???
Swara:(shocked and happy)r u not angry on me???
Vishal:ha ha y i have to be angry on u????
Swara:wow thank u soo much…. If at all sanskar listen this he will be very happy….
Vishal:oh that lucky man name is Sanskar haan???
Swara:(blushingly)haan…. Even he is a business man….
Vishal:oh is it…. Great….
Swara:(showed his photo)this is my sanskar….
Vishal:wow he is that lucky man…. I know him…. He is kamal uncle’s son….
Swara:kamal uncle???
Vishal:ya dont u know Mr.Kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi…. He is sanskar dad….
Hearing that swara is shocked…. Seeing her face expression vishal is confused…..
Vishal:what happened???
Swara:i think u r wrong….
Vishal:no swara my papa and kamal uncle are close frnds…. I know him and what i m saying is true….
Swara:oh kk…. I m sorry i have to go…. Bye….
Saying this swara went from there without waiting for vishal answer…. Vishal is confused seeing her behaviour but left it…. Swara felt cheated…. She do no what to do….. She just called sanskar and asked him to come to the park….. Sanskar too went from his office to the park…. She was sitting in the bench….. Seeing her sanskar went to her and side hugged her…. But she didnt respond….. He thought that she is upset thinking about marriage….
Sanskar:angel dont worry…. Nothing will happen….. Pls smile angel…..
Swara:Sanskar who is ur papa???
Sanskar:haan???
Swara:cant u hear??? Who is ur father??? Whats his name???
Sanskar:swara wo…
Swara:what vo Sanskar????
Sanskar:swara promise me u wont get angry on listening his name….
Swara:u first tell me sanskar….
Sanskar:swara wo kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi…. He is my father….
Swara:y u didn’t tell me sanskar????
Sanskar:swara i didn’t think to hide it….. It happen naturally….
Swara:sanskar u know i hate that man…. Even i cant work under him…. I resigned that job…. How can u think that i can live with him….
Sanskar:swara even i hate that man…. I dont like him…. Even i dont want the world to know that i m his son…. So that only i m living in a seperate house…..
Swara:sanskar atleast u could have told me right????
Sanskar:angel i was afraid that u will hate me plus i didn’t hide that knowingly pls angel dont get angry on me….
Swara:i m angry on u….. Dont talk to me…..
Sanskar:angel pls…. U know that u r my life…. I cant live without u angel…..
Swara:then be ready for the punishment…..
Sanskar:ya sure…. I will bear any kind of punishment….
Swara:then write in a paper that “i m sorry and i wont hide anything from u”…..
Sanskar:wow simple…. Wait i will write and give u now itself…..
Swara:ha ha mr.sanskar its not simple….. U have to write 1000 times…..
Sanskar:what???? Swara i m not a child for this kind of punishment….. Pls change the punishment….
Swara:k then dont talk to me for 1 week….
Sanskar:swara this is not fair….
Swara:everything is fair in love and war…..
Sanskar:k i will write and come…..
Swara:thats like a good boy…. Tomorrow same time same place….. Come with ur paper until dont talk to me…. Bye….
Saying this she ran from there…. Sanskar laughed seeing his angel going and her crazy thoughts…..
Tata…. ??
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Aww so sweet of swara…. ????update soon… N Shan I just now read ur OS n commented it’s just awesome…..
Thanks dr…. ?ya i saw ur comments now only dr…. ?
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Thank you….. ?
awesome shan, truly fab. keep smiling , please post next part soon. 🙂
Thanks Ameera dr…. ?
Very nice…I thought swara will b very angry BT its gud…waiting fr next
Thanks dr…. ?First thought to make rift between swasan but when i wrote i changed my mind…. ?
What a punishment…. 1000 lines…oh god poor sanky…lol…
Epi was awesome dr…..
Thanks dr…. ?
So cute ?
Thanks dhara…. ?
Superb…Thank god! Swara didn’t start hating Sanky after knowing that he is KM’s son.
Thanks vyshu…. Ha ha s dr…. ?
Thanks vyshu…. ?
I thought a big mu between swasan. but you are always positive. . hehe.. lovely update shanu
First i planned like that only jwala…. But when i wrote it came out….. ?
Plzz give me d link of ur os.. or just give me the name..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-os-swaras-cute-love-story/
Hehe…I thought swara was soo serious and would leave him…!! But she became a teacher..!! 😛 Awesome..!! Loved it..!! 😀
Ha ha s swara became a teacher….. ?thanks dr…. ?
Awsm…
I really thought she will hell angry from him but really its totally unexpected…..
Thanks dr….. Even its unexpected for me…. ?
Awsmm…
I thought swara will give him a serious punishment ….. lol love u swasan….
Thanks Sanjana….. ?
Ha ha ha… lol ??? poor sanky… 😀 😀
Thanks nive…. ?
nice
Thanks dr….. ?
Awesome dear.. I thought there w’ll MU btwn swasan , bt thanx for not separating them