Hii everyone…
So here we go with the first episode:
The episode starts with a big lavish mansion. Outside the mansion, it was written as ‘SS’ Mansion. A girl comes running in the hall. She had wore a jogging suit and earphones in her ears. She is sweating. She is revealed to be sweet and beautiful swara.
She comes in the kitchen, drinks her protein-shake and then sees towards the living area. She sighs and goes towards the stairs. She goes to the upper room and opens it. She gives an impossible look and then enters in the room. The room is messed all over. All the things are placed here and there. On the bed a cute boy is sleeping and smiling like an idiot in his sleep. She keeps silent for second, then goes near his ears and shouts at the top of her voice, “ wake up you idiot!!!” The boy wakes up and gives a horrified look. Swara smiles like an idiot and says, “ shantanu is this the way, man?? Do you know what’s the time right now??? You are just a sleepy head”
Shantanu give her a “ you are impossible” look and says, “ yaa, yaa its afternoon… And then gives a serious expression and says Its only 5 o’ clock idiot… I guess you are Akshay kumar’s relative.. Swara asks what to which sahantanu replied, “ just a fitness freak” and laughs loudly. Swara gave a ‘not so funny’ look.
She says him to get ready as soon as possible so that she can discuss with him regarding an important deal.
The scene shifts to a different mansion
The time is 7 o’clock . A cute boy is seen sleeping with a smile on his face. He is revealed to be our sanky. He is cuddling with his pillow. Just then he gets a call. He see the caller id and a smile crept on his face. He picks up the call with full excitement and answers the call, “ good morning lado… Hw are you???” The girl is none other than Ragini. She replies, “ Bhai, good morning to you too.. Btw I m fine.. What about you???” in this way their sweet talk goes on.
So here it is my first episode of this ff. This is just an intro episode. In this episode, swara is shown to be sweet, but soon you all will see her another side too.
Till then stay tuned and plz let me know your reviews through the comments…
I m really upset that no one is liking and commenting on my ff, if you all are not liking it, i will stop writing my ff.
44 Comments
Nice
Thanks angel!!!
Its nice….. Who told its not nice???? No dr its awesome….. And dont stop ur writing
Thanks dii..
Good going dear
Thanks dear..
nice..
Thanks dear…
V.nice dear…Haww, another shade.. What is it*biting my nails.. Keep it up… Waiting for nxt..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thanks a lot dear…
too short Manuu…..*cute pout
Thanks dear..
awesome choti but next epi thoda aur liko and choti keep this in ur mind “ur stry was reallyyy reallyyy nice ” u know what in my ff also ,shanthanu is swara’s big brother…same pinch …bye choti …..take care….
sry choti now only i read ur intro part . now i get that shanthu is swara’s friend….
Thanks a ton for your sweet comment dii..
You are very sweet.. I will try to post the next part soon.. Right now I m busy so..
And yaa can you please give me the link of your ff???
http://www.tellyupdates.com/page/1/?s=once upon a time we were friends swaragini
choti,here is the link and mu ff name is ONCE UPON A TIME WE WERE FRIENDS…SWARAGINI.
Amazing dear
Thanks riyanjali…
Awesome…..?
Thanks dear.. Are you elder than me???
Nice dear…
Good goin dear……
Thanks xavia
Superb..update soon
Thanks dear… I will post as soon as I get free from my work… As i m busy with guests at my home…
Continue
Thanks apurva….
it was very nice dearpls update nxt part soon
Thanks adi… Actually i m a lil busy right now.. I will post the next part till tomorrow..
nice..!!
Thanks dear…
Amazing ?
Thanks dear…
nice
Thank you Vyshu dii…
Awesome manasvi…loved it dear….waitng fr nxt
Thanks dear… In which standard you study???
I study in 12th standard…nd u??
superb
Thank you dear.. Will you please tell me in which standard you study??
superbbb dear…
Thanks a lot Asra.. Btw in which std. you study???
Wonderful
Thanks tani…