Hello everyone…
Happy Diwali in advance…
I m Manasvi. I was a silent reader but now can’t resist myself from writing. Writing is my passion. And after all this useless talks, I m just going ahead for the story…
A short extract:
It is a story of a girl named SWARA SHEKHAWAT. So here we go with the prologue
Scene 1
A girl is crying in a boy’s lap. He is carressing her hairs and consoling her:
Boy: Shona, be calm. Don’t cry dear… He din’t knew anything…
But the girl is continuously crying placing her head in the boy’s lap.
Scene 2
Girl 1( the girl in scene 1) is talking with a boy and a girl on a video call. She was sounding too happy..
Boy: Devil see we both are going to come
Girl 1: Its ok my cutie, I will take care of that..
Scene 3
There is a big party going on. The host comes upon the stage and says
Host: This party is organised by Mr. Randhir in order to celebrate the success of his son… ( His sentence is interrupted by a girl)
Girl: What success party? His son is a devil.. He forced himself on me and shows some fake proofs..
Mr. Randhir mistrusts his son and slaps him hard… He tells his son to leave their house as soon as possible…
So guys here it is the prologue
I hope you guys will like it
Btw I m Manasvi Maheshwari and this is my first attempt of writing story on any such platform… So need your support…
37 Comments
awesome dear 🙂
Thanks rabia dii…
nice..continue soon..
Thanks dear… But what may I call you???
nice i think there will be some revenge angle in this ff as she showed fake proofs,,
waiting to know more.xx
Thanks dear.. You will get to know soon…
uwwoow ,… wander what happen next…
Thanks for your sweet comment dear…
Wow choti you rocked it haan it seems mystery good job and continue soon and don’t forget to inform me
Thanks a lot dii… I will post the intro as soon as possible…
Wow its awesome
Thanks dii…
Thanks rabia dii…
Go ahead
Thanks dear…
Intrstng..
Continue soon
Happy diwali
Thanks dii..
nice start chotu girl
Thank you so much dii…
Manasvi !!! u r new to this site rit…. welcome dear..
Waaa !!! interesting teaser … continue soon…Thnk u… ;-*
have a happy n safe Diwali… ;-*
Thanks dear… Welcome☺
Nice dear ?
Thanks for your love, Shrinju☺☺☺
Nice start. Eagerly waiting fr the nxt episode. Well a lil perplexed wth the plot. Hope the mystery clears soon. Update asap
Thanks dear…
oohhh finally i also get some to call me as a di…wowwwww u know what u r 2 yrs younger than me so frm today u r my choti ok done na ???? and to the story nice start dear keep going stay blessed…
Thanks a lot dii… I m very blessed to get such love from you all…
V.nice concept dear… Plz continue.. Waiting for the first part..??
Take care
Keep smiling??
Thanks for your sweet comment dear…
I have submitted the character sketch right now…
I dont know when it is going to be uploaded…
Its great eagerly waiting for ur first part manasvi. Loved it….?
Thanks dear…
If i m not wrong, you write an ff on udaan???
Hey dear i thnk u r wriitng frst time so u r welcome here..nd da prologue ws awesome…continue soon
Stay blessed
take cr??
Thanks a lot dear…
Seems intrstng…
Thanks dear…
So finally I could not stop myself from at least having a sneek peek of your ff.
So coming to the prologue
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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It’s more than amazing sisoooo
You are really an outstanding writer and you know very well how to make your readers to stay glued with your ff which undoubtedly an amazing thing
And I loved your prologue and surely I will get back to you tomorrow and comment on your all the parts for sure.
Luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuu loadssssssssssssss sweetheart ????
May God bless you ?
And keep going.
Thanks a lot my sweet dii…