Hey guyz I manage to write next, although it’s a short one but something is better than nothing…….
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chapter 33
Chapter 34
Recap: Swara-Sanskar conversation, Sanjeet and Bushra’s visit to Bhopal
Hotel room
Sanjeet was observing cold behavior of Bushra since they came back from Maheshwari Mansion…
Sanjeet: (looking at Bushra) what? Why you are staring me like this?
Bushra: why you lied there?
Sanjeet: what lie?
Bushra: (angrily) Sanjeet….don’t try to be innocent…. You know very well about what I am talking
Sanjeet: (smiles) No, I really don’t know
Bushra: (annoyed) why you said we are looking for a match for Swara?
Sanjeet: oh that…. Nothing just like that
She frowned at his reply…. Crossing her hands against her chest she gave her usual glare to him…
Sanjeet: (surrendering himself) ok dear…. I wanted to know something that’s why blurted all that
Bushra: (puzzled) what!!
Sanjeet: (serious tone) I think Sanskar started liking Swara….
Bushra: (perplexed) how come…. I mean how is it possible?
Sanjeet: haven’t you noticed Sanskar’s expression when I mentioned about Swara’s marriage…. The traces of anxiety and uneasiness were clearly visible on his face….. I am sure he has feelings for her
Bushra: maybe… but what about Swara? Does she feel the same? And if yes then how is it going to work…. I mean Sanskar’s life is complicated as you told me about his truth…. Will it be easy for Swara to accept it?
Sanjeet: don’t stress yourself…. We should leave it on destiny…. Just let them decide their own destination
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Morning, Laksh- Ragini’s room
Annapurna: may I come in dear…
Ragini: (looking at door) mom you don’t need to ask…. This is your daughter’s room, you can walk in whenever you want
Laksh: (teasing smile) seems like I am watching a star plus serial…
Ragini: (frowning) shut up Lucky…
Laksh: see mom… this is the real face of your daughter-in-law
Annapurna: Laksh stop teasing her….
Laksh: ok mom… well what’s the matter which bring you here…
Annapurna: I want to clear my doubt…
Ragini: what doubt mom!!!
Annapurna: I don’t know whether you both have noticed or not but don’t you find Sanskar’s behavior is weird towards Swara…. might be it’s my illusion but I think he likes her….
Both Laksh and Ragini smiled at each other…
Annapurna: (puzzled) what?
Laksh: (smiles) it’s not your illusion mom he is in love with Swara….. what an irony everybody around them noticing it except that two….
Annapurna: (cheerfully) if so then I am the happiest person on earth… Swara is just perfect for him and I would love to have her as my daughter in law….
Laksh: mom!! Easy… just hold your horses…. Don’t you know your stubborn son…. He is not going to accept it that easily…. Then Swara has to accept it, so it’s a long way….
Annapurna: (disappointed a bit) yeah you are right…. I wish he could be little bold….
Ragini: it’s ok mom…. Just let them go with the flow, eventually they will realize it
Laksh: (sarcastic smile) hmm may be after15 to 20 years .…
“Laksh!!” both Ragini and Annapurna yelled together warning him to shut up….
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We don’t know which way the wind will blow but you can set a sail which will help you avoid the rocks where others will end up…. Siya and Sanskar both accepted to live with their truths. All they bothered about their love for each other. It was a Sunday afternoon… Siya, Swara and Sanskar were there in a zoo. Siya insisted Sanskar for the visit, Swara has to come along as how can Siya leave her favorite companion behind….
Siya was enjoying it to the fullest, jumping and giggling at animal. Making faces and mocking them… it was fun for Swara to watch her like this but for Sanskar the visit was a forced one. He did it just for his daughter’s sake. Siya was happy and it was enough for him…. He was explaining Siya about the unfamiliar animals at the zoo. Swara silently admiring his knowledge and his way of explaining it to Siya…. Simple yet effective
Siya: (squealed) Shona di you know here we have aquarium also, there are so many fishes… come I will show you
She dragged her to the place, there were so many fishes of different color and sizes…
Siya: (pointing to a fish) di this gold fish is my favorite… and your?
Swara: (looking around) let me see…. That one, that red one…. I like that… ok Siya do one thing let’s count your favorite and my favorite fish…
Sanskar shook his head in disbelief looking the duo so ardently busy in counting
Sanskar: (to himself) look at her and they are planning to get her married…why she agreed to marry so early? Oh God! Why can’t I get over it…it’s her life let her do what she wants, why I am bothered?
After exploring the aquarium, Swara and Sanskar sat on the bench in the garden section, casually talking about some random stuff. Siya was busy in playing games on Sanskar’s mobile, reclining at a pillar little far from them….
Sanskar: (turning to Siya) princess time to go home, shall we?
Siya: yes…
They stood up and were stepping towards Siya when Swara’s eyes caught some suspicious sight… a man was standing few feet away from them, his gaze was fixed on Siya… the moment she figure out what he is up to she got panicked, running hastily towards Siya she yelled “Siya move”. Her sudden changed behavior was weird for both Siya and Sanskar. As she managed to reach Siya, she pushed her away making her land on the ground with a jerk… before Sanskar question her anything he heard a deafening sound….
“BOOM”
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precap: is it the end of their story!!…. as every love story is not that fortunate to have a happily ever after….
95 Comments
awesome..!! But the precap was shocking..!!
thank you chandu…
Wow… U have updated today.. ?
Superb part. But the precap is very scary..?. But plz don’t seperate swasan. Plzz.. ?
thanks dear….
it was just awesome……….
thanks dear…
oh the character of sanjeet is perfect, exactly the lawyer type I’ve known, hahah 🙂
anyways, no matter what you’ve written in the precap, I’ll wait for the story to unravel the mystery you tried to put up 🙂 , definitely a good one 🙂
I’m not aghast with the precap, but rather wanted to laugh, really….
Even though it would be the last, I’m sure you will do justice to all characters 🙂
As for the story, well I love the quotation like phrases you use in every chapter, like in this one “We don’t know which way the wind will…. others will end up”. This is just one I’ve mentioned but these phrases you use, completes the story on another level, I don’t know why but it tells a lot about the story flow itself 🙂
In most literature books you also can find such way of writings, I love it 🙂
Keep it up and tc 🙂 🙂
Ps. thank you for another chappy today as I thought you wouldn’t post today, thanks once again 🙂
I was
thanks dear….
I was surprised but a good one, sorry for incomplete sentence in the comment 🙂 🙂
hello there, well I hope everything is fine with you, since you haven’t updated your story a whole week. It tends to get a bit frustrating if you don’t post your story consistently, particularly when one is keen on reading it. I don’t want to sound mean or anything, but it would be nice if you just post a comment notifying the readers when you will be posting (after some time or so….)
If memory serves me right, than you did mention about having exams, since in my country we’re having holidays, I tend to forget the busy school timing. But whatever the reason, please notify the dates you might be posting, Hey no hard feelings 🙂
Take care and hope to read “Entangled love” soon 🙂 🙂
i am so sorry dear…. due to the sudden death of my relative i had to leave for my home town and couldn’t inform you all….. and my home being in remote area there was no network and no internet so it was difficult for me to inform you all…. but now i am back and today i have posted two parts….
What u mean by die in first comment dr…..no way…plz dr….dont do that…..
Those three are my favourite and we love them so much….if you want give some wound dr…but dont want to see any death….
I know this is ur story….but i feeling like saying that….
If i hurt u plz forgive me dr….
I really dont want to hurt u…
I love this ff so much…thats why i told that..
If u hurt i m really sorry my dear…
Epi was mind blowing dr….loved very much swasiya bond…..
Cant wait for next part dr….update asap dr…..
Once again if i hurt u im so sorry my dr….
thanks dear and don’t worry nothing will happen to your favorites….
nice update dear.. waiting for next part
thanks dear….
Plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t separate our swasan..update fast
updated…
Hey when wil u post next part ??? Eagerly waiting for it .
updated dear…
Miss u
plzzzz update d next part ……… waiting dear…………..
plz m waiting for ur ff…write soon plz
i dont understand why all writers are doing the same thing…guys its a request plz plz jus einform the readers before disappearing…we go mad waiting for the ff and it is nowhere to be seen…if u cant upload the ff juz inform so that we will bw prepared but u guys are going as u wish…and we refresh the page 1000 times to see if ff is uploaded or not…
hey dear i can understand your anger and frustration but my friend being a writer i know no writer would like to leave his or her work incomplete, its just because of some emergency or odd situations….. i couldn’t inform about my absence due to advent of some sudden mishap in my family and for that had to travel to my home town which is a remote area with no internet and no network so i was helpless….. otherwise believe i was also missing you all and my writing ……..
Yeah dear it was awesome…thanks fr such a lovely part..da precap is scary..cnt wait..pls post next part soon…
thanks dear…..
Yr bhumija pls atleast tell us when will u post … we will wait till den…but u just disappeared like dis …neither u r posting nor replying or telling when will u post … i atleast search for it 15 -16 times a day …so pls tell .its a request..
Plz dear update d nxt part
plz post next part
Tts awsome sorry for late comment
But when u update
thanks dear….
Plzz upload next. I almost check this page after every 30 mins to see whether u hv uploaded or not
i have updated hope it will posted soon…..
Finally u update thanks a lot. Hoping u r fine. Stay blessed yr. This ff is my best of best. So I missed u so much.
thanks Megha…. n am fine dear, i also missed u all alot
sorry dear couldn’t able to post due to some tragedy in my family….. but now i am back and updated,
When will u update 35 th part and if it is done send me the link
i have updated two parts yesterday dear here is the link
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-ff-entangled-love-chapter-35/comment-page-1/#comment-1973352
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-ff-entangled-love-chapter-36/comment-page-1/#comment-1970157