Hey guyz, here is the next one please do read and comment….
PS: Are you guys not liking the story the way it is progressing or is it turned boring? In previous chapter I got very less response….. if so then please let me know, because your comments, your response motivates me to give you more and better…… and if you are happy with the story then please leave your comments…. Your one word means a lot to me….. I am putting a lot of efforts to give you the best, I spend my nights for this…… please it’s a request to all my silent reader’s if you really like my work just let me know….. thank you guys…. Love you all
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Chapter 42
Evening, Garden area, Maheshwari Mansion
It’s almost a week to Sharmishtha in Maheshwari Mansion…. Swara recovered from her injury, now she was perfectly fine…. So, it was time for Sharmishtha to go back
Annapurna: (passing a cup of tea to her) So, Sharmishtha ji when you have decided to leave for Indore?
Sharmishtha: day after tomorrow…..
Annapurna: (sadly) wish you could stay here for more but I know your son needs you too
Sharmishtha: exactly, what could I do? I am stuck, my one eye is here and other there in Indore
Annapurna: don’t worry about Swara, we all are here for her…..and after this incidence Sanskar is extra careful about the safety of every one, he even deployed personal bodyguards for all…. I assure you she is all safe here…
Sharmishtha: (smile) I don’t know how to express my gratitude towards you and your family…. Really Annapurna ji the way you all cared for Shona is just commendable, now I am no more insecure about her…
Annapurna: it’s nothing in comparison with what Swara did for us, she earned our love and respect…. I must say you have given her best upbringing possible…. You should be a proud mother
Sharmishtha: (smiles) I am….
They exchanged smiles, after a silence of few second Sharmishtha spoke hesitantly “I was thinking if I could take Shona with me for few days, Ashu is so impatient to meet his sister” Annapurna wasn’t expecting this, she was little surprised though it was genuine, Swara didn’t visit to Indore even for once since she came here “I can underst…………….
“No!!! you can’t take her” Siya screamed
She heard them and before Annapurna could say anything she interrupted, both the ladies turned to her with bewilderment….. Siya hurriedly came up to them
Annapurna: (softly) Siya, it’s just a matter of few days, she will come back…..
Siya: (adamantly) No, no, no….. She will stay with me here, she can’t go…..
Annapurna: (holding Siya’s hand) bacha, your Shona di has a little brother and he wants to meet her…
Siya: ask him to come here, why she will go….
Annapurna: (stern voice) Siya, behave yourself….
Broken with Annapurna’s strict tone, she ran from there with teary eyes….
Annapurna: (looking back to Sharmishtha) please don’t mind, she is just a kid….
Sharmishtha: No, it’s ok…… I can understand her fear….
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Siya was running in corridor, her weak cries turned into loud weeping which was audible…..Swara recognized her voice as she crossed her room, she quickly stepped out to look for her…
“Siya….” Swara called out her name but the little fiery princess was so involved in her own world that she couldn’t hear anything….. Swara was worried, she strode behind her…..
“Dad….” Siya screamed as she reached study room where he was engrossed in work completely, startled by the voice he turned around….. the sight was displeasing for him, agonized with his daughter’s state he stood up from the chair and quickly came up to her….
Sanskar: Siya, what happened?
Her father, her panacea was there in front of her…. she immediately hugged her legs while crying….
Sanskar: (picking her up in his arm) princess, why are you crying…. Anyone troubled you?
Before she could answer, they got disturbed by Swara’s voice….. she was there at the door step, looking at them with anxious and worried eyes….
“Siya!!!” Swara called her name….
Much to their surprise Siya’s crying became more louder as she heard Swara…. little frightened with her reaction, Swara came up to her….
Swara: (caressing her cheek) what happened dear? Why you are crying?
Releasing herself from Sanskar’s hold, Siya jumped in Swara’s arms…. Clinging close to her chest she started crying again….. Swara looked at Sanskar with perplexed eyes…. They were trying to figure out the reason for her behavior….
Swara: (rubbing her back) shhhh….. you are my strong girl na, then how can you cry baby….
She made her sit on the couch and whipped her tears, due to continuous crying her breathing turned heavy…. Sanskar poured some water in a glass and passed it to Swara….
Sanskar: first drink this…..
Swara helped her to sip some….. they waited for her to calm down sitting on either sides of her….
Sanskar: (caressing her hand) Now tell me what happened?
Siya: Shona di’s mom wants to take her back to Indore….. She was talking to dadi ma and when I said no to her, dadai ma scolded me…
Sanskar and Swara both looked at each other….. It was clearly visible on his face, he was also not pleased with the idea…. How impatiently he was waiting to divulge his feelings to her and if she will go it would only make him more restless….
Siya: (looking at Swara) will you go??
Swara: it’s just for few days Siya then I will come back…. I also need vacation just like you
Sanskar was silent, he didn’t know what to say, though his condition wasn’t as worst as Siya but not even better then……
Siya: (hugging Swara) No, you can’t go….
Swara: (caressing her hair) Siya, see I am here with you for so many days, my mother and bhai missed me….. so, they also want to spend some time with me…
Siya: (releasing herself from Swara) your mother is bad, I don’t like her…..
Sanskar: (angrily) Siya!!! Is this the way to talk? Say sorry….
Swara wasn’t happy with his reaction, she glared him angrily and silently signaled not to acerbate the situation….
Siya: (teary eyes) sorry…
Swara: fine dear, you don’t want me to go, I won’t go…. Happy!! Now stop crying…
Siya: (cheerfully) really!!…. promise me
Swara: (holding her hand) promise….
Siya was all content and happy with Swara’s promise, she kissed her and ran from there shouting “I will tell this to dadi ma”
Sanskar: (looking at Swara) why you gave her fake hopes, she will be more hurt when you go….
Swara: it wasn’t a fake hope….
Sanskar: (confused) what??
Swara: yes, what I said was true….
Sanskar: (shocked) don’t you want to go?
Swara: off course, I do but not like this….. How can I leave Siya in such condition, it will make me restless and guilty….
Sanskar: and what about aunty? She will get upset….
Swara: I will talk to her, I know she will understand….
He took a deep sigh of relief, Swara’s decision was a delight for him though somewhere he was little guilty, guilt of withholding Swara here for his self-interest but as it is said everything is fair in love and no doubt he was madly in love with this girl…..
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Night, Swara’s room
She was thinking how to tell Sharmishtha about her promise to Siya. She knew her decision would disappoint her mother but she was stuck badly, it was impossible to keep everyone happy….. She was struggling with her own feelings when she heard her mother’s voice…
Sharmishtha: (flipping the pages of magazine) Shona, I think I should drop the idea of taking you with me this time….. I have seen Siya today, she was hurt to know that…. Poor kid
Swara was shocked to hear her mother…. As if god granted her wish…
Swara: Maaa….. Really!! I mean, do you really think so?
Sharmishtha: hmmm…. It’s true I wanted you to come with me but the way Siya reacted I think it’s not the right time….. you can come on next weekend, till then you have to find a way to sway Siya because it will be difficult for me to hold back Ashu for long…. He is so impatient to see you….
Swara: (hugged her mother) thank you so much Ma, you don’t know what you did for me….. I was in great dilemma….. love you Ma…
Sharmishtha: (smiles) love you too my bacha….
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Morning, Swara’s room
Swara sitting on the bed with a sad face, cursing her fate when Siya arrived…..
“Good morning Shona di” Siya squealed happily
Swara looked at her and replied coldly “Good morning”
Siya: are you ill?
Swara: No, I am fine dear…..
Siya: but you are looking Sad….
Swara: no it’s not like that but you are looking very happy today, what’s the reason?
Siya: yes I am…. There are two things….. first is a secret I can’t tell you and second is dad’s promise, you know what he promised me that you will live here with me forever…..
Baffled with Siya’s words, Swara looked at her blankly….. She was confused, why he promised something like this to Siya, what he is up to?
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Precap: Surprise, surprise, surprise…..
123 Comments
It is awesome…..
thanks dear……
Awwww…….. Sooooooooo cute episode…….
thanks Purvi….
It’s sooo amazing ff…!! It’s not at all boring…!! I liked every episode of this ff…!! waiting for next part…!!
thanks Chandu….. love u dear
Hi dear.. Story is very nice.. I wait everyday to read this.. Its one among the best stories.. Don’t think it’s boring.. Its really very nice
thanks dear, thank you for your words…..
AweAwesome
thanks dear….
Why are u thinking to end this ff dear.. Its one of the best ff in tu… Its awesome and i love the way u write.. Pls don’t end it dear.. Continue with the way u like and im sure it will be simply superb and will love it
thanks Sree…… i am not planning to give it an abrupt ending, it just that i want to know how you all feel about it…
It’s awesome.The way story is revolving is interesting
thanks Dear…..
No dr ur ff soo awsome dr….it diffrent from my other favourite ff….i loved the way u write……its soo nice….dont be upset dr ☺☺☺☺
Why swara upset???? ????dont shout at siya dr
And what is snky upto….??????Waiting fr next partttttttt????????
Update asap dr…..?????????
Part was outstanding dr….awesome…..?????????
thanks Madhu…….
It was really awesome dear.. Sorry I’m out of town so I’m not able to read or comment on previous episodes
it’s ok dear and tysm….
Hey don’t be sad dear… v al love ur ff..
N coming to d chappy it was gud… i undrstnd siyaz feelings bt Ashu is also small hez jus 10.. he also need his sistr.. n d way siya rctd ur mom is bad i dun lyk her… she did so coz she finds mother figure in swara n love her so much… was feeling bad for ASHU… n abt d precap sanky wil take swara n siya to indore yippie ?
thanks dear…….., and keep up your speculations…. soon you will get to know……
Di its just awesome n not at all boring plz continue u can’t believe Bt I can’t stay without this ff that’s the only reason that although my exams r going on still I come n read this…????. N the episode was awesome… Aww so sweet siya is n the promise OMG… ????????
thanks Vidhi dear….
N plz don’t think of ending it plz…. ?????n the episode was amazing…. Loved it ??????????update soon n inform….
n i will post the next part day after tomorrow…..
No no dear…..dnt be worried. ..its awesome buddy….waiting fr ur nxt update…its really interesting yaar…?????
thanks Dear…..
Its again awsme as usual… Waiting fr next
thanks dear…..
Hi dear!
Sorry to say yar but u hurted alot by saying that we are not liking ur ff
U know wht I’m obsessed wth ur ff
I wait whole day for ur ff and ur saying that ewe don’t like ur ff
Its really amazing dear !!!
Its awesome
U know its really diff from other ff with a new concept
And han don’t dare to.say from now pn that we r not liking ur fanfiction
Sorry if I had hurted u!!
Still waiting for ur next part!!!
i am sorry dear, i have no intention to hurt u…….. it just that i was confused whether u all are happy with the pace and story line of the story or not……. but thank you so much for your love……. and i promise i won’t say it again….
in really impatient to read ur ff. Its not at all boring . Its really nice suberbbb. My morning starts with reading ur ff only. If i got up frm midnight i will check it wheather u posted or not. I dnt know y but ur ff driven me a crazy. I am always waitin for updates impateintly. Sry for not commending daily updates. And one request plss if u cant update pls tell us once when will u update because we cant wait dear.
thanks Kiruthi….. i can’t tell u how happy i am to know your love for my work…. and i will post next part part day after tomorrow…
Who told you your ff is boring ah u r one of the best …its amazing what should I tell you instead of reading for exam I’m reading ur ff do u need a better example
thanks Prerana….. for giving your precious time to this…
Sry 4 late cmnt
who said dis ff is boring??? Dnt even think dat this ffs boring. Rly this ff is one f best ff in tu according 2 me..
We all lv ur ff.. ♥
dnt be sad f low cmnts. Sm f ur fans may hv wrks.. 😉 🙂
ur epi is beautiful as always
Sanskars promise 2 siya is soo sweet..
waiting 4 ur surprise.
keep writing dr
be happy always
thanks dear for loving my work……. i just need motivation frm u alll…..
Dnt wry we ll always motivate u 4 sure dr..
OMG….finally sanskar is going to propose her. Awesome chappy…loved it. Swasan-siya bonding is so amazing and so adorable. Can’t wait for d next ep.
thanks Vyshu……
Hey its awsome yar. u dont know how much i love ur ff .I wait for this ff daily n when i see its new part a big smile come on my face so dear post next part asasp
thanks Rupa……. i am to glad to know you like it
We r loving ur ff…dont be sad dear
thanks dear…
Bhumi cant you update next part today itself.cause my delivery date is tomorrow and before that I want to catch one more lovely update of your ff
i am so sorry dear….. i if you have informed me little earlier i would have definitely given u one more chapter today but it’s late so couldn’t possible…….. but promise dear i will give u more chapters in future…… all the best dear
i just cant wait………
have patience dear…
nice..
thanks dear…..
Great work !!! Do continue….
thanks dear….
Hey dear ur FF is awesome.. don’t think like that.. I love it.. waiting for next part
thanks dear….
Superb
thanks Anjali….
A big wala sorry to you bhumi di, I don’t know how I missed so many parts.
This part is so good, little bit confusion now I going to read all my missed parts…
Again sry…
thanks dear….
Beautiful part.. ??
I’ll tell you a secret.. Actually I didn’t love “Siya” at beginning.. Coz I’m kinda SwaSan freak that don’t like any third party in SwaSan love story.. But you changed me.. I love the way you building up her character.. She’s so sweet to not to love.. As always, love Swasan scene superb..
And Bhumija, don’t you dare to change the way you write.. This is a perfect story.. If someone wants a FF with whole SwaSan scenes, there’s lot lovely dovey FF out there.. But we want a beautiful, well balanced, perfect story..
Your FF gives me a great satisfaction like I read a good novel.. So keep it up.. ??
thanks dear….. and i know a story involves everyone not just hero and heroine… thanks for support…..
Dear relly its speechles..no words to describe da part..i love ur ff a lot..tdy swara nd siya bond ws awesome.nd i aways wait fr ur ff egrly…thanks for ur update dear..waitng fr nxt..post soon
thanks dear…..