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Episode 14
Laksh:enough…. (shouted)
Priya:laksh what happened???
Laksh:priya will u stop…. First listen i didnt love u at all….
Priya:laksh??? (Shocked)
Laksh:priya enough…. I just thought to alert swara about randhir but she misunderstood me that i love u….
Priya:then y u didn’t tell me????
Laksh:whether u let me to talk????
Sanskar:Priya laksh is right…. He didn’t love…. Before he tells that he didn’t love u mom declared u as her bahu…. So we thought to talk to u about this but before that everything happened…..
Priya:k atleast now u can try to love me right???? U too dont love anyone….
Laksh:whether i told that i didn’t love anyone????
All are shocked to hear that….
Priya:what r u saying???? I know u are lying….
Laksh:r u mad y i have to lie??? Its true i love someone…..
Priya:ok then say me the name of the girl….
Laksh:if i say the name u will believe me right???
Priya:s….
Laksh:then listen “I LOVE SWARA”….. enough now….
Hearing this all were shocked…. Swasan were shocked to hell…. Sanskar thought to kill him to love his swara….
At mm
Dp is pacing in the study room….. He is in soo much tension…. Ap came there and saw him in tension….
Ap:dpji what r u doing here??? U have to take rest now….
Dp:how can i take rest ap??? I can’t take rest….
Ap:y what happen dpji??? Y r u soo tensed….
Dp:(blabbered)nothing ap…. I was just worrying about some office work….
Ap:dpji r u saying the truth only????
Dp:ap dont u believe me???
Ap:no dpji…. Its not like….
Dp:(interrupted)Annapurna nothing to worry…. Leave me alone…. I want to see some files….
Ap:k dpji….
Saying this ap went…. After ap went dp gave a breath and closed the room door…. He is in tension and just seeing the mobile….
Dp(monologue):who might be this??? Only me,parvatiji and other person know about this….. Both cant do this for sure…. Then who did this???? Oh god whether i left any clue for them…. If they expose me none will believe me…. If i know who did this then surely i can convince them…. But now i do no what to do…. Whether this person has any connection with accident of Sanskar and my kidnapping???? But what they want??? After so many years y they are doing like this????
When he was blabbering here…. There in the downstairs dadi,shekar and sharmistha came to mm…. Seeing them coming ap welcomed them and asked them to sit….
Dadi:ap where is dpji????
Ap:kakisa he is in the study room….
Dadi:oh k call him down…. We have to talk something important….
Ap:ji kakisa……
Then she called the servant to call dp and went inside to brink tea and snacks to gadodias…..
There in the room dp is still thinking about this at that time he heard a knock on the door…. He got very angry…. He opened the room very angrily…. He saw servant standing….
Dp:what do u want???
Servant:malkin parvatiji,shekarji and Sharmisthaji all came so apmalkin ask u to come down….
Dp:k u go…. I will come….
Servant:k malkin….
After servant went dp washed his face….. Made him presentable and went down…. He went and hugged shekar and wished parvati and sharmishta…..
Dp:parvatiji anything important??? U all 3 have come at a time….
Dadi:dpji have u forgot about my ladoo and ur sanskar mrg???
Dp:no i didn’t forget….
Dadi:k i have talked to panditji….. He gave me some dates and i confirmed the date which is after 1 week…. So we have to start to prepare everything…..
Dp:but 1 week is very short…. How can we prepare everything within this short time???
At that time ap came and gave snacks to gadodias…..
Ap:haan kakisa…. Its the first function in both the families…. We have to do it grandly….
Dadi:ap u dont have to worry…. The marriage will be done grandly….
Dp:but how can we do the arrangements quickly???
Dadi:u dont worry…. I will c that everything…..
Dp:k parvatiji…..
Then they all talk for sometime and gadodias went to their home…..
There in the mall all were looking shocked on hearing laksh’s statement….. Priya felt bad and went from there without speaking anything….. Swara is in shock…. She didn’t know what to talk….. Sanskar went to laksh and hold his collar….
Sanskar:laksh whats this???? How can u love swara????
Laksh:bhai vo….
Ragini:(interrupted)sanskar whats wrong in it????
Sanskar:ragini will u pls be quiet i m not talking to u….
Ragini:sanskar y r u getting angry for an useless matter???
Sanskar:ragini r u insane???? Laksh loving swara is an useless matter for u????
Ragini:sanskar when swara itself quiet y u r over reacting????
Sanskar:(angrily)ragini i told u to keep quiet already….. Cant u know to keep ur mouth shut????
Ragini:sanskar….
Sanskar:ragini shut up…. Laksh tell me…..
Laksh:bhai pls let me talk….. I dont love swara…..
Sanskar:(left his collar)what????
Laksh:bhai i just told to priya so that she will leave me….
Ragini:laksh r u mad????
Sanskar:really???? (With happiness)
Laksh:bhai after knowing everything how can i love swara??? I cant say i love ragini as she is going to marry you…. So that only i said i love swara…..
Sanskar just hugged laksh and asked sorry to him….. Both saw swara who is still standing in shock….. Both went to swara and shaked her…. After gaining her sense she started to beat laksh….
Swara:laksh how dare u???? How can u say u love me???? U idiot, stupid ah… In tension i m not getting any bad word…..
Laksh:swara cool down…. Even in my dream i cant love you…. I just said that to priya so that she will leave me….
Swara:really????
Laksh:(keeping his first and thumb finger in his neck)mummy promise…..
Swara:k fine…. Wait wait what u said that u cant love me in dream???? Am i that much bad???? (With pout)
Hearing her question sanlak doesnt know whether to laugh or be sad for her…..
Laksh:no no not like that….. U r my best frnd….. Plus who can bear ur torture whole life….
Sanskar:(in mind)i can bear her Laksh….. I will be very lucky if a situation comes where we both can spend our life together…. Oh god pls do something and make swara as my wife pls god…. Will do everything what u ask….
His mind voice is disturbed by swara’s sweet voice….
Swara:laksh how mean u r???? I wont talk to u bye….
Saying this swara went out….. Laksh went behind her to pacify her….. Sanskar is enjoying all her cute behaviours…… Ragini saw all this and anger took over her thinking how sanlak enjoying with swara and also she thought how sanskar behaved with laksh when he told he loves swara…… She started to get afraid that whether sanky will be away from her…. She thought to talk with dadi….
There swara didn’t get convinced with laksh…..
Laksh:k meri ma tell me what i have to do make u smile????
Swara:ice cream….
Laksh:what ice cream???
Swara:oh laksh u do no ice cream??? Haven’t u eaten it???? So sad…. Wait i will tell u how it will be….. It will be very sweet and cool…. There are many falvours…. In that flavour i love butterscotch a lot….
Laksh:(shouted)stop it swara….
Swara:(looked with innocent eyes)what happened laksh????
Laksh:oh my god swara i know what is ice cream…. Even i have eaten….
Swara:then y u asked me???
Laksh:offo swara…. Leave it whether u want ice cream??? If i get it u will be alright right???
Swara:(with puppy eyes)haan yes….
Laksh:seriously u r a kid swara…. Come….
At that time even sanskar and ragini came….. Then laksh told about ice cream party to them….
Ragini:laksh i dont like ice cream….. So i and sanskar will go home…. U both enjoy…..
Swara:ragini dont u like ice cream???? Omg i m hearing it for first time….. If u taste it once even u will like it no no u will love it a lot….
Ragini:(frustrated but in calm tone)swara if u like ice cream u enjoy…. Dont compel me….. We are going…. Come Sanskar…..
Sanskar:ragini same applies to u…. If u want to go u go…. Dont take decision for me….
Ragini:(composing)sanskar no i m not feeling well thats y….
Swara:ya guys u go…. Sanskar ragini is not well so u go…. Laksh is there…. We will come….
He cant say no as ragini said she is not well….. Without any option sanskar went with ragini and swara went with laksh to eat her favourite ice cream…..
In whole journey sanskar didn’t speak to ragini as he is very angry on her….. Then he dropped in her home and went straight to his room without talking anything to ragini…. Ragini is angry, sad and hurted….. She just went to her room cryingly…. Dadi got worried seeing her and went behind her and pacified her and made her sleep…..
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Whats is dp afraid of???
What incident he is talking about??? Whether the same incident is the reason of swara revenge????
Who is the third person???
Think guys think….. Guys whether its boring??? We know u all are waiting for swara’s reason for revenge….. Pls be patience guys…. We will reveal it slowly….. Read and give us good comments….. We need more response guys…. Then only will post next part…. ?
Bye bye…. ??
JWAN(Jwala and Shan)
23 Comments
loved it
I love swara must be some reason love this episode
awesome…..
waiting for suspense……..loved my dolls innocent act
Superb
nice
Superb Love it dear
awesome shan and jwala. i am sorry for not commenting in previous epi coz i read it recently only. u both are doing a fantabulous work. love ya both. keep smiling 😉 🙂
awesome…!! thank god… you didn’t give any heart attack in this..!!
There must be some reason for swaras revenge, bcz she is my cute doll.Without any reason, she never do anything.About chappy, awsm as always.Waiting for nxt jwan di.
Take care
Keep smiling
Suprb epi wr lucky itself confont priya dat he does nt love her. And nxt with hus answr sanskar got heart attack.. finaly he ovrcame and ended with rags getting hurt.. rags y dont u feel for lucky???? And hate dadi she is always cunning nd planning to spoil evry1 lyf.. so gear up d story jwan…wil b waiting
Amazing drrr..
OMG …. OMG …. OMG …. OMG ….
Hii jwala di n shan …. today only I read all episode of ur ff and they are awesome …
In 1st to 7th episode I was felt very awesome seeing sanky ‘s jealousy and randhir’s entry … and I was irked seeing ragini’s behaviour ….
And after that epi I was shocked knowing about SWARA …. really she in negative role ….. after that only one word came out of my mouth omg …….. and I got a minor heart attack ….
and seriously I thought to read only 7 to 8 episodes today and rest tomorrow …. but seriously I was so involved in reading that I read all eepisoes today only ….
wow jwala di …. this time really a autograph ….. and shan u r also a awesome writer …..
love u JWAN ….
awesome
Oh dr……this dadi…….ahhhhhh….
But epi was awesome dr….just coool….
Poor swara……lucky rock swara shock…lol….awesome dr….next part sooooooooon dr…………..
Awesome dear…
Awsm part
Shan and di, only u can fulfil Sanskar wish.
Really loving Sanky and heartless queen swara.
thank God. no randhir today *happy
but, i swear Shan, i know nothing bout the accident or swara’s revenge..believe me :3
Not at all boring. Continue.
Awsm..
Nice… Update next one soon
Awesome
Awesome….but ur very late yar….I was waiting for the update… Anyways, nice update dear…??