Episode 16
Sanskar:doctor what r u saying??? Food poison but she just ate keer…
Doctor:do no mr.maheshwari… But we have to complain to police as this is a murder case…
Randhir:doctor what r u saying???? U told its just food poison… Now i r saying something..
Doctor:even we thought its food poison but sry sir somebody have given her poison… So we have to complain the police as its our hospital procedure… Randhir furiously hold doctor collar and shouted…
Randhir:if at all anything happens to my swara i wont leave u and this hospital…
Doctor:pls be calm… Even we r struggling to make her normal… Pls have faith in god… Everything will be alright…
Randhir:i m sry doctor but pls save my cutie… She is my life and everything…
Doctor:its k i can understand… Dont worry…
Saying this doctor went… Randhir is crying a lot… Sanskar is standing in a shock… He do no what to say… He is standing just like a lifeless body… Laksh is in dilemma whom to convince as both randhir and sanskar are sad… He just stood numb… At that time police came… Seeing the police ap and dp were afraid…
]Police:hello mr.maheshwari.
. Dp:hello sir…
Police:we got a complain from police that someone poisoned ur guest food…
Dp:s sir she is in treatment now…
Police:shall i know what happen???
Dp:we do no inspector… My son sanskar was only there with her…
Police:k sanskar shall u say what happened???
Sanskar:—-Seeing him in shock laksh went and shake him… He got out from his shock… He just stood numb seeing police…
Police:sanskar can u say what happened???
Sanskar:sir i went to drink water at that time i heard some murmuring sound from swara… To make her normal i went near her and made her normal… After that she asked me keer… I prepared her and gave her… After eating she got unconscious…
Police:whether she alone ate???
Sanskar:no inspector even i ate…
Police:whether she has allergy of anything????
Sanskar:i do no…
Randhir:no sir she didn’t have any allergy… Police:sanskar have u mixed anything????
All were shocked hearing police… Dp got very angry… Dp:inspector what are u saying??? Police:its our formal enquiry mr. Maheshwari pls cooperative us… Sanskar:sir i didnt add anything… Police:but u have to come to station… [Dp:inspector he is saying right he didn’t add anything???
Police:we cant believe his statement… Let the victim open her eyes… After hearing from her we will leave him…
Sanskar:papa dont worry… I didnt do any wrong… Nothing will happen…
Then sanskar went with police… Dp went out and took his phone and called lawyer…
Dp:hello lawyer sir… (told everything)
Lawyer:sir i m sry as today is sunday we have to wait till monday for bail sir…
Dp:what r u saying??? Till that my son have to be in jail???? No chance… Lawyer:sir i can understand ur emotions… Bt we dont have any other option…
Dp:u cant say this… Lawyer:sir we can bring ur son only if that girl gets her conscious…
Dp:k lawyer sir…
Dp went inside the hospital and told everything to ap and laksh… They were praying for swasan… Ap thought that all this was happening due to ragini’s kundli and thought to stop this marriage…
At that time doctor came out and told everyone that swara is safe and she is out of danger… All were very happy… Randhir was like he got his life…
Randhir:doctor i want to c my cutie…
Doctor:wait for few minutes we will shift her to normal ward after that u can see her…
Randhir:thank you so much doctor…
Then after 30 minutes swara is shifted to normal ward… Doctor told that it will take nearly 5-6 hours for swara to gain her conscious… All went to their house… Randhir alone present in the hospital… After 6 hours swara opened her eyes… Seeing her opening her eyes randhir called doctor… He came and checked her and told everything is well… After doctor went randhir came and hold swara’s hands… Randhir:swara how r u???
Swara:i m fine randhir…
Randhir:u scared me like anything… K leave it tell me wjat happened???
When she opened her mouth to say something police came to interrogate her… Police:hello miss. Swara how r u now???
Swara:i m fine sir…
Police:can u tell me what happenend????
Swara:(told everything)
Police:do u suspect sanskar in this????
Swara:no sir… He cant do this to me…
Police:r u sure??? Whether u r saying this in any pressure????
Swara:no sir… Sanskar is innocent…
Police:k mam…
Then police went from there… Swara laughed… Seeing her laughing randhir went near her…
Randhir:swara what happened??? Y r u laughing???
Swara:dp would have been crying for sending his son to jail right??? I missed this chance… Randhir:what r u speaking swara??? Swara:randhir i missed the poison in my keer… I know the blame will land on sanskar and he will be jailed… I want dp to suffer…
Randhir slapped swara hardly… Swara is shocked… Swara:randhir???
Randhir:dont talk to me… R u mad???? Will u go to this extent for ur revenge???? If at all mom and papa knows about this what will be their condition???? U r just selfish swara… Swara:randhir pls dont say this to mom and dad… They will be shattered… Pls i promise i wont do such things in future… Pls i cant be without talking to u…pls forgive ur cutie… (with puppy eyes)
Randhir:dont show this expression to me… U very well know that i will melt… Stop it swara…
Swara:he he he…
Randhir:k tell me then y u didn’t say against sanskar???? U want him to go to jail right???
Swara:i just want dp to suffer but dont want sanskar to suffer… Randhir:do u love Sanskar????
Swara:r u mad??? He is just my good frnd…
Randhir:ha ha nice joke cutie… I believe it…
Swara:c randhir even if laksh was in the place of sanskar surely i would have done the same… Randhir:seriously???
Swara:oh randhir believe me…
Randhir:k k now take rest…
There in mm dp came with sanskar… Laksh, ap, dadi, ragini, shekar and shomi were there… Seeing him ap came and hugged sanskar… Sanskar:mom i m fine… Pls dont cry…
Ap:sanskar whether they beat u???
Sanskar:mom i think u saw many flims… Ap:haan???
Sanskar:mom they didn’t do anything… I m alright… How is swara mom???
ap:she is fine sanskar… Thank god she told that u didn’t do anything…
Dp:ap do u going to talk to him like this??? Go and bring something to eat…
Dadi:sanskar u r fine right???
Sanskar:haan dadi… Dadi:dp they will say that if something bad happens then we have to do some good… So will plan for ragini and sanskar marriage..
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Sanskar is shocked… Dp is giving disgusting looks to dadi… Shemish and ragini were happy… Before dp could say anything ap came there and gave snacks to sanskar…
Ap:sanskar have this… Kakisa this marriage wont happen…
All were shocked hearing this… Sanskar is very very happy…
Dadi:ap i didn’t ask ur decision…
Ap:kakisa u r talking about my son marriage and this marriage wont happen…
Dadi:dp whats this??? Do u remember everything??? I can do anything…
Dp:ap whats this???? Ap:dpji i have been silent till today… But hereafter i wont keep quiet…
Dadi:ap u have to make ragini ur bahu otherwise u have to face the consequence…
Ap:i will face any consequence…
Dp:(shouted)Annapurna…
Ap:dont shout… My son’s life is in danger… Dp:what r u saying???
Ap:haan ragini’s kundli is danger for our sanskar… Even panditji told that if sanskar and ragini..
Sanskar:mom pls dont talk like this… U r very important to me… Nothing is big than u for me… If u dont want this marriage then i wont do it…
Dp:sanskar she is only talking like this but u too??? Dont u respect me???
Sanskar:papa mom is important for me… Her decision is my decision…
Saying this sanskar went from there… Ragini went from there cryingly… The word “inauspicious” is hearing continously in shemish and dadi’s ears… They thought that history shouldn’t repeat…
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Guys read and comment… Hows it???
What history is repeating???
With love…
JWAN(Jwala and
33 Comments
Nice dii would you like to be my friend..I am friend of janvi ..she is great writer her may I know is it true
Karishma dii ghar pe toh bolti ho ki I am loser and here using my name for making friends big cheater
luv you soo much swara.. you are true heartless queen ever..
and randhiiiirrr… you are still there, thought you already gone. huh
luv it jwan…..
Nice but I want to no secret plz update regularly plz nice writing jwala
boring and crap
Hello dr….. Welcome to our ff…. U know what if anyone is beautiful their parents will keep a black dot on the girls face…. Its bcoz nobody’s eyes should fall on that girl…. In the same way u r the black dot for our ff…… So that i have to thank you dr….. Thank you soo much….. Ur this comment made us happy that our ff is very nice…..
Shan dii it was such a bigsurprise….did jwala dii is also from dindgul,tamil nadu…..o
Nice,fantaculous , incredible and mindblowing
No dr jwala is from kerala…..
Hey you ragsan love.r .. don’t act smart …u are not a queen of here …showing attitude ……can you imagine and write …..chhoo you can’t write only registered members have right…I know you people very well … Didn’t have work then just bashing …
And yaaa shan dii is my friend and jwala di. Is good writer so pls stay away ..we swasanians and raglakians are triple than ragsanians ..we don’t bash you …you also should not…
Janvi vyas
awesome..!! Precap was interesting and suspense
Jwala and shan… I think some paragraphs were missing… I just wana say…. ADIPOLI ayittu ind
S dr….. Thanks for mentioning it dr….
Ap:haan ragini’s kundli is danger for our sanskar….. Even panditji told that if sanskar and ragini get married then it will cost sanskar life….. But at that time kakisa made me quiet…. But after all this incidents its proved Ragini is inauspicious to our home…. This marriage wont happen…. If u accept this then i wont be in this house…. Decision is urs….
Thank you dear! This part was superb! ??
Heltej so you r a malayali?
Yes dear… M from alappuzha ?
Update next soon want to know the history …
nice
Wow super .????omg swara tho bahut chalu nikle. She can go any extent to take revenge.it means she is hurt deeply that is making her do all these.I think that history is related to Swara .I mean her mom.they all didn’t see swaras mom upto now right.omg my chotu sa brain will blast by thinking. Will be waiting for next part.post asap.
nice
nice
awsm dear
What, swara mixed the poison???. I am dumbstruck.But I got to know one thing that is swara randhir se pyar nehi karti, yapiee??.Keep it up guys. Waiting for nxt.
Take care
Keep smiling
Love you loads????
Nice
Awsm part di and shan..
Just loving more and more my heartless queen…
Awesome… Want to know the reason of swara’s revenge….
Update next one soon
Awesome dear.. Too good
Wow it was just fabulous hats off to both of you
Super Dr….
Nice
I think swara is shemish daughter n something happened with her in the past because of dp and that’s why she hates dp………..The word “inauspicious” is hearing continously in shemish and dadi’s ears… They thought that history shouldn’t repeat… I think this words was used for swara in the past that’s why the gadodiya family is afraid………….. Please show some flashbacks of past so that we can understand it clearly…………..awesome update but I think something was missing in ap’s dialogue………post the next part soon …….????
Wow superb……what an epi dr….cant wait fr know the truth behind swar’s behavier…..
And dr you well said to that ragsan lover….black dot….
Seriously i missed that person in every swasan ff……
Once again epi was,awesome dr….cant wait fr next part…… update asap dr…..
Awesome
I think Swara is misunderstanding dp…. Nice update dear..