ohhkkk. am back once again.. with the part.. thanks for your supported.. & comments… & dear mica. hope u understand the song..
reacap: San’s leaving… & swara sad…
A LOVE STORY
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PART-18
AfTeR 5 DaYs…
swara was working in her home…. & its a office office work…. just she get a mail… & open hep Skype.. & a bless smile appear on her face… she msg rag…to come in sometime
Sw:sanskar… (looks screen)
San:(smile..) good morning.. baby.. look am now taking dinner.. wanna join..??
Sw:(laugh) no.. u eat . & say… how’s your meeting..??
San:well… its awesome….
Sw:congratulatis..
San:I miss u…
Sw:aawwn.. I miss u too… come soon… & I have a surprised.. for u..
San:what’s that..??(wink)
Sw:(blush) nothing.. come soon. I miss u..
voice: hey .. sanky.. u need anything..??
San: no.. Ella.. pllzz come… & join me..
Ella: (seat & suddenly kiss his cheeks..) hey.. thanks…
swasan both shock.. by her sudden accident..
Sw:(just looks at him giving a beth glare) sanskar….???
rag:(form back) vaiya…?? (swara looks at rag sad)
San: Ella,, what’s Is this..?/ I told u na.. I don’t like it..
Ella:(kiddish) ohh come on sanky.. as u scare.. like Indian men’s.. are.. with his wives…
San:(gulped) Ella..
Sw:ragini…(sad & hurt) if u wanna talk u can.. am leave…
rag: Shona…
Ella:(now looks at lapi) Omg. am sorry.. sanky.. & u both.. who’s Shona..?? he Shona..?? haa..? (hanging on him)
rag:why..?? what u will do.?
Ella: am jealous of her.. my sanky loves her so much… & I… (to swara) let me gues maybe u.. am I right…??
San:yes.. Ella.. she is Shona.. my love.. & Shona, she is Lisa..(daughter of his partner) in short Ella…
Sw:(happy. that he don’t hide..or flirt… but sad) hhh.. hlw Ella…
Ella: aawwwnn.. am so jealous of u.. swara… u are soo cute….
Sw:hahah.. now what I have done..?? that u are jealous..??
Ella: coz, u san was my supper hero.. my sanky..
rag:(teas) then are u became his hanky..?
San:(surprised to see rag like that) ragini…??
Sw:(smile) sanskar… Ella. take care.. I have work..
San:(knowns very well.. about her anger…) Shona.. I talk to u later…
Sw:(off lapi..)
rag: what the..?? why u don’t say hI’m…??
Sw:wht..?? look rragu. its common. in tthos country.. & its explain she was mentally kid.. I mean immature..
rag:(shock) but how u guess..??
Sw:simple. San never allowed anyone to hang with him.. by his shoulder.. even me… but he allow her.. & they way she was eating.. its clear.. & don’t u listen. she call him superhero.. I mean. only a kid dream about superhero.. &.. &. that chocolate.
rag: and if not..??
Sw:ask.. your bro..
rag msg him.. & the ans was “YES……… but. how u come to knew..”
ragini shock.. swara smile…. & wink.. “don’t tell him.. anything.. just say.. am angry..””
ragini laughing… & she leaves….
hear San make a flood of mails…. she won’t reply him..
same night….
swara was cooking. something.. & remember theirs moments in his home.. she blush… & looks her ph wall..
& murmurs.. “come soon..”
Lak:(teasing way) ooohhh nnnooooo..
all shcok. even dida too… : kya hUA…??
Lak:ajj fir khana jalla hua….
rag:(laugh cutely) hahahah… plllzzz. not again…. Omg..
dida:(hits her head…) hey bhagwann….(ohh god)
Sw:how dare u…?? (while she cooking.. some oil splash on her… she shout…
Sw:mmaaaaahhh… aaaahhh.. dida…. aaahh…
dida:(tensed) are,,, add clod water..
Lak:nooo.. added toothpaste…
rag:add salt.. then u don’t have any spots…
she wet her burn place.. & add salt.. & after next 10 minutes.. she add toothpaste… ragini cook rest… & dida feed Sw.. (actually she has a maximum burn)
at night.. dida add oiinment there.. & make. her sleeps….
@San’s..
San was restless. form past half hour…… so, he decided to end the meeting.. & come back.. He fixed all meetings next day.. & book tickets for next day night…..
2nd next days… (San’s landing day..)
swara was going to office… but milli.. drove her scooty. another way.. & she was surprised
Sw:milli.. where we going..??
million:wait.. dear.. wait…
Sw:aaaahh. I already have a injury. & if we met accident.. don’t ask I’ll kill u…
Scotty stops..@ that park.. where San proposed her.. first. & swara eyes were as widen as she was seeing 8th surprised of wworld… she just shock.. & happy…
milli:now even.. am getting late…
Sw:(come down form Scotty.. & stands)
voice: (concern) what happen to u..?? (looks her burn hand)
Sw:nothing. just burn.. but.. u.. when u come.. u don’t call me.. tell me anything.. we all are waiting for u.. Omg.. u come back so early.. I miss u so much… sanskar….. when u come… why don’t u call …….(words are lost in her mouth…. while he touch her delicious liquorice lips…. by his… raugh one… & she gasp…. he kiss her soo long…. (after kiss both looks e-o….)
San:I love u.. n miss u tooo but how many questions will u ask.. in one…??? breath…
Sw:(blush..) finally u came… u need 7days… let me call ragu
San:no.. wait.. I wanna spend some time with u… call her evening..
;pSw:(nods &hug e-o… for long moment)I love u..
San:I love u too
and tight their hugs….
at evening…
swasan was happily entering at his flat… just.. find all fiends glared at them…. both gulp…. swasan glared at milli.. who was laughing….
rag: vai.. wht is this..??
San:
Lak:look.. moti.. u disturbed us. till 7dyas.. & as he come.. u forgot us.. huuuhh…
Sw:
soma:yeah.. seriously..
neeta: what the hell.. is this snaky…
rahul:dost dost na raha…..
swasan:guys….???
rishav: guys… they are more then friends… they obviously need tym n.. aft tall… they love e-o (while holding soma by shoulder.. & wink)
San;guys.. before am going… their was nothing.. but I guess.. now.. have some chemistry… aaahhhnn…??
Sw:(laugh)
soma+rishav:(blush..)
Sw:no.. no.. snaky… chemistry physics.. many more…
all laugh….
rag:vai.. have food.. we are waiting.. till noon.. that u come
San:(smell sach boll…??
Sw:hahahahaha…
Lak:idiot. y u laughing..??
Sw:(nods in negative) nothing….
all shear a group hug….. a all gossip…
rag:(bit angry) wase vai.. who’s that Ella…??
San:(serious) look.. Ella is mentally 8year.. and my partner was notice when she was ile… I admitted her.. in hospital.. so…
rag:aaaww… wow… such my Shona vabi love my bro.
San:(remembered) yeah.. Shona.. u seen her in video.. but u dorn ask a qus..??
rag:she told me. about her mental conditions.. (wink)
San:(smile)
Lak:anyway jiju.. am leaving.. tomorrow my exams start.. and thanks to god.. u back… and I will study well…
Swara also leave… with Lak… dida call San.. & wish him…
@Jaipur.
dadi: sujata.. made Jaane ki taiyari karro…
sujata;jii.. Massa..
Rp:masa.. q na.. pehhle sujata or may jay… I mean.. app to jano hoo na.. sanskar.. ziddi hai kaiisa…
dadi:(think..) hmm.. bat to. sahi hai… okk.. pehhle tum dono jao… fir ph karrke batta dena made ko
Rp:jii masa….
@Rp sujata room.
suhata was happy… for the meeting with her son.. so long….. was jumping in heart… just her eyes.. stuck on Ap & Dp pic…
sujata; jiijii.. vaisab.. ashirbad kkaaro.. ragini ki tarrha manner bhe ek acchi bahu mille… joo ki..masa ke bind I ke sath sath sanskar.. ke patni bhi bann PAYE…. maji ne jiise chuuna hai.. wo USSe pasand ayye….. (I wish my son also get a wife with masa’s bahu.. he except her.. & find love in her…)
Rp: prathna kar.. ke.. sanskar.. kissI se pyaar na karese…(pray that.. sanskar.. don’t have any gf.)
they done their packing… & sleeps…
@Bose
sw’s room
swara was blushing while remembered his sudden surprise… and the while day.. they spent…… remember how he proposed her… she agree for married.. & still San have in his limit…
Sw’ s monologue : I love u.. so much.. only some day more.. than I will not stop u.. to use your rights.. even am carving for your love… sanskar…. I love u.. so much.. then u ask my hand to my maa…& we will stay happily ever after……. god.. is it really happen…?? to me….. Am so much excited… for our upcoming life…..
@SS
San room.
San’s monologue : am soo,happy… in someday… u will be mine forever…. then we don’t have any boundaries.. u are all mine…. but still if are with me… I can spend the whole life like this…. am just madlywaiting for that day… when I will make u.. Mrs. Maheswari.. infront the whole world……. u don’t need to hide… your vermilion.. from ppl.. am sooo such excited… Shona… I love u…. soooo muCH……….
both sleeps while thinking about e-o…..
but.. hear. some one is sleepless.. to think about someone…… thinking about his health…. about his exams… & contiesly pRYA to god.. that…. make his exam all good….
next part: Sujata Rp come to Delhi… & hear swasan was romancing…..
well… guys.. now my this FFs.. main twist begin… will all except swara…?? will swasan sspend a good life…???
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