Hello guys….. We “Chatterbox” are back with a ff….. Hope u guys will like this too….. and don’t forget to read end note
Prologue:
Scene 1:
A villa is shown…. Its a very big villa with fountain in front…. And is surrounded by a garden….. At the back there is a swimming pool…. The villa is looking pleasantly…. In the garden there is 3 men of 30-40 ages and were talking…. At that time 3 women came there with a cup of coffee for their hubbies and they too joined in their talk…. In some distance 2 boys of age 10,1 girl of age 8 and other girl of age 6 are playing…… They were very happily playing…..
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Scene 2:
The place is decorated beautifully….. A couple is there…. The boy is in his knees…. The girl is very nervous and she is kneading her hands…… The boy took her hands and told, “i didn’t even think that one day i will propose you…. We both know each other from childhood…. Even we have same likes…. I was surprised when u always support me when my mom scolds me….. But today i came to know the reason that u love me…. So that only u supported me….. At first i thought u as a good friend but after we joined the college i became jealous seeing some boys talking to you….. Then i understood i love you…. So i don’t want to take time…. I “SANSKAR MAHESWARI” infront of the whole world i am telling you that i am madly, deeply in love with you….. Will you change ur name from “RAGINI GADODIA to RAGINI MAHESWARI”…….
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Scene 3:
The place is looking like a heaven….. Its fully decorated with pink color balloons and cloths…. Here a couple is standing…. The girl is in her knees….. The boy is shocked….. She took the boy’s hand and told, “I haven’t dreamt in my life that i will propose a boy….. I always wanted a guy to propose me romantically….. I even waited that u will propose me…. But no u didn’t so i thought to propose you…. I “SWARA ARORA” proposing “LAKSH MAHESWARI” to marry me…. I want to grow old with you…. Will you accept my proposal and make me as “SWARA MAHESWARI”???
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Scene 4:
The villa is shown…. Its decorated superbly…. Yes a marriage is happening….. There are two couples in the mandap….. All the people around them and the couple’s parents are very happy….. But…. But…. In the couples only one girl is happy…. Two boys and other girl is very nervous and sad….. None identified that they are sad…. Even the girl didn’t identify that others are sad…. The marriage is over…. Only the girl is happy…..
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Scene 5:
The villa is shown…. It lost its pleasant look….. Bcoz its environment is surrounded by sadness…. The people inside were like lifeless….. A boy of mid 20’s was crying….. They have kept a photo of a girl in the center and wore a garland in her photo…. It’s her “Antim sanskar”….. The boy is crying and her parents were also crying….
“SWARA y did u leave me??? Have u seen ur parents how they are crying thinking you??? Please come back Swara….. Do u have any idea how i will live without you??? I can’t swara….. Pls come back…. I love you sooo much swara….. Its all my fault…. I shouldn’t have hided from you…. I didn’t think u will leave me and go….. If i know this i wouldn’t have hided this from you….. I m sorry swara….. “the boy said this and cried a lot…. All consoled him…. A girl from far saw that and laughed….. She called someone and told, “Don’t worry…. Now they will do their work properly…. They won’t double cross us this time…. “said this and kept her mobile…. She smiled once seeing the boy and the family crying….
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A/N:
Guys hows it??? Hope u guys like it….. This is just a prologue…. All these scenes will happen as the story proceeds…… And believe chatterbox the pairs are swasan and raglak only….. Don’t confuse reading the scene 2&3….. U guys know we are diehard fan of swasan….. So dont worry but yaa this ff will consist of 60% of swasan and 40% of raglak….. K now coming to the ff…..
1)who are the people in scene 1(u must have guessed)
2)whether ragini will accept sanskar proposal??
3)whether laksh will accept swara proposal??
4)why two boys and one girl is sad and nervous???
5)how swara died???
6)what mistake the boy did???
7)why is the girl happy???
8)what work did the girl talked about???
Ha ha…. Dont worry seeing this much questions…. U guys will surely enjoy this ff…..
IMPORTANT NOTE:-
Guys before this ff we posted our combine OS POVERTY WILL MAKE A MAN BLIND but u didn’t gave us a good response.. guys writing by combining 5 ppl ideas is not an easy task but u ppl didn’t even appreciated or comment on our work… soo now if u want this ff then we want 30 plus comments with 30 different ppl… now it’s up to u what u want because we r managing our time for giving u our combine idea and here u r not even commenting… we our 5 different writers all we r having same and different both readers at least appreciate or comment for your favorite writer if u don’t want to comment for other writers.. no ff till now came who contains five writers soo now if u want this ff then u have to comment… otherwise we will never going to post this…don’t get us wrong but we can also feel bad… soo feel free for giving your opinion
With love….
Chatterbox….
32 Comments
Awesome..
Interesting dr…..
Nxt one soon….
Awsm Dr….vry interesting ff
Plzzz post soon
Awesome plot
Awesome ? And pls continue ?
Super..
Awesome
All my swasan writers are writing this so how can it be bad
But which rabia is this rabia di or choti rabia?
Keep rocking guys
Rabia dii ???
Rabia di
Hayyyeeee
Yani shocks milenge
Omg….it’s sooooo gddddd
Interesting.. continue
Vry intrstng…
Bt want swasan even more than 60% ?
Continue soon
Rabia di r u the writer of love between swasan gf and chatterbox Ur’s ff is superb nd plzzzzzz continue it
yess dearr im that rabia only and thankuuu sooo muchhh 🙂
all 5 devians…… 😉 😉
good work togrther…. 🙂 🙂
ya swasan forever…..
awsm, superb,amazing…. chappy…….
loved it !!!!!!!
post nxt asap na….. 😉
waiting……..
tc……….
soooo interesting!!!!
please continue
Interesting….
Waiting to read more….
Awesome
Dii’s its awesome…I am not taking evry body name because all are my sisters…I loved it…but no don’t you dare kill my swara..huh..if yes then big fat kutty….and please don’t make that villain ragu…all the scenes are bit confusing…rabia dii…please don’t give us big fat shocks.. Always your shocks make me go crazy…and all you five are going and making this to achha hi yoga na…???
its really amaxzing chatter vbox totally awesom
interesting..continue soon..
Hey plzzzzz dear ..put 70% of raglak den only I I’ll read…
Interesting….
awesome….interesting
Awesome yaar.. Plzzz do continue
Fab loved it and I think that lakshya denied and ragini accepted… loved it so post soon xx
I don’t know any answers except 1st one…!! I love suspenses…!! post first part soon…!!
nce
awesome sorry for the late comment