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Swarna :han to koi bakwas kare uss time pe to thappar to marega na…. And jo hukum mere aka…. I will try to fulfill your all demands…. Ok???
Anu : i think you didn’t read my previous part…. I previous part I already revealed that uttara is khana’s daughter…. Thanks for comments…
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And this is for all readers…. Who asked me not to kill khana…. Arey yaar in my ff there are 3 doctors swara Ragini laksh…. Sab kya chole khane k lie doctor hue hai…. They will definitely save khana…. You know what khana is one of my favorite character in my ff…. Her character is very close to my heart…. How can I kill her…. Just wait and watch….
So here is the next part….
Khana comes in between swasan and the bullet… Bullet hits her stomach….
Uttara : ammmaaaa….
All are shocked…. Uttara takes out her gun…. And shoots on raj’s right leg….
Uttara : le jao in logoko… Uttara goes to raj…
Uttara : u tried to kill my mother…. Now you will see what is hell…. Get ready….
Uttara turns and sees all are surrounding khana…. Sanskar runs to wards his car and in few seconds laksh arjun Adarsh carried khana in their arms…. Swara and Ragini is continuously telling her not to close her eyes…. Uttara runs to them….
Uttara : amma…. Swara Ragini… Laksh bhai pls save her….amma… Khana : utt… Uttu…. Iff….. Some…. Something hap….. Happens to….. To me…. U will take…. Take care….. Of…. Your…. Self…. Pro…. Promise… Me…
Uttara : no amma… Nothing will happen to you….
Ragini : khana please don’t close your eyes…..
Swara sanskar uttara Ragini and khana in one car and in another car all leaves…. They reached hospital in 15 minutes…. Ragini and laksh rushes to ot…. At that time swara faints due to weakness and stress…. Shomi holds her at nick time…. Uttara was hugging sanskar tightly and crying continuously …. Sanskar sees swara….
Sanskar (shouts) : swaraaaaaa…. But he can’t go to her as right now he has to stay with uttara as a brother…. Shomi assures her through eyes and takes her in a room…. A doctor checked her and gives her injection of Sleep….
Doctor : she needs total bed rest…. Now she will sleep for 5-6 hours so don’t disturb her…. All nodes….
Doctor left….
Shomi : you all go… I will stay here….
She caresses her face and seat beside her….
Baishali : mummy Ji… You go and take rest I will stay here….
Shomi : baishali you are also a mother right??? (looks at swara with teary eyes) after 19 years I got her…. Please let me stay with her….
She cries…. Baishali and pari goes and hugs her….
Pari : ok mummy Ji you stay….
Both goes to swara and pecks her forehead and left….
Adarsh and Arjun also comes to her but shomi stops them….
Shomi : don’t dare to come near her…. Get out….
Arjun : mom sweety….
Shomi : i don’t want to argue with you…. So please….
Adarsh and Arjun left with teary eyes….
Shekhar was standing there….
Shekhar : misti… Can’t you forgive us for once???
Shomi : Shekhar if you hurt me I would definitely forgive you…. But you… You hurt my shona… How can I forgive you…. Shekhar she is shona…. My shona…. My daughter…. You know na how much I craved to get her…. My dream…. You hurt her so much Shekhar…. I can’t Shekhar I can’t…. You just get out….
Here baishali tells sanskar about swara… He sighs in relief and concentrate on uttara …..
After 2 hours raglak comes out…. Uttara rushed to them….
Uttara : bhai…. Amma…. She is fine na…
Ragini smiles…
Ragini : she is absolutely fine uttara…
Uttara : sachchi??
Lucky (pulls her cheek) : muchchi… Actually that bullet just cut her side stomach…. It can’t enter in her stomach….
All sighs in relief….
Sanskar comes and hugs uttara….
Sanskar : chup kar pagli… Kitna royegi!??
Laksh also places his hand on her head….
Laksh : yes…. Look at yourself…. Looking like a ghost…. Go and wash your face…. Warna I can’t sleep in night….
All laughs….
Uttara hits him….
Laksh : aaao…. Uttu don’t forget you are a C. I. D officer and I am a doctor….
Nurse came….
Nurse : doctor…the Patient gets conscious….everything is stable sir….
Ragini : ok shift her in general ward…
Nurse nodes… Raglak left for changing their dresses….
After sometime all meets with khana… Uttara hugs her… Sanskar also….
Khana : sanskar baba stop crying…. See I am alright… How is swara bitiya… Where is she….
Ap : she is sleeping… Nusrat how are you feeling…. Thank you so much….
Khana : for what malkin???
Ap : whatever you did for us….
Khana (cuts her) : malkin I always thought this is my family also…. But today you proved me wrong….
Ap : no no… Nusrat….
Khana : then why are you thanking me???
Ap : ok…. Sorry
Khana smiles….
Uttara : amma….
Khana (turns her face) : don’t talk to me… Who is your amma??? I am not your amma…
Uttara :amma… I am sorry…
Khana : you hide such a big thing from me… You told you are doing normal job… But you are a C.I. D officer
Uttara : wo amma… I just thought that you will be worried…
Khana : don’t talk to me… Sanskar baba tell her to go…
Uttara hugs her more tightly…
Uttara : nooo… Please I am sorry na amma… Please…
Uttara starts crying… Sanskar feels bad…
Sanskar : khana… How could you scold her like this… Look you make her cry… (uttara) Uttu… My bachcha stop crying…
Khana : ho gya??? Now enough of your drama… Now stop crying uttara… Or your bhai masi and uncle will eat me….
Uttara smiles and hugs her…
Laksh : wah…. Someone is forgetting me… (keeps a pout face)….
Sanskar : Ragini don’t you think your boyfriend is half gi….
Before he could complete… Laksh starts to beat him….
Laksh : Sally… Asanskar k bachche… Tujhe toh mai….
Ap : ufff stop it…. Ragini how is swara….
Ragini : she is fine…. I just checked her…
Ap : now you all go to home… And fresh up… We will come here after 2 hours…
Uttara : yaa I have to go to police station…
Sanskar : ok you all go I will stay here….
Ragini : no… You all go… I and laksh is here only…. And it’s time to sleep for khana….
Sanskar : no…. I will stay here….
Laksh : sanskar…. Swara is absolutely fine… You just go and freshen up….
Ap : han sanskar… And misti is with her… Don’t you think you should give some that they can talk for sometime….
Sanskar : ok…. ??????
All left… Ragini makes khana sleep….
Shomi is also tired so she slept in Sitting position holding swara’s hand….
End….
Precap swara : you are not my ma….
Shomi and all gets shocked….Swasan romance start….
Sorry guys I am sleepy…. I thought to complete shomi swara wala part…. But I am hell tired…. So sorry…. It’s 1:30…. And my eyes are almost closed…. Even I don’t know what I am writing…. Sorry for this boring part…. Thanks for reading…. Bye good night sweet dreams…. Please spare me for grammatical problem… My brain is not working at all
25 Comments
Awesome…. Waiting for next one
awsome….. epi…. thank u for liking my ff?
I am also a big fan of ur ff……. u r too good plz post soon
Amazing… this was an amazing chapter… thanks for saving khana….. I loved uttara laksh and sanskar’s bonding it was awesome… and about arjun shekhar adarsh they should struggle to get forgiveness…. and precap swara tell that it freaks me plzz post soon I’m waitng for swasan and shomi part!!!!
Nice dear update soon??
nice
Superb continue soon
U can call me as greeshu i am final btech student
Its really an aswsome episode but short
Dont make swasan seperate
Shomi should not forgive so easily i think
S i m shanmathi only dr….. Thanks that u like my ff….. This part is very very nice….. Loved a lot…. Superb… ?
awesome part
Awsm….
Awesome..!! Why swara says so??!! that shomi is not her mother??!! Waiting for your next part..!! 😀
One more thing I want say… I am feeling soo good to see your comment that you do read my ff and love my swara’s character..!! 😀 😀
Waiting for the next one but jyst confused as to y swara said to
superb .feeling sad for shomi
awesome… nice update.. want them to strugle to get shomi forgiveness and precap why swara told this to shomi i think she hurted as her ma didnt came to meet her when she is alive.. sorry may be i missed to study that line as khana is uttara mom.. waiting for next part update soon
Where is last part
awesome
wow waiting for romance
Awesome
Wow loved it very nice epi❤️
Awsum.loved it..amzing..
Hats off to u …. u r writing at 1:30 at night … lol … thanks for update and it was aawesme …
awsm..
Amazing…….
Amazing finally some swasan scene cant wait
Amazing dear..loved it..waitng fr nxt