Tvisha : thanks dear….
Crony : thank you….
Nehapriya : sorry nehu… Oops… Sorry cancel…. Hmm thank you bhi cancel…. Aisa waisa nehi sochna chahiye… Gandi baat… ?????????and Han I will pray that you also find in laws like Ap and dp ????
Tamanna : thanks dear…
Greeshu : hahaha greeshu I know u commented on fb… I can’t reply there as I don’t wanna reveal my name… Sure whenever I get time I will post long update….
Mica : hahaha.. Thanks dear…
Anu : thank you….
Sanjana : thanks sanju….
Divyianshri : divyu pls post your ff… I am waiting… Thanks…
Swarna : you told that you will tell why everyone asking my name… But you didn’t tell… Thanks…thanks for your wishes… Misz : i love your ff…. You are an amazing writer…. Thank you…
Sny : thanks sisso…
Chandu : thank you chandu…. I am also waiting for next part…
Angel : after so many days you commented…. Thanks…
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Mahjabeen : thanks….
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S : thank you….
Dharani : thanks….
Prakriti : thanks kiddo…. Actually I have 2 ideas for os in my mind…. But I am not getting time to write…. And as I am posting daily for you all so this is getting difficult to write an os…. If you all want then tell me I will stop this for some days and write an os for you all…. Thanks….
Soujanya : thank you….
Kyanat : thanks di….
Sanya : haawww sanya… Maine bhi nehi socha…. I am an innocent kid you know ????
Thank you…
Swasanfan : thanks di….
Romaisa : hmm.. Good to see you dear… You call me whatever you want dear… Thank you…
So here is the next part….
All laughs seeing sanskar’s expression…. Swara glares at him and hides her face behind shomi…. Sanskar scratches his head with bright smile….
Suddenly…
‘ look like all forget us ‘….
Swara jumps in happiness….
‘ awwww… My ashwi Arab avni… ‘
She runs to them…. Bachche also run… But for her surprise children pass her and goes to shomi… Shomi was already sitting on her knees…. Trio hugs her….
Ashwi : dadi…. U know we were very eager to come here soon…. But mamu (baishali’ s brother) didn’t allow us to come here…..
Arab : han …. Now we are not going anywhere leaving you….
Avni pecks shomi’s cheek…. Followed by ashwi and Arab….
Swara (pouts) : this is very bad…. Ashwi Arab avni…. You forget your mamoni…. I will not talk to you all….
Trio comes to her….
Ashwi : don’t talk…. We have dadi now….. ????????
Arab : yes…. ????
Swara glares them with fake angers…. Then hugs trio….
Swara : i miss you three a lot….
Avni : we too mamoni….
Trio pecks her cheeks…. Then they goes to baishali and pari…. They hugs them…. All are very happy to see them….
Arab comes to laksh….
Arab : monkey lucky how are you….
Laksh : very well…. (then realized what he said) wait wait…. What did you call me???
Avni : monkey lucky ??????
Laksh : what…. But why ?????u used to call me bhaiya na???
Ashwi : but we changed your name…. Ragini masi called you in hospital…. We liked the name so much….
Laksh glares at Ragini…. Ragini laughs…..
Ragini : good job… Bachcho….
Sanskar : bachcha party….
Ashwi jumps on him…. Sanskar picks her in his lap….
Ashwi kisses his cheek…
Ashwi : how are you bhaiya….
Sanskar : very fine….
Kisses her cheeks….
Arab : we missed you so much bhaiya….
Sanskar hugs them…. Putting ashwi down….
Sanskar : i missed you too….
Avni breaks the hug…. Goes to baishali….
Suddenly baishali’s brother comes… With their luggage and sweets… Clothes….
Baishali sees him….
Baishali : chhote….
The guy comes in and hugs her….
Baisha
Guy : how are you di???
Baishali : fit and fine….
They breaks the hug….
Baishali : mummy Ji he is my brother…. Sahil….
Sahil takes blessings from elder….
Sahil takes the sweets and all…
Sahil : wo…. Mom has send this for you all….
Shomi : what’s needed to bring this all….
Sahil : wo…. Aunty mom told me…. That’s why…
Ok di I am leaving…
Shomi : arey no no… Stay here for some days….
Sahil : thanks aunty but not now…. I have so many works…
Baishali : at least stay for tonight….
Ashwi : han mamu please stay… ????
Avni : han mamu ?????
Sahil looks towards them with terrified look…
Sahil : no way…. You three… You three are not kids… You three are Devils ?????…. Bap re…. Di… Pari di what you both ate at the time of pregnancy…. This three made my life hell….Pari glares at bachcha party….
Pari : i told you three not to trouble them….
Trio hides in back of swara….
Sahil : di I am leaving….
Baishali : ok ????
Sahil hugs her….
Suddenly his phone beeps….
Sahil sees his mobile and starts to walk to wards main gate…. Without seeing the front… Just the uttara enters in the house… She also talking with someone…. Both dashes and falls on ground…. Sahil’s breaks in to pieces….
Sahil wides his eyes…. All are shocked…. Sanskar rush to uttara…
Sanskar : uttu… You are fine na???
He helps her to stand up….
Sahil also stands up and glares uttara with blood shot eyes…. Then looks at his phone…. Uttara shouts at him….
Uttara : u duffer…. Don’t you have eyes…. If I got hurt then what will you do
Sahil gets more angry….
Sahil : hallo madam… See my phone… What you have done with my new iPhone 6s plus…. Now tell me where you have sold your eyes???
Uttara : look Mr you don’t know who I am….
Sahil : i don’t want to know even…. Huh… 4 feet ki ladki ….
Uttara : how dare you to call me like this…. You duffer idiot monkey… Go to hell…. May God blast you….
Sahil : same 2 you…. Di I am going…
Uttara stamps her foot in frustration….
All are very shocked to see their fight…. Uttara sees at sanskar… Who is looking her with full open mouth….
Uttara : what??? Why are looking at me…. Huh
All comes in their sense….
Uttara comes in…. And sits on sofa….
She starts blabbering….
Uttara : how dare hi…. Nehi chhodungi….
Then she looks at shomi…. And compose herself….
Uttara : mam wo… Those criminals accepted their crimes….
Shomi : good… BTW I didn’t see your this avatar before…
Uttara (smiles and diverts the topics) : BTW…. Adarsh Ji arjun Ji what you have done with that parbati…. She is smelling so bad even after 20 times bath….
Adarsh and Arjun laugh….
Adarsh : wo…. We lock her in a room which is full of badly smelled kachra… She was covered by that kachra up to her throat and there is also cockroaches ants rats and every type of insects….
All looks at them with shock….
Arjun : what??? She did really bad with my sweety and mamma….
Adarsh (closes his fist) : i think this also less regarding her….
All remain silent for sometime….
Avni breaks the silence….
Avni : mamma we are hungry….
Pari : ok I am going to make noodles for you….
Arab : no we are not going to eat noodles….
Ashwi : yes….
Trio goes to shomi….
Ashwi : you know dadi… Mamma always makes noodles…. They don’t know any recipe except noodles….
Baishali and pari widens their eyes… Shomi laughs…
Shomi : ok I am going to make something for you….
Avni : wow…. You are so sweet dadi what will you make???
Swara : ma… Pancakes please…. Please… Please… Please…
Shomi : ok….
Swara jumps : yippee….
Three children also jumps….: hurrraaah….
Shomi : pari baishali…. Come with me. …
Pari baishali follows her and Ap also go with them….
Swasanraglak and bachcha party starts to play and chitchat.. ..
Shomi looks at them from kitchen.. . Her eyes fills with tears.. . Baishali and pari hugs her.. ..
Pari : for the 1st time I am seeing my home full with laughs. ..
Baishali : me too… Kisiki najar na lage.. .
Ap : Kisiki nehi lagegi… .
Swara / bachcha party : ma/ dadi jaldi….
Shomi : hmm….
End….
Precap same….
Sorry I know you all are waiting for swasan scenes but I didn’t get any idea so I wrote this…. I am sooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for the boring chapter… . Thanks for reading… .
25 Comments
Awsm …. bachha party were too cute …
It’s superb..!! Not at all boring..!! Loved it..!! Especially kids calling monkey lucky..!! 😀 😀 So.. Is it uttara-Sahil in future??!!
FAMILY TIME AWESOME DR…….WAITING FR NEXT PART
Nyc. N Sahil Uttars First Meet was Superb..hehehe.bt kya yaar no swasan scn today ??..bt np ..continue soon wid intense swasan scn..
Awesome…. When u brought sahil seriously i got angry on u as i thought he is going to be a new villian for swasan and again there will be a pblm between them….. But gosh u thought to pair him with uttara…. Its very nice dr…. And sry dr now i m not angry….. ?
Awesome. Family time super.not at all boring n bachaa party calling laksh as lucky monkey ???. Uttara,sahil fight???.nice .will be waiting for next part.post asap
Le ho gaya kachra hamari umidon ka aur parbati ka. All r want to know ur name bcoz watif u would have angel, ghost ya sumthng else Then tumhe support karne ki chakkar me hum sabki to babaji ka thullu ho jayega 😛 😛 😛 😛 :-P. Ha ha ha just joking. N u told us na u will tell ur name bt nt now so its ok. Actully they want to know ur name bcoz how would i know. M a human nt antaryami. Ha ha ha. And abt chapi i already told u. Samajhdar ko isara kafi. R u anusika? And i want sum jealous n possesive scene between swasan. Pls pls.
Superb Di…Loved bachha party…I think you have planned Sahil and Uttara…WO kahte hai na Di jaha pe Pyar hota hai vaha par ladai to hoti hi rahti hai…
Well Di, I don’t have any problem if you will not write Chappy for some days…But I want an OS…I love ur is so much..
Bye Di and Take care.
Love u loads
Your small lil sis
Nice
Awesome dear.. Loved family bonding
Awsm sisso…
I eagerly wtng for swasan scn ..plz update asap di..
awesome.. update next part soon
very nice
awesome 🙂
Loved it ❤️
awsome
Awesome
Aswsome always
Amaazing !!!! Loved it
update next part soon!
awesome dear
nice
Amazing but dont you think it was little Bit short but I loved it bubbly swara
Awesome
fantastic
First time I’m liking sahil…. He he…. Utt sahil meet was superb…. Lol but again waiting….. Uff really testing my patience now…… Mujhe swasan scenes chahiye that too cosy cosy type….. ??????….jaldi se de do otherwise I’ve to start dharna ????