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So here is the next part….
Sanskar comes out of the washroom… And sees swara in deep thought… He silently sit on his chair… With a angry face…. Swara notice this and goes to him….
Swara : wow… You are looking so cute… In an angry face…. My angry bird….
Sanskar looks at her with blood shot eyes…. Suddenly they heard a door knock…. (Guess who?!… anuj???poor guy)
Sanskar : come in….
Swara goes and starts to clean table….. Where foods were kept….
After seeing anuj sanskar boils in anger….
Sanskar : what are you doing here???
Anuj : sir wo…. This files….
Sanskar : hmm… Now you can go….
Suddenly swara’s phone rings….
It’s shomi….
Swara : han ma…. Coming… Ok..
Anuj : sir wo….
Sanskar : speak up fast….
Anuj : i want leave….
Sanskar (looks at swara) : for what….
Anuj : wo rakhi is coming…. I have to do shopping for my sisters…
Swara’s eyes fills with tears….
Flashback :
Swara 3 years old…. Adarsh and Arjun… 9and 10…
Swara : bhayu my gift….
Arjun : sweety your chocolate….
Swara : thank you bhaiyu….
Adarsh : swara look… This roses and this clips for you….
Swara hugs him…. Trio share a group hug…. Shekhar and shomi claps….
Fb end….
Again flash back….
Adarsh : i said no rakhi…. I have no sister….
Arjun : you are a killer of my mom….
Get out…. They push swara and arti thali falls down….
Fb ends….
Swara sits with thud on sofa…. Sanskar gets worried…. He Signal anuj to leave… Anuj nodes and left….
Sanskar goes to her and sit beside her…. Swara is bending down her head and holding her head with both hands…. Sanskar forcefully takes her in his tight embrace….
Swara starts crying…. Sanskar just rubbing her back…. Swara’s phone again rings….
Sanskar : shona…. Please…. Forgive them… Forget about your past….
Swara : i can’t sanskar…. I can’t forget that days…..
Sanskar : swara… It’s giving you pain…. Then why you can’t?
Swara : i don’t know…. I just don’t know…..
Swara forcefully get out from his embrace and runs outside…
Sanskar : swara listen….
Swara didn’t stop…. She comes straight to GM… Sanskar already informed shomi about her condition…. Shomi was just waiting for her…. As soon as she comes… Shomi runs to her but swara goes straight to her room….
While going she sees Adarsh and Arjun is talking about her….her rakhi gifts…. Arjiun has brought a beautiful pendant and Adarsh a earrings….
Swara goes to them and snatch those gifts and throw them out of the window…. Both brothers are shocked….
Adarsh : swara….
Arjun : sweety…..
Swara goes out and brings a large box… She again comes in that room and pours the whole box in front of both brothers…. 100 of rakhis fall in front of there legs….
Swara : see this bhaiyu… See this… (she shouts)
Shomi and all elders standing at the door… Bachcha party is in school (fortunately)…
Swara : do you Know what is this??? Have you any idea…. Any idea!!???
Arjun (teary eyes) : sweety….
He tries to hug her…. But swara takes back….
Swara (miserably crying) : don’t bhaiyu…. Don’t…. I am that forlorn sister who have two brothers but she can’t tie rakhi…. Because they hated her with their core of heart….
Adarsh : swara…. We… We are sorry…. Tell what will we do that you will consider us as your brother….
Swara still crying…. Baishali and pari tried to come near her but shomi signals them not to go….
Suddenly arjun engulf her in his tight embrace…. Swara struggle to free herself but arjun tighten his grip….
Arjun (crying) : sweety…. I am sorry… Please beat me…. Scold me…quarrel with me…. But don’t punish me this way… It’s paining a lot…. Your…. Your bhaiyu will die…. Will die….
Swara was crying…. But stop struggling to get free…. Adarsh also hugs them both and trio was crying…. Shomi ran from there while wiping…. Slowly they departs…. Both makes her sit on bed and themselves sat on ground….
Arjun : sweety…. I know I am a bad brother…. But give one chance to your bad brother please….
Adarsh : han swara…. I promise…. I will do whatever you tell…. But please forgive us… It’s killing swara…. It’s killing….
Swara stops crying looks at baishali and pari….
Swara : bhabi…. I want to sleep for sometime…. Please cares my hair na…
Arjun and Adarsh looks at her with teary eyes…. Swara just Lay down there…. Baishali and pari cares her hair…. Swara slowly falls asleep….
At evening….
Maheshwary family laksh’s father Ragini’s parents and obviously gadodia family gather in GM… Shomi baishali pari welcome all of them whole heartedly…. Our swara is still sleeping…. Sanraglak enquiries about her…. Pari told them what happened…. Sanraglak thought to lighten her food…. They goes to her a pour a full bucket water on her…. Swara gets up angrily and starts chasing them….
Date fixed…. Day after tomorrow is engagement…. Sanskar put his on her waist…. Swara looks at him then his hands… Then beats on his hand….
All gone after dinner….
At night….
Swara is sleeping…. In fact all are sleeping…. Shomi is sleeping with bachcha party…. Suddenly someone come in swara’s room… By window…. Swara’s room full with teddy bear…. A big teddy bear on the other side of the bed…. In sleep swara has a habit to cuddle with it…. The person throw the teddy on floor and lie beside her….(I know you all are right it’s none other than our asanskari sanskar)….
Swara turns and hugs her teddy which is actually sanskar tightly….
Swara (in sleep murmur) : auctu (teddy name)…. You are so hard today…. Why….
She makes a pout in her sleep….
Sanskar was seeing all this and starts laughing silently….
Swara tries to pull it closer but she can’t…. Sanskar himself move close and pecks on her pout…. which make her awake….
Swara (half sleep and halfly opened eyes) : auctu why are you looking like sanskar to me today???
She pulls his nose and said….
Swara : your nose is black and big but it looks like sanskar’s today… Why….
Sanskar comes more close and pulls her in his tight embrace….
Sanskar : because it’s me sweet heart…. Your sanskar….
Swara : oh… (then realized) what….
She opens her eyes widely then rubs her eyes….
Swara (whispered) : sanskar…. (then shouts) aaaaaaaaaaa….
Sanskar immediately close her mouth….
End….
Precap don’t know….
Hi guys…. How is this??? Small family drama…. It’s time unite bro and sister…. What say…. I don’t wanna drag it anymore…. So…. Tell me about chapter…. How is it…. Thanks for reading…
36 Comments
Nice….
Awesome… Update next one soon
Awesome…surely unite them according to ur story line but surely give them a big punishment….n keep writing dear..
Lol soo funny….and emotional dr…awesome
So funny
Awsme…waiting fr next
Awsm dr and sooo funny…plz nxt one asap di…
i’m enjoying your small family drama A.S….
as this was a part of your story, it’s sound so logic, you know,..
that brothers told bout their pain, but what bout swara’s pain ?
luv swasan scene…
Heyy.. Well i was reading the ff but wasn’t able to comment! 😛
So coming to the part its fabulous! But i wanna suggest one thing and that is that i don’t want them.to be forgiven soon!!
Its just like it will be an injustice with Swara! She had already beared alot so now its their turn .. So i just want them not to be forgiven!
Rest is your wisht!
Heyy.. Well i was reading the ff but wasn’t able to comment! 😛
So coming to the part its fabulous! But i wanna suggest one thing and that is that i don’t want them.to be forgiven soon!!
Its just like it will be an injustice with Swara! She had already beared alot so now its their turn .. So i just want them not to be forgiven!
Rest is your wish!!
Well i’m looking forward for the story! 🙂 🙂
I have one qus. Who is mehek roy. Is she ur frnd? N thanx yaar 4 compliment bt wat u tole in above dat u will end dis ff after swasan mrg? No no no. Pls. Add sum pregnent scene, mood swing .pls pls. And dis part was nice specially siblings convo. So it was. N ya pls unite them. And anuj ka chappy khatam ho gaya kya?
nice
Emotional as well as funny chapter
Mind Blowing Di…Loved it so much….Please Dont make swara to forgive her brother so soon…Loved Our Asanskari Sanskar….Please dont end it Di..It is one of my favourites…
BTW Keep Writing Dear Love u loads…
wow awesome dear
M8nd blowing teddy part is too cute …
.. love u swasan ….
achuu…it’s soo amazing today…!! 😀 😀
Loved the epi…!! Even I want swara and her brothers united..!! 😀
awesome… emotional and funny
Awesome
Loved it…
Ya u can unite dem… i think more dan them shekhar is at fault… she shud not forgive him n hez not doing anything for frgvns
it was just awsome…….adarsh nd arjun shuld suffer more……
osam
nice
Hello a.s
Actually idont know 4m where to start
I m silent reader in tu rarely comment on ff wen ever i open tu i see ur story i like ur title nd so many comments so i think to read but
Bcoz of works i postpone to read
But now iread all ur story in one go
Coz of that i miss that suspense nd excitement of what next but
From now onwards i read it regularly
Coming to days part its good nd its rite time ti reunite brothers nd sis that to raki is nearer
Nd be regular like this
Nyc .bt plzz let Swars Forgive her Brothers n Her Dad..Enough Family Drama plzz ??..n dnt worry u cn swasan romance wat ever u knw..n continue soon
mind blowing
I think u should unit brother and sister but make brothers to realise their make
I knew they did wrong by believing the five year kid but all this by that criminals fault na please unite their sibling
I m silent reader
Mind blowing part di❤️ plz don’t end it and if you wanna end it then plz come with season 2 this is one of my fave ff ❤️
Awesome. Abb bas yar.o can’t c this Rona dona.Plz make all unite n happy marriage rituals
yeah i thnk u shuld nw unite them..though thy dnt deserve,tdy thy r fllng pain nd tlng dat its killing but wat abt swara..?.thy hurted her a lot..
nd da part was rlly nice…