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Ok so as per voting I have to unite them…. Forgive me…
So here is the next part….
Morning 4 am…
Two love birds are sleeping peacefully hugging each other tightly…. Swara is hidden her face in sanskar’s tight embrace….
Suddenly swara’s sleep gets disturbed as she was thirsty…. She smiles seeing sanskar hugging her tightly…. She caresses her face…. And pecks his cheeks…. Sanskar smiles in sleep…. Then reality hits her mind…. She looks at watch…. She starts to shake sanskar….
Swara : sanskar… Utho… Sanskar…
Sanskar irritatingly opens his eyes halfly …..
Sanskar (sleepy voice) : what the hell…. Why you wake me up….
He wraps her more : now sleep…
Swara hits on his hand…
Sanskar : aaaaw….
Swara : you are in my home sanskar….
Sanskar (while closing his eyes) : hmm….
Swara : in my room…
Sanskar (cuddles with her) : hmmm….
Swara : what hmm??? (shakes him) Sanskar Utho…. U have to go to your house….
Sanskar (damn irritated) : swara…. Mid night ko tum kya bake ja Rahi ho??? Bimari hai kya koi….
Swara forcefully gets out from his grip and starts to hit him with pillow….
Sanskar gets up and holds her hand… And pulls her…. She falls on him…
Swara : you idiot duffer…. Go…
Sanskar pulls her make her lay on bed….
Sanskar : but I hate no mood to leave….
Swara : please sanskar jao na…. Look if someone in my family came to know then what will happen???
Sanskar : what will happen??? I am your husband… Not any outsider…
Swara : han but… We….
Sanskar : what we…. Everyone is enemy of my love story… Huh…
Swara : what is this Sanskar… Look tomorrow is our engagement…. Then mahendi haldi… Sangeet then marriage… I am all yours then…
Sanskar : what… No no…
Swara : what no no???
Sanskar : engagement then directly marriage… And then… (smirks)…
Swara : what then???
Sanskar cares swara’s face sensuously….
Sanskar : what baby??? You remember mahendi sangeet haldi… But forget about the real ritual of marriage…
Swara (confused) : what real ritual???
Sanskar : suhagrat….
Swara turns in to crimson red…
Sanskar comes close to her ear…
Sanskar : and trust me swara… I will fulfill that ritual with full energy… I will not let you breath even…. (hye kitna asanskari hay ye banda ??????….)
Swara turns more red…. She can’t make eye contact with sanskar…. Sanskar sees this and come close to her face…. Sanskar’s hot breath falling on her face (readers kya kya likhwa rahe ho mujhse…. Ab hua tasalli ???????????)….. Swara closes her eyes tightly…. She is breathing heavily…
Sanskar (cups her face) : don’t blush this much Jan… I will loose my control now only….
Swara blushes more… Sanskar leans towards her lips…. But at nick time swara turns her face… And sanskar kiss on swara’s cheek sensuously… Then bite her earlobe… And kisses her there…
Swara gripped the bed shit firmly… Swara can’t take it any more and push him… Sanskar falls On other side of bed… Swara gets up and runs to Windows…. It’s nearly dawn…. The sky is red on the eastern side…. The beauty of full moon is increasing the sky’s beauty….. Some of morning birds are chirping…. Due to last night rain cold breeze is blowing…. Swara shivers in the cold… Sanskar comes and back hugs her….
Sanskar : swara..
Swara leans her back on his chest… She is standing fully on sanskar’s support….
Swara : hmmm…
Sanskar : promise me one thing….
Swara : what…???
Sanskar : we will see every morning like this…. We will live together… Die together… Death also can’t separate us….
Swara turns : you know what sanskar???
Sanskar looks at her lovingly…. She places his hand on her chest and she also touches his chest…
Swara : now close your eyes…
Both close there eyes… They feels their heartbeat…
Swara : it’s your heartbeat sanskar…
Then removes there hand and places her head on his chest… Sanskar wraps her by waist…
Swara : and your heart beat is mine….
Sanskar smiles….
Swara : they both beats with same rhythm… And they are interconnected…
Sanskar hugs her tightly…
Swara : if anything happens to one then other will automatically stops to beat…
She rise her head : hai na sanskar???
Sanskar kisses her forehead : yes….
Both looks at the sky… Slowly morning rays touch them simultaneously…. Both looks at the morning red sun and prays to God for their togetherness….
Swara : sanskar….
Sanskar : hmm….
Swara push him.. : now go… Look it’s morning….
Sanskar (pouts) : ok I will go… 1st give me my morning kiss…
Swara widen her eyes… : what???
Sanskar : hmm… Give me… I will go…
Swara : sanskar…
Sanskar : swara…
Swara pecks his cheek…
Swara : happy!?? Now go…
Sanskar : what happy??? I am not kid… I want kiss here (point his lips)…
Swara widen her eyes…. Starts her famous blushing…
Sanskar : swara… Don’t blush yaar… Come on… Kiss me…
Swara : ek baat puchhu???
Sanskar : yaa sure….
Swara : who gave you the name sanskar??? Though You are such a asanskari…
Sanskar : what to do… I become asanskari after seeing my beautiful wife… Pahle I was a sidha sadha bhola bhala sanskari bachcha… You know??? ??????
Swara rolls her eyes…
Swara : please sanskar jao na…
Sanskar : my kiss….
Swara : sanskar please…
Sanskar : no… I want my kiss…
Swara : ok close your eyes….
Sanskar : no cheating ok???
Swara : hmm….
Sanskar closes his eyes… Swara immediately pecks his lips… Not even letting him to reciprocate…. Sanskar opens his eyes…
Sanskar : what is this… Kiss me properly… It’s our 50 episode na??? (?????????hi hi hi)
Swara : sanskar???
Sanskar : ok you are good for nothing… I will show you what is a kiss…
Sanskar pulls her and places his rough lips on her soft rosy lips… Sanskar pulls her more closer by waist… He cares her lips slowly…. Swara grabs his Back hair… And starts caressing it along with responding to the kiss… They parts their lips… And enters in their mouth testing their saliva…. After 10 minutes long and passionate kiss they parted…. They are breathing heavily… Swara looks down….
Sanskar (control his breath) : this is called kiss darling…
Swara hits his chest playfully…
Sanskar : ok now I am going… You sleep for sometime….
Swara : wait sanskar???
Sanskar : kya…
Swara : today is rakhi… Did you bring anything for uttara???
Sanskar : oh shit… I forgot…
Swara hits his forehead and goes to cupboard… And bring out a gift box…
Swara : take this…. I was sure you will forget….i bought this….
Sanskar hugs her : you are the best wife….
Sanskar takes that and left from window… After reaching ground… Both waved bye to each other….
Swara goes to her bed and looks at her clock…. It’s 5:10…
Swara yawns… She fell in to asleep….
She woke up about 8…. She slowly open her eyes… And shocked to see the time…. She rushes to washroom and bath…. She wears a simple suit… And comes out hurriedly… As soon as she steps out of her room…. She feels her feet is on some soft thing… She looks down she amused to see that she is standing on thick rose petals…. Flowers starts to rain on her… It’s a long path of rose petals…. She starts to follow it… After every two steps sorry is written by white flowers…. And in the whole path flowers are raining….She comes down…. At the last step of stair she sees the hall… No one is there not even the rose path…. There is a sorry board…. She heard some sounds… She looks at the TV…. Her childhood pics are showing… With Adarsh and Arjun…. They are doing masti…. Her eyes fills with tears… She was standing there and was seeing all this…. At last Adarsh come in TV….
Adarsh : swara…. Can’t you give your poor heartless brother a single chance….
Arjun also comes…
Arjun : i know which pain we gave you…. That’s more than our…. But swara… It’s really paining now…. And the pain is unbearable now….
Arjun cries….
Adarsh : your cold behavior… Your silence… Killing us….
Arjun : i know I can’t return your 20 years…. But I will try to fulfill your heart with my love… Give us a chance sweety…
Adarsh : after some days sanskar will take you from us…. We will not able to be live together…. But we can live and create a lots of new memories with in this days….
Arjun : please give us our sister we are begging you….
Swara is now crying miserably…. She takes one step down…. She again feels…. Her step is on something…. She looks down… Looks her step is on two hands… She looks either sides and sees Adarsh and Arjun….
She immediately took her step back…
Adarsh and Arjun folds their hands but said nothing…. Or I say they can’t…. Their voice chocked they just bows their head and crying…. Swara looks at them then she also Sits on her knees and hugs them…. And cries loudly….
All comes out…. Maheshwary family also there… With rag laksh…
Swara breaks hug and hides her self in protective arms of arjun… Arjun kisses her forehead…. Adarsh cares her hair….
After 10-15 mins swara stops…. Arjun wipes her tears…. Swara also wipe their tears…
Adarsh and Arjun make her stand….
Arjun : i am sorry sweety….
Swara : sssshhhh bhaiyu… Please no… Ab se no sorry…
Trio shares a group hug…. Shomi’s eyes fills with tears…. Her eyes shine with spirks of happiness…
Baishali : enough of this ronadhona….
Avni : han…. We have to tie rakhi this Bandar Arab….
Arab : avni….
Pari : stop you both….
Arjun takes a packet and Adarsh also…
Arjun : sweety… Go and get ready…. This is for you….
Adarsh : and take this also… Pari… Baishali bhabi… You both go help her….
Swara looks at shomi…. She smiles…. Baishali and pari takes her….
She comes out of room…. With pink color long barbie frock with a thin yet sweet diamond necklace…. With diamond bangle…. Her hair is opened…. With long diamond clip…. She is looking like a princess…. Adarsh and Arjun was standing outside… They smiles looking at their princess… Both forward their arms…. Swara slides her arm around their arms…. Both brothers wearing blue and red color sherwani… Sanskar awestruck to see his wife… Swara feels her gaze and blush….
1st bachcha party ties rakhi…. Arab gives them chocolate and teddy… Both sister kiss her brother… Then uttara ties rakhi to sanlak… Laksh gives her earrings and sanskar payel… Then Ragini ties to Adarsh and Arjun…. Both gives her pendant and bangles…
Next is swara…
She ties rakhi…. Adarsh gives her a bunch of roses… Swara happily takes them… Arjun gives her chocolate… And then both gives her a big teddy…. Swara jumps in happiness… And hugs them tightly… Arjun and Adarsh also hugs her back….
Screen freezes to their happy face….
Precap engagement…. And jealousy…
Ufff done with 50th chapter…. Oh my god pinch me…. 50th chapter…. Yaa yaaa yaaaaaa ????????let’s nacho…. A. S stop flying in sky ?????let your readers comment 1st…. Let them like this then let’s nacho karna…. Look readers my mind scold me (pout)…. Please rain your comments and love…. If you like this…. Pls pls pls…. Don’t be silent today at least…. Please…. Cross fingers…. Please… Yaar please… Thanks for reading….
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BT han jab likhogi plz tumhara name Dena warna mujhe pata kaise chalega tumhara hai OK. And abt episode it was totally fab. Sanky toh chala gaya that na phir aya kaise??????
Hello A.S. I jst completed reading ur ff. I got to knw abt ur ff through anjali di writer of mr maheshwari and i. She gave a link to the fb page sanswara the other name of love. And there i saw ur ff and desperately wanted to read it. I read all the 50 episodes in one go. I am in love wth tis. Initially i thought to give u sme piece of mind. U write brilliantly bt thn u tell us nt to get bored. Nt fair yaar. Whn u ryt so well y wll we get bored? U r an amazing writer. I jst lived tis storyline. It was so intense. Wonderful. Kudos to u fr giving such a beautiful ff. And dnt even bother abt ur eng. Its perfect. Though u dnt use high vocabulary simple english also has its own beauty. So dnt wrry. And yah i am gng to be the new member here. Frm tday i wll also be commenting in ur ff.
I am in my class 11. Tell me if u r elder than me. Then i wll call u di. And if my guess is ryt u r a bengali hai na? And u r 18+ if i am nt wrng. Jst a guess.
Anyways i am head over heels in love wth tis. Pl update asap and pl try to be regular.
Wth love
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And yah sorry forgot to say. Congrats on ur 50th episode ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????