Reethi : yaaa ya i will solve this problem soon…. Wait for sometime….
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Swarna :thanks for the lovely comment dear…. Yaa my sansku is very smart…. Oh so you are from odisha??? Wah…. Chalo be lated happy rathayatra…. Keeps on smiling…
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Thamaiz : hahaha… Mai aisa atyachar karti hu aap logo pr ki you have to sit on the tip of the chair while reading….??? ?????just kidding…. Thanks for reading…
Swasanfan : goldie Ji…. Kya karu…. I love to keep you all in suspense… ?????no no I stop writing when I don’t wanna write anymore… Thanks for reading….
Sneha : hi… No no I don’t see any detective series…. But ya i love to read detective story books…now I don’t get any time to read story books but I have many…. BTW thanks…. Thanks a lot…
Kritika : di… It’s my honor that you are considering my story to give in your fb page…. Ya i am in fb… Which page di??? You can give my story but I have a condition… I don’t wanna reveal my name…. Thanks for the comment….
Prakriti : oh my god Prakriti… You are such a kiddo…. I will call you sissy… BTW sissy don’t read mature content ok??? Now In my ff I have to think about some scene also… Oh god I never expected a kid is reading my ff…. BTW thank you…. Sissy…
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Sparkle : thanks for the comment…. Hahaha I am not that much good that I will become a writer… And moreover this is my first try…. I never thought I will get this much response… Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooo much…. I wrote 5-6 os…. But this is my first ff…
Mahjabeen : i can’t reply you in my previous part… The page was not opening sorry…. Thanks for comments…
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Swasanfan : di apne fb me jo 3 shots suru kia hai uska next part upload karo please…. I can’t wait please. …..
Scene 1
Shomi is going somewhere…. She is covering herself with a black shawl…. She meets with a person….
Shomi : this is your money….
Person: thank you mam….
Shomi : is everything ready???
Person : yes mam….
Shomi : if anything happens to her… I will kill you….
Scene 2
Raj : Mr. Gaile…. Come…. Look this is swara…. Whom you want…
Mr. Gaile sees swara lustfully….
Raj : go and get ready swara….
As soon as swara enters khana pulls her and lock the room…
Sanskar : swara chalo… Everything is ready….
Swara : no… I am not going….
Khana : beti why are you saying like this???
Sanskar : shona… What happened to you….
Swara : i said na you both go from here…. I will go with raj uncle….
Sanskar slaps her….
Scene 3….
Shomi : what are you thinking raj…. Whatever you did with me I couldn’t resist that Time… Now see….
Scene 4…..
Swara and Mr Gaile is in a plane….
Mr. Gaile is touching swara sensually…. Swara is like lifeless body….
Suddenly an air hostage comes….
Swara sees her and gets shocked….
Scene 5….
Swara : sanskaaaaaaaar…..
Sanskar : swaraaaaaa…..
Both shocked….
Scene 6….
Someone is lying on hospital bed…. All are wiping….
I am sooooooooooooooooooooo sorry…. I am bit busy… I can’t write a full episode…. I don’t know when I able to write full epi…. I hope you all understand….
So everyone excited??? Main question why swara is refusing what happened to her???
Who is in hospital??? Shomi?? Shekhar?? Sanskar?? Swara??? Uttara?? Khana?? Don’t ask me…. Stay tuned guys… Just wait for my next epi… I will try to post it asap…. Sorry…
15 Comments
waiting for next part…
may be Sanskar…
Nice suspense:-) …plz try to upload soon
interesting..
Arghhh..Teaser ?? Itna wait karne ke baad sirf ek Teaser ??soo bad yaar..n dat too itna Suspense wala ..plzz update soon..i hope sanskaar saves Swara asap n want their Romance to strt..Continue soon Plzz. .cnt wait..n haa sure will post the nxt part of my TS Soon :)..
Omg suspense pe suspense omg but I think now its sanskar turn to be in Hospital i mean swara kitni bar Hospital Main addmit hona hoga now it will be Maybe sanskar I am waiting plzzz try to Post sooon
Plz update next asap . ..I can’t wait anymore … update a short one but plz update ..
Omg these many questions. My chotu sa brain will blast at any time. Plz post next part asap. Otherwise I’ll die in excitement ? ? ?. Will be waiting
Awesome
nice update soon.. to whom shomi gave money..
Waiting for next part dear
Ye teaser nhn heart attack dose tha. I mean wat dis? So much thrill. And luk at dis girl(swara) raj uncle? Are uncle nhn kamina bolo kamina.
awesome eagerly waiting for next episode
are yr so much twist i am relly eager to know
Awesome…So mny twist….update nxt soon..watng eagrly fr da nxt part
Superb as always…yr ap toh Bohat hi suspense rakhti ho???????please save swara ???