Hey guys!!!!! Samaira here…….with os on swasan……
swara gododia nd sanskar maheswari both r childhood enemy despite of the fact that their families r very close friend……they hate each other from the core of their heart but somewhere in their heart they feel for each other but they don’t accept it
scene begin with Swara nd Sanskar fighting with each other all students ignore them as its there daily routine….
girl:- are see there they 2 r fighting with each other nd all of u r only seeing this go nd stop them
boy(girls bf):- are nisha leave it….they both r like this only…..I think they both will be dog nd cat in their previous birth Swasan hear him nd gives him death glare nd boy gulped nd ran away
Swara :- oh hlo mister sadu…..how dare you to.sit on my seat
Sanskar :- u hlo miss bhindi…..tera naam likha h kya seat par….this is college property I can sit where ever I want
Swara :- u donkey how dare u to call me bhindi Sanskar :- why I can’t speak I will speak bhindi bhindi bhindi(speak while making faces)
Swara(shouts):-Sanskarrrrrrrrrrr….
Sanskar(shouts):- swaraaaaaaaaaa………
Swara :- today I will not leave u monkey
Sanskar :- what can u do chuiyaaaaa Swara gets more angry nd throw water on his face….
Sanskar shocked swara rocked ☺ Sanskar gets angry nd throw noddless on her hair?????? this time swara shocked sanskar rocked ?
Swara gets more angry nd both start to fight by messing each others hairs?
ragini nd laksh come there…..nd roll their eyes nd say in union
Raglak:- they both started again they both go to swasan nd laksh drag swara nd ragini drag sanskar from there…..
swalak r best friend nd sanskar nd ragini r best friend
Raglak r in relationship Before going swasan give each other a angry glare nd
Swara shout:- I hate u sanskar
Sanskar too shout:- hate u 2 swara
next day:-
again same thing happen swasan r again fighting with each other
Sanskar :- hate u
swara :- hate u 2 one day Swara go to Mumbai at her mosi house……
Sanskar is in Kolkata only Both
Swasan r missing each other badly their smile has faded…
they don’t talk too much after 2 days Swara return …..both Swasan r very excited as they r going to meet after 2 days this is the first they have not fight all r shocked seeing them Ragini nd laksh r shocked too
laksh:- ragini
ragini pinch me Ragini pinches laksh ….laksh shouts
Laksh : – ouuchhhh
Ragini :- what happen
Sanskar :- leave it nd tell me from which side sun has rise today
Ragini :- what! Laksh r u alright today
laksh :-are stupid I m alright not see there swara nd sanskar
Ragini :- what happen to swara nd sanskar
laksh:- see na Ragini sees there nd is shocked
Ragini :- laksh pinch me this time laksh pinches her Ragini shouts:- ooouchh u idiot
Laksh rocked ragini shocked?
slowly slowly whole college notice it nd all students have their mouth wide open because swasan r taking to each other nd r laughing without fighting…… but suddenly all students have a sigh of relief nd roll their eyes nd move away Because again Swasan starts fighting with each other
Swara :- Sanskarrrrrrr…….. Sanskar -swaraaaaaaaaa……..
swasan say in union:- hateee youuuuuu
Both swasan leave in night swasan r in their respective rooms nd recalling their moments nd a smile come on their face
swara unknowingly – I love u sanskar
Sanskar unknowingly:- love u 2 swara
Both realize what they say nd blushes nd again say I hate u no no I love u next day they both share it with their bf i.e. ragini nd laksh the day end…..
swasan doesn’t meet each other full day as they have not gone to college because it is sunday?…..at night laksh share this with each other nd informs family members also…..both family are very happy as its there wish but due to their fighting they drop the idea to get them both married…… next day maheswari family come in gododia’s house……..sanskar’s eyes r searching for swara…..all family member notice it nd giggle……swara come downstairs nd both swasan had eyelock……family member talks to swasan about there marriage…..both r happy from inside but showing anger from outside again they both start to fight…..
Swara :- marriage nd with this donkey never
Sanskar :- I m also not interested to marry this kali billiiii
Swara :- sanskarrrrrr……. how dare u to call me kali billi….if I m kali billi then u r langoor chimpannzi
Sanskar :- swaraaaaaaaaaaaaa…. Swara: – sanskarrrrrrrrrrr…….
swasan :- I hate u….both again start to fight family members r tensed…nd shout:- stop it
Sumi :- sry sujata ji but I don’t think they both should get married
Sujata :- yes sharmishta ji I also think lets cancel their marriage
Both swasan hear it nd shouts nooo…..all family member laughs as its thier plan nd swasan blushes one week later Swasan has came on date….. Both r enjoying nd sanskar propose swara…swara accepted Sanskar sitting on
Sanskar sitting on knees:-miss swara gododia will u become mrs. swara sanskar maheshwari because
swara:- yeh mr. sanskar maheshwari I will become mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari because swasan in union:- because I hate u nd laughs
5 years later Swasan r sitting in bed nd remembering their childhood days how they use to fight their proposal nd everything swara: – u know what sanskar I have never that one day u will become your life……actually u know I love u from childhood but I can’t able to realize it but when I leave to Mumbai na I don’t know why but I miss u like hell i always think about u
Sanskar :- mee too swara u know what my smile has faded….I can’t be able to sleep….even I m not enjoying at all….I m also missing u nd when papa tell me.na that u r coming i have become like my life has come back to me……that day I realized my love for u swara
Swara : – u know na sanskar I hate u Sanskar :- ya swara I hate u tooo both laughs nd touch their forehead when a voice come from back I hate u three mom dad say Ansh( ya ansh of swasan’s love) all three hug each other nd smiles
Screen freezes on smiling faces of the three hey guys….done with os….i know its not good…actually my brain dont work for os?..i have write this os with my khali dabba brain so forgive me for mistake ….silent readers u too plz comment because its just os not ff I want to know how many of u read it nd liked…..sry if its boring guys rotten tamotoes nd chappals r allowed ?
Credit to: Samaira
30 Comments
I hate you
Nice
soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee
It’s really very nice…..good job….waiting for ur next os…..
I hate you. Because it’s awesome. And your brain works good samaira
Hi Samaira! It’s not that bad also as u r calling it. Haan, there cud b a little more twists & turns though. But it’s ok, u can take it as ur practice & keep practising as “Practice makes one perfect” & one day u’ll definitely come up with an excellent one ?☺
hahahahahaha………i was continously laughing reading this cutest os i have ever read…………seriously , that was a mind blowing piece and yup , it was actually good , so don’t call it bad sweetheart , i loved it , the cute fights of swasan and you know i was like having huge wali smiles when i read the part where swasan miss each other , swasan talking and suddenly fighting……………..swraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa , sanskarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr , was my favourite , ansh , i loved it and your emoticans made it more specially……well in short i would like to say that Samaria rocked and Piyali shocked by such a good piece of writing……….keep writing…………love you……….be happy……….
Nyc
Wah wah beautiful awsm os… loved samiara.. nd im here to throw…………………………………………………………………………………..
;-* ;-* for u.. got afraid ah.. hehehe
It was really awesome…
Lovely..nice concept…
Sammie is it u???lol its so cute amazing stry…
Enjoyed alot
aww cute. cute cute. loved it. awesome. wonderful os. do write more.
always keep smiling 🙂
Ittss soo good & funny too.. Hate u.. Dear keep uploading beautiful os.. :):):)
so sweet nice os than k u for this . swasan always rocks
Cute story ?luv SwaSan
has has k mera dimag khali dabba ban hayi hai
I hate it _ lol
Loved it
Such a cute story loved it
cute..
hilarious !!
awsome story…… ???
? Terese baat nahi karungi main ?
Nice
Hahahahah nice
nice
Well Samaira! The prev comment was just to lift ur spirits after reading ur “khaali dabba brain & all that”.:-) The reality is that ur attempt is actually Very Very Nice. ???
hahahaha…. i can’t stop laughing, i hate u samaira.
mind blowing os
nice
nice