Hello everyone….. I was actually a silent reader till now…..but an idea struk my mind…..i wanna give words to it….
My track is far away from the reality….i means far away from the original story….plz comment…..
Introduction
Swara gadodiy: sister of prem gadodiyA
Prem gadodiya: step bro of swara and ragini…hates swara very much…A business tycoon…
Ragini gadodiya: swara’s younger sister…luvs her very much….
Rati gadodiya: prem’s wife…luvs swaragini but hates prem…he married her by taking advantage of her father’s poor condition
Sanskar Maheshwari: most deserving son of maheshwari house…son of dp..has a bitter past due to which he has forgotten ro laugh
Lakshya maheshwari: younger son of dp…same as his bro but jolly in nature…
Ap: doting mother of sanlak….widow of dp..
Sujata: chachi of sanlak…treat them as her own…widow
Devyani rathod: widow of dp’s friend…she will b the main villain…she treated sanskar as her own son for selfish motives…sanskar listens and respects her more then her own mother…
Reema: daughter of devyani…same as her mother…want to marry sanskar for money…
Samar: reema’s charecterless bro…although hard working but has enough bad qualities that are hidden from everyone…
I ll introduce the charecters as needed…
Chap 1
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A person wakes up with first ray of sun…he touches ground before keeping his foot on floor..he stands up….he looks to his room..its more than a palace…he sees a pic…
Boy: kavita….one more day without u…its tough u know…i proved that i m quite strong as i m living without u…i miss u everyday…i can never give your place to anyone….
Suddenly a servant comes…
Servant: sanskar sir…
Sanskar: yess..
Servant: ap madam is calling u..
Sanskar: i m coming go n tell her..
Sanskar freshens up n gets ready in formal wear…
Sanskar again.goes to kavita’s pic..
Sanskar: jaan…how m i looking…fine na…thank u sweetheart… Luv..u meet u in d evening ok…bye sweetu…
Mr sanskar Maheshwari is the owner of karma industry…. IndiA’s no 1 grp of industry…. He lives a lAvish life….but he is alone inside…he is a man with values….a glimpse of perfection… He respects indian culture a lot….
@ gadodiya..
A girl is arranging break fast on table…she is swara…ragini is helping her…
Ragini: do fast…otherwise bhaiya will come and..
Swara: its against our self respect…i cant tolerate this anymore….
Suddenly a voice comes… What u cant tolerate anymore…
Its prem….their house is seen…its also the same…very big and rich…
Swara: nothing…
Prem holds her hair….he slaps her hard…..she is about to fall but ragini holds her on time…
Prem: dont u forget swaragini …ur one single mistKe can lead to……u know na…….
Swara gives a disgusting look to prem
Swara: we have preparwd the breakfast for u….plz eat this…
Prem sits there..rati comes…she also sits….
Prem: rati hav ur breakfast darling…
Rati sees swara… Blood is oozing out from corner of her lip…she understands the situarion….she knew that today swaragini wont b getting any food….
Rati: plz u eat i m nt feeling hungry…i ll eat later ok….
Prem smiles at her…
Prem: ok…
He goes to office….But locks swaragini in a room…
Rati drops the plate im their room from door crack. .
Rati: beta eat this…plz…
Swaragini cry on their situation..
Swara: seriously…. When ma papa were there..they kept us like princess…but when they died…things just change…these 19 years…u know ragini u were one year old n i was 5 years…bhaiya was of 20 then….he thinks sumi mom killed janki mom….but she tried to save her… But this was not in our deatiny..
Ragini: ya didi…she died..then mummy married dad in spite of big age difference… Jst to give motherly love to bhaiya… But things changed…after mom dad died…he treated us like slaves…he only got us educated so that we cant ruin his fake reputation in society…
Swara: if my hands will be free i ll definitely kill her one day…
Ragini: but he knows our weaknes….hmari majbooriyan hain kch…otherwise..
They both hug and cry
Precap
Prem talks to Sanskar to get married to swara.. In order for him to sign on the deal
I hope u all liked it…its a bit different concept…plz do comment n let me know n plz ur valuable suggestions are always welcomed