Hey guy’s it’s Hinata and this is my first ff
I hope u guy’s lyk it and plz do comment
I’m writing from my phone so Sry fr grammatical mistakes??
Now enough of my bak-bak let’s start wid the story….
A girl with a dupatta covering her face is shown with some goons behind her running in a very lonely street where only their footsteps and ruffle of the leaves could be heard. She looks very terrified and is crying vigorously.
Goon 1: Where are running dear?? Please stop.
Goon 2: kahan chali chammak challo coz its waste of urs and our energy.
Saying this they laugh and keep running behind her
Girl : Plz someone help me……Help…..Plz Help….
She keeps on shouting and running. She trips and falls and hurts her hand. Her hand starts to bleed. She cries out in pain but there is no one around to help her. She looks back and sees the goons approaching her. She gets up soon and again starts running. As she’s running she sees a girl in a white anarkali standing beneath a tree at some distance from her. As she tries to run to the girl. The girl shouts
Girl 2: Run straight and go to the left
The girl not knowing wat to do does as the mystery girl says her.
She runs a little distance and finds a man talking in his phone on the left side of the road. She hurriedly runs towards him and hides behind him. The guy gets startled and turns. He sees some goons coming towards him and the girl.
Girl : Plz help me……Plz…they….will…plzz
Boy: Don’t worry I’m here
The boy and the girl get lost in each others eye but the boy can’t see the girl’s face as she has covered it with a veil…..the girl too gets lost in the innocent and cute yet charming face of the boy…But they are interrupted by the goon
Goon(to girl): Come here at once or else…..
Boy: or else what?? What will you do??
The goon takes out a knife and comes towards him. He places the knife at his throat.
Boy: Hey what are u doing?? If u want you can take the girl plz leave me.
Girl looks towards him shocked. One the group is about to drag the girl when the boy says..
Boy: You can take her but one condition
Goon : Condition??? What’s it??
Boy: U’ll have to defeat me in a game
Goon: which game????
Boy: Subway Surf
The girl becomes confused while the goons laugh uncontrollably???. The boy doesn’t say anything.
Goon 1( while laughing): Are u serious??? U want us to compete with u in that silly game.
He again starts laughing.
Goon 2: plz say its a joke. I can’t take it??
Boy: I’m not joking…… So are u ready to compete
Goons( in unison): Ready
Boy: Till then let her sit in my car I’ll get my phone. The goons node their head.
The boy takes the girl into the car and says her smthng giving him a phone( muted conversation)
The girl nods to which the boy smiles. He takes his phone and gives it to the goons and asks them to play.
The goons get engaged in playing the game. In sometime a person comes behind the goon and pats his shoulder.
Goon 1: Wait a minute I’m going to do a high score
The person again and again pats his shoulder due to which the goon loses the game. He turns back.
Goon: I’ll kill you. Bcoz of u I lost the game.
Then he notices that the person behind him is none other than the police. The goons try to run away but the police catches them. Then the girl comes out of the care goes towards the goons and slaps them tight. The boy also does the same.
Police: Thank you so much. Bcoz of u two we are able to catch these bastards. Thanks again
Saying this the police takes away the goons.
Girl: Thank you so much. You saved me from those morons or else…….and starts crying.
Boy: plz stop crying. Without your help I wouldn’t be able to do this
* FLASHBACK *
Boy: Take this phone. I’ll try to engage them. As soon as u get a chance call the police and ask him to track us.
Girl nodes.
*FLASHBACK ENDS*
Boy : Just tell me ur address I’ll drop u
Girl: thanks
And goes towards his car by telling him the address.
Boy : Btw my name is Sanskar. You can call me Sanky.
Girl: I’m Swara nice to meet u Sanky.
She forwards her hand. He shakes his hand with hers. Suddenly they feel some current passing through them as they touch each others hand but doesn’t say anything.
Sanky: I guess u can remove ur veil now
Swara: Yup. I forgot
As she removes her veil he gets lost in her beauty….Her mesmerizing eyes….her cute face He just keeps on staring her.
Swara: Oye !! Hello …where r u lost??
Sanky: Nthng come inside.
They both get inside the car start driving.
A pair of eyes was seeing all this. It was non other than the mystery girl. She smiles and leaves.
Guys plz comment and do guess who is tat mystery girl.
I donno when I’ll be able to post again but do comment everyone.
21 Comments
Awesome.. ?
Is that mysterious girl Ragini ???
Hey dont say mystry girl is some type of aatma etc but agai bhi too nyc something different
nice..
Thanks again
Thank you …..guys your comments are encouraging. U’ll get to know evrythng as the story proceeds….Till then stay tuned
Awesome
Nice…who is that mystery girl?
Awesome
Awesome ?????nxt one soon…..
awesome
nice
nice mystery girl kon hai?
vo koyi sanskaar ex gf aatma hai kya?
nice
Awsm …post soon
Awesome
Waaaa.! Welcome to SwaSan family dear.! Your 1st chappy rocked.! Loved it dear..! Do continue soon.! Thnk u.. ;-*
nice dear…. update next soon…
Awesome. But who is that mystery girl? Any spirit??
Loved it..
Continue soon
uughhhh… Hinata… well done dear…it’s interesting… continue soon
superb