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Swara: I Love u Sanskar
She whispers rubbing her nose against his shirt … He doesn’t hugs her back …as he was still feeling guilty
Sanskar : (soft tone) swara ..
Swara:hmmm
Sanskar: I’m sorry …
Swara: sorry? But for wat??
She asked confusedly still hiding in his chest
Sanskar: swara ..o ..hmm…for the thing I was going to do with u …. U know….
His voice struks in his throat he wasn’t able to speak … Swara understands and looks at him .. He looks at her face which was turned crimson red …. His gaze makes her shy …she downs her eyes fixing it to the floor
Swara: Sanskar …. It …it … Was it
Was….
She said tucking back her fringes with a blush ..he interrupts
Sanskar :(confused) wat ??
Swara:hmm ..o …u and….
Sanskar:(tensed) me and …wat??
Swara:(blushes) hmmm Sanskar understand na …how can I say!!
Sanskar:(confused) y can’t u swara (thinks something & gets sad) ? oh hmm..I can understand swara u were feeling uncomfortable rgt ..I’m sorry swara….I’m really sorry
He was abt to move back … But she holds his hand and looks at him in unbelievable
Swara:? alley melle bhudhu .. Idiot Amul baby ….I never thought u r soo Stupid … If I would’ve felt uncomfortable .. Then i might have not allowed u to touch me itself
She said pulling him closer to her and running her fingers in his hairs messing it … While he raises his eyebrows looking ?ly
Sanskar:? swara tat means u didn’t felt uncomfortable
Swara:(blushes)? no …Sanskar I love u …so I’m all yours then y would I feel uncomfortable tell me
He feels so happy hearing thz from her….he immediately hugs her tightly
Sanskar: I Love u more swara
Swara:? I know
He smiles and As keeps his hand on her back he realises that her top zip is still open … His hands touches her bare back and she closes her eyes feeling his touch .. While Sanskar controls himself and was abt to realise the hug …but Swara tightens the hug more and more …pressing her lips on his bare chest
Sanskar:(whispers) swara …
Swara:sshh Sanskar don’t move stay like thz only closer to me … Until my death take me away from u
She said shushing his lips … His eyes turned red shot as he registered the word “death” in his mind ….he immediately releases the hug and holds her by the shoulder tightly
Sanskar:? Just shut up swara …are u gone mad how can u tell dat …that (choked voice) that. ..
Swara:(interrupts)? wat wrong I told Sanskar …it is true and u also know that I’m going …
Sanskar:(cuts off) ? no swara no remember one thing swara .. If no swara then no sanskar
Swara gets teary eyes while
He was abt to get up …but swara wipes her tears & holds his hand not letting him to do so
Swara:Sanskar …
Sanskar:? Swara leave me
Swara:? Sanskar if u go ..I will not talk to u
Sanskar:? okay ..ur wish
He jerks his hand angrily …and was abt to walk but swara hugs him wrapping her hands around his waist
Swara:? I’m sorry …plzz don’t be angry . .I’m sorry Sanskar
She said b/w her sobs …he melts and immediately cups her face sitting beside her
Sanskar:Sshh don’t cry …don’t cry
He wipes her tears …she looks at him lovingly and cups his face
Swara:Sanskar I’m sorry
Sanskar:u should be
He pulls her into his embrace and hugs her tightly ….
Swara:?sanskar …my back is….
She left her words incomplete with blush …Sanskar understand …. thinks something. … And smiles naughtily
Sanskar: if u aren’t feeling uncomfortable …y don’t we continue which we left in b/w ?
He said winking at her ..she blushes
Swara:? u r teasing me
Sanskar: no I’m serious darling
Swara:? Sanskarrrr plzzzz
Sanskar:my 4fut 2inch wild cat stop blushing …?
Swara:? Sanskar u again started
She lifts her hand to beat him but her sleeves fall from her shoulder exposing her milky shoulder ….She widens her looking at Sanskar. ..sanskar smiles naughtily and pulls her closer to him ..she falls on his chest
Swara:? Sanskar …
Sanskar: swara u liked it na … ?
Swara shys and hides her face in his shoulder …he smiles and makes her look towards him … Both looks into each other eyes where they can see only love for them
Sanskar: Swara let’s get marry … Now itself …I’m unable control myself now darling
He said rubbing his hand on her bare shoulder …she closes her eyes feeling his touch
Swara: Sanskar I Love you
Sanskar: I know baby …but I asked u something give me my answer ?
He said placing his lips on her shoulder …she shivers due to the contact of his lips to her bare skin …and moans
Swara : aahhh ..Sanskar .. Ummm Hmmmm …Sanskar I’m ready …
She moans as he licks her shoulder passionatly and lovingly
Sanskar: (teases) ready for wat ? Darling ?
Swara: Sanskarrr
She pouts …he smiles and pecks her pout
Sanskar: Accha okay my shona my baby my darling …u sleep now it’s already late …goood night and Sanskar’s dreams ?
He said cupping her face …he was abt take off his hand from her cheeks ..but she holds his both the hands still on her cheeks
Swara:arrey arrey where r u going ..1st put thz zip (pouts)
Sanskar:?. Swara don’t test my patience …put it by urself
Swara:? Sanskar how can my hand reach there …don’t u remember u removed it … U r acting too much wait let me tell suju aunt abt u
Sanskar:Ahem Ahem ..accha calm down baby ..I will keep …turn
He makes her turn …..looking at her bare back he immediately closes his eyes and zips her top with his shivery hands
Swara: hogaya ??
Sanskar: (relief) huh! Yes !!
He said back hugging her placing his chin on her shoulder …. She smiles
Swara: Sanskar I’m getting sleep
Sanskar: hmm accha u sleep .. I’m going
Swara:no don’t go …u also sleep here only na
She said turning towards him holding him tightly
Sanskar:? swara …
Swara:(interrupts) plzzz na (pouts)
He melts and smiles
Sanskar; okay darling
He said pecking her pout .. She gets happy and pushes him on the bed
Sanskar: arrey …swara …
She giggles and comes top of him …places her head on his chest and hugs him tightly
Swara:hehehehe …
Sanskar: wat is thz swara …
Swara: hehehe sshh keep quite .. Sleep
She said hugging him tightly … He smiles seeing her happy and hugs her back …soon both dozes off in each other embrace
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Mid night
Swara starts sweating badly ..as the result She opens her eyes ….her head starts paining badly ….she holds her head with both her hands and gets up from Sanskar …sits on the bed
Swara:aaaa….aaaa…
She winces as her head pains very badly …suddenly she nauseous in her stomach … She holds her head with one hand and keeps her other palm on her mouth ….she gets down from the bed and walks towards the washroom with the support of wall ….and vomits again and again still her face turned pale … She feels weak in her legs and falls down in the washroom
Swara:s…a..n..s..kar….sa..n…s .kar
She was trying to call Sanskar with all her strength but her voice wasn’t able to reach Sanskar ….tears makes a way from her beautiful hazel eyes … All goes blur…her head started paining like hell …she falls unconscious on the floor holding her head tightly 4
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Guys I’m really sorry for irritating u all with my ff’s…really sorry I never thought my ff’s would irritate u all tat extend tat u will msg me personally abt thz …but don’t worry guys inshallah I will end my both the ff very soon in 3 or 4 epi’s …
Waise bhi my exams r near … It’s better if I end my ff’s …. Inshallah I will never write any ff further …
But swasan will always remain in my heart …thank u all
56 Comments
Dear what happened
did anyone said something
plz dont listen to them
Hmm nothing dear…leave it dear
Thank u
Please don’t end this nnaaa pls, if someone is personaly messaging u that means they are Supar excited so don’t dare to end it. ff are never irritating.?
Hmmm okay dear …Thank u
Who is that culprit tanu u who hurted u.. u forward their names… hw cn thy do this… no one has right to hurt others…
coming to chapie it was awesome…
Msg to readers never hurt othrs..
I really don’t know who she dear ?
Thank u
Y r u saying like this?
We like ur ff.. Plz dont stop writing dear..
Yeah Tanuuuu ,, u should really stop writing.. why to waste ur time on those peoples who supported u from the starting n till doing now..
yh yh u can stop writing for that particular one person who just msgd u n said something … good decision dear..!! carry on..!! Don’t u dare to think about US or ur regular readers…!! today u really showed ur Reader’s value through these few words.. Thnk u dear.. !! God bless u.. ;-*
Kakali I’m sorry ?? ….I was just hurt tat time sorry once again
Nope Tanuuu !! m sorry.. i acted too rude naa.. ? sorry.. but i was hurt reading ur those words so reacted that way.. nevermind dear we all love yr FF.. u continue with it..
Amazing dr…
Plz nxt one soon…
No Tanu dnt end ur ffs plz dey r owsome
No no u cant do this u r not end the ff please i will like u r all ff ,but i can’t commentend i am silent reader but now i will break my silence. please donot do this.
you are very good dear pls dont stop ur ff
Awesome dear
nooooo???who the hell told u this diii i love ur writting pls don’t end plsssss atleast for your bigggest fan (obvio its me)
and sorry not able to comment as school is open but plzz don’t end it
nice please don’t think to stop writing ff don’t hurt yourself by the words of others
Amazing epi…
Pls don’t end the ff soon…
Thank u dear …
Hmm I will try
dr tanu plz dont stop writing we really luv u n its ur talent which shouldnt be stop due to someone saying its habit of some people 2 poke der nose in everymatter either it is good or bad so dr just keep writing it was awesome one n dare 2 say sorry u dont know baba srk had said in frndship mein no sorry n no thanku bye keep smiling n also writing
….really ur comment made me smile coz SRK kai dialogue was written na …
Hmm okay then dear I will try …
Thank u
Awesome dear n I dont want u to end ur ff but for exsams its really needed n i know sooo all the Best for ur exsams dear…
Hmmmm u r rgt dear
Thank u
But It doesnt mean that I will leave u soooo easily u all READ know how I am I will get on ur nerve…1st of dont stop writing n write more lovly story…on swasan
Wat happened yaar…. ur ff is really marvelous…. I personally like it very much…. n pls dont end for those who dont have value…. pls write for all of us who always supports u…. please dont end
Sometimes somethings really hurts dear …thank u
Awesome dear don’t end ur ffs and don’t take that messages seriously
Thank u dear …
I try to dear
Hey tanu dear what happened suddenly?……. Who are those moron jerks who tried to hurt u tell us their names yaar… ………but for them don’t stop writing……… U are wonderful writer…….. Plzzzzzz …….plzzzxzxx. …….plzzzz…..dont end ur ffs
Awesome dear don’t end ur ffsand don’t take that messages seriously.post soon
ur ffs are awesome and u can take a break but plzzzzzzzzz don’t end them
hey tanu log toh bolte rahenge kyunki unka kaam hai bolna aur burai wahi karte hai jo khud kuch nhi karpate so chill …..???and plzzzz dont end ur ff i am a big fan of ur ff’s aur kisne kaha ki tumhare ff irritate karte hai should????dere faces i love all ur ff plsss dont end it u can take break for xams but plsss continue dem ????????????????????????????????plzzzzzz u r fabulous in ur work nd aweome in presenting sentiments nd emotions so plsssss dont leave dont end d ff nd let ppl say wat ever dey want caus by saying dey cant change our mind nd cant reduce ur ff’s fandom so maja ma rehenka aur dusro ko tension deneka ???????
Please tanu don’t say like that i love your ff very much I am a silent reader till now but after seeing your note i thought to tell that that you are best but please don’t stop writing ?????????please
awesome .i love this ff .plzz don’t end it.
Hey pls don’t end na….its awsm….
Ok…
Stop writing………
Leave all of us…….you only consider those few person instead of your hundred fand who are supporting tou from the starting
Bye bye………and ya don’t care about our feelings
And never write again.
No no no dnt end it pls
No no no dnt end it pls. After exam u can update pls
Tanu for dat one person u cannot hurt ur all fanz who love ur ff… write for d onez who reads ur ff alwayz comment who apprciate ur work… dun spoil ur mood for some one person…
Dun end ur ffz v al love dem…
N coming to d chappy as usual awesome
Don’t be negative, if you are comfortable with your story line then you should continue. Why don’t you consider the positive opinions given by others? Don’t stop your ff, continue till you can.
I am a silent reader, i only commented in two or three ffs. But today I wrote this comment only to give you positive thoughts. Really you are a good writer. Eagerly waiting for next parts. God bless you. You can always count me as one of your strong fan not only you almost all the Swasan ff. Bye… Take care and be positive and confident always. All the best.
I have one request tanu plzzz Yar don’t kill swara plzzz make her well plzzzz