Hi Friends
I am Nagamanasa..This is my first ever story.I have this idea in my mind from many days so though it to write it down..Hope u like it *Fingers crossed
This is the small intro of the story..
SANSKAR MAHESWARI-Male lead of the
story.27yrs old.Arrogant Business man.Owner of Karma Company.Have a painful past. Loves his brother a lot.People know him as SM.Lives alone in SM Mansion.
SWARA BOSE-Female lead.22yrs old.Doing final year of graduation.Bubbly girl.Daughter of Sekhar Gadodia and Sharmista Bose.After their parents separation lives with her mother in Bose house.Loves her mother and sister a lot.Singing is her passion.
RAGINI GADODIA-Half sister of Swara.21yrs old.Doing 3rd yr of graduation.Daughter of Sekhar Gadodia and Janki Gadodia.Knows abt swara being her sister and loves her a lot.Lives with her Father,Dadi and Dadu.
LAKSH MAHESWARI-26yrs old.Cousin of Sanskar.Loves him a lot.Handles Maheswari industries.Lives with his family at MM.
SHARMISTHA BOSE-Single mother of Aware.Loves Swara a lot.Working as a lecturer in college..
SEKHAR GADODIA-Father of Swaragini.
PARVATHI GADODIA-Dadi of Swaragini but hates Swara and Sumi as they r Bengalis
RP&SUJATHA MAHESWARI-Parents of Sanskar
DP&AP MAHESWARI-Parents of Laksh.
Remaining characters r same as the serial.Janki Gadodia is dead and there is no DIDA Character here.
Finally done with the intro guys..I will try to post the 1st part soon..
Give me ur opinions through comments.
Yours Nagamanasa:-)
41 Comments
Nice dr…. ?
Tq so much dear
Interesting concept dear… Plz continue ??????
Tq vidhi
Manasaaaa Diiiiii ,,,( i made u my new diiii*convert) .,,, *pinch my nose !!! ahhhh it’s true !!! goshhhh !!!
puuuut puuuut !!! Love d intro,,,
m sure u gonna rock with it ,,, love it Diiii !!! Thnk u. ;ยค
still unable to believe soooo *faint
Tq kaku dear I am happy that u liked it my sissy…my fainting queen u again fainted i must spill water on u now dear..This is my first attempt so pls give ur opinions in every episode so that I can improve myself…
Huhhh Diii don’t tease me okkk !!! just bcz of ur cute n pleasant surprise m *lying on ICU bed…
Diii but u know na i leaving in few days !! so it’s almost impossible for me to comment n read…but dun worry there r lots of people who will love to read ur work n will also give good good responses rit !!!
Sooo all d very best fir ur further episodes…
M glad i have one more dii now *pull ur cheeks n run
Don’t worry kaku dear I know that you r leaving in some days but in these days I will try to post most of the episodes within 10 days because even i will be busy after 10 days as I am going to start my coaching classes along with my college…so don’t worry my sissy. U pulled my cheeks and ran away na now i am gonna catch u and pull ur ears
Waiting
I will post soon swasan
Nice….
Tq dear
Awesome intro……now I want the first part asap…..can’t wait for it nagamanasa??
Tq di…I will post soon may be by tomorrow
Di i posted it today morning check it out…A shock is waiting for u and kaku
its simply superb…… i can comment as many times as i love u….
congrts as u posted it here…. we will love to read them…. continu it
Tq so much sissy…love u too
nice
Tq so much
nice continue soon//
Tq dear and I will
Awesome…?
Tq dear
Awesome dearr and all the best in advance for future episodes ????
Tq so much di??
Tq dear and I will
Nice…..
Tq purvi
So who are the pairs???
Swasan and raglak dear
Nice..continue soon..tc..
Tq dear
Interesting concept dear…plz continue… Waiting for first part…All the best for the further parts…
Take care
Keep smiling?
Tq so much dear…I will upload soon
Awesome manasa di…..
Plz nxt one soon.
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Tq dear…I will upload soon
Nyc
Continue soin
Tq dear…
waa.. dear!…let me enjoy your work.. update soon dear!
Tq dear…i will post soon
Wow super continue dear