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” bhai its important ” laksh said to Sanskar who was looking at the scenery out the window.
Sanskar : lucky I said…u handle it..,
from past hour laksh is trying to make Sanskar understand that he needs to be there…its very important…
laksh : Bhai its not meeting or conference…its a officially get together..we’re personally inviting all..don’t forgot that you’re the CEO of this company. I can’t replace you…
Sanskar: laksh….
laksh : bhai…please !! you’re not at all bother about me…if bhabi was here you could have never refuse me…
Sanskar sight….really if swara was here he could never refuse him..IF !…
Sanskar : okay…im in but for sometimes only !
laksh sight in relief at last he will out of this dark room….
nandu : swara…the venue looks quite nice..it even fits our total guest…
swara : yes..but we need to confirm with them..when will they come…its quite late…
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ragini : take care of bhai…he looks quite sick and dull..he has not eaten anything from night…
laksh : dont worry..u take care..
Sanskar comes out in black t-shirt with unshaved beard…
he gets in the car with laksh..
shravan : shona di you seat I don’t know when will these people come don’t they have clock at the house !
swara : come down..shravu….maybe stuck in traffic..
shravan starts talking with the baby bump while swara smiles…
shravan : hello chotu…remember me shravan mamu…
swara : shravan.. .
shravan : di can you feel him…does he kick ?
swara : no dear..it will have tiny legs next month..not now…
shravan : haw…he is sooo chotu…but it should have heart beat na ?
swara : yes….they have heart beat from 2 – 3 month…
shravan : that means..u can hear it….di did u heard it..did u went to hospital for sonogram…
swara : no….not till now..
shravan : why….
” I want to be the first to hear her heartbeats ”
how can swara say when she even dont know why she didn’t heard his child’s heartbeat till now…
joy : cause we need to remind her everything !
swara : joy please stop….no more lectures
joy : ayy drama queen…u made a successful journalist a lecturer..which things u listen..and now your becoming patient of memory loss
swara : what did I do ?
nandu : today u have an appointment with doctor….
swara : nandu but this meeting is important
joy : shut up…not more than health…
nandu : go with shravan….I’ll take care..
swara : really sure ?
joy : yes
swara comes out half heartedly…why she dosent want to go…she should not miss him or care for himm…she will live her life the way she want…no need of betrayer….
Sanskar comes out of car…
he looks at the venue…
all looks so dull….
he goes inside….
swara comes outside opposite direction…
winds start blowing…
man 1 : it will be raining…
Sanskar closes his eyes and remember how much she liked rain…unlucky Sanskar and unlucky rain !
man 2 : no…see dust are coming..its storm come inside sir…
swara comes near him….
wind blows and dust falls on her eyes…
she rubs her eyes…
Sanskar opens his eyes…
a scarf falls on his face…his heartbeat increases…it may stop any moment….
he sees blurred vision…
swara is passing by him…yes…it is swara…swara only..his eyes gets soothe seeing her…
the scarf gets away with swara too…
he looks his surroundings everyone just without her…
laksh : what happened bhai….
Sanskar : swara…
laksh : bhai clam down….
Sanskar : she was here…
he runs behind her….
but she was gone til then..
he stumbled and falls….
laksh found an dull..pale and unconscious Sanskar..
hospital….
receptionist : swadheenta….next is your serial…go to room no 203…
swara goes in room and lays on the bed instructed by the doctor….
laksh : doctor…doctor please cheek my brother..he became unconscious suddenly…
doctor : due to weakness….ward boy take him to room no 202..
nurse 1 : heyy…where did u send the patient swadheenta..
receptionist : room no 203
nurse 2 : stupid…that machine is not working…it has got some loud speaker problem….its sound is audible in room 203
nurse 1 : doctor will kill.me…
doctor places the machine on her tummy…swara looks at the machine carefully which shows the heart beat lines…
she feels immerse pleasure….
Sanskar has canholer on his hand he is being given saline….
doctor : u can hear the heartbeat now..
swara waits eagerly…
Sanskar opens his eyes…after hearing something…
he is feeling drowsy and weak…he sits up…he hears sound..of heart beat….tiny yet heartbeat…
he feels a different kind of feeling..indescribable
he stands up unknowingly..he opens his canholer…though his head is heavy but he walks and opens the door…
swara looks at the machine then doctor then her tummy…
she feels unknown feeling like not happy or scary….
27 Comments
Wow loved it ❤️
AWESOME YAAR….. PLS CONTINUE SOON……
nice dear
Superb
Wow….amazing
Love it
Outstanding !! ? plz unite them soon
Aeesome
nyc…bt short
wow
awsome.
i cnt discribe dis epi.
jst cn say its superb
keep writing
be happy always
nice..tc..
Nice
Awesome both in hospital in same room
Gosh cant wait for their meeting
Plz yaar milado swasan ko
wow just cant for their union
Awesome yar ?
Awww ..it wz lovely dear…finally he z d 1st 1 to hear her hrtbeat….
Wow awesome loved it
lovely part dear!!
Omg..they r gonna meet
Awesome…?
superb
Awesome…
Gooosshhhhh… Siniiin… i love this dramatical scene….i want more.. i want more.. i want more….
Awesome part..
Aww…awesome…The sonogram scn…too emotional.
Sorry for late commenting I just saw it….
It’s awsome