hi guys sinin here! thanks for the comments on last part. Many of u didn’t like the teaser . Pls read this episode and suggest me should I continue or end with an epilogue . This story has got soo much love the that I can’t ruin it with new twist . So please do comment what you want.
Sanskar is talking on the phone
Sanskar : hello ?
Doctor : is it sanskar maheshwari ?
Sanskar : yes… Speaking
Doctor : I’m the gynocologist of swara…
Sanskar : yes… Doctor…Is every thing fine…
Doctor : Mr maheshwari i want to meet with you…Can u meet within a hour in my chamber…
Sanskar : sure doctor…
He looks at swara…
Sanskar : why did she sounded so much tensed…
Swara : are you going out ?
Sanskar : yes I’ll be back soon…Take rest and drink the orange juice…
He kisses on her forehead and comes out
He goes out and starts the car….
He starts driving….
He stops at the red signal and waits….
Meanwhile he turns on the radio…
Song was playing there ” phulo ka taro ka sabka kehna..Ha…Ek hajaro me Meri behna Hai…Sari Umar hame sang rehna haiii….”
Sanskar looks at the radio… Shockedly….He remembers his childhood…His hand starts trembling and get sweaty…
He turns off the radio quickly….And drives to the hospital
At chamber
Sanskar : is everything fine doctor…Any complications in her pregnancy ?
Doctor : well yes Mr maheshwari… There is some complications…
Sanskar looks at the doctor horrifiedly…He couldn’t believe swara have complications in her pregnancy
Doctor : actually…There is problems in the fetus..
Sanskar : what doctor ?
Doctor : I observed the ultra sonography report and… Your having conjoined twins…
Sanskar : conjoined twins ?
Doctor : yes…They are joined at hip and sharing the vital organ liver….After getting the other reports tomorrow I can say what percent of liver each have…And then only we can decide will they ever be able to get separated or not…
Sanskar wipes his sweats and drinks water…
Swara : but in every case delivering conjoined twins for swara at this much weakness is too harmful…
Sanskar : harmful…
Doctor : it may cost her life…
Sanskar looks at the doctor..He feels like his world is spinning now…
Sanskar : what will I say to swara…She will be broken.. isn’t there any way…
Doctor : abortion is the best I can see….If you don’t want to take chances with her life…And 87% chance that hip conjoined are stillborn…I know it’s a major shock for u…But u need to take the desicion soon…Really soon !!!
Sanskar comes home and looks at swara…He avoids eye contact with her…What just happened to the ever perfect family of his….Why is god soo cruel…
Swara : sanskar…I saw the room u decorated for the princess.. it’s so beautiful… I’m in love with it..But what about my prince..He will get angry and jealous of his sister..
Sanskar looks at the glowing happiness of his love at the arrival of their kids…How can he bring such a bad news for her…
Sanskar goes into his room and tries to sleep for some peace…He needs to take desicion…But what..How to choose between swara and his kids…
He feels swara is massaging his head in her lap..Sanskar tries to sleep…
“I’ll back….Back for revenge…I swear ! ”
A lady jumps in water….
Goons are chasing someone…
There is blood dripping on road and sanskar follows it madly…
Sanskar comes there and shouts “didi……..”
Sanskar : no….
Swara : sanskar….!! What happened…Did u saw a bad dream…
Sanskar breathes heavily…He was sweating profusely..He looks at swara and hugs her tightly…Swara gently pats her head… Without asking any questions….
Sanskar : god why all this is happening to me…I can’t deal with my past now…God pls save my present from the dark shadow of my past…
35 Comments
Nyc
so sad
Very emotional and sad
amazing…. but so heart wrenching…..continue soon….
Niceeeeeee…
waaaa,,, it’s so bad…… hmmm, better sanskar telling the truth…
Hi,I think the report is false sanky didi want to revenge so she blackmailing. sanky to do this all in teaser part to separate swasan. I think I am correct please continue this type of story not change sanky bad at all please.
Awesome
nice but so emotional
Nice…..But plz not make sanskar again selfish and bad person …….plzzz
Emotional…
I think sanskar should tell about the reports to Swara.. Then there will be no misunderstanding in future… Plz dont make sanskar negative again, even its for Swara’s safety…
Hey its totally diff from what i thought in teaser…..!!!! Thanks for not degrading sanskar’s character…..!!!! hope no grave misunderstandings occur between dem….!!
Plzz dont seperate swasan again. Plzz dont let sanskar cheat plzzzz
Superb dear
I hope his past doesnt come back to him
lovely dear
Just amazing dear
After reading about conjoined twins I recalled the show Amber Dhara.
Well, I will say do whatever you want. If you really want to end this then I think that conjoined twins part was useless.
I want it to be fake news and everything simple and happy
I think he should tell her the truth..
I think u should decide to continue or to end it.
Sry comment got posted as reply bimistake.
Meher plz Post forgotten love.
Awesome dear
Nice continue plz don’t separate swasan
Cntnu bt dnt make sanky negetive.
Awesome dear. But don’t make sanskaar negative again. Hope he tells the truth to swara.
As a writer, you decide you will continue or end it!
Bt don’t make Sanskaar bad which you showed in Teaser bcoz that will make Sanskaar unacceptable! Already Sanskaar did wrong in past Bt later he truly fell in love with Swara & then after suffering during their separation & repenting for his mistake he got Swara! Bt if you show that Teaser part, it will ruin Sanskaar’s character completely!
Hope you understand…
nice epi..i dnt knw about d twist..
its ur story..and ill support u whatever u decide..tc..
Wow loved it me dar gai thi because of the teaser plz continue and don’t seperate swasan and let sanskar tell swara the truth cause in future there wont be any misunderstanding?
Hi please don’t spoil their relationship, there should be mutual understanding.
Sanskar should share his concerns with swara as he has promised her. Swara should understand Sanskar and find a mutual path. There are many other ways but protect the love between them
Awesome
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awesome but emotinal
awesome
I think simply story Ka sheath end is better then a bad twist I love ur story and I don’t want that Ka yeh spoli ho jaya twist Ka chakar main but its ur story last is urs do as u wish I hope u will not spoil it
well u should continue it but dont show sanskaar bad plz