hi guys sinin here back again . sorry for making you all wait so long . but i was extremely sick these days and coudnt update.
guys these is the teaser . i’ll update the part soon .
swara – no sanskar !! enough is enough !
sanskar – what enough….its just begining !
swara looks shocked to her husband who is saying 2 plates of food is not enough..its just start !!
sanskar – swara…your being soo kiddish…my kids are also growing inside u na…theyalso need nutrition..and even you cant be weak..so u need to eat more !!
swara – no its enough…or ill vomit seriously !! i just really forgot that there are two inside me…
sanskar…what do u think are they boys or girls ?
swara asks gently keeping her on her tummy…sanskar keeps his hand on her hand and looks into her eyes….” maybe its a boy and a girl ” sanskar said looking at swara emotionally
swara – snskar now we will live happily ever after na…..there will be no problem…no troubles no sorrows….
sanskar kisses on her forehead and then on the tummy
sanskar – …..
the phone rings and sanskar goes to take it…..
there was happiness everywhere..dream and wishes were achivieing their destination…both lovers got each other after a long seperation with their symbol of love coming….they both wanted nothing more…it was a perfect time for happy ending…but natural never like absolute beauty…thats why this new twist came on this prefect love story…..
2nd scene
sanskar – no argument swara !! my decision is final…i dont want these babies….youll be having an abortion !
swara – sanskar…dont say like this…..how can we kill them…they are our blood…there must be a solution…
sanskar – there is no way left,…so what if they are my child…i cant have two handicapped babies….what will people say…..what about my reputation….
swara – sanskar please no abortion…
sanskar – nurse…take her away….i dont want this headache……
nurse drags swara to the operation theater while sanskar goes outside….
3rd scene
sanskar – no..i want the work to be done at once…there will be no problem…nobody will know….
a girl comes holding a glass of wine and gives it to sankar…he finishes it in a gulp…..
girl : now enough of this work….so much pressure on u..let me give u some peace…
sanskar smiles at her…
sanskar phone rings….
the girl take it see… SWARA
sanskar : who is it ?
girl : random people….
she cuts the call and switches off the phone….
she holds the tie of sanskar seductively and takes him to a room…and closes the door
swara turns away as soon as the door closed….she couldnt take it anymore…and sat there…what did she just saw now…her husband was cheating on her…again….did she made a mistake accepting him in the life……
4th scene
a women is running on the highway road on the storm night….two jeeps full of gons are following her….her body is drenched in blood…but still she is running…she runs and reaches at the kali temple bridge…the goons are coming..she goes back…
she looks at the dangerous waves….howling like an monster….on the river..
she shouts at the people ” this is not the end….i’ll be back…back for the revenge…i swear ! ”
and jumps at the river….
leap of 7 years……
35 Comments
Okay, first two scenes were okay.
Then, what was that!!! Why you want to keep us in so much suspense. You evil woman ???
Hi meher?how r u…missed u so much n missing ur ffs too?
Hey!
Even I missed you. I’m good. What about you? ??
I’m fine?missing ur ffs?anjali ffs so much??when will u both be back?waiting for ur both ffs?pls come back soon with new ffs?
ghoossttttt it’s too much pain….hi Sinin.. long time no see..:)
R u planning to give us heart attack
I mean its sooooo shocking sinin
I dont know what to say
Am i dreaming??somebody pinch me…uff…so sinin…after so long u r back…hope now u r fine…health is important… no problem for late n coming to story…so many twists n turns…i’ll get heart attack with these many twists…waiting for actual episodes…n hope sanky will not cheat swara this time…
So shocking
My god so many twists…. What’s happening??sanskar’s cheating on Swara
…..btw I was a silent reader till Now…and please take care dear
finally u r back but the promo which u have written are so scary and u r making me hate sanskaar so much……
the character of sanskaar is getting bad in the story i am feeling so sad……
Woah shocking I can’t believe sanskar is cheating on swara… this is shocking plz update soon
Get well soon!!!
Wow loved it plz don’t seperate them??
Sanskar is again cheating swara????
its good update next part soon
Ye teaser nhn tsunami tha. Again separation? Really? God. Cm sn.
omg….so interesting…..update soon….
u r back after a long time..teaser looks really scary..take care dear..
u knoww sinin i loved your story.. yess u heard right i loved.. because nowww u only spoiling your title.. i dont know what u have planned but we readers only judge from the given promo or teaser.. andd u knoww by seeing this teaser im nott feeling to read further story because i loved your title.. u showed that love dont need perfection but this teaser is showing only revenge, broken trust etc.. maybe i was wrong but i dont think soo whole teaser is a part of some plan… thankuu for giving story before this teaser it was a perfect story…
Kill this sanskar yar I hate him again again same mistake idiot huh after so much time u back and giving us shock not fair
What is this dear? I’m shocked & scared. ?
Trust is an important thing readers trust u and in ur story trust is also a major element. I just want to trust u abt it that u will not show sanskar like other lusty male leads who never change and will be living with an female . I believe u will pull the twist with hate and love and also taking care of ur health take care post soon plz be a little regular hope u will keep our trust as sanky is never going to break the trust. Plz plz be regular and plz post soon
thank u very much…I’ll try my best no to disappoint u
Welcome back dear…… Missed you. Promo was beyond imagination.
plz chande abortion matter dear.plz plz .i don’t like abortion,all author use this only plz change some think.y alwalys swara have a pain ah first her father,second sanskara third abortion plz plz plz plz change abortion mindset dear,
First of all i hope you are fine now. And second I loved the story you were justifying the title. But now I think I can’t read this story further. You could have just punished the culprit because of whom swasan were stuck in lift and Swara was in danger.
Now I think all this drama is unnecessary for this story. You can start anu new story for that but don’t ruin this one.
At the end this is your story so you can right whatever you decide. But the think from reader’s perspective also. don’t take it seriously. Take care.
Oh God… Please HOw many mistakes my sanku will do…. ?
After a long time… You came with a bang… So shocking… But I think there must be some reason.. sanskaar is doing this.. After so much happened in their lives… But swara will be going through severe pain like last time.. No plz don’t do that abortion part… n please update soon.. 🙂
I like first & last scene . but the remaining part is like tuffan in their life’s. But overall interesting & nice teaser. Good luck
Take care of ur health . & come back soon with banggg
Wohoohooohoooo !! back with the bang..! After a decade.. how are you?
Well continue soon dear..!! Tc.. Thnk u.. ;-*
nyc continue
U r back to TU after a really long time..
Hope you are feeling better..
The teaser is shocking..
Post next part soon and take care.
??????? swasan separation again? I feel like crying.
Welocme back…hope u r alright completely.
awesome and interesting promo
and di pls take care of yourself
After such a long time…!!!
Hope u r fine!!
I hv been a regular reader and commentor of ur ff….but now i want to request you that plz don’t do what hv u shown in d teaser……urs has been a wonderful story but what are u going tovdo now will just ruin it completely…….
U hv shown dat sanskar has repented and has suffered for a long time den its totally unrealistic to show him again goingbon wrong way…….on one side you showed dat he understood true love and has improved himself nd now u are gonna sgow him as a killer of his own babies just coz of reputation…….dis is not done
U may hv done showing sanskar repeatedly negative if it was a ‘swara’ story dat if she were d only protagonist but dear it is a ‘swasan’ story……u r a very good writer and hv carried d story so far so beautifully…….as a readr i would like to advice u not to follow dis one …….its truly dissappointng.
U better show some cute moments and end it at a good note or add some diff twist widout degrading sanskar’s character………
Advice was purely as a reader and a lover of ur ff…….i dont think after awaiting for 2 months for this ff patiently others as well will like dis twist…!!!!
Rest is ur wish but i cant continue to read further for dis storyline…..sorry if i sounded rude i hv tried my maxm to not sound like dat hope u understand my point…..