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Anjali singh raizada – Daljeet kaur
Akash singh raizada – Akshay dogra
Arnav singh raizada – Barun sobti
Aditya singh raizada – Dulquer salmaan
Arjun singh raizada – Prithvi Raj
Next morning
Sanskar standing in the middle of a rose garden….He looked around…..Its so beautiful and refreshing…
Voice: ” sanskar…”
Sanskar turned and saw that swara standing there…she again wearing that red Bengali saree…as always she looks beautiful…he smiled widely…and about to hug her…..but swara stopped him by showing her hand…
Swara: just stop there Mr Maheshwari
Sanskar: Swara….. he again comes to her but she stepped back…
Swara: Don’t come near me…..
Sanskar: Swara what happened… It’s me sanskar….. but he interrupted by swara’s scream
Swara: NO…. You’re not my sanskar…..
Sanskar : Swara…. What rubbish are you speaking…. I’m only your sanskar…. With that he again tried to hug her but she pushed him and shouted
Swara: Don’t touch me…You’re not my sanskar… You’re someone else…. My sanskar is good… He never hurts anyone…..
Sanskar looked her shockingly…
Sanskar: Swara… What are you saying?? What I did??
Swara: You’re asking me what have you done… Sanskar you’re the elder son of maheshwari’s and it’s your duty to look after everyone…. But you instead of correcting everything you locked yourself in your own world…. Did you ever thought about Mom Maa Badi Maa Baba Dad Uttara Bade Papa….. No right but my sanskar was not like this….. He always thought about everyone…. He always cared for everyone…. He always solved problems smilingly…. He handled everything so perfectly…. He was always with me and everyone in their tough times…. He was my supporting pillar…. He was my friend, guardian, Guide, Soulmate my everything…
He always protected me like a Father…. He cared about me like a Mother…. He made me smile like a friend…. You know what my sanskar was very handsome…. He looked cute with his smile…. And one side is you…. You look so weak…. Your face is dull…. Even you have dark circles under your eyes…. And this moustache…. Yuck…. I just hate people who has moustache…. That’s why I am saying you’re not my sanskar….
Sanskar looked her with shock then himself and caressed his face….
Swara: Just look at yourself…. You can’t handle our family even yourself in these 1 year and you’re asking me to come back to you…. How can I come back sanskar…. Even if I come I will be upset seeing our family like this…. You know na sanskar…. How much I love my family…. If I will see them broken…. Do you think I will be happy?? So now be a good boy and change yourself to my old sanskar and take care of our family and bring the truth of ragini…. Then only I will come…. She scold him so cutely and sanskar just stare her without blinking….
Swara: Sanskar…i love you…i love you…1..2…3… Understand…sanskar smiled to her and said
Sanskar: I love you too shonaaa… he smiled widely and tried to hug her but suddenly she vanished and sanskar fell from bed….
…THUD…
“SWARAAA…sanskar shouted…but does not saw swara any where…he looked around and saw that he is in their room…and there is no swara…. He sat down in bed silently….
Now he is regretting for saying yes to kavita’s proposal…. He still remember that day when his Swara was snatched from him….
FLASHBACK
Here swara is standing in MM hall and waiting for her love, who is going to get engaged with his first love…she not even dared to look anyone because she know that they only show pity to her…only pity…she know her sister will be smirking to her…just then shomi held her hand tightly indicating that he is coming..her love …her sanskar…she looked him and he gave fake smile to her that to show he is fine…but her staring section interrupted by shomi..
Shomi: Shona come we will go
Swara: No Maa I am fine….. she smiled
But she know,, she is not giving assurance to shomi but to herself that she is fine…she is strong…very strong to bear all these..so she kept chanting her fine manthra…
Here sanskar and kavitha comes to the centre
Sujata: Beta if you have come then exchange the rings…..
Sanskar: Yes Mom and smiled to kavitha
Kavitha took the ring and slide it to sanskar’s finger..and gave big smile to every one …
Next is sanskar…sanskar slowly take the ring and looked swara,, but she just turned her face from him and saw a smirking ragini…that’s it her fine manthra broke…her mind screamed swara..run …just run from here…run from these cruel peoples who cannot even see your pain…just run…run…. this time swara followed her mind so she freed from shomi’s grip and runes from there with whole energy..
Shomi called her: ” shona…”
FLASHBACK ENDS
He’s cursing himself for the stupidity he did….
To be continued….
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wow its an awesome part.
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Awesome. Are u a malayali?
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R u a from Kerala
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Did u posted this somewhere else…
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I read one ff just like this.. In that Swara had memory loss n DQ n prithvi raj was there… So just asked
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Post soon ????
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r u a malayali???
No I’m Bengali….
oh…seeing dq and pridviraj….