*Introduction or Character sketch*
SANSKAR MAHESWARI: a famous business tycoon Lives in Kolkata alone … Loves only 2person in his life i.e his father Ram Maheswari and sis uttara
Who lives in abroad …
Takes life as a fun game and satisfies his lust with one or other girl
SWARA GADODIA: a sweet and lovely girl …loves her step mother kaveri and step sis kavitha even though they treat her as a slave
Never shows up her sorrows to the world …wait wait is it a world no no it’s a cruel world for her
So his lust and her sorrows will ever change???
If it will change also then in wat is it love or obsession ????
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***********EPISODE-1************
SM MANSION
Sanskar: Dolly aunty … Dolly aunty ..suresh ..suresh
He shouts and calls the servant of his mansion ….both dolly and suresh comes there
Dolly:haan sanskar baba
Sanskar:(bossy tone) dolly aunty …suresh Tat rooms r cleaned right and …
Suresh :(smiles & interrupts) haan bhaiya rooms r cleaned and every favorite dishes of ram sahab and uttara beti’s r prepared
Sanskar: with less salt Right ..
Suresh:haan bhaiya ..(smiles)
Sanskar: good…everything should be perfect …dad and uttu r coming here …they will stay here
He said thz with so happiness tat it’s a world’s bestest gift to him
He was abt to leave from there
But…
Dolly:but sanskar baba ..
Sanskar: (turns) Haan dolly aunty anything to say …
He looks questionly at her raising his eyebrows while she looks at him in hesitation
Dolly:wo …tat …room …should …
She hesitatly points towards a room where he used to do his daily love making I mean satisfying his lust with girl …
Dolly: wo ram sahab is coming here na tho …if he see’s the girls dresses in tat room….
Sanskar: (cuts off) lock it
He said with bossy tone .. She nodes ….and locks the door
Sanskar takes a sigh seeing tat …
Just then a voice
Voice: so finally sanskar Maheswari is free …at least today
He hears it and gets happy coz it was familiar voice to him …
He immedeatly turns and finds ….his dad ram and sis uttara standing at the door with a smile
Sanskar: (happy)☺ dad …uttu
He walks towards them …. Ram and uttara smiles …. Ram extends his arm for a hug …sanskar smiles and hugs him
Ram:how r u my son
Sanskar: (releases the hug) I’m sanskar Maheswari dad … No one can harm me …then obvio I’m fine right
He says thz with so proud ..with Smirk and raising his eyebrows
Ram just smiles and pats his cheeks
Ram:I know son …I know and I wish ur happiness starts and exit in a good and pure path
Sanskar smiles and looks at uttara …
Sanskar: (hugs her) how r u uttu
Uttara: (smiles ) I’m fine bhai
He releases the hug and pulls her cheeks
Uttara:aoooo bhai
She hits him …he laughs
Sanskar: I miss u uttu
Uttara:(hugs him) I miss u too bhai
Ram smiles looking at his kids who r looking so happy
Ram:Sanskar ..(serious tone)
Sanskar: (looks at him) yes dad
Ram:I said u ki I wanna talk u abt something important right
Sanskar: yes dad wat is tat
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Gadodia house
Kaveri:kavitha one more bite ..
She say’s feeding kavitha
Kavitha: no ..no mom my stomach is full …I don’t want
Swara was standing looking at them with a smile …kaveri see’s thz and gets angry ….jerks the food in the plate
Kaveri:? ay chori …wat r u staring huh! …r u keeping eye on my daughters food ..
Swara’s body shivers with a fear by kaveri’s words
Kavitha smirks
Kavitha: mom now tho I don’t want thz food (points her plate )
Make her only eat
Kaveri:? u r right kavi (to swara) ay finish thz left food
Swara nodes with fear and was abt to take the plate …but
Kavitha:1min …let me add some taste to thz food ….so tat it taste better
Kaveri: ? wat r u saying kavi..u…
Kavitha: mom wait na
She smirks and takes a glass of water ….and washes her dirty hand in tat plate ….
Kaveri smirks
Kavitha: (to swara) eat thz ….
Swara nodes
Kaveri:?haan eat it …and after finishing thz food ….prepare nice dishes ….my son-in- law would come anytime to meet my kavitha
Swara nodes
Kavitha: huh! Mom come let’s go
….I have to get ready also
Kaveri: haan come
They leaves from there
Swara looks at the plate which is mixture of food and dirty water …
She gets teary eyes but immediately she wipes her tears
Plastering a smile on her face
Swara:(fake smile) come swara let’s eat ..see na kaveri ma and kavitha have asked u to eat … They love u soo much
She takes a bite from the plate & eats it
Tears were making a way from her beautiful eyes but she was wiping it constantly …plastering a fake smile on her face …
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Here
Ram:I want u to get Marry so…
Sanskar: (cuts off) dad u know tat I’m not interested in marriage stuff
Ram:I know Sanskar ….but thz time I’m not gonna listen to u ..
Sanskar was abt to say something but he shows off his hand.
Ram:I didn’t completed still so listen me
He said thz with so anger tat Sanskar shakes his and sighs
Sanskar: okay
Ram:u know my frnd shekar right
Sanskar: haan but he is expired na (raising his eyebrows)
Ram:yes he is ..so I want u to marry his daughter
Sanskar: (irritatingly) dad
Ram:sanskar I know u aren’t interested and all …bt I want u to marry so visit their place … Spend sometime with shekar’s daughter I’m sure u will like her
And thz iz my final decision
He said thz so strictly tat unwillingly he agreed to his dad’s decision ..coz he can do anything for him …for his happiness …
Sanskar: okay dad …I will … Say Where do they live
Ram:Mumbai (smiles) and u should leave now itself …
He widens his eyes in shock
Sanskar: wat the hell …now I mean ….
Ram:(interrupts) yes …get ready and leave my son
Saying thz he leaves from there
Making his decision final
Uttara chuckles …Sanskar looks at her
Uttara:get ready bhai … U may be Sanskar Maheswari but my dad is not less …he also is Ram Maheswari
She say’s with proud …he smiles and nodes
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So guys how was thz epi …. Hope u liked it ..plz do comment guys
Thank u
Love u all????
60 Comments
Amazing feeling bad for Swara 🙂 but a good concept 🙂
Thank u dr ☺
awesome dear
Thank u dr ☺
awesome
Thank u anu dr ☺
awesome bt feeling bad for swara waiting for nxt part
Thank u dr
And save ur feelings coz u r gonna feel more bad in coming episode fir sure☺
Argggg.. ill kill kaveri and kavi seriously how can a mom and a sis be so cruel …disgusting … cheap idiots … seriously man no heart or wat … kill them soon di …
well coming to maheswari’s they are owsum … may tanu di keep their family bond safe…
sad fr swasan …. but interested to know their love story …
continue soon di .. lovely chappie ….
love u
Awwwww my lil sis clam down
Tanu hai na …tho thz kavitha and kaveri kuch bhi nai huh! …Hai na?
Thank u sis …u find it interesting
Awesome dear
My poor shona
Thank u dr ☺
Sooooooooooo
niceeeeeeeeeeeee
Thank u dr ☺
One more epi pls…its so nice…
Thank u dr
Inshallah nxt epi will post☺
Poor swara.. ? hate this kaveri & kavitha.
Awesome part dear.
Update the next part soon.
Thank u dr ….I too hate them
☺
Awsm dii..loved it please upload soon…I cried thinking of swara…
Thank u dr …and inshallah next epi will post soon☺
i loved it di
this kind of story just touches my heart
take care
Thank u dr …
U liked my cover pic …thank u it was fir swasan ??
Tc
Awesome…. hope sanskar saves swara and sanskar too will change his character. Yuck kavi and kaveri…. cruel hearted..
Thank u Navi dr …
And abt ur hopes …aage aage dekho hota hai kya??
Awesome yaar ? loved it cant wait for swasan Meeting chipku kavita dont dream too much beacuse sanskar will Fall for swara hahahah cant wait plzzz make kaveri n kavita life hell
Thank u dr ….abt ur guess hmm umm
I really don’t know??
Tanu dear I know how crazy you are about swasan n you cant See that chipku kavita with sanskar soo ??I think my guess will be right hope so
the quote on the cover page was……….um……..very u know true love type and i loved it
awsome….hope at least sanskar don’t torture her….
Thank u dr …
And abt ur hope …hmm I don’t know dr ??
Awsm but feeling bad for swara??????
Thank u dr …?
If was just beginning u felt bad … In coming epi there is a lot dr
Awesome loved it
Thanks yaar ☺
awesome episode and a very nyc concept still feeling bad for swara
Thank u dr ☺
Awsm
Goodiee….but swara ….hmm not so gud..
liked it
Awesome
Waiting fr the nxt prt.
It’s awesome dear …..feeling bad for Swara…….post next part soon
nice..tc..
Tanu ki bachi main tujhe zinda nahi chorun gi????? Tune nayi FF shuru kardi aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi……. Really bad???……. Ja main tujhse bat nahi karti????? by the way it’s a really nice start……. Finally tune pehli bar lusty Sanku bhi dikha dia warna main to yeh soch soch k confused hogai k tu kabhi uski cuteness ki dukan dikhana bund bhi kare gi ya nahi?????…….. Chal kia yad kare gi ja maaf kia……. And yaar phirse Mahan Swara meri Shonu Monu si innocent baby……. Is cavity aur Kaveri ki to main?????……. Arrghh bhar main daal in ko……. Aur jildi jildi next part upload kar and plsssssss You r my life ka last part upload karde……. Jaan suli p latkai hui hai tune suspense p chor k……. Waiting for all FFs badly?????? janti hun ek sath na likh sakti but teri galti itna acha likhe gi to demands to esi he ain gi na?????????????? Chal Bye Bye Tata……. See you in next part????????????
Awsum..loved it..Poor Swara i feel bad fr her ??this Kaveri n Kavita Huh ???..Tney will Pay fr it i knw n SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI will Teach them a Lesson One Day..n m Waiting fr that DAY..Fulhal Awsum Epi. .loved it..waiting fr swasan love Trck. .continue soon
huh! i read all, i read the Swara’s sorrow..but my mind set on word “lust” only…
goood..shameless me…
Awsm yr …really feeling bad fr swara …pls post nxt soon ..
Great ???
Awesome