SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers….
THIS IS A LONG CHAPTER!!!! HAVE FUN!!!
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Ragini teases Sanskaar, Ragini and Sumi talk about Swasan loving each other
CHAPTER 22
Swara ( after they had driven for a little while in Sanskaar’s convertible) : Sanskaar! Tell me na, What you and Ragini were talking about…
Sanskaar (cheekily while driving) : Why should I tell? Do you have to know everything? You are already a Miss Know It All…. So if you don’t know one thing, I will be very happy….
Swara : Ugghhhh! Why are you always so annoying? Can’t you be nice once at least? And don’t put the debt thing in my face, I know you are a very nice human being to others… But you are so irritating to me. You did that to see Ma and Ragini happy and for that I am so grateful but you are an annoying little idiot!
Sanskaar (softly, in a low voice) : I paid all the debts to see a smile on your face, Swara! Only your face, No one else’s.
Swara froze in the middle of her ranting to look at Sanskaar’s gaze upon her , that was both warm and at the same time so intense that she felt like she was melting…
Swara ( after what seemed like eternity, in the same pitch as Sanskaar) : Why? Why do you care so much for my smile? What am I to you?
Sanskaar (Thinking) : Why did I do this for her? Why do I feel such pleasure looking at the contentment and happiness on her face? What reply do I give her? What do I call this spark between us that never seems to diminsh?
Swara prodded and touched his arm softly.
Swara : Sanskaar, Javaab do na?
Sanskaar (stopping the car in the side) : What answer should I give Swara?
Swara : Why did you pay my debt only to see a smile on my face? What am I to you?
Sanskaar ( putting an arm around her, so that his face can’t be seen by her) : You are my fiancee! You are my best friend and soon you will be my wife. I can do anything for you so that you smile. I cannot let even a single tear drop mar your beautiful face. I cannot bear that Swara! It is my duty and my pleasure to make sure that all your dreams are fulfilled.
Swara stared at him speechless. She didn’t know what to say.
Swara (thinking) : In each word of yours, I can hear the word love. In each touch of yours, I sense that blissful feeling of love, and everytime you touch me, I can see the love oozing from your eyes… So why are you so determined that you don’t love me and it is only a spark between us. Why are you so secretive about your true emotions Sanskaar? Bas, Ek baar…Sirf ek baar, You let me inside your heart and I’ll share your burden. Please Sanskaar…
She suddenly gave him a peck on the cheek, shocking him and making him blush.
Swara (in mock surprise) : Sanskaar Maheshwari? Blushing? Oh My God!!! I have to take a picture of this and post it on instagram…Come on Sanskaar! Smile pinky!
She winked at him while Sanskaar scowled. She clicked a picture but didn’t post it.
Swara : See, Mr Maheshwari! I am a very nice person. I didn’t post the picture.
Sanskaar (rolling his eyes) : Tum bhi na, Swara! But I will get my revenge today. You called me pinky na? Just you wait… Now will you get down? We have reached the temple. We’ll go there quickly, Then we have to go to the places I planned as well.
Swara : I’m coming…I’m coming… Hold your horses.
They got down from the car and went inside the temple.
Inside, Swara handed over the invitation to the pandit ji along with some other puja items like coconut and all. As the Pandit was a person who already knew her, He smiled and greeted her like his own daughter. Sanskaar was surprised to see this connection but kept mum about it. The pandit ji broke the coconut and saw that there was a single jasmine flower in it.
Pandit Ji : Beti! This is really auspicious. A flower in a coconut ensures that the husband loves his wife to eternity and a blackness in the coconut ensures that you will have misfortunes always. You are really lucky to get such an amazing husband. Swara! For this immense fortune of yours, Why don’t you yourself sing the Aarti today and you and your young man can perform it…
Swara looked at Sanskaar who nodded. She smiled and took the plate from the Pandit. Sanskaar joined her and they began performing the Aarti while Swara sang….
Me aarti teri gau,o keshav kunj bihari
Me aarti teri gau,o keshav kunj bihari
Me nit nit sheesh navau, oh Mohan Krishan murari
Main nit nit sheesh navau, oh Mohan Krishan murari
Hai teri chabi anokhi , aisi na duji dekhi-2
Tujh sa naa Sundar koi, Oh mor Mukutdhari (2)
Main aarti teri ……….
Jo aaye sharan Tihari, Vipdaa mit jaaye saari
Ham sab par kripa rakhna, O jagat ke Palanhaari (2)
Main arati teri gaau ………..
Mein neet neet sish namaau, Oh Mohan Krishna Murari
Sanskaar gazed at her in surprise. This was the first time he had heard Swara sing. Hell, He hadn’t even known she had such a cuckoo like voice, So sweet and soft, Yet so rich that it made you so entranced in her singing.
They finished the Aarti and gave the invitation to the Pandit Ji who went inside to keep the invitation at the Lord’s feet. Swara and Sanskaar folded their hands and prayed, Swara closing her eyes. Sanskaar stared at her throughout the time she prayed.
Sanskaar (thinking) : Everyday she manages to surprise me. Everyday I learn a new thing about her. And What a voice she has, Oh blo*dy hell! I don’t even know the first thing about music, Yet I can understand every emotion and every word poured out. What is this? Is this only for Swara’s voice or is it for everyone?
Swara finally opened her eyes and folded her hands one last time. They received blessings from the Pandit Ji who assured them that they would be together for seven lifetimes and would love each other forever. Sanskaar listened to this with some surprise as he thought that the Pandit Ji was speaking nonsense. Swara didn’t love him. And neither did he. But Swara said nothing. She just smiled and accepted the blessings cheerfully.
As they went around the temple, He asked her.
Sanskaar (with some trepidation ) : Swara! Why did you accept the Pandit Ji’s sayings? Why did you not correct him and tell him that this marriage is a marriage without love?
Swara (smiled at him) : Sanskaar! What should I tell the Pandit Ji? That you don’t love me? That this is a atypical marriage? What would we gain by that? And who said that this is a loveless marriage?
Sanskaar turned to look at Swara with surprise.
Sanskaar : Swa…
Swara (putting a finger on his lips shushing him) : Let me finish, Mr Maheshwari! This isn’t a loveless marriage at all. I am going to gain the love of your entire family. Badi Ma, Mom, Adarsh, Laksh and Uttara! And you already have Ma’s and Ragini’s love. So tell me, How is this a loveless marriage? And whatever we have between us may not be love. But there is friendship. And where friendship is present, Love too is there. A different sort of love perhaps, But it is still there.
Sanskaar was speechless. He had no answer at all to give her. She had effectively answered all his existing questions, but posed several new ones. This friendship could turn into love? What was love? What did it mean?
He stood musing about it as Swara moved on forward, going around the temple. He followed her, thinking about her words and their past memories.
Ni Mein Devaan Duvavaan
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Mein Devaan Duvavaan
Bhaavein Kamli Naam Dharavaan-2
Par Iko Hi Rattan Lagaanva.
Tuuuu…… Meri Jaan Hai
Tuuu…. Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuu…… Meri Jaan Hai
Tuuu…. Mera Armaan Hai
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan
Rabba Mere Pyaar Ko Nazar Lag Jaave Na-2
Mangiyaan Duvavaan Lakhaan Dukh Hun Sataave Na
Tainun Dil Da Haal Sunavaan
Ni Mein Lakh Lakh Shukar Manavaan
Ni Mein Kamli Naam Dharavaan
Par Iko Hi Rattan Lagavaan
Tuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tu… Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai Tu Mera Armaan Hai
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan
Bhaaven Kamli Naam Dharavaan
Par Iko Hi Ratan Lagavaan
Tuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tu… Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tuu… Mera Armaan Hai
They came out of the temple and started off, Sanskaar again at the wheel.
Swara : Sanskaar!
She received no response. Sanskaar was still thinking about his feelings and was confused.
Swara (louder) : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar (startled) : Huh…. What?
Swara : Where are we going now?
Sanskaar (firmly putting his thoughts behind, determined to enjoy his date with Swara) : Offo Swara! Miss Know-it-all! Quietly sit down and enjoy the ride na? Do you have to know everything? It is a surprise, Bas…
Swara : Ok…Chill! I won’t ask you again. And by the way, Stop calling me Know-it-all…
Sanskaar : Nahi! You are a know-it-all, Miss Gadodia!
Swara : Sanskaar Maheshwari! You had better stop that otherwise…
Sanskaar (smirking evilly) : Otherwise? What will you do, Miss Know-it-all?
Swara : Aargh! Otherwise I’ll call you Mr Pinky! Do you want that? Pinky sounds worse, Much worse than Know-it-all…What do you say, Mr Maheshwari?
Sanskaar (raised an eyebrow) : You’re going to call me Mr Pinky? Really?
Swara ( beginning to feel a bit suspicious) : Ha..an!
He stopped the car in the side of the highway and pulled the convertible cover to shield them.
Swara (now more suspicious) : Sanskaar? What are you doing? Why are you putting the top? What….
Sanskaar (placing a finger on her lips, In a low voice) : Miss Know-it-all! How many question? You called me Mr Pinky na? Now we will see who is the actual Pinky.
He moved forward, closer to her.
Swara ( feeling the pangs of desire, but still feeling that should be the sane one) : Sanskaar! What are you doing? This is a car…
Sanskaar placed his mouth on hers and all Swara’s sense and sensibility went flying out the window. At that moment, she didn’t care about anything, except for the fact that she was being cherished and loved in a manner that no one else, No one other than her Sanskaar could.
They finally released each other, as they needed air to breathe. The air in the car had suddenly grown a thousandfold. Swara gazed into the mirror and saw her hair, all mussed up, Her dupatta and salwar all wrinkled and her lips, all puckered up.
In short, She looked like a woman who had been soundly kissed. She blushed crimson thinking of their kiss.
Sanskaar (seeing the blush, smirked evilly) : Hah! Now who’s the Pinky? Wow, Swara! I have never seen such a bright shade of pink before? Or is it red?
Swara glared at him.
Swara : You beast! You kissed me just to prove a point? Did the kiss mean nothing to you? Was it simply to convince me that I should not tease you?
Sanskaar (suddenly serious, grasped Swara’s hands and pulled her towards him) : Don’t ever say that! Swara, Each kiss and each hug with you means something…. It’s the spark… And I will never insult a woman like that just to prove a point. You know that. You also know how much this intimacy means to me. Please don’t say things like that.
Swara (sighed as she heard the word spark again) : I know Sanskaar! I was just… Just mad that I got outwitted. I know you could never do such a thing just to prove a point. Sorry!
She held her ears and looked at him with puppy dog eyes. He burst out laughing.
Sanskaar : Swara! You are seriously going to be fun to live with. No one irritates me as much as you do and no one makes me laugh and smile as much as you do…
Swara (smiled) : Accha? That’s nice. Now shall we leave? I want to see my surprise…
Sanskaar nodded and started the car again, opening the top of the convertible.
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ABOUT 2 HOURS LATER
Swara (shocked and a bit angry) : Sanskaar! What is this? What if I slip and fall? I can’t believe this was your idea of a date…
Sanskaar (placatingly) : Come on Swara! It will be fun… I thought you were a sport.. Please chalo….
Swara gazed around the place. ROCKY RAPELLING AND ZIP-LINING CAMP. The man wanted them to play adventure sports for a date.
Swara : Oh God, Sanskaar! I’ll come. Not because you told that I’m not a sport, But because I want to try something new. But let me tell you, If I die today, My ghost will haunt you forever. I won’t leave you.
Sanskaar ( Suddenly angry) : Don’t ever talk about you dying in front of me Swara! I cannot bear it.
Swara ( pleased with his reaction, but doesn’t show it) : Ok Baba! Now come, We will go. I’m not going to come rapelling. I’ll only come for zip-lining! I’m more interested in that.
Sanskaar : Ok! Then we will do that first…
They went near the zip-lining entrance and paid for their ticket. They went up 28 floors in silence, just apprehensively anticipating the thing they were about to do.
Swara ( suddenly shocked) : Sanskaar! I’m wearing a salwar! How can I go? Shit!! You should have told me na? I have a spare set in the car. Wait…I ‘ll change and then we’ll go.
Sanskaar : No need Swara! You’ll need that dress for later. This is fine. Come on.
Swara nodded and went first. The attendant tied her to the belt and instructed her on how to hold the harness and how to land.
She looked at Sanskaar with terror, But his calm confidence and assuring look comforted and calmed her. She smiled at him and was sent off.
Swara closed her eyes at first, But soon opened them. She could see the clouds looming closer. She saw many buildings and could see kids playing inside, Couples enjoying a romantic movie among other things. She felt light, and happy. She felt like she could conquer the world. All because she had tried one stupid little thing. She smiled triumphantly.
Swara (thinking) : If I can do this, Then surely I can conquer Sanskaar’s heart. Surely I can.
All too soon, She reached the end and had to get down. Sanskaar was about 2 minutes behind her in another line. He got down and went immediately to her.
Before Sanskaar could ask anything, Swara gave him such a huge bear hug, not caring that there were many people to view them.
Swara : Thank you… Thank you… Thank you so much Sanskaar! For bringing me here, For showing me that I can do anything if I attempt to. Thank you so much!
Sanskaar( His heart about to burst with happiness and pride) : Oh my God Swara! If I had known that the way to conquer your heart was to take you to a adventure sport… I would have done it ages ago! Itna samay nahi leta!
Swara : Pagal! You can’t even accept a compliment without making us quarrel again. But I am too happy now to argue. Jao, Go for your rapelling. I’ll wait here.
Sanskaar nodded and went.
Swara : Mr Maheshwari! You already conquered my heart. It does not belong to me now. It belongs to you. I have accepted this. But when will you accept it? How will I find out why you’re so against this? Swara Gadodia! You have to do something. You have to find out what it is.
Sanskaar came back 20 minutes later very pleased.
Swara : What are you so pleased about?
Sanskaar : That instructor said that I was the best out of all of them. Hah! I am the best…
Swara ( rolling her eyes) : I have Narcissus here with me. And I’m marrying him. God! Bachao mujhe…
Sanskaar : Hey, Swara! You can’t say like that and all. You are lucky to have me. Remember, The Pandit Ji also said that…..
He winked at her, but inwardly the thoughts that he had kept bottled up since the temple floated through his mind again.
Swara (interrupting his thought process) : Sanskaar! While you were giving your so called best performance, I founf out something and I want to go there. Can we go? Or is there something else you’d like to do?
Sanskaar : We’ll go wherever you want to go. But we have to leave by 6 as there is one last place I want to take you.
Swara : Ok! It is 2:30 now. We will easily leave by 6, Don’t worry.. And this time, I will drive…
Sanskaar ( half preoccupied with the thoughts running in his head) : Ok!
She took the keys and they set off silently. Swara concentrating on the GPS and Sanskaar thinking about his feelings.
Sanskaar looked at Swara! He could put it off no longer.. He had to ask her…
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara : Yeah?
Sanskaar : Swara, What is love?
Swara slammed the brakes so hard that they almost flew out of the car…
Swara : WHAT?
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PRECAP : SWASAN DATE CONTD
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I know you all are angry with me for not posting earlier… I’m so sorry… I know if I was a reader like you, Then I would have thought that these were only excuses and nothing happened. But Please, I assure you… I really couldn’t update sooner.
I hate to be thought irregular, But some things are wrong… I’ m sorry..
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Coming to today’s episode, I was really happy when I finished with it… After a long time, I was satisfied with a chapter. I hope you guys too feel the same way..
Even if you don’t, Please tell me how I can improve…
And Swasan enagagement will happen within the next three chapters… You won’t have to wait long
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I know that the song lyrics and everything made it really filmy… I couldn’t help it.. I want it to be realistic but I seriously couldn’t post without copying the lyrics…
SHRADDHA, this is especially for you… I know how much you didn’t want it to be filmy.. Sorry for disappointing you..
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Guys, I was reading the earlier chapters today and my story has completely deviated. Those who’ve read the book, This is ok, Right? It is not bad? Should I have continued with the book?
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PLEASE ANSWER ALL MY QUERIES and DON’T FORGET TO COMMENT, BE IT GOOD OR BAD!!
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73 Comments
Hey anjali…. Its true that u hav changed the plot according to ur ideas but its going good n well too….. N the epi was too good n confused sanskar well it was pleasant to read… So as a whole good n keep going
Thnxxx dev…
Glad you like it….
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Just loved the episode. .. No words to say.. thnx for the update anjali… n plz upload nxt ASAP. .. cant wait
I have a doubt I know dat swara is now in love with sanskar… she even trusts him… BT she can’t forget he was a casanova this was the reason for his bad image in her mind… BT till now she didn’t ask sanskar dat he will cheat her or nt as she is straight forward prsn she should have asked him. .n this was really amazing chapter i read it 3 tym. .. n thn commented. … I possible thn today plz upload the next… as it will come in flow
Thnxxx sujata….
Wow three times….I’m honoured…
Well in the chapter where sanskaar agreed to marry swara….. I had mentioned that sanskaar promised swara that he would never stray….
But you got me thinking…
I could tweak the track a bit….
Thnxxx??
Lets see if u manage to insert it..
I*
its nice! especially last part sanskar’s question and swara’s reaction. even the song was nice i loved the entire epi!
Thank you sooo much riya…..
But which book it is from
Julia Quinn’s. The viscount who loved me…plot is copied from the book but she is writing with her own ideas now
Like jiya said??
Just loved it Anjali…. Good going but please update the next one asap….I m just Loving it
Thnxxx jiya….
Will try to upload asap
Awesome dear
Thnxxx juan….
Nice…….n continued with book
Thnxxx ankita….
Sorry, I didn’t understand…
You think I should have continued with the book?? Or is this good??
This is not at all.deviated. but u have adopted it in a Indian way.
And also date is not complete yet. M more interested in that. 🙂
Dnt worry. U will still succeed in what u want to convey. AL d best.
Thnxxx dhara….
Yeah…when I started writing I found that I could not complete in a single chapter…
Will post next today…
Wow such a lovely episode..eagrly waiting fr nxt
Thnxxx kittu……
Am glad you liked it….
Will post next asap
Anjali… it does nt matter whether u follow dat book… ur writer,ur creator u, u hav right to bringout ur ideas…. we will read… i think boik is not neede here… ur story nly i need dr… nd today ws awesome…. sanskar does nt whn he fell in lov with swara nd he is still ignorant abt lov nd making swara also feel bad and emotional… no confusion anjali plz do continue…
Last para few mistakes *book *today epi ws awesome * sanskar does nt know whn…
Thnxxx navi…..
Am so glad you feel this way….
LOVE YOU???
And yeah …idc about the typos….
Only ur wishes
Nd one more thing I m thinking that what would be d perfect situation to reveal Sanskar’s fear. U can’t go according to book that’s what I feel.
Even I’m thinking about that….have thought of something… but need to find a way to insert it…
Beautiful, mind blowing, amazing, lovely, breathtaking, etc.etc.all emotions are less for this episode… You brought the best out of it…love u so much Anjili..now waiting for ur next..plz allow us to know why sanskar hates love so much..
Thank you sooo much richa….??????
And sanskaar doesn’t hate love….
He fears it…
Will show more about this in the next epi
I love your chapter always……keep it up
Thnxxx Arati… 🙂
its complete super I loved very much waiting fr epi eagerly
Thnxxx maya….
Will upload soon
awesome part anjali … continue soon
Thnxxx Esha….
Will upload asap
Really superb chptr I really enjoyed and pllzzzzz continue pllzzzzzzz update soon
Thnxxx Fatima….
Glad you loved it…
Will upload asap
Nce dear but date should be completed by this chapter but no problem waiting for it……..nd ur story is not at all boring I..no no we all love it ?
Thnxxx l khan ….
I actually thought I could finish it in this chapter.. but then decided not to ….
As I included so many extra feelings and confusion of sanskaar….
I read it one more time.. U remind me my 1st experience of zip-lining.. and u know what, my 3 yr daughter has also done it. She was super excited to do it and she was very happy after doing that..
Sorry for boring u guys.. but I couldn’t stop my self sharing my n my daughter’s experience.
Anjali, I know upcoming chapters are goona fun ride with SwaSan. Don’t underestimate urself. And also u can go back to book whenever u run out of idea.. Sorry free mein advice.. But I love ur ff.. So I can’t stop doing all bla bla bla..
Omg….dhara, I never knew you were so much older than me ,
I’m so sorry…
Do you wish me to address you in some other fashion?
And thank you sooo much for reading it again….
Awww.. . Even I chose zip lining because I had done it before and love the high it gave me…
Wanted something unconventional foe the date and bike rides have been overdone, so chose this…
I’m Soo happy you have such confidence in me….
SRSLY LOVE YOU ????
I m fine with “Dhara” only.. 🙂
You’re sure right??
I seriously thought you were a student like many of the others…
Wow…you’re really cool and a 3 year old daughter..
So adorable..
I love small kids. 😀
Awesome date…u’re making it more interesting day by day..just loving it ??
Thnxxx pranami….
Glad you love it…
Awesome dear
Plz update soon
Thanxxx shagun…
Will upload asap
hey di the episode was awesome and pls continue I was smiling all along the episode and the best part was the kissing one I just love the way u wright di love u
Thank you sooo much divya….
How old are you exactly??
I really don’t mind you calling me Anjali…no matter how young you are…
Love you too….glad you love my ff Soo muxh
di I am only 13yrs old and too young but if don’t mind then its ok
its just awsm………
Thnxxx Pooja.. 🙂
Wow its such good feeling to see ppl of all age reading and appreciating this ff..and why not.. Its so beautifully written..hats off anjali yaar..
Thank you Soo much anandi….
In really glad you like my story…. 🙂 <3
Awesome dear…
Thnxx dolly….
Wow anjali! The was just another mind blowing chapter.?? when are you gonna upload the next one? Eagerly waiting for it.?
Thank you Soo much angel….
Will try to upload asap…
Nice episode dear..
Thnxxx afra….. 😉
amazing….
Thnxxx newbie……
Woahhhh hoaooo Man what an awesome episode??
It was indeed a Feast morning morning but den Coll bhi Jana tha….??
So commenting now??
Now again I read n I’m still having the same smile dat I had this morning?
Mr Maheshwaris idea for a date is pretty exiting yaar??
N trust me yr Anjali the moment I saw the line dat swara is going to sing artiii one that came to my mind was this
Had heard it the first time in Yeh Rishta serial ….hahahah it was nyc coincidence u know?
Now waiting for next update like helll?
Jaldi jaldiiii dooooo plzzz??
Thnxxx Shraddha……
Glad you liked it… :*
Lol.. I didn’t know which Aarti song to put, But then decided on this, I love all songs in YRKKH… <3
Seriously glad that you liked this idea of a date…
Will upload soon….
Heyy guys, I don’t know why…. But today I feel very uneasy…
Everytime when I read your comments, I feel exhilarated and so encouraged, but today I feel like you guys didn’t enjoy it as much as I thought you would…
Maybe my expectations were more, Or maybe it wasn’t a good enough chapter as I thought it was… Or maybe everything is just in my imagination…
But somehow I get the feeling that I et you ppl down with this chaapter…
Your comments are all the same and sweet.. But I still have that feeling… 🙁
That is because u r nervous about ur upcoming episodes. Don’t take tension. Even Sachin Tendulkar also could not make 100 in every match.. So be calm n cool. God bless u..
I love ur story…plz update fast….I’m egerly waiting to read them..plz update soon..plz..plz
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Keep writing u have an amazing skill…
Good bless u dr.
Thnxxx Shani.. Will update soon
Ur welcome dr…I need a super long episode ok if u have free time upload a super long episode…ok…if u don’t have enough time…no problem