SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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Phase 2
CHAPTER 27
THAT SAME NIGHT 1:00am
Swara sat in her room staring at the ring now adorning her ring finger in her left hand. As she stared at it with a smile on her face thinking about the events that had taken place hours ago, Her phone rang.
Swara (picking it up) : Hi Sanskaar!
Sanskaar : Did you even look at the caller ID before you called?
Swara (smiling) : No… I just knew it was you…
Sanskaar (Suddenly his voice million times brighter) : I bet I know what you were doing.
Swara : Accha? What was I doing?
Sanskaar : You……
Swara : Haan bolo!
Sanskaar : You were looking at your ring and thinking about it na?
Swara was so surprised she dropped the phone. THUD
Sanskaar (concerned) : What was that? Are you alright Swara?
Swara (hastily picking up the phone) : Haan Sanskaar! Mujhe kuch nahi hua! Don’t worry. I only dropped the phone.
Sanskaar (amused now) : Because I correctly guessed what you were doing?
Swara : Nahi toh! Why would I admire the ring you gave me? Batao mujhe… I was thinking about tomorrow…
Sanskaar : Liar! I know you Swara Gadodia! And I know exactly what you were doing…
Swara (softly) : You know me so well now, is it?
Sanskaar : How could I not?
The air suddenly felt warm and Swara saw her cheeks turn pink.
Sanskaar : Swara! Swara! Lost in your own world are you? Only pagal people do that…
Swara (indignantly) : Sanskaar! I’m pagal now? Arre, How mean can you be? First you call me Miss Know-it-all, then you call me Miss Pinky…I have such a sweet name, Swara Gadodia! Call me Swara…
Sanskaar : Kyun? You call me Mr Maheshwari… When even I have such a nice name.. Sanskaar… Have you ever heard such a unique name before?
Swara : Excuse me? Swara is more unique than Sanskaar…. Tumhara naam toh kitna boring hai… Sanskaar.. Cultures… Whatever.. And listen to mine.. SWARA.. Nice and small, so musical.. Mine’s better than yours.
Sanskaar (indignantly) : My name is boring? Wait, I’ll tell mom… Let her learn how her bahu really is… She doesn’t even care about her husband’s feelings.
Swara (chuckling) : Are you a 5 year old boy, Sanskaar? Mom ko bolne ja rahe ho?
Sanskaar (in fake anger) : Arre.. Hadd hai! Now I am a 5 year old boy? Jao Swara! I don’t want to talk to you..
Swara : You’re using MY line on me? Very nice….. Accha, ok! No more teasing.. Baat karlo.. Sorry! Your name is very very nice.. I like it a lot.. Happy now?
Sanskaar (smiling) : Yes! (in a teasing tone) I know you want to talk to me… After all, You love me na?
Swara was shocked. What did Sanskaar just say?
Swara (stammering) : er…Wh…aat?
Sanskaar (puzzled at her tone) : Mazaak tha Swara! Didn’t you realise?
Swara (disappointed but at the same time relieved) : Ohhh! Ofcourse….
Sanskaar : Haan! Vaise, What were you thinking about? Tomorrow? Kal kya hai?
Swara (incredulously) : You don’t remember? (excitedly) Kal Holi hai!!
Sanskaar (unenthusiastically) : Holi… Ohh!
Swara (surprised) : So unenthusiastic? You don’t like Holi?
Sanskaar : Nahi! I play Holi and all… Par I’ve never been interested in it. It is just too colourful. It is too cheerful for me. I don’t enjoy it that much. I play with Laksh, Adarsh and Uttara for about 15 minutes.. That’s all.
Sanskaar (thinking) : How can I enjoy such a wonderful festival when I know I won’t be there to see it in a few years… But how do I explain that to you, Swara?
On the other hand,
Swara (thinking) : Sanskaar! Why are you like this? What are you so afraid of that you refuse to embrace life the way it is supposed to be? What is it that you’re hiding? Please tell me…
Swara (loudly ): Sanskaar! This time you have to play holi the whole day.
Sanskaar : No chance Swara! Are you kidding me?
Swara (pleading) : Please? For me? You anyway have to give me a gift for our engagement na?
Sanskaar (in a disbelieving tone) : Gift? Another one?
Swara : Arre! When did you give me?
Sanskaar : Toh phir voh room me jo maine kiya, voh kya tha?
Swara : That was the plan for you to mollify me. That’s not counted as a gift.
Sanskaar (after thinking for some time) : Fine Swara. Whatever you say. But, What about that necklace?
Swara : You only told me Sanskaar, that, that was the gift for our date. It is not counted as my engagement gift.
Sanskaar : Not fair Swara. You can’t blackmail me like this. I’m not going to play holi and that’s final.
Swara : Boo Sanskaar! Boo….
They stay silent for some time,
Swara : Fine. I’ve thought of something.
Sanskaar : What?
Swara : We love challenging each other na? So it’s time for the next one.
Sanskaar (in anticipation) : Alright Miss Gadodia! Let’s listen to your next challenge.
Swara : Mr Maheshwari! Tomorrow, If I manage to put colour on you within half an hour of you waking up, Then you owe me a boon. I can ask anything of you and you cannot refuse. Whether it is your deepest, darkest secret or some perfectly ordinary thing. Do you accept.
Sanskaar : Swara! You do realise you’ve put me in an immense advantage here. It all depends on when I wake up. Yeh kitna easy challenge hai. I will win in a heartbeat. But what do I get if I win?
Swara (with no hesitation) : Anything!
Sanskaar (with renewed interest ) : Anything? Ok! I’m up for the challenge. All the best Swara Gadodia!
Swara : All the best Sanskaar Maheshwari! You’ll need it kyunki jeet meri hai!
Sanskaar : Haan! We’ll see about that! Ab bahut late ho chuka hai. Go to sleep, Good night!
Swara : Good night Sanskaar….. (just before he cut the call) By the way, Swara is the better name.
Sanskaar chuckled and hung up the phone.
Swara sat down thoughtfully.
Swara : Challenge toh tumne kar diya…. But what are you going to do to win it?
After thinking for some time, She called Laksh!
Laksh : Hi Swara! What’s up? Why are you still awake?
Swara : I have to win the challenge LAksh!
Laksh (surprised and amused) : Another challenge? Offo! When will they end? Now tell me, What do you want me to do?
Swara : See……
She told him about the plan and Laksh let out a low whistle.
Laksh : I will pray for you Swara, Because tomorrow you might just killed by him.
Swara : Aisa kuch nahi hoga! Now will you do all this?
Laksh : Haan! Don’t worry. It will be done. Bye Swara!
Swara thanked him and kept the phone down.
Swara : This year, Mr Maheshwari! This year, You will celebrate a colourful Holi.. You will begin to forget the darkness you store in your heart and will breathe a new life. That is my promise to you Sanskaar! As a bahu, As a bhabhi, As a patni, As a woman who loves you, I promise that I will bring the former Sanskaar back into this world. This will happen one day. And for that to happen, I need to win this challenge tomorrow. All the best, Swara Gadodia!
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THE NEXT MORNING
Sanskaar woke up drowsily. He turned to the side, took his phone and checked the time.
Sanskaar (his eyes wide open) : Oh Shit! It is 7:30 already? What if Swara already woke up? She is very cunning. She could be planning all sorts of things. Ab Sanskaar! Jaldi utt… At least you have locked the bedroom door so no one could have come in at all. Now, fatafat se ready ho ja… Then stay here until your half an hour is up. After that, You can go and see her face which is going to be so crestfallen.
He smiled diabolically and went inside the washroom to freshen himself. He came out after some time wearing a white kurta pyjama and wiped himself with the towel.
Sanskaar (looking at the clock and smiling) : Miss Know-it-all… Your time is almost up. 10 minutes left. Let’s see what you manage to do.
He waited and waited until he was tired. He checked the time and was surprised to see only 4 minutes had gone by.
Sanskaar : Is this girl still sleeping or what? This challenge was so easy. I want to win, but inti aasaani se? Chi! Swara, Offer me some resistance.
He called her.
Swara (picking up immediately) : Good morning Sanskaar! Happy Holi!
Sanskaar (without any preamble) : What are you up to?
Swara (innocently) : What am I upto? Matlab?
Sanskaar : Oh! don’t act, Baby! I know exactly how cunning and clever you are.
Swara : Well, You’ll find out in another 5 minutes, So why don’t you wait….
Sanskaar : Swa…
But she had already cut the call. He paced about the room restlessly until the 5 minutes were up.
Sanskaar : Bas! Now let’s see what happens.
He apprehensively went to the door, opened it and peeped up first, to see if any bucket of coloured water was being kept. Seeing nothing, he glanced in the corridor to see if anyone else was there.
Laksh (laughing) : Bhai! Itna kya dar rahe ho? Come out.. Swara’s not here.
Sanskaar turned to his right to see Laksh, Adarsh, Uttara and Ragini all covered in pink, green and yellow.
Adarsh : Don’t worry bhai! We won’t throw colour on you. By the way, Here, Take this. Swara has something to say to you.
Sanskaar took Adarsh’s phone puzzled.
Sanskaar : Hello! Swara, where are you?
Swara : Sanskaar! I won the challenge, But…..
Sanskaar (snorted) : You won. What bullshit! Nahi… Kuch bhi… You LOST!!!!
Swara (chuckling) : Sanskaar! Have you seen your face?
Sanskaar : My…face?
The others burst out laughing. Sanskaar gave them all a glare, then ran into his room and looked into the mirror.
Sanskaar (shocked) : WHAT THE HELL? How did this happen?
Swara (laughing in the phone) : Bechara! Wouldn’t you like to know how exactly I did all this?
Sanskaar : How in the world did you do it, Woman? Tell me…
Swara : Um….. Nope. I don’t want to now. I’m feeling very generous today, My fiance, Toh, I’m going to give you another challenge. I’m in a room in this house. If you manage to find me within the next ten minutes and put colour on me, Then you win. But at the same time, I will try to put colour on you. If the colour falls on you, You lose. Do you accept?
Sanskaar : Find the room, Put colour, Do not get any on yourself…. Sounds easy enough…
Swara : Alright then, Mr Maheshwari! Your time starts now.
Sanskaar dashed out of the room and took a little amount of pink colour from Uttara. The four( Laksh, Adarsh, Uttara and Ragini) sat down in the staircase to stay and watch the fun that they knew was about to happen.
Sanskaar went one way and the other way but couldn’t find Swara anywhere. He came to the quartet.
Sanskaar (panting) : Arre! Someone tell me, Where the hell is my supposedly nice and kind fiancee. Seriously, Does anyone trouble their fiance so much?
Uttara : Sanskaar! Swara Bhabhi ke khilaaf ek shabd nahi.
Sanskaar : It’s useless to talk to you three. You’ll take her side. (He turnes to Ragini) Ragini! Please, madad kar do na? Just look how your sister is troubling me. Please, You only told right, Jiju before Di! Please Ragini!
Ragini (feeling sorry for the man) : Ok fine! I will show you where she is.
Laksh (shocked) : Ragini!
Sanskaar (dangerously) : Laksh Maheshwari! I will inflict bodyily harm on you if you dissuade her from telling me… You tell me Ragini! Laksh won’t trouble you now.
She pointed towards a door in the right aisle of the staircase.
Sanskaar (smiling) : I am coming Swara!
He started running towards the room without any forethought and opened the door.
Sanskaar (shouting) : SWAR….
Splash! A huge bucket of blue, pink and green colour water came swooping on Sanskaar who got drenched before he had even had time to think.
Swara (in the farthest corner of the room, Laughing loudly) : Oh My GOd!….. I win….. I win again….
The quartet too laughed as they began coming up. Sanskaar stood there at the doorway looking at Swara murderously.
Sanskaar ( removing the wet hair that covered his eyes, in exasperation ) : Irritating woman! What did you do?
Swara (triumphantly, smirking joyfully) : What? I issued a challenge, You accepted it. So I have to fight for my life here… I will do anything necessary to win Baby, So you just have to accept it. Oh God! Just look at you…
She burst out laughing again. Sanskaar, who was fit to explode, just stopped. His irritation just fizzled out looking at Swara. She had worn a sleeveless off-white Saree with her left loose and looked utterly charming. She was not covered in any colour at all. Still completely colour free.
The others joined them and Swara’s laughter doubled. They all stood laughing at Sanskaar while he stood there at a loss, not knowing whether to smile or glare at them.
Laksh (panting, unable to breathe because of laughing so much) : Swara, I swear that was the best plan ever. Too good! What fun we are going to have in this house once you come here.
Sanskaar ( confused) : Plan?
Swara nodded.
Laksh : Yes, Bhai. Plan!
Swara (continued) : After we spoke last night, I called Laksh and told him what he had to do.
Laksh : Remember, I called you outside and told that Adarsh wanted to talk to you and so you went to his room?
Sanskaar : Yes, But….
Adarsh : While I was talking all sorts of nonsense to you, Uttara and Laksh went into your room and applied colour on all the towels. Obviously you would use them first thing in the morning, and our Swara bhabhi would win.
Sanskaar stared at them open-mouthed. Swara smiled at him.
Swara : We thought of playing another prank on you, So i called you with this next challenge. And… Well, You know the rest.
They all stood staring at him waiting. Was he going to explode and kill them all?
To their surprise, Sanskaar burst out lauging. He laughed long and hard until his sides ached. Swara watched him delighted. This was a Sanskaar she had never encountered before.
LAksh (in wonder) : Bhai?
Sanskaar : Oh My God! What devils you all are… And you, Swara! You’re the biggest devil of all here. What a plan. Seriously, I have to hand it to you. Once you decide on something, You do it and you do it well. Fine, You win! Now tell me what you want.
Uttara : Haan Bhabhi! Tell him what you want, We are leaving.
She dragged the reluctant others out leaving Swara and Sanskaar behind.
Swara (softly) : Shall I tell you what I want?
Sanskaar nodded.
Swara moved closer to him.
Swara : Really?
Sanskaar’s breath quickened. Swara’s voiced lowered to a whisper.
Swara (whispering) : I want….. I want….. (Loudly) Us to go to this.
Sanskaar stared at her stupidly as she handed over a pamphlet to him.
Swara (impatiently) : Read it.. Let’s leave.
Sanskaar read the pamphlet and then looked at her incredulously.
Sanskaar : You want to go for a Holi Carnival.
Swara nodded excitedly.
Swara : DOn’t be so bland about it. It sounds so cool. Holi Fun Run, Holi Rain dance.. Everything is there…. We are going there and that’s final.
Sanskaar : But Swara…
Swara (interrupting) : Sanskaar Please! (she pleaded and persuaded him) I know you say you don’t like colours. But that’s not true is it ?
Sanskaar (confused) : What do you mean by that?
Swara (softly) : You don’t have to control everything in life Sanskaar! Sometimes it is just better to let go. I can see you love this festival. Be free. Play freely with your siblings, your friends, everyone. Kuch nahi hoga! Main hoon na!
Their eyes locked and Swara poured as much emotion as she could to convey her meaning. Sanskaar’s expression which had become slowly guarded finally softened and he smiled at her, nodding.
Sanskaar : Fine… We will go..
Swara : Yay! Oh My God! I don’t believe it. You agreed… I have to go tell everyone.
She started running towards the door crossing him, But he caught her hand and pulled her back.
Swara : Sanskaar! Kya kar rahe ho? Let me go…
Sanskaar : Ek Minute Swara! Before you go, Tell me one thing… Everyone downstairs has already gone down and played holi and are completely filled with colour… But you are still pristine. Why is that?
Swara suddenly blushed and looked away.
Swara : No reason! Now let me go…
Sanskaar (whispering ) : No! Not until you tell me the reason behind that beautiful blush of yours.
Swara (blushing crimson now, whispering) : I didn’t let anyone apply colour on me because…… Because I wanted you… you to be the first.
Sanskaar gazed at her, amazed and delighted. He slowly showed his two palms to her, which still had the pink powder in it, and slowly applied it on both cheeks.
Swara : From now on, Holi begins with you putting holi on me only.
They smiled at each other. Sanskaar kissed her softly on the forehead and they hugged.
Sanskaar (thinking) : Everyday, She enters into my world more. The doors I had locked forever in my heart are slowly being opened. Swara Gadodia! You are like a drug to me. I can’t live without you, But at the same time, I can’t be what you need me to be. Yeh kaisa rishta hai? What is this between us? Love? But why will you love me? Nahi Sanskaar! This can’t be love. You cannot allow yourself to love or be loved. Remember Sanskaar! Remember this….
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PRECAP : ACTUAL HOLI SPECIAL
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Heyy guys, Sorry Sorry Sorry…. For not posting the entire holi spl, But as my tests just got over, MY family wanted me to spend some quality time with them.. As I haven’t lately… I think you all understand.. But I too will understand if you’re angry…
Sorry L khan! You wanted me to post one epi for holi, But I didn’t.. 🙁 🙁 Really sorry….
Hope you all like this chapter….
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I was planning on not posting anything today and posting a longer epi tomorrow but I had promised you all a chapter.. So I decided to stay up till now( 1:45) and write…
I know it is not as good as the others…. But I still hope you like it
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I’m reallly really overwhelmed by the response I’ve got from you all… More than 90 comments in my last 2 chapters( Well I know half of them are me, But still)…. I never thought I would get more than 20 – 25 comments max (my replies included)
I’m so lucky to have you all to encourage and support me… LOVE YOU ALL… I hope one day I become even more better and receive more than 100 comments…
LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!
And yeah, Don’t forget to comment!!! 😉
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One last thing, As I already told, I will be starting to reveal Sanskaar’s secret to Swara… Would you like me to have all nice and cute moments for now and then reveal it after the wedding? Or finish everything before? Please give your opinions… I’ll think about it and finally decide on one which suits the story the most…
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69 Comments
Awesome as always….
Thank you sooo much dolly???
This was the best. I loved it
Thank you bhargavi….. I think this is the first time u r commenting??? Sorry I don’t recall….
I’m really glad you love it..
I was waiting eagerly 4 ur ff…u r too good..holi is d best festival to let urself go and have fun.in d case of tv shows..holi is d most romantic tym of d year
eg: kyy manan @swimming pool…so make it fun and romantic..smile always
Thank you sooo much hope…
I agree…. holi is the most fun and can be twisted to form a really nice romance scene….
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Sureee ill keep smiling!!!
Splendid, 😉
Thanksss shria???
Nice..
Thnxxx afra!!!
Very nice, waiting fr next one
Thnxxx sasha!!! Will try to post asap
I believe it should be before wedding. As I don’t want Sanskar to neglect or ignore swara after wedding.
And what an update today. It was rocking Swara and shocking Sanskar. I know the actual holi will start now.
I hope ur exams went well. Any pending? If yes AL d best for that one.
See you soon. 🙂
Thnxxx dhara!!! Ill think about the before wedding or after wedding….
I’m glad you loved this chapter…????????
I’m really excited about the actual holi…. I love the idea but I have to make sure I execute it properly…
And yeah all my tests are over…
No tension for another 3 weeks.
Splendid epi anjali… who told today epi is not nice as othr epi’z???? Evry chaptr of ur story is is unique and amazing.. i loved today epi so much dr… swara plan nd maheswari family helping hr to excute it… prank ws awesome part…. loved toda epi dr..
kk tc do ur test welll
bye anjali
Lol….Thnxxx navi….
I knew it was funny and all, but the spark I felt wasn’t there… that’s y i felt that you ppl might not.like.it
But I’m really glad you. All do…. ??????
My tests are over… I’m so happy abt that… you tc too…..
anjali we need swasan cute moments….nd slowly reveal to swara….
Sure shan….. I will show cute swasan moments… and reveal it to swara…Thnxxx
Girl you just rocked. I read the whole episode with my mouth open wide and seriously I felt very bad for sanskar. I just don’t know why but the way she made him fool infront of everyone felt bad but everything vanished when he laughed. Even I was smiling like an idiot and God…your English is too good and the conversation is just natural. I need to accept now that how swara is a drug to sanskar, you are a drug to me now..spend your time with your family and post it when you are free but I cannot wait more than 24hrs..lol.
I am sure that he will end up on loving intensily and I am looking forward. Way to holi..yay
Like a mad girl, I again read all the episodes dear. I just fell for sanskar once again. Every episode is a diamond and I stored them safely inside my heart and locked them securely. You are just..just….no words. Love you so much my dear. Sanskar us a fool here. He loves her but not realised. Sometimes love happens and realisation is not needed according to me.
Sree……?????
Love you……
I’m really really glad that you love it and ur comment omg….. LITERALLY MADE MY DAY… I SWEAR…. I never thought that this story might get me such an appreciation… but srsly….Thnxxx so much…. ur words mean a lot to me…. a lot….?????
Thank you sooo much
And reading all the chapters again…exactly how long did that take?? I really want to know… I’m Soo honoured. ???
Awesome as always …superb mindblowing yaar ….these pranks n all I love them but sadly in my home no one does such pranks on me so I can feel how nice those all will be……I think u like to realistic isn’t? ? Coz I find all ur episodes realistic nd I love them……well actually I was busy with xams so I was not able to comments on previous epis but I read them srry for not commenting …….now eagerly waiting for next epi……nd abt revealtion of sanskaars secret its ur wish coz I know whenever it is u will do well ….nd ya I thought something its ur wish to implement it r not …I am thinking y not to create dhamaka on their mrrge day…I mean marriage shld happen but bfore mrrge sanskaar in confusion abt his love nd swara cmng to know abt his secret nd then their face off somthing like dat…I donno howz just got dat idea nd told u….its ur wish
Thank you sooo much Vaishnavi!! Am really glad u find this realistic… In my previous fanfic, I had become too filmy and wanted to write a nice down to earth story…. Am soo happy ppl love it…
And ur idea is almost similar to mine with a few changes…. Will surely consider it…
And don’t apologise…Am really happy u commented in this… Exams were more important… 🙂 🙂
Its awesome Anjali….u nailed it..i loved this epi… 🙂
Thank you so much Eva…
Glad you loved it
After marriage revalation dear
Thnxx Sheela, Will surely consider it!!
Anjali really sorry for not commenting before but from today promise to comment on each epi I loved the way swara fooled sanskar and then sanskar laughing wholeheartedly that was wonderful and swara keeping herself pristine for sanskar was way too good you know sometimes actions do more than confession each time sanskar realizes love and then just let it go away I wonder when he will accept but nevertheless I’m liking this way too and it’s just bcoz of you.. your writing skills are way too good dear but yeah I too want sanskar being unfolded before his marriage bcoz I too don’t wanna see him ignoring swara after marriage and plzz tell me one thing why sanskar said that why to celebrate this wonderful festival now when he knows he won’t be there in few years? Hey it’s possible I might have missed something regarding this.. If yes plzz reply and if no solve the query asap
And yeah have a great family time hope you did well in exams and upload next whenever you be free but before 24hrs plzz it’s a request and I’m loving sanskar’s confusion for his feelings and swara’s unconfessed love for sanskar
No problem Neha…. Please don’t tell sorry and all…. Im very happy you commented now….
Glad to see that you loved this chapter and yeah.. I loved the pristine part too…..
Thnxxxx soo much…..
Well, Actually you know right that Sanskaar thinks that he is going to die in a few years.. He wants to enjoy as little and control his life as he feels that it would make it easier for him toleave this world… 😛
Thats why….
I ll see about the before marriage or after marriage… Both sound equally enticing… So no idea at all lol… Let’s see what happens..
Nice episode as always….I loved it…keep writing….god bless u…update next part soon…we are waiting…
Thnxxx shani…..
Glad you loved it…..???
Anjali di. ..ur just awesome…I was laughing madly at sanskar condition….the first thing I did in the morning was to check 4 ur ff…sry 4 not commenting in some previous parts but my exams were there so cunt plzzz forgive…this is the best holi special….plZz continue soon lovedit
Thanks musku…..
Pls don’t tell sorry and all…..exams are.more.important… ???
Glad.you loved it
You always sweep me off my feet darling.. This was short but yet lovely and really romantic… Glad that ur exams r over..enjoy yourselves dear..and plz post the next part soon..I really can’t wait..and plz reveal the secret after marriage.. Story would be more interesting… Love u a lot..
Thnxxx richa…… you are really sweet….
Am glad too that my tests are over… exams in a month… yuckk….
But Thnxxx so much for ur sweet comments
Ur jus way toooooooooo guuuuuuuudddddd……… Waited too eagerly fr ur ff…….. Hv been reading al chapter agn n agn……. U make so lively……
I jus loooooveeeeeee ur ff sooooo much………….
Plz update sooooon………
Try to update often plz……….
I’m crazy abt ths ff especially……….
😀
BTW wt ws ur previous ff name……. I wana read tht tooo……… Love u loads……… 🙂 😀
Thank you sooo much sueno!!!! Wow…. reading it again and again… I’m really flattered… I don’t know if I deserve this much appreciation…
BUT THNXXX A LOT….
Will do my best to update everyday…. a bit difficult bcos of timings… but will do my best…
My prev one is called swaragini the path to happiness
Of course u deserve dear…… I jus lov d way u potray d character tht I feel lyk I live thm……. 🙂
Superb chap……..no problem dr if u have not post the full chap u can reveal his secrets after marriage becz it will be more fun then but if u want to reveal them before marriage then it’s ur wish nd it will also be a fun………..becz u r awesome nd whatever u write is fab………..so before nd after does not matter whenever u r comfortable u write it nd loved this chapter……nd plzz plzzz add some romance also plzzz
Thank you l khan…. will surely add more romance….
And lol… you have so much confidence in my abilities… will do my best to keep up to ur expectations….
Just 2 words mind blowing. .. srry dear can’t comment more even want to but having hostel farewell today being a junior I have to manage. …n u nailed it. ..plz upload nxt ASAP
Thnxxx Sujata….
Pls don’t tell sorry….
Am really happy that u decided to comment despite having no time..
Will do my best to upload asap
wait is finally over now!!!!!!!!!!!!
wat a fabulous episode!!!!!
seriously loved it………
reveal sanky’s secret after marriage…….
Thank you Soo much pooja for liking it….
Will consider ur opinion surely
Wow wonderful chapter. You should reveal the secret slowly and completely only after there marriage.
Thankss sparkle….will surely consider ur opinion….???
Awesome anjali…loved it…dear how many episodes will it take for swasan marriage?? And the other pairs are ragkaran or ragalk?? Though I am not very interested in raglak , still im asking, u know why?? Coz this ff is really different for me, makes me feel something soo good, special…ur prev ff was also very awesome…all the best for ur future life..
Thnxxx kritika!!!!
Lol… I have no idea… I just take my laptop and start typing.
That’s y half the time my prevails don’t match…. and its ragkaran… not raglak…. though they’ll be good friends jaisa
Different?? Hmmm…..
Glad you like it… and my prev one as well…. that was a completely diff from this though… filmy and all….
wow i m so happy to see ur ff.. my all tiredness of work gone after reading ur ff..
just loved it dear..
oh god i m speechless n the prank part is really funny n swara’s beauty n her ans also too nice..
waiting for next part.. n i think u can use real story n reveal the fear of sanskar as shown in the book.. i think so it’s all up to u wt u want to do..
n i read ur ff n know abot d book n i read whole book in 2 days to know d suspense behind his fear..
Love U Anjali.. 🙂
Thank you sooi much falguni!!!!
Wow… removing ur tiredness huh?? Niceee….. glad.you loved it…. I may not use the same thing as the book… but still thinking about it….will surely consider it suggestion tho…..
Love you too!!! ???
Hey anjali
Sorry that i just read it n im commenting now as in morning i was busy searching my hall ticket inmy room for the sem xam which started off in a food note today..im sorry ???
Anjali u surely. This epi was faar tooo good than others that it may b in top 5 of my fav epi of ur ff… U just made my evening n i was literally laughing in my bus that all might hav thought that im nuts but im ????so no worries n im still smiling stupidly while writing this…
Swaras plan was too good n at last sanky laughd whole heartedly..???. I would suggest to break d secret of sans b4 mariag bt its just a suggestion u wud know how it would go aftr d confession
Its ok that u dint ri8 a single epi as usual apologies accepted????n plzz do spend time with ur near n dear ones as dey n v luv dem equally….❤❤❤
N lastly in srk style ” DONT UNDERESTIMATE THE POWER OF WRITINGS OF ANJALI”???
So dont think its a boring epi as it was really pleasant to read …
N how was ur xams??????
Hey dev!! Did you find ur hall ticket?? Hope it is safe…. And am glad it started in a good note…
Thnxx!!! 😀 😀 😀 Lol…. Dont worry… I do that in the bus too and they think I’m mad….
Glad you loved this chapter….
Lol.. You’re too sweet!!! LOVE YOU….
I’ve done them well i guess.. Except for 2
Hall tickect was unexpectedly below my pillow???n at present taking a break frm my studies to know wats happenin around here??
Amazing chapter. It was so overwhelming that I felt it to be real right in front of my eyes, Awesome
Thnxxx Sooo much Priyanshi!!!! Your comment really means a lot to me.. 🙂 😀
Awesome Anjali loved it as now you are free so pls no exuses pls be regular
and yes pls reveal sanskar’s truth after marriage so that we could enjoy the romantic scenes in different way
Lol…Divya!!
I’ll do my best… I’ll be regualr but everyday… I shall see…. I’ll do my best to upload everyday… 😀 😀
And I will surely consider ur suggestion….
awesome waiting for next part
Thaksss Ireena!!
Will try to post asap
Heyy guyss… Sorry but won’t be posting an epi today…. the holi thing is too lomg and i havent finished writing.. So will finish tom and post….
I was waiting eagerly 4 ur ff…u r just too good dear…. i love you and ur ff a lot.??. i cant tell u how much i was waiting for you to update. i literally search for urs everyday and i got today.. aww its so nice?? and todays episodes its just awesome??? and plz plz update regularly as i am addicted to your ff?? love you dear????
Thank you sooo much sweta!!!!!
I’m glad you liked this epi…
Will update regularly from now.on