SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers….
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Chapter 38
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Mehnedi morning!!
CHAPTER 39
Sakshi greeted everyone and then turned to see Adarsh and her smile faltered.
Sakshi (in a heart broken voice) : ADARSH?
Adarsh turned at the sound of his name and all the colour left his face.
Adarsh : SAKSHI?
Swara and Sanskaar looked at each other confused.
Swara (looking at Sakshi) : Sakshi? Do you know Adarsh from before?
But Sakshi had no eyes for anyone but Adarsh.
Sakshi : Adarsh? You here? Sanskaar is your brother? You were planning to introduce me to them?
Swara looked at Sanskaar shocked. Adarsh was the person Sakshi loved?
Sanskaar : Sakshi? Is Adarsh the guy…..
He stopped as all the guests were staring at them.
Swara, assessing the situation quickly spoke in a low voice.
Swara : Sanskaar! Take Adarsh, Sakshi and Badi Ma to my room. I will come in a short while. Ma and mom can take care of everything else.
Sanskaar nodded and took a shell shocked Adarsh with him, while AP and Sakshi followed. After seeing that the guests were being distracted and everything was being managed by the others, Swara went up to her room to see a tearful Sakshi sitting on the bed being comforted by AP. An anguished Adarsh stood there looking at Sakshi and Sanskaar was walking towards Swara, at a loss of how to proceed.
Sanskaar : We came upstairs and Adarsh mentioned Sakshi’s name. She burst into tears.
Swara smiled sadly.
Swara : She is completely shocked. Adarsh is your brother. She doesn’t know what to do. I have to be firm with her. I have no other choice.
Sanskaar : Yeah! Let’s go solve this.
She went and sat next to Sakshi.
Swara : Sakshi, Stop that! You know you’re too strong to be crying like this. Adarsh! Sakshi told us everything this morning. Is it true that you used to go out with her?
AP (shocked) : Adarsh, You love her?
Swara quickly recounted the facts that Sakshi had told them that day.
Adarsh stood still, not able to look at anyone. He turned away, looking outside the window.
Sanskaar (walking towards Adarsh And gently placing a hand on his shoulder) : Bhai! Tell us why. Sakshi told us that just few days ago, you were so excited about introducing her to the family. And then in Mumbai, You decided to leave her? Why, Adarsh?
Sakshi (looking at Adarsh) : Please Adarsh! Tell me why… That day I asked you, You never mentioned anything. You left. I thought it was because of your family. But seeing that Swara and Sanskaar are your relatives, I can’r believe it. Please Adarsh, You owe me that at least.
Adarsh turned around to look at her but didn’t say anything.
AP : Adarsh beta! Please tell. What made you break up with her?
Sakshi (growing irritated) : Leave it Aunty… He’s not brave enough to tell me. He doesn’t care about my feelings.
Adarsh (walking over to Sakshi, in an anguished voice) : Sakshi! Don’t tell that. Don’t you know how much I love you?
Sakshi ( heart broken voice) : I thought I did. I thought…. But I was wrong.
She got up from the bed wiping her tears and started going out of the room.
Swara : Adarsh! Stop her. Once she leaves, you will never get her. Adarsh, Fight for your love. She is yours. Go now…
Sanskaar : Bhai! Go now.
But Adarsh was still. He made no move to move. His eyes were empty, his voice emotionless.
Adarsh : I can’t. Ma has fixed my relation with someone else.
Sakshi paused, her hand on the door knob. She turned back, looking at him.
AP : What?
Adarsh (looking straight at Sakshi ) : Sakshi, What did I tell you when I first met you about my family?
Sakshi (the words coming unbidden to her lips) : They are my everything. I will not go against them for any reason. I will surely talk to them, but once they’ve made a decision, I will not protest.
Adarsh (smiling slightly) : Yes, Minx! You remember word for word. And do you remember what you promised me?
Sakshi (closing her eyes) : I will not come between you and your family. If they don’t accept me, I will leave. If they have a problem with me, I will leave.
AP, Swara and Sanskaar stood shocked.
Sanskaar : Adarsh…
But Adarsh did not respond. His words were for Sakshi and Sakshi alone.
Adarsh : That morning, Before I left for Mumbai, I was so happy. During Sanskaar Bhai and Swara’s wedding, I thought another Rishta would be joined, that of ours. But…
Sakshi (whispering) : But…
Adarsh : But I heard Ma and chachi talking. They were planning to fix my wedding with Parineeta!
Sanskaar (surprised) : Parineeta Gupta? Our childhood friend?
Adarsh nodded. Sanskaar raised a questioning glance at AP.
Sanskaar : Badi Ma?
AP : We were thinking about that, but….
Adarsh (interrupting) : I heard you both discussing Parineeta… How beautiful she was, how Sanskaari she was, How she would be perfect as the bahu..
AP : But…
Adarsh : It’s ok Ma! I would have anyways come to talk about Sakshi.. But you told you were going to call Mrs Gupta rimmediately and fix the relation. And I couldn’t break the relation after that. It would hurt you, It would hurt the Guptas and It would hurt Parineeta, who didn’t deserve to be hurt. (turning back to Sakshi ) And that’s why I broke my relation with you. I love you, But…
Sakshi (nodding understandingly and sadly, gently) : But family comes first. I understand now. I’m not angry anymore. When you first told me this, That time itself, I realised this was why I loved you. And I too made a promise. I…. (choking a bit) I wish you a happy life…
She turned and walked out the door. Swara called after her and she stopped again, but not turning back. She couldn’t see Adarsh otherwise she would break!
Swara (gently) : Where are you going?
Sakshi : Home, I guess. I’m so sorry Swara! Sorry Sanskaar! But I cannot stay here. I think you understand.
She made a move to leave but was stopped again for the third time, this time by AP.
AP : Sakshi beta! Come in. My son has no brains.
All the four turned to look at her in shock.
Adarsh (completely surprised and a bit offended) : Ma?
AP : Adarsh! When did you get such a high handed attitude? Such a self sacrificing one? Your mother is still alive. What on Earth were you thinking?
Sanskaar came and stood beside Swara, both looking amused now. Sakshi entered and looked at them puzzled.
Adarsh : Ma? What are you saying?
Sumi entered at that minute and looked at everyone’s faces, assessing the situation as much as she could.
Sumi : The guests are all having dinner. Swara! You will have to come down in the next 20 minutes at least.
Swara nodded.
Sumi : Sakshi beta! Shall I bring a plate of food for you?
Sakshi shook her head no even as Sanskaar nodded yes.
Sanskaar : Ji Ma! Wait, I’ll help you bring the food.
Sumi (smiling) : Not now. You need to be here. Don’t worry. I will manage.
She left the room and everyone again turned back to AP and Adarsh.
AP : Adarsh! Don’t you know your mother by this time? Did you really think that we would choose the girl without talking to you first?
Sakshi (wonderingly) : Aunty?
AP (smiling) : Yes! I did think of Parineeta. But I never called her. Or the Guptas. If you had just stayed there instead of leaving, you would have heard me tell Sujata that we will ask Adarsh first! We were going to ask you Beta! If only that day, you hadn’t left.
Adarsh was speechless, his world was spinning. He felt giddy with happiness.
AP walked towards Sakshi and cupped her cheeks.
AP : Sakshi is a nice girl. I like her a lot. She will make an excellent addition to our family… Right Swara?
Swara came forward smiling.
Swara : Of Course Badi Ma! Sakshi, Who all are there in your family?
Sakshi (confused) : Only me and my sister. She is in London now, studying.
Swara : Then, From now on, I’ll take the post of your elder sister. You shall be a honorary Gadodia!
Sumi (from the doorway) : Of course! Just like Swara and Ragini, Now I’ll have a third daughter. Sakshi!
Sakshi (joyfully, with tears) : Swara! Aunty!
She hugged both Swara and Sumi.
Swara : Arre… Be careful! My Mehendi… 😛
Sakshi : Oh Shit! Sorry…
Sumi : Aur haan! Aaj se, No aunty.. I’m Ma or something else that you want to call me.
Sakshi (nodding) : Mumma?
Sumi (with tears, kissing the top of her head) : Anything, My child!
Swara ( hugging Sakshi sideways and bringing her in front of AP ) : Badi Ma! I’m about to join this wonderful loving family of yours. As the Maheshwari family’s eldest bahu, As Sakshi’s elder sister, I request the hand of your son Adarsh for my sister Sakshi.
AP (kissing Sakshi on her forehead and hugging her) : I accept this Rishta! Sakshi will be the Maheshwari Khaandaan’s second bahu. Swara’s Devrani… Adarsh’s wife.
Adarsh let out a sound that was half a shout and half a choked back sound. Sanskaar clapped him on the back.
Sanskaar (happily) : Adarsh, Mera bhai! You’re next! Congratulations…. Go now to your love… GO Bhai! Everything is solved.
Adarsh walked slowly to Sakshi and stood in front of her, his eyes not leaving hers, yet unable to tell a word.
Sanskaar (gently) : Bhai! She is yours. Happiness is yours.
Adarsh (whispering) : Sakshi!
Sakshi (sobbing) : Idiot! Idiot! (hitting him) Why couldn’t you have told me before? Why didn’t you listen to the whole conversation that day? Why did you trouble me so much? I hate you..
Adarsh (chuckling) : But I love you! Minx… Forgive me?
Sakshi stopped hitting him and looked at him straight in the eye.
Sakshi : Me too! I love you Adarsh!
Adarsh lifted her up by her waist and spun her around not caring that his own mother was wathcing them.
AP (mock shocked) : Adarsh?
Adarsh stopped embarassed. Sakshi blushed and Laksh entered.
Laksh : What is going on here?
Swara : Dramebaaz! Bhabhi number 2 has been decided…
Laksh (delighted) : Really? Adarsh bhai! Congrats….
Swara ( surprised) : Dramebaaz! You cannot be happy about this relation.
Everyone looked at her surprised.
Sanskaar : Why not Swara?
Swara : Because that means…. (she winked at Laksh) You’re next! Get ready…
Laksh (scoffing) : HAH! I’m not going to get married any time soon. You think whatever you want.
Swara laughed and Sanskaar came stood by her. The rest went downstairs to announce the happy news to everyone else leaving them alone in the room.
Swara (sighing happily) : Everything is so perfect na Sanskaar? Our wedding, Adarsh’s getting the love of his life, Sakshi’s addition to our family, Ragini’s got her love.
Sanskaar (smiling at her) : And all this happened because of you.
Swara (shaking her head) : I think this time, It was Badi Ma who was the hero! It was all her…
Sanskaar : Well…. I agree… But I agree with Badi Ma as well. You’re our lucky charm. Ever since we were to be married, Life’s turning better and better.
Swara (Smiling) : Sanskaar! If I am lucky, It is because of you… It’s always been you.
Sanskaar’s breath caught and he pulled Swara towards him.
Swara : Arre! Arre! Be careful… My mehendi… Your attire…
Sanskaar : Mehendi toh bhaad me jaaaye! I don’t care about my clothes. Right now, I need you!
Swara acquiesced without much protest and melted in his arms. He kissed her quickly and softly. but with so much promise, that she was left wanting for more, when his mouth left hers.
Sanskaar ( looking at her hands ) : So do you think that the mehendi will be darkly coloured? Don’t people say something like that?
Swara : Yes. But that means, Love increases. Aur hamare beech mein…
Suddenly it became too awkward and painful to stand next to each other. They turned the other way, and tried to think of things that could lighten up this awkwardness.
Finding nothing, Sanskaar decided to go downstairs, when Swara stopped him. Really, It seemed like no one could leave the room without being stopped by someone.
Swara : You won the challenge.
Sanskaar (smiling slightly) : So I did.
Swara : I owe you a promise.
Sanskaar : Yes, you do!
Swara : Well, Are you going to tell me?
Sanskaar : No!
Swara (amazed) : No?
Sanskaar (smirking evilly) : I like to watch you suffer with curiosity.
Swara’s jaw dropped open.
Sanskaar : Byeee Swara!
And he quickly left the room leaving a stunned Swara alone.
Swara : He left? He just left? I won’t spare him today. So he wants me to suffer? Well, I won’t… I’ll show him I don’t care. He’s the most irritating man alive. I love him, God help me, But I do! But he’s still the most irritating man alive.
She went downstairs and saw Sanskaar smiling playfully at her. She made a face at him and turned the other side. All the guests were leaving, so she went and thanked them for coming .
Sanskaar joined her.
Sanskaar : I’m impressed Swara! 10 minutes and you haven’t cracked.
Swara stuck out her tongue at him and he laughed.
Sanskaar : Hawww, Meri bacchi fiancee! What are you, ten? If you don’t know what to tell… Then at least act your age.
Swara Shot him a glare and made him follow her to a corner.
Swara : Why are you so irritating, Mr Maheshwari? Can’t you see Adarsh and Sakshi? How they are NICE to each other? Him calling her minx and all…. It’s so sweet… And you, You always want to irritate me. Boo you, Boo you!
Sanskaar (indignantly) : Arre! So now you want a nick name? I gave you so many… Tamatar! Miss Know-it-all… But you didn’t like them. Toh main kya karoon??
Swara (spluttering) : Ugghh! Sanskaar! Those are not nick names. They are names deisgned surely to torture me. You know what.. Bye! Go eat dinner, then go home… I don’t want to know your promise. Boo!
Sanskaar chuckled and put an arm around her waist, pulling her close.
Sanskaar (whispering) : My promise! A song… Whenever I want, Wherever I want.
Swara (confused) : Song?
Sanskaar : Yes! I love…
He paused, but shrugged it off. The impulse to lay down his true feelings was locked away and he continued.
Sanskaar : I love your voice. And I want the promise that you will sing for me… Whenever I ask you.
Swara smiled and nodded. She kissed him on the cheek, a declaration of her promise to him.
Swara : Whenever, Wherever…….
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PRECAP : SANGEET SPL… PLUS A HUGE, HUGE TWIST!!!!! 😉 😉
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I am so sorry guys for the super late update… I had some coll issues… Hopefully they get sorted by tomorrow… It was really taxing.. .That’s why was unable to comment in many of ur ff’s as well…
SORRY!!! 🙁 🙁
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Coming to today’s chapter.. This was just a filler… I realised that I am going to write my 40th chapter 😮 😮 😮
I never thought MMaI would cross 30… And here I am going to write my 40th next…
Thank u all sooo much for supporting me throughout this journey…
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The next is going to be the sangeet…. As the name suggests, It is going to be full of songs…
U all know just how much I love adding songs to my fics… I love music and I keep thinking of situation songs… So i can’t help but add… LOL…
Anyways,The next is going to have everything mostly…. Romance, Fun, Frolic… And like my sis Anu likes to tell… B.O.O.M!!!! 😛 😛
People are welcome to guess…. Waiting for ur replies!!!
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And this chapter I wrote in a hurry… so sorry if it isn’t good… 🙁 🙁
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120 Comments
awesome…plzz upload soon
Thnxxx Tvisha!! 🙂 🙂
Will upload asap!!
It’s really good but..little short compair to ur ither episodes..no problem…I was waitig to read it….and I loved todays part…very nice and cute..keep writing…update next part soon…I think ur twist is regarding…laksh and ragini.
Ragini like lecture to be his life partner ryt.??..i feel like laksh have all the qualities that ragini needed in her life partner…I don’t know…it’s only a guess..it’s ur story u can write anything drlng…
Plz update next part soon..keep writing…I have a small wish also…I need u to write long OS…if u have time plz consider it also
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God bless u dr…and be happy…take care of urself…
There is mistake …I mean
Ragini likes scholor to be his life partner ryt??
I think there is some connection between laksh karan and ragini…I don’t know…but..I just feel like that…
Thnxxx Shani!! Yeah, Ik it was small.. This was just a filler 🙂 🙂
Glad you loved it…..
Laksh and Ragini…. Hmmm…..
If you’ve noticed, I never gave that much of Ragkar…. So anything might happen… 😉 😉
So that’s ur guess?? Let’s see what happens…
An OS 😮 😮
If I get an idea, I will surely write one Shani!!!
Coming to ur Raglakkar theory…. Keep guessing… Anything is possible at this point!!
Heheii…anjali…plz upload the next part..if u r in a mood to update it…we all r waiting to read it dr…plz..and ha..u will surely get a great idea to an Os….at night my only wish”plz god give some time to.anjali to write her story…hhaha..u will think that I’m kidding but it ia true dr…and how was ur examz…I forgot to ask it also…sorry
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I have started the next part… But it’s quite long… So I’ll post it only tom mostly… 🙁 🙁
I’ll def think of an Os idea!!! <3
Ur soo sweet Shani.. LOVE YOU!!!
My exams okk i guess…. Sem exams begin only on 23rd!! 🙁 🙁
Twistyehaan??? Kya yaar….. Continue soon……
Lol… Sorry Purvi!!! Keep reading… :*
Thnxx
Superb…. Plzz update next part soon… Waiting
Thnxxx Pia!!!
Will upload asap 🙂 🙂
plzzz update the next one soon
Thnxx Ira!! Will upload asap!!! 🙂 🙂
awesome loved it
Thnxx Shan 🙂 🙂
Glad u loved it!!!
My morning treat..! Loved it. So very well written. Thank you for this one. I was waiting for it like hell. It was short but sweet.. Really very very sweet. Like Honey..!
Aww sis you write flawlessly. Uh are an amazing person as well. Omg.. Uh have all the qualities that a person is required to have.
Love you dear..
Hugs and kisses..
❤?
Aww… So sweet of you, Shreya!!…
Ur words are like honey… Not mine :* :*
Lol… Y so much praise?? I m not anything like that!!!
LOVE YOU TOO…
* lots of hugs and kisses *
Yeah..! You are actually nothing like that.. May be more than that..! Uh deserve it all..
And anyways like praising you and Anu a lot.. Don’t know why..!
And I just did what I like.. Selfish, eh?
Lol.. ?
Love you sis..! ?❤
Superb anjali
Thnxxx Sumeeta!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
heyyyy!!!!!!!! anjali ……
m back yr………..
awsm part
swasan forever…………… 😉 😉 😉
ya post asap…………
POOOJAAAA!!!!! Ur baackkkk!!! :*
Thnxxx… 🙂 🙂
SWASAN <3 <3 <3 <3
Suree.. will post soon…. How are you??
m all good dear
howz u ?? 😉 😉
Finally Dear Anjali.. my wait is over.. u r back.. How r u sis..? n ur exams r over or not..? 😉
n about episode.. as i said earlier this family is bestest.. 🙂
n waiting for ur BOOM really.. pls come soon with new chap..?
Thnxx Falguni!!!
Yes, I am back!!1 🙂 🙂
I am finee.e… What about u??? I have study hols right now…. Exams will once again begin from 23rd may 🙁 🙁 🙁
Lol… Maheshwari family certainly has done a great job with their kids… 🙂
Boom… Don’t u want to guess what it is?? :p 😛
Will post asap!!1
I m fine.. about boom i really don’t good at guessing.. so i wait for ur update..
do u know how was sree..??
i m little busy with job n puppet practice so didn’t commented on any ff. so i don’t know about her..?
n till then tc dear love u 🙂
Anju,it was damn interesting. Superb. Ragini part was superb. Woah sangeet!!??Please do add songs from my Shahid Kapoor’s movie! I am going to enjoy d next part a lot!!??
And about the twist hope its a twist not shock!??
Jo v karna but end main swasan should be together!???❤
Ooppss! Sorry not Ragini! Adarsh n Sakshi part were superb??
Thnxxx Jyotii!!!!
Lol… Glad u liked their part!!
Shahid kapoor fan huh? Let’s see… if the song appeals to me, Then I will surely add it!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
No comments… Shocks twists… You’ll have to wait and watch XD XD
Mind blowing…..i’m in love with ur story……….pls update the nxt epi soon……,
Thnxxx sooo much Natasha!!!
Glad u loved it!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Will update asap!!!
Awsm yar….
This epi was little bit short compared to other. But it doesn’t matter dear because even u have many problems u tried to give us a good epi… that’s enough
Waiting for the upcoming twist and sangeet celebrations
Luv u ??
Hope ur problems may solve
Thnxx Juan!!!! Yeah…. But this was just a filler!!! 🙂 🙂
Longer episodes yet to comee!!! 🙂 🙂
Keep waiting.. XD XD XD!!!
LOVE YOU TOO <3 <3
YEs, They are almost solved… Lol… No tension now….
Can u pls tell me how to change the in comment box
I meant how to change the pic in comment box
Haww! Now I realise how curious I leave you all. Twist? Batao na Kya twist hai pleaseeee *puppy face*
And AP was hero for me today. And Swasan’s nok jhok ♥♥
Lol… Glad u understood… But baby… What fun would it be if I tell u everything now?? 😛 😛 😛
AP <3 <3
Swara can't solve everything in life na… So AP did so… Swasan toh pagal h… Always arguing 🙂
Thnxxx <3 <3 <3
R u both planning to mke ur ff readers mad wid curiousity……. Lol…… Both R sme to sme…… My pagal sisters n I luv u both soo much????
Always keep shining my STARS???
Aww! You guys make us shine. We are moon Toh you are the sun.
Cheesy hai na. I just woke up so thodi hangover main hoon 😛
I have been waiting for ur ff di.nd this is nt at all bad.its superb as usual. Plz try to post nxt part soon love u a ton dear
Thnxxx Jiya!!! 🙂 🙂
Glad you liked it!!! Will surely try to post asap!!!
Love you too :*
looooooooooooooooooved
them….and today’s epi was rocking!!!!
love u soooooooooo much….all the best
AWWW….. Thnxxxx soooo much Tani!!!! Ur soo sweet <3 <3 <3
LOVE YOU TOO!!!! :* :* 🙂
What a melo-drama of Sakshi and Adarsh it was…..just so nice….
And ya I agree with swara … AP became hero….lol?
Just loved this chappy?
Swasan rock as always ???
I love….I love your voice…..oh ho but ya it takes time for them to confess and u agree…..
Moreover I love this unconfessed feeling of love a lot???
Hope things get sorted out in ur clg…..
Waiting for next eagerly ???to know the twists specially
Love u?take care…..?
Please visit the prologue of ur new unnamed ff…..not that I have commented about it but if u could….please visit once…it’s an humble request from ur fan cum friend (hope am ur friend)
Yup, things are almost sorted out… 🙂 🙂
Thnxx Dharsha!!!
AP is the hero 🙂 🙂
Aww… Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂 🙂
Will post asap!
Guess what the twist might be… 😉 😉
LOVE YOU TOO!!!!
And ofc, UR my friend… I already told u dharsha!! 🙁 boo….
I will surely check it out…as soon as i finish replying to everyone 🙂 🙂 🙂
Arey I told I hope am ur friend coZ u always say thanxxx…..
Don’t u know friendship mein no sorry aur no thank you….
No more thanxxx plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and no ?but only ?…….
Love u loads???
OK. I will be honest as always. It was just a filler as u said.. Waiting for BOOM. 🙂 btw I like the name minx 🙂
I always wait for ur comment Dhara di!!! Bcos ur soo honest and encouraging <3 <3
Love you 🙂 🙂
Yupp… IT was just a filler… Thnxxx….Boom will def come in next epi!!1 🙂
Lol… Minx is soo cute and naughty…. I just love it!!
awesome adarsh and sakshi part and swasan also..
thnxxx sooo much Anu!!!
Glad u liked it… 🙂 🙂
Awsm plz update soon
Thnxxx Unknown!! Will surely update soon… 🙂 🙂 🙂
Wooooooow anji….mza a gya….looooooved it sooooo much but more than that I loooove u sweety….huge twist Han??lets see what happens next…waiting eagerly….??
All the best jani?
Angel :* :* :*
Thnxxxx soo much!!!
LOVE you too !!!! Ur tooo sweet…..
Twist… (ssshhhh) …. 😉 😉
Yup.. Wait and watch!!! <3 <3
hehehe{sshh phir koi hai}
Awesome awesome awesome
Thnxxx Aanya!!! <3 <3
🙂 🙂
Hey anjali you write such an awesome scene in hurry to agar ap aram aram de likhoge to Lorna achha hogs… Lol OK pls tell that when will you upload the next part eagerly waiting for twists and I check thin in every half hour because my holidays have begun so I have an ample of time to read your fan fiction…. love you loads?
Agar ap jaldi jaldi mein achha likhoge to aram aram aram se to kamal ka likhoge… you can upload it any time as my holidays have begun and I have ample of time to read your fan fiction….love you loads pls tell that when will you upload it waiting eagerly???????
lolol… so sweet of you… <3 <3 <3
I will upload it as soon as I finish writing… 🙂 🙂 🙂
Lucky… U have hols where as I have study hols.. 🙁 🙁
LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!
Will upload tomorrow mostly 🙂 🙂
Aww… don't cry!!
it was awesome! ????????????
I loved it but Pls post asap. I can’t wait too much! and when will they marry?? ????
Thnxxx Jaf!!! 🙂 🙂
Glad u loved it!!!
Lol.. Don’t worry… Will upload soon!!!
And marriage… GOD… IDk… I think of one thing, But then, I end up writing a different thing… LOL 😛 😛
Heyyyy….. dont worry dear you will we want leaveeeee you,you have to write more than 50 epis….. we will Not leaveeeee you if you try you cant but I love your all epi plz……. Post soon next Part
Heyy Sanya!! 🙂 🙂
Wow… More than 50 epis?? 😮 😮
Let’s see how this story progresses!!! 😀
thnxxx soo much!!! <3 <3 <3
Will post soon
Wow I’m going to college for a test but ur update just made my day it’s awesome dear… Ap just rocked today’s epi fab so sakshi and adarsh got tied perfect….. Swasan are as usual wonderful… Anju how u manage their charm re ….so u too started B.O.O.M…….good anu se influence ho gayi…. I hope u don’t keep it for long guessing and thinking is not possible for now as I have to revise for test…. So bye stopping here wish me luck…. Love you tc and plzz if exams over then try to upload next part soon…. Bye ? u sis
How was ur test neha??
Made ur day?? 😮 😮 This filler??
Thnxxx soo much!!!
Yupp… It’s gonna be Arkshi here…. 🙂 🙂
Their charm? Idk…. Lol…
Yuppp…. 😛 MY sis’s influence… blame her, not me 😛 😛
But no, I m not one to keep quiet…. Sooo ….will reveal it soon 🙂
LOVE YOU TOO!!! And will post asap!!! <3 <3 <3
All the best for ur tests!!!! 🙂
Hmm my tests were good but after the tests I’m not good… Suffering from fever…. Head is paining too…. ?
Light chapter di , but by ur writing skills it became wonderfull chapter ??, please di it is going to be 40 th chapter but still no confession of swasan?? , again dont separate swasan by this twist please please *puppy dog eyes* my mood is really off because of swasan sepration in swaragini
Thnxxx Priyu!!! So sweet of you 🙂 🙂 🙂
40th chapter… Ik… but don’t worry… Swasan will confess and unite….
Aww…. They won’t seperate… And don’t worry… Whatever happens, They will be together again!!
As for the serial… They also will untie.. so don’t worry!!!
Can anyone help i want to post my ff on a serial page but not on the ff page.. PLZZZ HELPPP
I don’t know what to do… Sorry avali… I know only how to post on ff or analysis page.. 🙂
It was awesome…swasan are so adorable in your story. . .just love them…
Ap was really a hero today!!…..i loved the way sakshi and Adarsh talked….like so much of understanding………
Boom…..like anu you too!;!no she’s killed us by back to back suspense now….you also…huhh…this isn’t fair..well update soon!
Loads of love! ? ?
Thnxxx Aashi!!!
Glad u love Swasan!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
AP <3 <3
I did start like Anu, But I'm not going to keep the suspense for long, next chapter you'll get to know… 🙂 🙂 🙂
And ofc it's fair… Story has to be interesting na? 😉
LOVE YOU TOO!!!