SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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Swasan pregnancy – Samar is born
CHAPTER 63
6 MONTHS LATER
Swara : Come on baby, Tell Mumma… Mum…ma…mum…ma… My sweety pie! Tell na Samar. Mumma!
Sanskaar entered the bedroom, but stopped at the doorway as he saw his two most favourite people playing with each other. In the few short months that Sanskaar had known Samar, He was shocked at how Samar had entered his heart.
Every cry, Every toy, Every tantrum and every smile of his was etched into his heart. Three months ago, When Samar had severe stomach ache, Sanskaar had lost an entire week’s of sleep. He had wondered at that time if it would be the same way every time Samar fell ill. Or if he hurt himself. And if they had more children, How it would feel.
He looked at Swara now. She was such a natural mother. His lips softened to a smile as he looked at her disheveled appearance. She was wearing a T-shirt that he had bought for her which said BEST MOM EVER. She loved that shirt and wore it every 3 days. He saw her smile and laugh as Samar gabbled off in baby talk.
Sanskaar felt proud. Though he was only 6 months old, Samar was very smart. He had learnt to turn over and crawl by the time he was 4 months old. Soon after, he learnt how to high-five and give a fist pump, not to mention peek-a-boo. Yes, his son was very smart.
It only made the latest challenge more interesting. Just 4 days ago, he had challenged Swara by telling that Samar would tell papa first before Mumma. Swara had gladly accepted the challenge and seemed like she was in full preparation for it.
Swara’s voice caught him off-guard.
Swara (smiling at Sanskaar) : Do you think you’ll ever just come inside? Everyday you come and stand there at the door looking at the two of us. Why?
Sanskaar (smiling sheepishly) : I don’t mean to do that on purpose. (setting his briefcase down and walking towards the baby and Swara) I come inside all set to go in but then there you are, my love and my son, having fun together. You make such a perfect picture that I feel bad to come and disturb you.
Swara laughed and got off the bed. She placed two pillows on either side of Samar to protect him and then walked towards Sanskaar. She accepted his kiss on the cheek, then began removing his tie.
Swara (softly, tugging on the tie) : You know, Mr Maheshwari, the scene you see everyday isn’t a perfect picture. Do you want to know why? Because you are not there.
Sanskaar (placing his arms on Swara’s shoulders) : Because I am not there?
Swara (nodding) : Without Sanskaar, Swara isn’t complete. We are Mr Maheshwari and I… How can baby and I be complete without you? Sanskaar should be there, Papa should be there… Only then are we perfect.
Sanskaar (softly) : You know… I think there was a reason we were supposed to not like each other when we first met. I think there was a reason we struggled so much to finally be together.
Swara (placing her head on his chest) : Really? Why’s that?
Sanskaar : Maybe if we had found each other easily, we wouldn’t have paid much attention to every moment, every second that we are together and apart. We wouldn’t value our relationship so much.
Swara (sighing contentedly) : I love you Sanskaar.
Sanskaar (smiling and cradling his wife’s face) : I love you too, my Shona!
She brought him a glass of water as he changed into house clothes and played with Samar.
Sanskaar : Vaise, Swara… You are cheating.
Swara (surprised) : Me? How?
Sanskaar : You are teaching your son to tell Mumma? That’s cheating.
Swara (laughing) : How is it cheating?
Sanskaar : You get to spend the whole day with him all day every day. I don’t. If you teach him the full day, obviously he’ll tell Mumma first. Cheater cock! Jao.. I don’t want to talk to you.
He pouted as Swara watched him amused. He was surprised when she hugged him instead of retorting to his comment.
Swara (sadly) : My maternity leave ends tomorrow. How am I supposed to leave my baby here and go for work? I’ve never left him for a long time. (looking at Sanskaar’s face with anxiety) I’m scared. I don’t want to go.
Sanskaar (hugging her tightly) : Don’t worry. It’ll be hard. But I know my Swara. She’s very sensible and strong. She will go to work day after and once she comes back, will be with Samar. Samar won’t feel bad. He knows his Mumma has to work. He’ll be a good boy. Isn’t that right, My brave boy?
Samar (smiling) : Goo…..
Swara and Sanskaar laughed. Sanskaar picked him up from the bed.
Sanskaar : That’s right… Good boy.. That’s what you are. Good boy Samar. My strong son.
Swara smiled. She mouthed ” I LOVE YOU ” to him and he stared at her with a delighted grin. Samar, growing tired of being ignored by his parents let out a loud wail and then began babbling.
Samar : Goo gaa.. glooo kala… eeeeee
Swara laughed. She looked at Sanskaar and they nodded.
Swara and Sanskaar (each kissing one of Samar’s cheeks) : We love you, Samar.
Samar smiled, let out a loud cackle and clapped his hands.
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A MONTH LATER
Swara (rolling her eyes) : Laksh! Calm down. She’ll be here soon.
Laksh (glaring at her) : What do you mean calm down? Her flight was supposed to land three hours ago. Which it did… It does not take three hours to come home.
Sakshi (eating some biscuits that Adarsh was forcing her to eat) : Laksh! Sit down. You’ll give me my morning sickness in the afternoon. God, Swara…How on Earth did you survive 9 months? Morning sickness is so annoying.
Swara looked at Samar who was in Uttara’s arms sleeping.
Swara (fondly) : It’s such a magical time. Just enjoy it Sakshi.
Laksh (abruptly) : Swara! Call her again.
Swara (hiding a smile) : Sure.. Wait.
She dialled Saanvi’s number but only got a switched off message. She frowned. Though it was funny and delightful to see Laksh so worried for Saanvi, it still had been three hours since she landed. Where was she?
Laksh frowned. Where was Saanvi? How could she make him worry like this? Didn’t she know how worried he’d be?
He thought back to three months ago when she had knocked on the door to his room.
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Saanvi : Laksh! Can I enter?
Laksh : Sure Saanvi! Come in. Do you have to tell me something?
Saanvi (walking in hesitantly) : Umm.. Yes. I just came to tell bye.
Laksh (surprised) : Bye? Why? Are you going somewhere?
Saanvi (nodding) : I’ve stayed here more than a year. It’s not really right. Papa is alone at home. I think I should go to him.
Laksh : But why… suddenly? Why do you want to go?
Saanvi (smiling) : I told you na.. Papa is alone and he’s missing me. Don’t worry… I’ll come back in some time.
Laksh : A week or so?
Saanvi : I’m not quite sure. Why don’t I tell you later?
He nodded reluctantly. Saanvi turned to go outside, but then looked back at him.
Saanvi : I’ll miss you a lot. Bye Laksh.
Laksh (sadly) : I’ll miss you too. Come back soon.
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Laksh thought of that conversation now. Saanvi had left him for three whole months. She had left for Mumbai and Laksh was stunned at how much he missed her.
He missed her witty repartee, her help with his editing. He missed the way she scolded him for being such a dramaqueen everytime. He missed his outings to the park only because Saanvi dragged him there. A few months ago, When he wanted to propose to her, He had had no idea what she meant to him. But today, he was scared at how much she meant to him.
She hadn’t done anything. She was normal as always. Helping the mothers a little, doing the editing, talking with Swara. But somehow, She had slowly grown closer to Laksh. He thought of them as friends, but he knew that the fear about where she was now was not due to mere friendship.
Saanvi had entered into his life like a whirlpool with her confession and all, yet she had mellowed down so much that she put aside her own feelings and became friends with him, not asking for anything else.
Laksh (thinking) : I need Saanvi in my life. Where are you?
Swara : Laksh!
Laksh looked at Swara blankly.
Laksh : Yes?
Swara : Why do you care if Saanvi is here or not?
Laksh stiffened. He looked around but Swara had been quiet enough so that only he heard the question.
Laksh : Because she’s my friend.
Swara (laughing) : For an author who writes about romance in his mysteries, you’re pretty clueless.
Laksh (scowling) : I’m not. I…
Saanvi (entering the house with many bags) : Hello Swara! Hey Sakshi, Adarsh, Uttara, my darling Samar…. (looking at Laksh) Hey!
Laksh (dazed) : Hey!
Laksh looked at Saanvi with a sort of longing in his eyes. He had not seen her face to face for three months and now.. Seeing her now made him feel warm all over and light. He frowned as he saw how late she was.
Laksh (demanding) : WHERE WERE YOU?
Saanvi (surprised) : I’m sorry?
Laksh : Your flight landed three hours ago. Where were you all this while? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED WE ALL WERE?
His last outburst woke up Samar who began crying. Swara took him in her arms and watched the conversation as she rocked him back to sleep.
Saanvi (exasperated) : I just got a bit side tracked. Why are you so angry with me?
LAksh : Angry? Who’s angry? Now being concerned for someone is called being angry. Great!
Saanvi : Laksh! That’s enough. None of the others are snapping at me. Only you are.
Laksh : Well, YOU DIDN’T LEAVE THEM THE WAY YOU DID ME!
Saanvi stood stunned. Whatever she had expected Laksh to tell, That wasn’t it.
Saanvi (quietly) : What do you mean?
Laksh : 3 MONTHS? YOU GO FOR 3 WHOLE MONTHS AND YOU SPOKE TO EVERYONE HERE EXCEPT FOR ME… HOW IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MAKE ME FEEL? DON’T YOU CARE?
Saanvi : CARE? WHY DO YOU CARE LAKSH? WHY DO YOU CARE IF I’M LATE? WHY DO YOU CARE THAT I NEVER SPOKE TO YOU IN THESE MONTHS? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO, EVERY SINGLE MINUTE OF EVERY SINGLE DAY? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT ME?
Laksh : Why do I care about you? BECAUSE I FREAKING LOVE YOU..
The others who were watching this exchange smiled happily. Finally, After almost 2 years, Saanvi was getting her wish.
Swara : YESSSS! (Samar waked up again and Swara murmurs softly) Oh shit…. Sorry beta! Go to sleep.. Go to sleep.
Saanvi (with tears in her eyes) : Don’t make jokes like this. It’s really cruel.
Laksh : Joke? This is not a joke, Saanvi. I didn’t realise it until I said it. But I do.. I do love you. I don’t know when I started.. I don’t know how it started. But I do love you.
Saanvi : And Ragini?
Laksh : I did love her. A part of me mat never stop. But that part is so insignificant compared to the rest of my which wants you. I will not compare between the two of you, but what I felt for her is not what i feel for you. I need you.. I need you like I never needed anyone else. I want you the way no one can ever want you. I love you Saanvi, I swear.
Sanvi : O, Swear not by the moon, that inconstant moon, that monthly changes in her circled orb, lest that thy love prove likewise variable.
Laksh (with a soft smile) : Romeo and Juliet! Alright, Tell me what I should swear by?
Saanvi (walking towards Laksh) : Do not swear at all; Or, if thou wilt, swear by thy gracious self, which is the God of my idolatry,and i’ll believe you.
Laksh (disbelievingly) : You believe me?
Saanvi (nodded with tears in her eyes) : I do. I can see the look I’ve been waiting to see for such a long time in your eyes. I can see the tenderness, the… I love you so much Laksh!
Laksh (throwing his arms around her) : I love you too Saanvi. I love you too.
Sanskaar came from his study, papers in his hand. Seeing everyone watching Laksh and Saanvi together, he grew puzzled.
Sanskaar : What’s going on?
Swara (looking at her husband happily) : Baby, I do believe we’re about to have another wedding.
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5 YEARS LATER
Samar : Papa! Papa! Story.. Story!
Sanskaar ( smiling at his son who was tugging his hand) : Samar! Wait beta.. I have a little work. Why don’t you ask Mumma?
Samar : Mumma’s sleeping. She’s very tired because of Sahir.
Sanskaar sighed. Their second son Sahir was born only a month ago and they were learning that though raising one son was tough, raising two was even harder.
Though everyone helped take care of one another, the younger crowd were too many. Samar, Sahir, Adarsh and Sakshi’s daughter Antara, Ragini and Karan’s son Rishi and Laksh and Saanvi’s daughter Avni… All of them were born within successive years and now, the Maheshwari parivaar was bigger than ever.
Samar : Papa… Papa!
Sanskaar (keeping his papers on the table and picking up Samar) : Haan beta! Come.. I’ll tell you a story. Where’s everyone else?
Samar (shaking his head) : They didn’t want to listen.
Sanskaar (laughing) : Okay then… Let’s have some Papa-beta time.
Keeping Samar on his lap, Sanskaar opened his mouth to tell his story. But Samar interrupted him before he could open his mouth.
Samar : Papa! Today I asked Mumma to give 100 Rs to Shyamu Kaka.
Sanskaar (surprised) : Our gardener? Why?
Samar : I wanted to give him Sahir and the hundred rupees. Sahir’s no fun. He doesn’t even play with me. He’s too small.
Sanskaar smiled at his son.
Sanskaar : Do you know you were just as small before? You were as small as baby Sahir.
Samar (shaking his head) : No. I’m a big strong boy. I’m the eldest.
Sanskaar : That’s right. You are the eldest. You are a big strong boy. Which is why you’re supposed to be extra careful with your decisions. You need to think about your younger siblings : Antara, Avni, Rishi and Sahir.
Samar : Huh?
Sanskaar laughed.
Sanskaar : When I was small like you, My Bade papa told me a story. Do you want to hear it?
Samar : YES! Story! Yayyy….
Sanskaar : There was a father who had 4 children. The children kept fighting with each other and never played together.
Samar (horrified) : They never played?
Sanskaar (nodding) : They never played. Only fought and fought and fought. Their papa was very tired of this. So he went and brought 10 sticks which he tied together.
Samar (fascinated) : Then?
Sanskaar : He gave this bundle to the eldest child and asked him to break it. The eldest one tried. He bent it this way, then that way. Ugghhh..Come on, He cried out. Finally, he told no, he couldn’t do it and gave it to the next one. What do you think, Could he do it?
Samar (shouting) : NO!
Sanskaar : Exactly. He couldn’t do it. Nor could the third child or fourth. Everyone lost. Then their Papa took off the string that kept the sticks together. Now he handed each of them one stick and told them to break it. This time all the children managed to.
Samar : That’s good na?
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : Even they were very happy that they managed to break it. But their Papa told them… When the sticks were together, not one of you managed to cause them harm. They were strong and united. But once they became separate, they broke easily. Remember, the same can apply to you children. Stay together, grow together, play together, respect one another. The eldest show your younger siblings what is right and wrong. Be generous and devoted to them but at the same time, make sure they don’t go into the wrong hands. The younger kids, respect your elders. Believe that they know everything and will always protect you. The children heard their father’s words and became united.
Sanskaar frowned a little. Had he touched too serious a topic for a 5 year old? Would Samar even understand? Samar had always been a perceptive young kid, full of questions and really really smart. But maybe this was too much?
Samar (seriously) : Papa?
Sanskaar : Haan?
Samar : I will always take care of my sisters and brothers. Antu, Avni, Rishi and Sahir. I will always protect them. I am the eldest. I will be friends with them always. Then one day, I’ll tell my babies this story just like Bade Papa told you.
Sanskaar (hugging Samar) : Sounds like a plan, Champ!! I’m so proud of you. Now, Come on. It’s time for bed. Come on.
He sat in the chair as he rocked his son back to sleep. Once Samar fell asleep, Swara entered.
Swara (softly) : That was a beautiful story.
Sanskaar : You heard that? I thought you were sleeping.
Swara : I was. But then Samar never came to bed, so I came to check. (ruffling her sleeping son’s hair) You never told me this story.
Sanskaar : why didn’t you come inside?
Swara (smiling) : It was a father-son moment. I couldn’t come in between this.
Sanskaar : Every moment needs you. I need you. Bade papa was and will always be my inspiration. But you are my strength.
Swara (kissing him softly) : And you, mine.
Sanskaar : 6 years and counting…. Here’s to forever, Mrs Maheshwari!
Swara : We will be together forever and more. As as long it’s Mr Maheshwari and I….
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PRECAP : EPILOGUE 1
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I’m not really sure how to end this ff…. it means so much to me.
MMAI began simple enough, but soon grew into something that’s close to my heart. I’ve spent almost an entire year on this story and will miss writing it terribly.
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It’s not just the story… Each and every character meant soo much to me. The Laksh’s love story was never part of my plan.. it was purely an impulsive move at that time.. But I got to write a character like Saanvi for that… There’s just too much to tell about this story and i have no idea how to thank you all…
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i will save my thanksgiving speech for the epilogues…
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BUT I DO HAVE A REQUEST… PLEASE SILENT READERS, IF YOU GUYS ARE STILL THERE, PLEASE DO ME A FAVOUR AND COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI…. JUST A REQUEST FOR THIS LAST CHAPTER…
AND MY REGULAR COMMENTERS, PLEASE COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI AS WELL….
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THANK YOU EVERYONE… THANK YOU FOR BEARING MMAI AND ME..
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197 Comments
Hi anjali… Today I’m very emotional yaar… I still can’t believe that it’s the last episode of my one of the favourite ff… And as usual it was amazing… I can’t tell about one such moment because Each and every moment of MMAI was awesome… And as you said this is not just a story… Every character meant us alot too… Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story… This ff will always remain in my heart… I will feel very happy if you’ll write a new story again… because I’m gonna miss your writing very much… eagerly waiting for the epilogue… take care n stay blessed dear…
Namra 😀 😀
Aww… Don’t be… It’s just the way of life…
Soo nice of you to tell this… <3 <3 <3
The fact that you'll always keep it in ur heart… i'm grateful for that.. THNXXX soo much…
You'll only miss mmai.. not anything else… I'm already writing She's not for me and i will be continuing my other ff….
THnxxx once again…. <3 <3
Love you!!!!
The pleasure is all mine anjali… n I’m grateful that I got a chance to read a story as MMAI… Thank you once again dear… One more thing can you please give me the names of ff which you are writing… I wanna read them all…
Haha… Thnxx soo much <3 <3
My first ff was swaragini – The path to happiness… But you don't want to read that.. It's really really bad…
my second was mmai..
Ill share links of my discontinued ff in the epilogue…
And the ff i'm currently writing is called She's not for me 🙂
MMAI is the 1st ff which I read and it’s just awesome and the best ff and there r many best moments which I like but to be specific I just loved d holi special episode.
Aww… Thnxxx Sushmitha… Holi was great fun to write…
Glad you like mmai 🙂 🙂
Still Can’t believe its the last chapter.. But us however it is it’s good.. Well there are many moments, a lot, lots n lots of beautiful moments, indeed, the favorite one..Be it the counter-answering part,frenemy relation, zozo encounter with sandbar, Mr. n to be Mrs. Maheshwari’s cute little day out part,the venus park n the several others… One such incident sanskar presenting the garden of flowers before swara..This story is memorable for it is one of the excellent piece of your works so far…
Come up with more such masterpiece (I meant stories) …
May you excel in your work field too..
Well I hope it won’t sound like flattering.. ?..
All The Best..
Stay Blessed..
Have a beautiful future.. Keep smiling..
Heyyy Shiksha!!!
aww… So many moments… So nice of you to tell that!! <3<3 <3<3
haha.. no.. it doesn't sound like flattering…. I will treasure ur opinions and words… Thnxx once again 😀 😀 😀
LOVE YOU!!!!!
Will come back with more stories 😀 😀
No words to say
Aww.. Thnxx Tejasvi 😀 😀
Whole story is precious for me…… Pls start writing another story……
Aww.. Thnxx Purvi 😀 😀
i am already writing one… And will continue my ff that I discontinued long ago… 😀 😀
Amazing . yar l always cherish this story
Thnxxxx Mithu 😀 😀
Missed seeing u in few updates.. How r u? 🙂 🙂
I m gud yar. Sorry yar I was busy in my younger brother wedding. I have to fulfill duties of a mother as well sister. Next time u write something I will definitely respond regular.
You had to be a mother as well as a sister??
I don’t really understand what that means…
Pls don’t tell sorry 😀 😀
That means I don’t have mother. So I have all responsibility
Your story was beautiful Anjali. And you have been very good with the language and the vocabulary. I had been a silent reading all this time and today I am glad that I read a complete story on TU. I didn’t feel sad with one of my favorite Fan fiction ending, instead i felt satisfied. You portrayed all the characters very nicely. Your story was not unnecessarily dramatic. It was intriguing and just so lovable. I am glad i read Mr Maheshwary and I. Keep writing.
Thnxxx Anna 😀 😀
Absolutely loved ur comment…
So nice of you <3 <3 <3 😀 😀
Thnxx a lottt….
Hey I am silent reader of ur story n I loved this story alot.. I will miss it for sure… It’s one of my favorite story or u can say my first ff which I have started reading… Loved it alot.. .
Heyy Anup… Are u the same anup jetty from fb??
Thnxxx for coming forward and commenting?? 😀 😀 😀
First ff?? WOOWW!! Glad you loved it !!!! <3 <3 <3
Anjuuu…What a beautiful story yaar,dil chura liya tumne..I understand right,how a simple story line can grow into your nerves and finally become part of our flesh..I am so gonna miss this story..The characters,what to say,every character is perfect with their imperfections..Laksh and Saanvi are the sweetest,even though it was an impulsive decision it did bring fruits of love,baby.. 😀 Adarsh and Sakshi,I adore them..Their story is another track which I loved the most,Swara’s help to get them together is another sone pe suhaga… 🙂
Last but never the least as I say, Swara and Sanskar,I adore this couple as you know very well..I fell in love with them all over again while reading this story.. 😀
Waiting for the epilogue BETI,haha,only because of this story I got to know you dearest.. 😀
Love you loads and take care.. 🙂
I’m used to calling u by ur real name now.. 😛 😛
But thnxxxx soo much dii.. <3 <3
True… I remember blanking out so many times in coll al bcos i thought of a scene to write in mmai.. 😛 😛 😛
Awww… glad you liked the couples 🙂 🙂 🙂
Will post epilogue soooooon… im so happy I know you too Ur so sweet and kind and nice and cute and… I can go on and on… <3 <<3
LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!!
Like meher said I also found mmai’s mention under swasan ff’s analysis by anu but I started reading it after meher told me about your all three ff’s n I must say you are a brilliant writer for me n wanna thank u for writing for swasanians luv h loads dear ??????. Honestly I didn’t like first 2-3 parts but when I continued reading it I found myself deeply in love ❤ wid dis story n about my fav scenes it’s long list-
1- swara’s fear n sanskaar cansoling her wid utmost care n love “under the table ”
2- sanskaar removing thorns from swara’s body
3- their intense scene at gadodia niwas just after sanskaar returned from Venus garden
4- swasan date
5- holi
6- sanskaar’s realisation about his love for swara
7- their sangeet mehendi haldi n shaadi
8-swara’s pregnancy, mood swings n dat dialogue of sanskaar – Me love this stupid harmones ???? n her delivery
Special mention ??
SwaSan kisses for me always unexpected * * don’t know why ? They were like surprise for me ??
* Their challenges
* sanzozo moments ????
N there r lots of beautiful scenes in mmai but currently they r not striking in my brain???? .will badly miss dis story ???? it was a bliss reading mmai. Saying it again luv u loads n loads anjali ???? n will continue pyaar ka dard h?? Plz reply.
Oops I forgot to mentioned about the scene Samar thinking about giving sahir to ramu kaka along wid 100 rupees ???
N ya u forgot to tell dat who the last challenge I mean what did Samar call first mumma or papa?
HEYY NIK!!!!!
Aww… Thnxxx for giving mmai a chance anyways and reading it…. The scenes u mentioned were very fun to write..:P 😛 Wow.. YOu remember the thorns scene 😮 😮
That was like in the 13th or 14th chapter… It’s a huge deal that you mentioned that bcos that wasn’t even a major moment in the story..
Glad yoou liked all the other scenes that you mentioneddd…. 🙂 🙂 🙂
haha.. Samar sure is a handful…
About the challenge, I was waiting to answer it in the epilogue 😀 😀
So… Keep guessing 😉 😉
And yes.. I will be continuing pkdh once I finish posting the epilogues… <3 <3
LOVE YOU TOOOO!!!!! :* :* :*
Thnxx for being a part of mmai 🙂 🙂
Hey anjali, I am a huge fan of MMAI.. I started reading it when it was in some 20th chapter, I loved it so much that I ended up completing the previous chaters the same night..
You are a fabulous writer.. Sorry I did not comment till date but today I had to comment..
Ican’t believe MMAI ended.. The way swasan always challanges each other, supported each other is just wonderful.. I will miss MMAI a lot..
Love you anjali.. Thanks for sharing such a great story with us..
Thnxx soo much Sahi 😀 😀
Pls don’t tell sorry…. i’m glad you came up and commented now… 🙂 🙂
haha.. Did you get a good night’s sleep then??
I’llmiss MMAI too… <3 <3
Love you!!!
Hi Anjali di,
Wow! I feel privileged. I can finally comment on MMAI. Damn. I was addicted to this story that I left all my work during my breaks and read it. I stopped writing my fan fic, stopped reading all the stories I do and completed this story in 90 hours. Damn. I didnt expect to finish it so quickly, but ofcourse it took me to an another world and I couldn’t stop reading. 🙂
Well, penning down what I felt about this story would be really wrong and unjustified. Everything is just afresh in my mind and why not! Just a mere 90 hours, but ofcourse these 90 had been incredibly amazing for I got to read your story every single time I was free.
My favourite moment:
When Sanskaar finally told Swaragini about his belief. The thought that Sanskaar was finally able to confide in Swara, stole my heart away.
Although, all the moments and scenes you’ve jotted down are equally special, but this scene had a different magic.
I’m going to read ‘She’s Not For Me’ soon and there was some other fan fic I read about from your side. Something with ‘Pyaar’, would you mind letting me know it?
Also, thanks to Ashu for insisting me to read this wonderful story. This is going to be one of those fan fics which would always be in my fav list. ?
All love,
Ria.
* When finally Sanskaar told Swara.
** You’ve jotted and penned
Heyy Ria!! Am I glad to see you here 🙂 🙂 🙂
I stillcan’t believe you read 63 chappies in under 4 days.. Srsly the privilege is mine.. The fact that u actualy loved this story enough to comment is overwhelming…
THNXXX SOO MUCH!!! I’m glad you liked that scene…
loved* not liked..
it’s one of my fave scenes as well 🙂 🙂
I had posted 3 chappies of Pyaar ka dard hai.. But I discontinued it after those 3 chappies… Will be starting it once again once I finish posting the epilogues…
She’s not for me has 11 chappies ithink… Will soon post an update for that too 🙂 🙂 🙂
Tell thnxx To ashu from me tooo 😀 😀 😀 😀
LOVE YOU LOADSS!! :* :* :*
Even being a raglak fan I read ur story coz it’s just amazing u nailed every chapter and right now I am so sad that one of my favourite ff is ending but it’s OK otherwise the ff will lose its charm. U portrayed every character beautifully .
Will miss u.. and come soon with a new ff
Heyy Aadhya….
I can’t believe you read this even though it’s a Swasan ff.. That really means a lot to me 🙂 🙂 🙂 <3 <3
Thnxxx for ur kind words 😀
I'm writing another ff : She's not for me..
Though that too is a swasan one…
Thnxxx once again 🙂 🙂
Well I have become addicted to ur ff so I will definitely try to read that ff whenever I get tym to read as my exams are approaching so a bit busy
And keep writing this..
Good luck:)
TYSM!!!! <3
All the best for ur exams <3 <3
I just cant believe its ending….. i dont have words dear… it was just mindblowing.. i just cant write any one particular scene coz when i am thinking a lot of beautiful scenes and the way u potrayed each character are clouding my mind…. love u dear and will surely miss u and ur ff… keep writing and stay happy and blessed and ha waiting 4 ur epilogue
Thnxxx soo much Saranya 😀 😀
YOu may not have words but what you did write just adds another notch of inspiration to me.. Thnxx soo much for supporting me 🙂 🙂
You may miss mmai but you won’t miss me.. I will be back with 2 new ffs… But only after the epilogueee… 🙂 🙂
Love you :* :*
Anjali akka (hope it’s fine ?)
Missed me or not ?
Imissed you and also commenting in mmai ….
April amd May was the heaven ….
My favorite part of this beautiful mmai is the one where they play the ball(mallet) game and it rains….swara and sanskar will sit under the tree right…! That’s my most favorite….
I love almost all the parts equally coz of ur most wonderful writing …. ?
Loved everything ….
Feeling nostalgic when I recall how I started reading mmai (just for a readerlike me….this story has many memories which are to be cherished forever…I guess u will have a book of them ?)
This part was just fab and specially the wood bundle story (though old one…it’s a golden one?)
Arey yaar you didnot say whether samar told mumma or papa first ? just kidding bur it’s fine ?
Loved the best story by best story writer…this will definitely remain in my heart forever…
MR.MAHESHWARI AND I ?❤
DHARSHUUUUU!!!! I can’t believe ur here 😮 😮 😮 😮
I’m just about ready tofall dead.. the same way i was when i saw ur name that day…
how are u even active here??
And since when do ucall me akka?? We’ve never had formalities between us… :* :* :*
And ur asking me if i missed u?? What nonsensee… I missed u soo much…You just left 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁
I keep remembering april May too… All our ppl,,, i miss them all 🙁 🙁 🙁
Glad you loved this…. ur right… I do have so many memories here 🙂 🙂 🙂 Each of them mean so much to me <3 <3 <3
I'll tell what Samar said in the epilogue 😛 😛 😛 😛
LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH DHARSHUU <3 <3 <3
Still cant believe that MMAI is ending…
First chapter i read was i think 30th chapter.. Then i read from first chapter..
Choosing one best moment is so difficult.. Each scene was amazing…
U r asking for mentioning best moment then it was swara gifting painting to sanskar n Swasan’s reaction after knowing Swara’s first pregnancy ??
Stay blessed dear.. ?
Waiting for Epilogue
Thnxxx Soo much Simi 😀 😀
Aww… so nice of you <3 <3
i loved those moments too 😀 😀
Will post epilogue soooon….
Thnnxxx once again 😀 😀
Love you <3
i read it trice and still i can’t believe it’s he last chappy. and now as always i’m speechless. coming to the favorite scene, well each and every thing were precious, but still to be more precise i would like to prefer the chappy were sanskar confessed i guess its chapter 50 i loved it to the core
Aww… So nice of you mariya <3 <3
Haha… you don't seem speechless to me 😛 😛 😛
Glad you loved that scene… I love it too…
By the way.. i have seen ur name in some ff but i forgot the name.. Can u tell the name pls?
Thnxxx <3 <3
didi!!!!! awww!!!!!!! you know what will i say didi! i really don’t know many words for apperciation, i have already said as much as i know and have even repeated few words. but this last one……i can’t believe you are really ending it. MMAI was
fabulous,
fantastic,
marvellous,
superb,
beautiful,
lovely,
amazing,
awesome,
wonderful,
too good,
emotional,
cute and hilarious,
one of the best
and of course too much close to my heart no no, it is in my heart! i love your whole story from the core of my heart and i can’t choose any one part of them but still there was one scene which was my most favourite, when sanskar surprised swara with too many varieties of flowers in a go down. god! i can’t even describe the happiness i felt i get by reading that scene. its my most favourite. well done for such a beautiful story. i am so scared, i said all the words i know, what i am going to say for your epilogue? you said that your readers have to comment about their favourite scenes, i will say my favourite fact about you too. my favourite fact about you is that you called me cutie. i jump in happiness whenever you call me like that. i love that name so much, no one had called me like that. thank you so much didi. love you
CUTIEEE!!!!
You are really over whelming me… How can u tell all these words for mmai 😮 😮 😮
i’m sure it doesn’t deserve all that…
Now.. I’m not sure how I’m supposed to make my reply compare to ur comment??
well… Just hope it’s okay…
Ofc u r my cutie pie.. Ur so sweet and kind and friendly and God knows what all… My little sister… just like my Fifi… <3 <3
I loved the flower scenes too.. I had no idea what I was gonna do until I wrote it 😛 😛 😛 😛
haha… don't be scared… even if you don't say a word, i'll know what you'll think :* :* :*
LOVE YOU LOADSSSS!!!!! <3 <3
Wow fabulous fantastic amazing wonderful happy ending.. loved it so much anjali……
every chapie was super… loved it…
Awesome anjali…tc
Heyy navi.. I had given an earlier reply.. guess it didn’t get posted..
Anyways.. Thnxx soo much for always being here… Love you to bits <3 < 3 :* :* :*
And glad you loved mmai 😀 😀
Anju its awesome epi…everyone’s bonding is roo gud….but i am nt getting any words ???..i don’t want this to end…bt evry story needs to end…i am nt able to digest dis fact???….i miss mmai vry badly…many many many memories we made here …I’ll nt miss u.. coz u know y?….bt mmai ??????….ahh i am nt getting more words??
VAISHUUU!!! <3 <3
yayy… ur here 🙂 🙂 🙂
Glad you loved mmai….don't need words… We've known each other longer than the others 🙂 🙂 🙂
yess…. don't miss me 😀 😀
Thnxxxx baby…. LOVE YOU LOADSSSS
Best ff ever….followed this ff when it starts…i will miss this ff badly?n i love the way u descrined swasan so perfectly as anthony n kate…i conected to this ff soo much…
N my favourite scenes in this ff is every swasan moment is memorable…mostly swasan first kiss..sanky’s fear about loving swara.swara’s fear about storms n how swasan overcomed…swasan game moments…all emotional n romantic moments
Thnxxx Seebu 😀 😀
Aww… just tried to do anthony and kate justice….
ah… The first kiss… *memoriess*
Thnxx for giving ur opinion 😀 😀
I am a silent reader but I love your story a lot you are an awesome writer every part of your story will be too good to read love your writing skills you explain all the emotions in an apt way so I love this story I am sad that you are ending this story but as they say every good thing has an end
But I will surely miss your story to the core
Thnxxx soo much Sophia for coming up and commenting… MEans a lot to me 😀 😀 😀
Glad you understand me and am really happy that u love mmai…
Will miss this story too… Thnxx once again 😀 😀
Hey finally I’m here… Well I’m gonna miss this story as I’ve once told it gave a new definition of love… Truly the way as u made sanskar confess here…. One moment that blew all my senses… Well I don’t have one there are many… Sanlak sanadar swasan vilak n more never to forget mother daughter or mother son moments all are beautiful heart touching in their own way…. Anji I love this story not to mention never will forget… Today’s epic dialogue was Samar giving sahir with 100 rs… Well kahan se layi yeh unique soch yaar ????… I don’t have one moment… The whole journey was just lovely…i can’t talk abt one moment… Sorry…
Yaar I wish yeh bol sakti mat khatm kar but naa I can’t…. Swasan kya bolu me I just love the way swasan were… So much of passion without even confessing… Their attitude the way sanskar confided in swara… Sanskar saying bade papa is his inspiration n she’s his strength… Every bond was just fabulous.. I don’t have words… I’ll miss this …
Give the biggest epilogue.. U are bound for it… Lovely anju will miss reading it ??
NEHAAA!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 It feels so nice to see ur dp again 😛 😛 That cat is so cutee <3 <3
You're just sooo… i don't have any words to tell.. You've been here for me from the very beginning… 🙂 🙂
i don't know how to thank you for all the support and love…
So i won't… i won't thank you… i'll just tell you i Love you loadssss.. We've been friends for almost a year and though our gang isn't here… we still got our other gang…
i love talking to you :* :* :* :*
haha…. samar's soch… just imagine if the gardener had agreed 😛 😛 😛
I'll miss mmai too… Will give a epilogue just bcos you want it <3 <3
Though i told i won't.. I can't help myself…
Neha Thnnxxxx soo much for always being here for me.. Love you loadsss <3 <3
No need to thank I would have regularly registered my presence if tu wouldn’t have irritated to the limit….
I love u too… Loadsssss… Glad ur writing epilogue… N yup we’re connected not here but nevertheless…. I have loved this story n will always do…. No matter what ??
Okay anjali i read ur msg and even read it out to her. And she was like squealing while listening to ur sweet wrds and u knw wat she made me read all the chappies she missed on the phone. We talked for an hour. And here is the comment she dictated to me:
Diiiiiii missingggg u sooooooo much. And this is endingg????? U knw tis is a very sad day fr me. Mmai is endingggg? I really cant cme in terms wth this fact. I was really angry on u fr nt wishing me bt o cld nt stay angry at u fr a lng tym. After all u r my fav di. And i am ur sweet sis hai na? A d reg mmai….. ah it makes me feel nostalgic. I remember cmng across tis website by chance. And to be frank i dnt even remember hw i found ur ff. Bt all i can say is once i started reading tis i cld nt stp. I jst fell in luv wth each and evry character. There is no villian in tis story. No negativity. Everything is so peaceful. U knw initially i was a silent reader di. Bt watching ur conversations and ur friendliness i wanted to be a part of them. And even u ppl used to request silent readers to comment. So finally i commented and i was amazed by ur sweet reply. And thn i started conmenting in other ffs too. I used to tell what i felt whn i read ur ff u used to reply me saying that i was showering too much praise on u. Bt the truth is every wrd i spoke was what i felt frm the bottom of my heart. I loved sanskar as a healthy flirt and i loved swara as the strong girl. I luv strong girls actually. I was overwhelmed whn u tld me that i am the sweetest. I was happy that i hav a made a spl place in ur heart. Each and every thing associated wth u and ur ff has made a place in my heart. I cant name a few instances i like the moat in ur ff cause every instance is beautiful. Every scene is so perfect. I hav read the viscount who loved me bt believe me i liked ur version more. Though the initial story is same bt the way u took forward mmai was jst amazing. U completely deviated frm the original story and i loved ur version. After my hols whn i started attending college ur ff used to be my stress buster. I used to enjoy every episode so much. Now i am wishing i shd nt hav read this because though i read it again and again the thrill of reading a story fr the frst tym is completely diff. And i want to experience it again and again. I jst want to complete my 11th & 12th fast so thst i can cme and meet u. Yah i seriously wanna meet this angel of mine. Yah i jst cant understand hw u can be so sweet and soo caring with smeone whom u hav never met. U are one among the amazingg ppl i hav ever met. I am searching fr wrds to praise u cause my vocab is nt as good as urs. Bt i jst cant describe hw spl u r to me. I luv u di. Luv u soooooooooo much. Thanks a ton fr writing this amazingggg ff. Plz start ur nxt one soon. Though i cannot read it i hav found a way to stay updated to ur stories ie through this cousin of mine. I dnt knw hw lnv tis came out to be bt i am pitying my cousin and am stpping here. Take care di
Love u loadsss
??????????
Okie i comleted typing. She even specified the above symbols. She said that she
Srru for the incomplete comment. Yah she said that she used the above symbols nly fr ur writings. Anyways congratulations anjali for completing this. And yah though i hav nt read this i hope to do so soon.
FIFI!!!!!
And FIFI’s cousin.. .You reallyhave to tell me ur name btw.. 😛 😛 i don’t want to call u like that.. 🙂 🙂
fifi… I can’t believe it.. You made the poor dear READ out all the chappies?? How many were there 😮 😮
I want you to give her a present 😀 😀 She deserves it…
Now coming to u…how are you??/ i really am sorry I forgot to send u a bday wish later at least
🙁 🙁 don’t stay mad… 🙁 🙁
I remember you telling me that u began commenting mmai just for me.. I knew then itself that you were one of the sweetest people i know… but i didn’t realise how sweet until later…
Thebest thing about u was u always told me the truth and elaborated it.. if you didn’t like it, you told me to my face and convinced me to become better… that’s why ur the sweetest person ik..
I miss you soooo much… when will u come back?? 🙁 🙁 🙁
But studies first.. concentrate hard… and i hope the proud girl who’llhear about her Fif acing the exams… 😀
And yes.. You’ll always be in my heart.. Don’t ever doubt that.. Even when i’m 60yrs old.. I’ll make sure i remember all of you 😀 😀 <3 <3
I know if i tell anymore.. ull give ur cousin a heart attack by asking her to type another long reply.. So i'll stop here too…
All i can say I'm so happy to have u in my life <3 <3 Thnxxx for being a part of mmai and yes… LOVE YOU LOADSSSS!!!!!
Fifi's cousin :
Thnxxx soo much for keeping me in touch with her… And yes.. thnxxx for ur kind words.. <3 <3 It'll be amazing if u could read mmai 😀 😀
ALL THE BET FIFI!!!!! :*:*
Loved it dear.. Every swasan moments from this ff is special for me.. Never ever forget MMAI in my life
Thnxxxx AnuAnn… You’ve been here a long time too… <3 😀 😀
i'm really happy that you supported me for soo long 😀 😀 😀
touched by ur words :* :*
Anjiii I was thinking ki mein tujhe kisehh pitu?U finished it? Anji ,this was the only way to improve my language as hate reading books B)
Now I think u r used to writing this ff…oh anjiii how will u live without writing this???Won’t u feel strange? I’m feeling exactly the same as I felt during swaragini’s ending…
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE I EVER READ WITH PERFECT GRAMMER AND EXCEELNT VOCAB U COMPLETED THESE 63 PARTS AND MADE YOUR TELLY UPDATE JOURNEY SUCCESSFUL!CONGRATES JETHANI
I HOPE U WILL CONTINUE WRITING,MMAI IS NOT THE END.PLZ WRITE MORE..
I MISS OUR “FAMILY MOMENTS” AND OUR STUPID CONVERSATION
MY FAMILY MEMBERS…MISS U ALL
AND MY SABSE ACCHE LADKI JETHANI STAY BLESSED
EVEN TODAY U HELPED ME,U SAVED ME ALONG WITH MUGGY
THE BEST THING I LIKED HERE WAS…NEH NOT LIKED BUT LOVED WAS SAANVI WEDS LAKSH AND NOT RAGLAK B) I LOVE U FOR THAT,THOUGH IT WAS NOT PLANNED BUT I LOVED THAT!!
DID U EVER NOTICE WHAT HAPPENS IF U REPLACE “S” WITH “J” IN SANVI THEN WHAT HAPPENS?WELL WHATEVER HAPPENS IS MY LIFE’S TRUTH 😉
MUGSAN
ANSAN
JANLAK ROCKS!!!!!!
STAY BLESSED,CONTINUE YOUR JOURNEY AND I’M NO WAY READING PYAAR KA DARD AS IT IS A NALA FF BUT I’M SURE THAT THE STORY LINE IS AWESOME THERE TOO
I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUU JETHAAAANNNNIIIIIII
SABSEEE ACCCHIIIIII LADKIIIII
haww… love you bhi bolti ho.. aur hate you bhi?? :/ :/ :/
Which is it??
Vaise.. Read proper books to improve ur vocab… 😛 😛 My story really won’t 🙂 🙂
Don’t ask me how I feel.. It’s gonna be damn weird… I’ve been writing mmai since Feb 15th.. It’s gonna be a year since i started it…
i guess i’l think of something in the middle of class and then i’ll be like.. Oh shit i finished that story.. What do i do now? 😛 😛
But i do plan to continue my other 2 ffs.. so hopefully it won’t be too weird…
Thnxxx Evus.. I still remember commenting in ur samjhota for the first time and then asking u to read mmai.. I’ve always respected u as a writer and always will… the concepts u have maybe controversial but they’re amazing and the way u portray them is absolutely lovely..
uk the thing that i miss the most is the group that the three of us had.. u meher and me.. U two kept fightin and i was lost trying to figure out ur madness 😛 😛
i’m sure sautan will agree with me 🙂 🙂
Aur haan.. Raglak hater 😛 😛 i’m sure ur happy about saanvi and laksh.. lol… Bonus point for me 😀 😀
haha.. maybe next time i’ll include janvi <3 <3
I miss our family too… uk i actually miss riya kapoor only for the fact that our mummyji used to give the best comments ever..
And haan… I'm so not the duniya's sabse acchi ladki.. far from it 😛 😛
BUT I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU!!!! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU BECAUSE EvEN IF WE don't talk as much as before.. i will never stop talking to u…
LOVE OUR FAMILY… LOVE YOUR WRITINGS… LOVE YOU… <3 <3
HAHA… U CAN READ PKDH.. I'M NOT GONNA WRITE RAGLAK UNTIL SEASON 2.. SO RELAX… B) B)
I missed out so many chappies! I don’t know when will i read that….! ???
Im big fan of u…. Chappy was gud… I thought of write a big paragraph for u… But words are not coming! ???
Thnxxx heltej.. Missed u a lot 😀 😀
It’s been ages since i saw you… Don’t worry… Words are not needed.. the fact that you read it.. is enough for me 🙂 🙂 🙂
OH SHIT…BHUTTT ADA COMMENT HOGAYA NA? WELL TUMHARE BAREMEIN BAAT KARTE KARTE MEIN TIRED HII NEHI HOTIH…PATANEHI KYU MUJHE RONAH ARAHA HAI.EXAM KE BADH I READ ALL YOUR EPISODES AND NOW I’M FEELING BAD THAT I COULD NOT COMMENT.EVEN THE RAGLAK FANS LOVED YOUR FF,,,DID U KNW THAT?
THE MODERN LOVE STORY
MR MAHESHWARI AND I ROCKS!!!
AND YEAHHH I FORGOT TO APPRECIATE SWASAN,JAB MEIN LAKSH KE BAREME SOCHTI HU KISIKA KHYA NEHI REHTA..U KNW NA?? 😉
SWASAN CONFESSION AND HOW SANKU CHANGED THROUGH OUT THIS F,U WERE SUCCESSFUL IS SHOWING ALL
SANSKAR MAHESHWARI’S CHARACTER HAD SOME DIFFERENT CHARM IN THIS FF
A BOLD PERSONALITY AND I FOUND NP “NAUTANKI” IN THIS FF….THINGS WENT SLOWLY AND THE SWEET MEMORIES,THE BEAUTIFUL SCENES…
I CAN SAY ONLY ONE THING ABOUT THIS DESICION
“PRACTICAL DESICION MADE BY HEART”
REALITY WITH EMOTIONS FLOWING
MY STORY IS FAR AWAY FROM REALITY CAUSE IT HAS SACRIFICES WHICH PEOPLE DON’T DO I REALITY AND WHAT U DID WAS ALL PRACTICAL…
PYAAR 2 DAYS MEIN NEHI HOTAH HAI
U SHOWED THERE LOVE AND TRULY THIS IS CALLED LOVE STORYYYYYY
PREVIOUS COMMENT WAS YOUR TARIIFFF AND THIS WAS YOUR MMAI’S TARRIFFFF
ANJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ROCKED MMAI!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
EVA <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Dude…. Yeh toh too much nhi ho gya??
I don’t deserve so much… Srsly yaar.. *thinking face*
now… i’m not gonna reply to ur comment here cos i don’t know how to… other than the fact that this was a practical decision and i’m happy u understand that…
i’m gonna talk about u instead..
as i said.. i remember asking u to read mmai and i was happy when u said u did and actually told me u liked my story..
later when ppl were annoyed bcos of the couples.. I was damn annoyed and till today, have never thought differently..
but that was when i found about how strong u were… we’ve had numerous conversations since then.. and ik so much about u… i just have to admire u for the person u r now…
i love you soo much evu… and ur stories… they may not be stories that we hear nowadays but everyone could use a little bit of magic and imagination..
LOVE YOU!!!! <3<3<3