Heyyy guys I know you all are waiting for me to Post first epi of my devil I will Post soon…
Guys this is my First os hope you will like..
I dont like swara being only great even ragini should do something for her she is trying in serial but she cant be so Great like our swara soo I thought why not to make her great now…first I thought it should on swasan but ragini is playing very important role so why not swasan n raglak..without wasting time lets start…
Swara went to console sanskar After
hearing death news of laksh from ragini…but seeing the scene infront of her made her shocked and angry…Sanskar was drinking and loughing like nothing happend…
Sw: sanskar what is this
San: what
Sw: you are drinking and there everyone is crying for laksh
San: hahahah so what should do han
Sw: (shocked) sanskar
San: what han there is nothing see if laksh come or not we will be never toghter so I dont care..
Sw: (slapped) how can you say like this han he is your brother
San: I dont care (saying he was about to turn swara held his wrist and pulled him towards herself)
Sw: you dont care about anyone han what about badi ma and bade papa did you thought about them
San: I dont care about them anymore
Sw: sanskar do you have any idea what are you saying
San: I know what I am saying why dont you go to them be the great swara
Sw: sanskar what happend
San: nothing I am just fed up from you from laksh from everyone I wana be alone sooo leave me alone
(Saying this he pushed her swara was about to Fall but nikil saved her from falling)
Ohhh look here is your saviour now leave me and go enjoy with him
Sw: (crying n slaped) I hate you
Saying this she left with nikil seeing her leaving tears Fell from sanskar eyes after throwing the beer Bottle he also left…but seeing all this someone was happy…
At badi
Everyone was crying and also trying to console ragini n anuparma
But hearing someone voice they shocked and after seeing the person they were happy..
Seeing him ragini run and hugged him thigtly she was crying…
Rag: LAKSH
(Yes guys laksh is back)
Lak: shhh ragini shhhh..stop crying
Ap: laksh
Lak: Ma (he Broke the hug with ragini and hugged ap thigtly) Ma I am sorry leaving you all alone I am sorry
Ap: (crassing his hair) I am so happy that you are finally back..
Laksh meet everyone n told them everything where he went n why but someone was missing but nobody thought about him seeing laksh they forgott everything…
After Meeting everyone laksh n ragini were talking when ragini brought her mangelsuter n sindoor infront laksh n asked him to Fill her mang n tie mangelsuter seeing this swara Got tears she thought about sanskar but his today Behaviour made her hate him but still how can she hate him when she loves him madly..
Suj: where is sanskar does he know about laksh return
Ut: han mom I told bhei and he cant come beacuse he has a very important Meeting is in other city..
Ap went towards swara and placed her hand on head
Ap: dont worry beta when sanskar Come na you will also come back After all i want my both Bahu back..
Swara gave her fake smile in her hearth she know that day will never come…ragini also left with laksh After promising to swara that she will bring her back to mm…
Its been one month since laksh came everyone was happy ragini happiness has no bound..
Raglak were sitting toghter..
Lak: ragini where is adarsh bhei didnt saw him
Hearing ragini Got shocked
Rag: what are you saying laksh dont you know adarsh bhayia is in jail
Lak:what jail but why
Rag: laksh dont you know
Lak: no plzz tell
Ragini start telling him how she n swara saved dp n ap and he Used him to kill sanskar or sanskar to him and when he went missing how sanskar searched him how swara Broke their relationship for her…hearing all this laksh start crying
Lak: what swara Broke her relationship with bhei
Rag: han
Lak: Come with me saying this laksh took ragini hall and even called gododia family when gf reached laksh went towards n start asking sorry making everyone confuse..
Sw: laksh why are you saying sorry
Lak: beacuse of me you n bhei are not toghter
Sw: no intrupedt by laksh
Lak: plzz let me say swara bhei isnt on meeting (everyone shocked) he left beacuse I said to him
Sw: what are you saying
Lak: that day when you came to console bhei..
Flashback
Sanskar was totally Broken hearing laksh death news he was walking on road when he suddenly saw laksh seeing him He Run towards to him n hugged him thigtly making laksh shock..
San: where did you went (Broke the hugged cupped his face) you know everyone is thinking that you are death
Lak: (jerked his hand) let them think what they want I dont care
San: laksh why are you saying this
Lak: han beacuse of you I have no importance in my family everyone is only caring about you
San: no laksh everyone missing you plzz Come back
Lak: no
San: think about badi ma
Lak: so you want me back
San: yes
Lak: then do what I am saying
San: (After thinking alot) ok
Flashback over and you guys know what happened…
Hearing this everyone got shocked as well angry on laksh what He did swara just didnt react she stood numb she didnt even cryied..ragini went near laksh n slaped him making everyone more shocked she held his color n pulled him..
Rag: how could you do this laksh han I never thought you will Do this beacuse of you Swara blame sanskar n she left him I never thought you will Do this (saying this she pushed him)laksh for me swara left sanskar na and today I am leaving you
Ap: ragini
Rag: no ma not today beacuse of me swara lost her first love becuase of me Baba throw her out beacuse of me she almost most died beacuse of me she
Made fake marrige Drama beacuse of me everyone thought her Charakterless beacuse of me she was about to loose sanskar and beacuse of me she left sanskar when she can do anything for me why not me so (pointing Finger on laksh) mr laksh maheshwari we are not toghter anymore you are not my husband anymore saying this she fainted laksh picked her immediately and took to their room they called family doctor but swara didnt react on anything n she left to their rooms..
Swasan room..
Swara entered in their room After 7 or 8 month she looked around there was still their picture of their confession their picnic marrige she was looking picture tears start fowlling down from her eyes she Fell with this on her knee n shouted loudly making everyone shocked
Sw: SANKAAAARRRRR
Sujata n sharmishta run to her n hugged her thigtly..
Mean while the doc Checked ragini
And gave news making everyone happy..
Doc: congrats mr maheshwari your wife is pragnent..
The doc left everyone came to ragini blessed her..
Rag: Ma Baba lets go
Lak: ragini plzz
Rag: who are you
Lak: I am sorry ragini
Rag: your sorry cant bring my sis happiness back Saying this she was about to leave when everyone requested her not to go finally she accepted but with a condition that she will stay in guest room with swara only..
During ragini pragnancy laksh tried to search sanskar but failled ragini never Talk to laksh or wore her mangelsuter n sindoor when ragini deliverd her Baby girl she gave to swara..
Sw: ragini
Rag: swara from now she is your dougther sur sanskar maheshwari
Sw: ragini
Rag: plzz if you will Not accept her even I wont
Sw: (After thinking alot) fine but I have als a condition
Rag: what
Sw: you will accept laksh
Rag: swara
Sw: ragini
Rag: ok fine I will
Sw: (happy) but why did you gave her sanskar name
Rag: (smiled) beacuse our happiness even he left his love
Sw: (smiled sadly tears about to fall) thanks ragini
Swara hugged ragini n happily Took sur with her laksh was happy that finally ragini forgive him but soo his happyness faded away hearing ragini
Rag: dont be happy I only accepted beacuse of swara I wana see my sister happiness but it doesnt mean I will forgive you we will act infront her only
Laksh was hearthbroken hearing this but compose himself..
Like this days passed months n years swara start leaving happily with sur but she was missing his sanskar n raglak only act infront her to be happy couple but they were also missing eachother…
Ends….
If you want happy ending give me lots of coments then I will give you happy ending on swasan n raglak
69 Comments
Nice…
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Awesome
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If you will not give happy ending na then I will definitely kill you…
Hahahha I will give you happy ending
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awesome.. want ending.. please unite swasan
I will dont worry
Please give it a happy ending…can’t see swasan separation…
Even me yaar I cant See my swasan seprated
Awesome. Want happy ending plzzzz
Thanks ofcourse there will be happy ending
Wowww, wag swara did same mistake done by ragini, if 3 of them try their best may they have found sanskar
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yr rabia fat fat wrote next part am waiting
Even I am waiting ok..Post soon
Hey , it was awesome &plz continue it & give a happy ending.
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Amazzing….
Want happy ending……
Thanks you will get happy ending
awesome dr…n rags m wid u..ur decission is correct!!!!wish sanky returns sooon ….waitng for love to blossom again in raglak lyf…post d end part soooon dr.waaitng for it…keeep rockng n stay blesssed π π π
Thanks dear dont worry love blossom soon
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What happend didnt you like
No no no i love it but its too sady u now thats y
Hahha ok I thought you didnt liked but thanks dear
Wow!!!
Nice os dr..
I want hpy ending nly rabia dr… plzz plzz plzz..
Ya u r right nt nly swara ragini also mahan here… anΔ my sansku also.. π :-*
Waiting 4 nxt part..
sanky where r u!!???
Keep writing
be happy always
Thanks dear yeah I know sanky is mahan why always swaragini have to be Haan han ?
Heee heee dats rly true. ?
that quiz is bothering me 4m my childhood dr..
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Want hpy ending!! Where is my sanky..!??? I wnt him.. hawww.
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Hahhaha dont worry you will come to know soon where is sanky
nice..want happy ending plz..
nice… os
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Awesome dear
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Nice dear want swasan union
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Hey thats not fair
U are blackmailing us
Dont know why swasan writers blackmail us
Huhhhh
But plz post soon next part
Hoo this first time I blackmailed you all but thanks dear ?
Obviously we want swasan union.. Upload soon
Hahha ok thanks
Unexpectedly amazing, really nice! Will u be giving happy ending? You know happily ever after exists only in stories, not in real life, so pls do at least give it in stories
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Thanks dear and yeah dont worry there will be happy ending
Nyc
Post nxt chappy
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awesome
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superb…post nxt part soon
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Awsum..very emotional one..i frlt Swaraβs pain..bt plzz want anotherhappy ending wala part plzzz show Swaraβs pain tadap fr Sanskaar n show abt sanskaar too..plzz continue soon wid mor3 swasan plzz.cnt wait..
Ahhhh am i dreaming ahhhhhh?????????????????its happiness tears oh god you dont know how crazy I am about your ff n you gave coment on os woooow hahahha??
Hahaha..U deserve it dear..srsly awsum os..plzz continue soon
awesome dear…
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huh! how could you Laksh!, but you..ahem ahem..after 6 month separation, you made Ragini pregnant..yay! π :D…
Swaraaa….Sanskaaarrr!!!!! huh!
Thanks dear one of should be pregnant na
Ehemm ehemmm Micaaa !!! r we twins?? puuut puuuuut !!! π
twin in shameless thing.. Big NOOO.. i’m more innocent than you :3
Ready with popcorn for next part !!! i want happy ending Rabiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa… !!!if not then *ready with pimpom ball, stove,broom,chilli powder !!!!!!
huhhh seee who is saying… !!!
Update soon okkkk !!!
Love it dear !!
Thnk u.. ;-*
Thanks dear and yeah I will give happy ending dont worry