hi guys here is an os and a shock for you all at the end……………hope you all like this os……..i was not in a mood to write next part of ff so wrote this os
and i am missing my swasan also a lott onscreen so i am writing it on the current track……and if you all are also missing them then do read this one……here we go……hope you all enjoy it…….
the day swara left mm…..she sent all the gadodia members to baadi and herself left somewhere crying…….she moved on to a bridge and was walking like a lifeless body…..she was about to fall from the bridge but sanskar came and got hold of her and she landed on his arms……both had an eyelock which showed the pain of losing each other……..soon they came into senses………as swara was broken from inside but had to be strong in front of sanskar she came out of his grip
sanskar: swara please come back……..please swara……i am incomplete without you
swara [in mind]: i am sorry sanskar…..i will have to do it………i have to be strong for my sister….today if i come with you and forgive you….you will take it lightly and will not find laksh……i cant even make you understand what you have done by not controlling your anger………..i am sorry my love…..i am sorry
swara thought all this and left without replying sanskar…….
sanskar [in mind]: swara why are you doing this…..don’t you want your sanskar to share your pain…..haa……..why are you giving me the biggest punishment of my mistake…….swara please come back…….please swara……shonaaaa
he was crying literally but even he didn’t wan to show it to his swara…….he hought she would fall week and would forcefully return to him which he doesn’t wants….he wants her to return to him happily and wholeheartedly……….with a smile on her face……with a blush when she sees sanskar not anger and pain…….he thought that its better to find laksh instead of wasting time………
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9 months later
sanskar found laksh…….they both became brothers again….everyone was back to mm even ragini……but our swara wasn’t …….no one was able to trace her…….she left the city that day only when she left sanskar…….
one day….
sanskar was sitting in his room with photos of swara and his……..
sanskar: swara you know when i said you those lines that even if i am saved from laksh we wont be together…..this was a prank…..i didn’t want to hurt you but now god has shown me my correct place….hell…….yes swara i am living in a hell……..my life without you is a hell…….i still love you and will always love you…….you nevr gave me chance to speak something that day……you just left me……..why swara why…….you know na i had so much future plans…..our kids……our remarriage….our dream house in us……but nooo…………………..swara i am missing you badly please come back to your sanskar please swara……..you know i still remember our precious moments
flashback
sanskar was sleeping peacefully in his room when swara came out only with a bathrobe……she smiled and went to sanskar caressed his hair and was about to leave when sanskar held her wrist and pulled her on him due to which she landed on his bare chest…..he rolled and came on top……
sanskar: good morning jaan
swara: sanskar please na not now
sanskar: shhh
read at your own risk………..
he kissed her eyes,, nose tip,, her cheeks and slightly pecked her lips…..
sanskar: jaan i am leaving you now but i wont leave you tonight so be ready
this made swara blush a lot……sanskar was getting up but again fell on her
sanskar: jaan i guess today is sunday so i am free whole day so why not right now……..
swara: sankuu please na not now…..
sanskar: jaan please…….please for your sankuu
swara [unwillingly]: okay…….
sanskar smiled and kissed her……it was a passionate one……even swara responded with equal passion……..sanskar smiled and removed her bathrobe and licked her cleavage………
swara: ahhhh sanskarrrrrrrr……….
he smiled and continued his work…….and they both consummated……..
flashback ends
his thouhts were disturbed by a call
sanskar: yes parag
os:……….
sanskar: whattt……….i am coming to the airport book my flight…….
he ended the call
sanskar: swara finally i found where you are….i will do anything to get you back i will get you back my love
he left to pune from flight
pune……….
a girl was shown sleeping with a cute smile…..her stomach was a bit fat…..yes she was pregnant……a girl came to her
girl2: shona get up……its too late….your baby would also be awake by now
swara: preeti please let me sleep….and about my baby i am sure he is on his dad you know even sanskar used to wake late on sundays
she stopped after saying this sentence……she said it in a go not realising what she said
preeti [trying to lighten the mood]: how do you know it is a boy……
she tried to lighten the mood but instead it was more critical than before
swara [without any emotion]: you know sanskar wanted a girl…..but he wanted an elder brother for his daughter….to protect her…..to save her when he is not there……
preeti saw tears in her eyes she hugged her
preeti: why you left him swara…..whyy……he was ready to accept you ……..and even now i am sure he will……then why
swara: because i don’t deserve him……i don’t deserve his love…….moreover i am a badluck for them……see when i am not there they all are living happily…..even laksh is back……ragini also forgot me…….
this made swara cry……..
swara: but i don’t deserve him……i have given him so much of sadness…….i have given him only pain……
she said but got a burning sensation on her face……yes someone slapped her but who??
sanskar……..yes sanskar slapped her……sanskar was there…..he came there
swara lifted her head only to see her love standing there with blood shot eyes……….
swara: s a n s k a rrrr
swara said with a chocked voice
sanskar: how dare you swara…..how dare you say that you gave me pain…..no you didn’t gave me pain….you taught me to live life….to forgive everyone…..to respect elders….to love……..you gace me the best feeling of my life swara……i love you swara…..i love you
the time when he started his sentence he was angry but slowly slowly tears started cming from his eyes…….
swara: sanskaar…..how you found me
she was interrupted by preeti
preeti: i told you na i went to make a deal with his company…….i met him there and in th first meeting itself i came to know he is your husband……..we kep on meeting for business purposes nd everytime i saw him talking to your phot in his cabin….every time i saw him broken…….he didn’t use to have his food properly……i thought about you…..even you were not satisfied with your life here……and no matter how much you try you wree not able to hide your pain……at last i decide od to make you both one again….but onething stopped me that is you…..you told me when i was leaving for kolkata that i am going for only a business purpose and i shudnt try to make everything fine…….then to i told him where you are because i couldn’t see you both in pain…….you both were not happy without each other…….please clear the misunderstanding guys…..
she said and left them alone
as soon as she went sanskar hugged swara tight
sanskar [hugging]: never leave me alone
swara broke the hug
sanskar was so much angry that he didn’t notice her baby bump….as soon as he noticed it his eyes were filled with tears
sanskar: swara…..this is my child na…..haa……say na swara
swara [in mind]: i should deny him that its not his child so that he leaves me and lives happily
swara was about to say something but sanskar kissed her belly
sanskar: swara……it’s a boy…..i am sure it’s a boy….he will save our daughter……….thanks for fulfilling my dreams swara…..thank you…..
sanskar started talking to the baby
swara [in mind]: swara how can you separate your child and its father….no you cant keep sanskar away from his child…..even he has right to know…..and moreover think he is soo happy now what will happen if he knows that his own son is being kept away from him…..no i cant hide the fact that this is sanskar’s child……
suddenly swara shouted
swara: ahhhhhhhh sanskarr…….ahhhhh
sanskar stopped talking to the baby and looked towards swara…….she was crying badly
sanskar: swara swara r u ok…….
swara: sanskarr…….ahhh…..my water broke
sanskar without wasting time took swara in his arms and left to the hospital
hospital
swara was placed on the stretcher and all were taking here to ot but swara still didn’t stop screaming and crying
sanskar caressed her hair and said: swara nothing will happen to you…..i am here with you……..
doctors were taking her in the ot but she held sanskar’s hand tightly not letting him to go
swara [semi conscious]: sanskarr……don’t leave me…..p l e a s e
she said as if she was begging….he had tears in his eyes listening to her and went inside the ot for her…….
outside preeti was eagerly waiting for the baby’s sound and inside swara was struggling hard
sanskar: jaan please push…..please jaan
sanskar was saying this sentence again and again
swara slapped him hard while shouting
swara: idiot……duffer……i hate you……..
she said and went unconscious at the same moment sanskar heard a cry of baby
he lifted his head and saw the baby
doctor: congrats mr maheshwari it’s a boy
sanskar’s happiness had no boundaries…….
he took the baby from the nurse and kissed his forehead
sanskar: my champ…..my daughter’s saviour
after some time swara was shifted to normal ward
she was still unconscious……preeti had left tobhome for swara’s arrival preparation only sanskar was there in the hospital….he was thinking that why swara slapped him and said i hate you
just then swara gained consciousness
swara: sanskar
sanskar who was sitting on the couch got up took thebaby from the cradle and came beside swara and sat on the bed…..she rested her head on his chest and took the baby from him…..
swara: sanskar….our baby…..now everything is fine……..
sanskar: but swara why did you slap me and say idiot duffer i hate you
swara: you know my stomach was paining like hell and its you who made me pregnant
she said all this in a go and realised after she said
sanskar [huskily]: oh then i am ready for these slaps once in every two years…..
swara slapped him playfully
swara: shameless
sanskar: only for you my love
swara: sanskar now we are going back to kolkata na….i am missing everyone soo much
sanskar: swara voh we will love here from now……everyone from there are shifted to mumbai and no one is in kolkata so no use of going there……and we will have to live here in pune as i have opened one branch here…..and my kolkata branch is now handled by my some officers
swara: arre but what was the need for all this sudden change
sanskar: my love you want your husband to be the best business man no then i am thinking to fulfil your dream
swara: thank you sanskar…..thank you soo much my love
sanskar: but even you have to fulfil my dream…….you gave me my son but now i want a daughter for which i wanted a son…..
swara blushed and hided her face in his chest
sanskar smiled and kissed her hair
swara: thanks for coming in my life sanskarr and thank you for making me pregnant
sanskar: anything for you my love
guys thanks for all your love……i am thinking to give a sequel for this whenever i am free……guys if you loved the os then please please read the note below…..
shock time:::::::::::::::::::::::
hi guys………i am here with a shock for you all……yes i will be leaving telly updates from next week……don’t worry about the ff’s as shan will post it on my behalf whenever i will type……..guys i am very busy here and moreover just now i am in zurich and i will be moved to geneva and i have internet problem also there……guys please please co-operate
all my dear readers i will miss you all a lottt…….and yes shan will also send me the screenshot of your comments or she will copy paste the comments……guys even then i will not type the ffs regularly…………..all my dear readers sorry for this sudden shock but i will have to do this for these 5 months……only if some miracle happens i will come beore 5 months………i thought to end my ff but then some of my readers were ready for irregular updates and didn’t want me to end that’s why just for you all i wont be ending…..whenever i wont get time to type ff i will try to type os……..and shan will reply to all your comments but trust me all comments will be typed by me only she will copy paste them…………hhehehehe shan hope you don’t mind…..kaku now my problem is doubled…..i thought after you leave tu i will do guzara by reading your previous posts but now even i am leaving……huh…..let’s see i come before you or after………hehehehe
guys i will give you all a treat on 21st february by posting the episodes of my ff and one os and by replying to your comments from my own id as it is my birthday…….i know it has a lot of time but i am leaving next week so…….love you my crazy readers……….muahh
thankyou kakali, simin, vyshu, shan, rabia, shrinjal, sammy, simi, manasvi, febi, chandu, chanu, anu, uma, tani, s, afra, isha, shalu, trisha, soujanya, dharani, deeksha, rekha, nagamanasa, diya, saloni, maha, radhika, sanjana, sanswa, janvii, vahe, dharhini, stg, mou, srsl, riyanjali, sweety riz, alia, rosey, ashia, arshaanya, vidhi, navi, myna, shreeyu, arunika, prakriti……….thanks to my silent readers and thanks to the one who will comment on this one
guys i will try to give an os as a treat of my leaving………but not confirm…..if not possible this week then shan will post it on my behalf…….i miss you all a lotttt……..all my silent readers please break your silence here because this is my last post from my id…….and guys miss me a lot……hheehehe i know i am weird……..and don’t forget me guys……..
44 Comments
Awesome di will miss u
Thanks a lott simi??
Even I will miss u a lott??
May I ask why everyone is leaving ufff????awesome os dear…
Thank a lott dear…..I will have to leave…. sorry
Amzing os..loved it
Awsm yr ..loved it ..
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Amazing chappy
awesome hemanshii and dont worry dearr i will also read your stories if i got the time and as u already told mee soo when i read your name i came running immediately to read this os and if it is easy for u then surely give us the sequel 😉 i will also miss u and be back soon 🙂
Hemanshi di seriously I’m gonna miss u. I’am a silent reader love dear ????hope ur every problem get solved love u
And will miss rabia and kakali love u all
It awesom is I really loved and
It awesom is I really loved and enjoyed it
awesome…!!loved it…!! All the best..!!! And miss us too…!! 😀
Awesome di…but what is this everyone is leaving us diiii…anyways gonna miss u a lot di
huhhh huhhh huhhhhhhhh u became my most wanted competitor in leaving TU… promise if u don’t come back na u will loose me for
forever… i will never come back to TU.. let’s see now u will come 1st or me..
Wow hemanshi dear awesome loved it 🙂
superb
awesome. plz one more part
Awsm part once again…..luv u & I am gonna miss u!!
Awesome.. ?
Awesome di…. Loved it a lot…. Very nice…. If u have time give the sequel of this episode di….. ?And i don’t have pblm di….. ?
waaa.. Hemuuuu.. good job dear!!!
uughh even good job for Saskar.. he made Swara pregnant before their separation…
dammit! even i want Swara being pregnant in serial.. stupid color channel…
Loved it
Superb
awesome.. miss u plz dont go
Amazing di….
I am gonna miz u…
Awesome… swasan wr cute.. thn tc hemanshi..
Diiii, it’s… It’s…. It’s.. I can’t describe in word how is it!!! Loved it to the core… Sanky you made her pregnant before your separation,not bad ha??…. Keep writing like this di.
Diiiiiiii,you are also leaving tu, not fair?????????.. Why my all fav writers are leaving tu,kyu*pout face…Anyway, I will miss you badly..Take care.. Keep smiling… Enjoy there??.. Love you loads*tight hug..Muaaah???
nice..
Gonna miss you…..!!!!!!!! And awesome os….!!!!!!
nice os and gonaa miss u
Awesome di….will miss u. Take care. All the best and please come back soon