Hi guys, I am back but with an surpise OS. As you all know that today is independence day. so this OS is totally dedicated to this day and to our brave soldiers of your country
It starts with a girl of about 25 years old waking up at 5pm. It’s simple room. She washes her glowing face. She wears her tracksuit and runs towards a park. She starts jogging there. There were many other people jogging. She had a cute smile on her face but then she sees something which makes her angry. She sees a goon eve teasing a girl. The goon was going to hold the girl2’s shoulder. The girl in tracksuit (girl1) runs towards that direction and catches the goons hand on time. She is seeing the goon with blood shot eyes.
Goon: Hey you, do you want come with me instead of this girl. Then I don’t mind baby doll. I…
Just the girl1 punches the goon on his nose which starts bleeding. The people started surrounding. The girl 1 kicks the goon and says with stern voice, “never dare to think girls as weak.”
The goon started shivering. The girl1 sees al people and says, “are you all blind? Can you atleast call police if are scared to face the goon but no all of you are just ignoring. If there would be your daughter, sister or your mother, would you all be standing and seeing the tamasha. You all young men are just making biceps and abs for show off, can’t you use them to protect a girl.”
Then girl1 goes to the girl2 and says, “These people will nothelp you but atleast you could use your hand or legs to fight against him. If you will cry like this then the goons like him will get more confident and start to tease more girls These hands are not just to make food in the kitchen. Don’t forget that kaali ma was avatar of parvati maa only.”
Saying this she started to go but just then an old lady asks, “beta, you are the only person this much braveness. Who are you?”
The girl turns and says, “I am new IPS officer of this district.IPS officer swara gadodia (yes guys she is our swara only)
The goon who was laying on the ground widened his eyes. He stood and ran upto swara and fell on her feet, “i am sorry madam. I am really sorry”
Swara jerks the goon with her legs and says, “if you want to say sorry then ask forgiveness from all those girl whom you have teased.”
Goon: ji madam
Saying this the goon first asked forgiveness from the girl2 and then ran away. Swara also went back to her house where her father, shekhar and mother, shomi were sitting together and drinking tea.
Swara: good morning papa, good morning mumma
Saying this she hugged them sat down with them. Shemish were eyeing each other and swara noticed this.
Swara (suspiciously): Papa, mumaa, do you want to tell me something.
Shemish nodded
Swara: What?
Shomi: Woh beta, you are 25 years old now, well settled in you job so don’t you think that you should get married now
Swara: Maaaa
Shekhar: shona, this time I will support mishti.
Shomi: And all your friends who are same age as yours are already having children but you
Interrupted by swara, “Mumma, there is a big difference between me and friends. My first priority is my job which includes protecting my country, my motherland.
Shekhar: Beta we can understand and we are not forcing you to marry straightaway. First you can sees the boy, talk to him and if you will feel comfortable then we can proceed the relationship.
Swara: Fine and if him or his family will not accept my job and ask me to discontinue my job after marriage then I won’t marry that person. And if by any chance they ask me to leave my job after marriage then I will divorce that man straightaway. Do you both accept it.
Shomi (happily): Yes
Swara: Fine, then I am ready for the marriage
Shomi: ok then come from your police station by 5pm as the groom’s family will coming today.
Swara (shockingly shouts): What! Mumma, you have already called the groom. (narrowing her eyes) from when this planning was going.
Shomi (sheepishly): Actually beta the mother of the groom is my childhood friend. So we decided to make our children marry therefore she is coming today with her son.
Swara: Fine but don’t forget to tell them my conditions.
Shomi: don’t worry, we will tell them..happy
Swara: Will see after seeing the groom.
Saying this swara went to her room and got ready in her uniform. She took her cap and went towards her police station.
In another house an old lady is talking with a young man, who had well built body.
Boy: Mom, please i don’t want to marry
Lady: Sanskar, you are 27 years old. How much more time do you want? Please for me see this girl. If you don’t like her then we won’t proceed this relationship.
Sanskar: Fine mom but she should understand me. I mean you now that I am a major and I have a bigger responsibility that is protecting my motherland. And if she didn’t understand my responsibilities and priorities then I will say direct no
Sujata: Don’t worry beta, she will definitely understand
Sanskar (narrowing his eyes): How can you be so sure?
Sujata: uffo, you ask so many questions, you go and take rest in your room
Sanskar: Fine I am going
Sanskar goes away then uttara asks, “mom, how can you be 100% sure that the girl will understand bhai.
Rp who was sitting beside uttara said, “because beta, she herself is protector of our country”
Uttara (excitedly): It means she also a soldier
Sujata: no, she is an IPS officer
Uttara: IPS officer, are our talking about the new IPS officer of our district.
Sujata: yes uttara, she is daughter of my childhood friend. Me and shomi were best of friends. But after getting married we got busy with our families but we did remained in touch and then I got to know that her daughter got a permanent transfer here then I thought to change this friendship into relationship.
Uttara: ohhh
It was evening by now.
Sanskar and his family reached Gadodia house. Everyone were settled on the sofa and were chit chatting.
Sujata: Shomi, where is swara?
Shomi: Actually she isn’t back from her work yet. I told her to come early but you know her job.
Sujata: Hmm right.
Uttara (whispers): Waise bhai, are you excited to see her?
Sanskar: Uttara, I already told you that if she understands me and my work, then from me it will be a yes.
Just then shomi sees swara on the corridor, who is injured a little. She is having bangdage in her hand and her head. Shomi runs towards swara and makes her sit on the couch.
Shekhar (Worriedly): Shona, beta these bandages
Shomi (Worriedly): Ha shona, are you okay. What happened?
Sanskar was shocked, and now understood when the thing that sujata said in the morning. He is now sure that swara will definitely understand his job. At one point he was mesmerised by her innocent and cute face. He also got to know by swara’s dressing that she is an IPS officer.
Swara (smilingly): Ma papa, I am alright and these wounds. They are normal in this job. Actually we put a raid on the base of human trafficking gang. So in process i got hurt. And ma, i am even ready to bear the bullets on me, these wounds were just form a knife. So take chill pill mumma, papa. (Swara haven’t noticed sanskar and his family yet. While RamTha and SanUtt were admiring her talks)
Sujata smiled and caressed her head. Swara lifts her head and sees sujata, then Rp and SanUtt. Swara understood that they are groom’s family. She stood and took blessings from RamTha, which impressed them.
Swara: Sorry actually, I really got busy in that
Rp: It’s okay beta. You don’t have to say sorry, you were just doing your duty.
Swara smiles and then says, “Mumma, I will just go and get freshen up in two minutes.
Uttara: Swara di, let me help you
Swara: Ok
Saying this swautt went to swara’s room to make swara ready.
Sanskar: uncle aunty, from when swara is an IPS officer.
Shekhar: She joined when she was 23 years old. She doesn’t cares about anything, infact she like to take risks.
Shomi: Ha. And sujata, you know she had junoon of protecting india and take out all crimes since childhood
Sujata: Really, even sanskar was like that since childhood.
Like this they kept talking and in few minutes, they saw swara coming down.
Sanskar was again memerised seeing her in orange saree, which was his favourite colour.
Sujata: Swara, you are looking very beautiful beta.
Swara (smilingly): Thank you aunty.
Sujata: and ha no need to bring any tea like a typical to be bride. You just sit with us.
Swara, sujata and uttara settled on their seats. After about half an hours of chatting, shomi said, “I think sanskar and swara should talk with each other once and decide what they want.”
Sujata: good idea.
Shomi took them to swara room and went away. Both of them were silent then sanskar broke the silent
Sanskar: hi, I am major sanskar ramprasad maheshwari.
Swara: Hi, I am IPS officer Swara Gadodia
Sanskar: I heard that you wanted to become IPS officer since childhood wanted to devote your life in serving this country.
Swara: Yes, it was childhood dream to become IPS officer. I wanted to serve this country and wipe out all the crimes and protect this country and the people of it. How about you? Was being a soldier your childhood dream.
Sanskar (smiles): Yes, I also wanted to serve this nation
Like this they talked for about 1 hour. Then they went downstairs.
Sujata: sanskar what is your decision?
Sanskar (smiling and eyeing swara): yes
Everyone joyed and then their eyes were on swara.
Swara blushing nodded her head in a yes
Shekhar (teasingly): OMG the great bengali sherni, IPS officer swara gadodia is blushing. This is a big breaking news.
Swara: Papaa
Shekhar: I was kidding (saying this he hugged her)
Everyone celebrated this moment. And because sanskar had holiday only for 1.5 months, the family decided to do engagement today and marriage in 2 weeks. Then SwaSan can spend some time after marriage. SwaSan used talk on phone whenever they were free. And slowly slowly their for feelings each other were growing in their hearts. The two patriotic person were now in love with each other. The day before their wedding, they confessed their love to each other.
Finally the most awaited day came in their lives. Two different people became one. It was their wedding night. Swara was sitting in the middle of the bed. Sanskar came in. As he was proceeding, swara’s heart beat was increasing. Sanskar sat infront of swara. He removed her veiled and was mesmerised by her. Sanskar cupped her face and kissed her forehead. He looked at her romantically and asked huskily, “Do I have permission to love my wife.”
Swara blushed profusely and nodded her head. Sanskar smiled and removed her maangtika and kissed her forehead. He then removed her earrings and kisses her ears. Like this he kept removing her jewellery and kissing her. He then made her lay on the bed and consummated their marriage. Like this the days passed, SwaSan spent many moments with each other happily.
Finally the day came when sanskar had to go back. Whole time swara didn’t shed any tear infront of him otherwise it could make him weak. Yes even a IPS officer has a heart which can be innocent. Even the soldiers have emotions but they can’t show it to everyone. But when he left, swara locked herself in a room and cried. Like this years passed and sanskar visited his house at least once a year. Both swara and sanskar were doing their duty bravely and honestly. Swara’s in-laws felt really proud to have DIL like swara, who handled her duty and home both very well. One day sanskar was at his home during his holidays.
Swara was climbing the stairs, just then she started to feel dizzy. She was going to fall down, just then sanskar caught her.
Sanskar: Swara (tapped her cheeks) Shona open your eyes. Oh my god, Mom, dad, uttara, please call the doctor fast.
Saying this her lifted swara and took her to their room. Everyone were worried as she suddenly fainted. The doctor came and checked swara. He came out of the room. The family members ran to them.
Sanskar: doctor what happened to swara? why did she fainted suddenly?
Doctor smiles and says, “Don’t worry Mr Maheshwari, now you have to take double care of your wife.”
Sanskar: Doctor, please tell clearly what happened to her.
Doctor: Congratulations, you are going to become father.
Sanskar (worriedly): Ok but what happened what happened to her.
Sujata (happily): Chore I am going to become dadi
Sanskar: Ma, I know you are going to become dadi but why did swara fainted.
Rp: Sujata, Uttara I think he has gone mad. Doctor please treat him
Doctor smiles, “Mr maheshwari, you wife is pregnant”
Sanskar: Ok but (finally this buddhu ram realised what doctor said), wait what did you say.
Uttara shouting in sanskar’s ear, “doctor said that I am going to become bua, mom dad are becoming grandparents and you and bhabhi are becoming parents.
Sanskar: Ouch uttara, why the hell you are shouting.
Rp: So what she could do, after telling you three times, you realised that you are going to become father.
Doctor goes away and Sanskar jumps in happiness and hugs his family members. He happily goes inside and sees swara sitting on bed and smiling blushingly. Sanskar sits in front of her and raises her head by holding her chin with his fingers.
Sanskar (lovingly): Thank you so much shona, for giving such a beautiful gift.
Swara smiles and hugs him tightly. RamTha and Uttara come and congratulate SwaSan. Like this months passed, sanskar couldn’t be with her in her pregnancy times which did made sanskar sad but swara motivated him and told him not to worry as their child will be proud that his/her father is a great and brave soldier. Finally after 9 months, swara gave birth to twins, one girl and a boy. Sanskar came at their naming ceremony. Sujata said that the both of the children were ansh of SwaSan therefore the girl was named as Saranshi Sanskar Maheshwari and boy was named as Swaransh sanskar maheshwari.
Slowly years passed and Swara also joined her duty back. Like this 7 years passed and SwaSan’s cute children were now 7 years old. Both of them understood their parents and their responsibilities really well there fore they never said that they didn’t have time for them in fact they were proud to have such parents. As usual sanskar came for holidays. But one day he got a call.
Sanskar: Hello
OP:
Sanskar: Jai hind sir
OP:
Sanskar: Don’t worry sir, I am coming and those terrorist will not be able to do anything on 15th august.
OP:
Sanskar: I will be there by today evening. Jai hind.
Sujata: What happened beta?
Sanskar: Mom, in 5 days it is 15th august, some terrorists groups are planning a big attack. so I have to urgently go back to my base.
Sujata: But sanskar, you just came few days ago. What about saranshi and swaransh
Saranshi and Swaransh (together): It’s ok dadi, let papa go. He had to protect other children of this country. He will come again.
Sanskar got emotional seeing his children so mature. He bends down and hugs them tightly and kisses on their forehead, “You papa is proud of both of you.”
Saranshi: We are also proud of you papa
Swara was standing and admiring the trio.
Sanskar: Shona, will you please help me in packing.
Swara nods and goes to the room with sanskar. Swara helped in packing bags and sanskr was ready in his uniform. Swara took his cap and made him wear it. She tip toed and kissed his forehead, “Win this battle sanskar and always remember, I am always with you.”
Sanskar: Swara, whenever I go back, the only thing that comes in my mind that will be able to come back to this place. Before marriage I used to worry but now I don’t have to worry about mom dad, as you are with them and you will handle them.
Swara smiles and starts to go but sanskar hold her hand and pulls her. She dashes with his chest. Sanskar smiles and puts his finger on his left cheek, asking a kiss. Swara narrows her eyes. Sanskar makes puppy face. Swara sighs and kisses his left cheek. Sanskar smiles and then points towards his right cheek. Swara kisses there too. Then sanskar points towards his lips. Swara widens her eyes, nods in a no and pushes him. Sanskar makes a sad face and starts to go but swara holds his hand. She comes infront of him. She tip-toes and puts her lips on his. Sanskar holds her waist and starts reciprocating the kiss. It was sweet goodbye kiss. They break it and hug each other tightly. Suddenly they Rp calling them as it was time for train. They broke the hug and everyone dropped him to the train station.
3 days passed and there was no phone call or letter from sanskar. Finally, someone rang the door bell. Sujata opened the door and was shocked to see four soldiers carrying a coffin.
Sujata: Ram ji! Uttara!
Rp and Uttara comes and was also shocked to see them.
Soldiers1: Sorry to say but Major Sanskar Maheshwari died in the battle.
Soldier2: He was indeed one of the most brave soldier who will be remembered forever. His dedication to his country is an inspiration to all the young soldiers. All four soldiers went away. Sujata, with trembling hands, opened the coffing and saw sanskar lying with a satisfatory smile on his face and indian flag wrapped around his body.
RamTha sat down with a thud and sujata shouted, “Sanskar!!”
Sujata started crying vigorously and hugged rp and uttara also hugged him. Rp was also crying. At about the same time swara, who was in her uniform, came with her children was shocked to see RamTha and uttara crying.
Swara worriedly runs to them with children, “Mom, baba, uttara what happened? Why are you all crying?
Saranshi and swaransh saw sanskar’s dead body.
Swaransh (cryingly): Ma (points towards body of sanskar), papa
Swara sees sanskar and got shocked. She knew she will face this someday but didn’t knew that it will give her so much pain. Indeed, sanskar was her soulmate, her guide, her best friend, her everything. Swara sits with a thud and tears starts to roll down her cheeks. She isn’t saying anything. She is just numb. Rp goes towards his grandchildren and consoles them. Uttara and sujata hug swara. Two days passed, and it was 15th august now. In sanskar’s house it was sorrow spreaded everywhere. It was sanskar’s barsi now. SInce two days, swara didn’t say anything. Today, the strongest women of the city became the weakest girl. Everyone were sitting in the hall. Swara was just sitting in her room, wearing white saree and a pale face. Suddenly uttara comes with a phone, “Bhabhi, there is call for you.”
Swara takes the phone and says with trembling voice, “Hello”
DCP of the city: Hello Inspector swara maheshwari, We need you immediately as we got the information from our detectives that a terrorist group will soon be going to attack during the independence day event in victoria park.
Swara, who was still in sorror of losing sanskar, “sorry sir, I won’t be able to come.”
Saying this she cut the call. She closed her eyes and went into the memories of sanskar. Just then someone calls her.
Voice: Swara
Swara gets happy hearing the voice and says, “sanskar”
She sees sanskar standing infront of her in his uniform but with angry face.
Swara: What happened sanskar? Why are you angrly?
Sanskar: IPS officer swara maheswari or should I say swara maheshwari
Swara: What are you saying sanskar?
Sanskar: Seriously swara, you are asking me. You should ask yourself the same question. What did you just said to DCP that you are not coming. (he hold her shoulder), where is my brave swara who used to fight with every problem bravely and who never gave up. Where is my brave swara who was determined to do anything for her country. Where is she gone? I never expected this from you swara.
Swara breaks down and says, “Sorry sanskar but that swara got lost on the day you left me.”
Sanskar hugs her and says, “No shona, that swara is still there. But you hid her somewhere. Swara remember your oath that you took before becoming IPS officer. You took an oath that no matter what you will always protect you motherland. You will protect the citizens of this country. Swara if today you won’t go then those thousand of innocent kids with die. Swara even you are a mother then think how those mothers will feel when they will see their children getting killed. How will those children feel when they will see their parents dieing in front of them. Swara what will our kids think that their mother is not brave. Swara, you can’t let my sacrifice go waste like this. If those terrorist will kill the people then you and me, both will fail as protector of the country. Swara you are IPS officer Swara Maheshwari and wife of Major Sanskar Maheshwari.”
Swara gets courage and says, “Sorry sanskar, I don’t what happened to me. I got so blind that I forgot my duty. Sanskar I am going.
Sanskar: I am proud of you swara. Go, your motherland is waiting for you. Always remember, Main tumhare dil mein basa hoon, (I always there in your heart). I am always there with you.”
Swara smiles but sanskar starts to walk backwards and starts to fade away.
Swara: Sanskar!
Then swara opens her eyes. She smiles and says, “I am going sanskar.”
She calls DCP back, “Sorry sir, I didn’t know what happened to me. I am coming sir.”
Saying this she cut the call and got ready in her uniform. She wore her cap, took her gun. She stood in front of the mirror. She took the sindoor and filled it in her maang. She took the mangalsutra and tied around her neck. She went downstairs. Everyone were shocked seeing swara.
Swara: Mom, baba, I have to go urgently as there is an attack in victoria park. And..And, I can’t say if I will return back or not.
Saranshi and Swaransh came and hugged swara tightly. Swara bent down and said, “sorry beta. But I am not able to return then take care of your dadu and dadi and don’t do any mischievous. Always remember that you dad and me are always there in you heart. Guiding you and loving you.”
The kids nod and kiss swara’s cheeks
Swara stood up and took blessings from RamTha and hugged Uttara. She hurriedly went to the venue.
When swara reached, she saw some of the terrorists already attacking. Swara fought with her police force bravely. She shot almost all the members of terrorists. Then she saw one of the terrorist going to shoot some children. Swara ran and got shot in her chest instead of the children. Before going unconscious, she shot the terrorist on his head and fall down with a smile as she completed her oath, her promise to sanskar. She reminisces all the memories with her kids, her parents and in-laws. She closes her eyes forever and went to the world where her sanskar was waiting for he. Both of the souls were happy as they completed their responsibility as a wife/husband, DIL/SIL, son/daughter, parents of their kids and most important above all, as the protector of their country.
That’s it guys, I hope you all loved this OS. Happy independence day and happy Janmashtmi. I will try to update my ff’s soon.Till then keep smiling.
20 Comments
I JUST LOVED IT…….HATS OFF TO SWASAN!! Wow dear….what a wonderful concept dear. MARVELLOUS!!
SALUTE TO ALL ARMY, NAVY N AIRFORCE OFFICERS…..
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY DEAR….
Amazing Os dear..!! And a apt one on this day..!! ????
Amazing dear…..happy independence day
hello sonia di!! first of all hats of to you for writing an os like this.. it really took of me. i was feeling so wonderful after just reading the os..
first of all the title was soo catchy and totally suitable for this os
really loved the starting scene of shona where she came like a super woman and not only protected that girl2 but also told her that she should not cry and be able to protect herself. it was wonderful.. and i was soo happy to know that my brave girl was playing an IPS officer.
and sanky’s entry was just tooo good. loved that he was so dedicated towards his motherland and duty. really loved his role.
this whole os was just too too good and wonderful for words..
i am really in love with it.
we must really salute all our officers who protect our country and let us live a peaceful lives without even thinking about thier lives. i wish they all get happiness in their lives
and a very very Happy Independence Day to you
Such a beautiful story…… amazing….. Happy Independence Day….. salute to all our protectors….. for whom we can sleep without any fear….. Jai hind
super awesome ??? and Happy Independence day..
M a silent reader……but ur OS nade me speechless idh words to express dh emotions it was just awsum….HAPPY INDEPENDCE DAY
Do u use wattpad..if yes den plz if u dnt mind can ik ur username….
Just excellent and awesome…..
Amazing ?? but kids ???
lovly dear
I’m speechless…it was beyond awesome…loved it from core of my heart.And Happy Independence Day.
Loved it..tc..
Beautiful Story.. Loved it
Happy Independence Day
awesome dear.loved it.pls post your other ff
awesome loved it
Awesome…beautiful os
Loved it
??? superb
really soooooo sorry for commenting late
os is really fabulous dear
loved it to the core
awesome story… it touched my heart..
thank you so much for this wonderful os…
do post all your ffs soon.. am waiting for them eagerly…
love it