Hello guys.. Anu is back with the next chapter.. Reason for late update is that guys , I don’t live in India with my family.. I live in London as I am doing my graduation there… 28th June is my birthday so I had come back to India on my dad and mom’s wish.. And yesterday my family decided to spend some quality time outside and so full tight schedule and I couldn’t write the epi.. I am really sorry for that but nevertheless, everyday this is happening as my family wants to make my each day special her run India.. Another point.. Guys I am seriously saying .. I am writing this disclaimer even before I have even started writing his chapter.. Silent readers Pls comment.. I am so busy due to some stuffs of my transfer and etc… still I tried to post the chapter but it feels bad when your number of comments decreases.. I know that the chapter was not to the expectation level but still at least a suggestion would have worked… A simple emoticon or a four letter word ” nice ” or just 3 words “can do better” .. I know the number of comments were good but still it was less than the previous chapter and more less than the previous series.. .. My previous series got 123 comments , 100 comments per chappy … But This series , it’s lingering on 60 in second chappy and 80 in the first chappy,, tell me if the series doesnot have the required charm.. Writers are not greedy for comments .. It’s just that it inspires and motivates them to write.. Ohkk then.. I am not in a very good mood plus I am very tired .. I’ll try my best to complete the chapter but if my body doesn’t supports then I have to end this with a short update and next chapter as last for sure .. U all must be thinking what has happened to Anu.. Why did she wrote something like that above .. I know I am acting like a little kid who is squealing for chocolate… I myself don’t know but I am feeling so depressed and upset .. My heart told me to write and I don’t regret my decision.. Sorry, if I have hurt anyone with my comment.. Hope you understand me guys .. Keep supporting.. Love you all.. All who commented and specially some sweet sisses which I have found here on tu..
#ANU MODI
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AT NIGHT,
The clouds were black yet there was a shine in the sky.. The moon was hiding yet the stars were twinkling.. It was dark all around yet there was a warmness of light .. There were swords in the field yet it was ready to blossom a new love story.. They were there for a fight but destiny planned to unite them tonight…
It was dark but the ground was dimly lit by lanterns .. The light was sparkling and was making the ground brightened by its charm which could ignite tender yet maniated feelings in one..
Sanskaar was standing at the mid of fighting ground , deeply engrossed in thoughts with one sword in each hand… His chain of thought broke by the melodious voice of anklets.. He knew who it was and with a sweet smile approached her.. Swara was wearing a white anarkali suit with a turban on head and the elongated cloth was covered around her face.. Like always , only her eyes were visible to sanskaar… Next instance, SANSKAAR threw one of the sword towards SWARA and she perfectly held it in her hands..
Both the swords clashed for dominance.. While fighting, swara asked…
” why did u want to sword fight with me?”
” why don’t you want to show your face to me ” asked sanskaar.
” that’s your punishment ”
” for what??”
” for what.. 10 years have past sanskaar.. U didn’t even look back.. Never sent me a message.. Never tried to contact me too.. ”
” have you started loving me Swara??”
Swara stayed mum…….
” answer me Swara..”
” yes , I have sanskaar.. I have.. Not from now but from childhood.. I have always dreamt for u .. Only you., I have seen my future with you and wished to live it to u ,, wished to change my dream into reality.. Yes.. I love u..”
” but Swara.. I never thought of you as you said.. I had always secured by future with you but never had feelings for you the way you have for me… I never loved you
Swara moved back.. The sword dropped from her hand.. Tears aimlessly oozed out from her eyes.. Her dreams were shattered in one go.. Just few words were like a blow to her life which changed her world upside down.. Before sanskaar could continue she spoke..
” it’s ok sanskaar.. If you don’t love me , doesn’t mind.. May be I am not so lucky to get back the pleasure of love..”
” Swara.. Listen to me ”
“Sanskaar.. It’s completely fine with me .. U don’t need to pressurise yourself just because I love you..”
Tears were not ready to stop from Her eyes.. But she still controlled though her soul felt betrayed and tattered..
” Swara listen to me .. At least let me speak what I want to say..”
” I said Na sanskaar that I don’t need any justification.. I would never force you to love me back”
Her foots turned to exit the place but sanskaar held her wrist.. He was apparently frustrated with her to not let him speak and drive conclusions .. She tried to escape from him but he held her wrist and pinned her to the backyard wall caging her in his arms.. He started..
” Swara.. You should listen to others also… Dont u understand me and my feelings.. Little bit also you don’t understand ( bringing her hand near his chest).. Don’t u feel this heart.. How loudly it pumps when you are near me .. All ready to do racing and leave the coop of my chest.. (Moving his face to close her).. I always had unrealized, hidden feelings for you from childhood but it grew into love when I saw you.. Your pious soul attracted me towards you like a magnet.. I had never seen your face but I had seen you through your eyes.. (Kissing her eyes).. Eyes which express only innocence and sinlessness .. How could I not fall in love with you??”
(In between her sobs) ” so .. Do you also love me ”
” ya ALLAH.. What was I murmuring from so long?? Why have you made girls so brainless?.. Arey my crying baby.. Of course I love you..”
(Cutely) ” really”
” yes .. Now how many time should I tell you ,,”
Swara hugged sanskaar tight and replied..
” forever !!”
(Bowing towards her) “Ohkk.. As you say shehzadi”
And both giggled.. Sanskaar was all of a sudden ogling at her..
” now can I see your face, please??”
Swara simply nodded.. And he smiled back.. Sanskaar’s hand reached to her face to remove the foed cloth ( hehehe..according to him)..
He gently unwinded the knot and removed the tucked piece of cloth.. He caressed his cheeks and then moved his hand to remove the cloth fully of her face.. As the layers of cloth were removed , both their heart beats mingled.. One in anticipation and one in savouring the touch of his beloved.. Discarding her turban, he finally looked at her face… He was awestruck to see her… True say, he was completely bowled to see her.. No words seemed to be able to appreciate her beauty.. Her face which was glowing more due to the streaks of light by the lantern.. Her eyes firmly shut and when they opened, it met SANSKAAR’S fevered eyes and automatically colour started rising in her cheek …
” you are so beautiful Swara.. More than I had ever imagined you to be..”
They had a deep, passionate eyelock with their faces perilously close to each other..
And yes, indeed she seemed to be god’s perfect creation…
Her milky skin with those rosy lips as if creamy cake with cherry dropped.. Her eyes as deep as an ocean and nose so cute and swift..,
Her skin so soft as if to relish it ,then cotton may seem hard.. Her lips so juicy and pink as if nothing was created so sweet… Her nose which was red due to crying, still seemed so charm filled .. Her eyes, never had he found something so deep yet so expressable.. Her silky hair flowing all over her face which was a barrier to this beautiful view of his … Tucking all the strands behind her hair, he said
” marry me Swara .. All preparations have be done… Will you marry me tomorrow ?? ”
” when, how… ”
” everyone knows Swara.. Only your approval is needed .. Will you marry me ?”
” I have been waiting for this moment since childhood sanskaar.. And I have no objection ”
” I am so happy Swara .. I’ll tell this to sultan now.. ”
” accha ok.. Now let me go I need to sleep… Tomorrow is a very important day”
(Kissing her forehead ) ” good night.. Just one day SWARA and then I won’t let you go anywhere away from me.. Not even a second away .. ”
Sanskaar flashed a smile and scratched the back of her head.. Swara blushed hard but didn’t say anything .. She left from his embrace and straight landed on the bed in her room, recalling all the previous memories and slept peacefully ..
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Next day at morning , after combat practice, Sanskaar was coming back to his room , when he bumped into a girl.. He made her stand straight ..
(Zyada Sochi nahi.. It’s not Swara .. Hheheh … It’s kavita .. Maro nahi.. She is not the villian.. She will just do healthy flirting with sanskaar)
Kavita was staring at sanskaar.. Why not ? He was looking devilishly handsome with sweat dripping from his face and wet hairs..
At that time , Swara passed from the corridor and she introduced them to each other..
Swara- SANSKAAR … Meet kavita.. Princess of malar…. Just arrived for our wedding .. And kavita .. Meet sanskaar, my would be husband.. Kavita .. This guard will show you the way.. Reach your room and then come for the brekfast.. Will catch you there..
Kavita leaves… Sanskaar hinted a lil bit of jealousy and possessiveness in swara’s voice and a teasy idea was ready in his mind with a notorious smirk on his face..
Swara proceeded to leave but sanskaar wrapped his arms round her waist, banging her in his chest..
” where are u leaving? ” and he kisses her cheek..
” sanskaar.. Leave me .. We are standing in between the corridor .. Someone will see .. ”
” no.. I don’t care.. ”
And he leaned towards her lip.. Even Swara shut her eyes.. Their lips were about to meet par aa gaye unke dushman..
Ragini and laksh – Swara/Choti .. Come ..
Both saw the scene and immediately closed there eyes with hand and turned back..
Ragini and laksh- we didn’t see anything..
Both Swasan were shocked and red due to embarrassment .. Swara stamped her foot on sanskaar and rushed from there..
Sanskaar – aaow… Aah.. Yeah ladki bhi na …
Raglak stared at him and sanskaar gave a tight smile and he too ran from there.. Both laughed out loud..
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AT THE DINING TABLE,
All were seated.. Sanskaar was seated infront of Swara with laksh at his side and kavita at swara’s side..
While all were eating , kavita spoke out..
” sultan (referring to shekhar).. I wanted to go to the local market of this place…”
“No problem kavita.. You can go but you make sure that you reach soon”
” shehzade sanskaar .. Will you like to come with me?”
Swara who was eating her food almost spitted it in on her face ..
” whAt!!” Came everyone’s reaction..
” I mean to say he may have to bring some gifts for Swara.. ”
“No.. I don’t have to.. Moreover.. Abbu is coming.. The necessary requirements , he will bring …”
After food, everyone left,, Whole time , kavita tried to make him agree but he wouldn’t budge.. She even came to his room but he was quick enough to leave from there.. He was literally running away from her or better say, trying to hide from her .. He spotted her in the next corridor and entered into the first room he saw and thankfully , it was of Swara .,
Sanskaar – ” phew ”
Swara- kya hua .. Kisse bhag rahe ho..
” kavita chipkali se .. Peeche hi pad gayi hai”
“Toh mai kya karu”
” matlab .. Seriously .. Your would be husband is tensed because some other girl is completely drooling over her .. Aur tumhe to jealousy bhi nahi ho rahi hai”
“Nahi ho rahi hai.. ( snaking his arm around his neck) .. Afterall my would be husband is so handsome toh ladkiyan to chipkengi hi but I know he is only mine.. ”
There lovey-Dovey moment was halted by chipkali.. I mean to say kavita who was shouting outside..
Kavita- ” Swara.. Have you seen sanskaar”
Sanskaar signalled Swara to say no but she nodded is head and said “I’ll tell u are here”
Swara- ” kavita .. Sanskaar is….. ”
Before she could speak more, Sanskaar held her waist and closed her mouth with his hand.. Kavita hearing no answer moved from their whereas our love birds were busy in each other… Sanskaar removed his hand from her mouth but his other hand was still on her waist..
Swara- ” why are you staring at me?”
Sanskaar- “why I can’t do?”
“I thought you will kiss me ”
“Do you want me too?”
“Yes” replied Swara and soon sanskaar’s mouth were in her sealing them perfectly.. Due to the sudden act, she felt down on bed along with him but their lips were still together.. Devouring the conquest of exploring each other’s mouth and lips in synchronisation..
Bottled up emotions exploded….
Desires heightened….
Passion poured…
Feelings aroused…
Sparks flew..
And the kiss was the evidence of all.. They broke the kiss but soon after, a new conquest was followed for the exploration of each other’s body.. The barriers were removed , the clothes discarded, moans creeped, kisses were placed and they united by all means .. The heavenly presence was the attest of their coupling..
That night, they got married and lived a journey of happily ever after,. The whole universe gleamed with joy at the Union of this couple .. The Union of the prince and his veiled princess,,
THE END
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Heya guys.. Pardon me for mistakes .. I have no idea what I have written.. My mind was in a subconscious star while writing it … So apologies.. The series has ended.. Share your views about the ending.. Did u liked it or you thought it could have been more better .. Important thing , that I have rushed in this chapter but no option guys.. Tomorrow is my birthday.. Yahi soch ke maaf kar dena..
96 Comments
Very nice
But u ended this very fast
Thank u sravya Sri and I know I rushed like anything but pls try to understand my reason too.. Though no offence and I am sorry, I mydel admit that I made this series sort of like marathon race.. Par Kya karu my hands are tied.. Sorry
Wow anu luved the epi really nice ????
Thank u aniya.. Love u.. ??
nice
Thank u malar.. ??
Superb yaar and happy birthday to you
Thank u barathy.. ?? me too so excited for my bday.. Just 14 minutes… Waiting for my surprise from my family.. ??
nyc….nyc…nyc…. (y) (y) 🙂 🙂 🙂
Thank u… Thank u… Thank u… Beba.. ??
Hey anu I am shanaya….it was a beautiful story….I really liked it…. And advanced happy b’day…. May this day bring lots of happiness to u….lots of love… Tc
Hey SHANAYA.. Lots of thank u .. And only few minutes for my birthday.. And now I am leaving.. Will reply to you all a little time later.. Love you guys so much.. ???
Happy bdae anu n 8t wasa sweet n lovely series
Glad you liked it zeenat.. Guys gotta go now.. I’ll reply you all later for sure
Mashallah! Subhanallah! M not a Muslim….plzz! Beautiful ya! Happy bday in advance! Amazing! Dnt cry for less comments….there r millions of silent readers. Best OS series ever. Be up with another one soon!
Thank u laddoo.. Hehe .. Even I am not a Muslim.. And I am not crying dear.. I get ample comments.. In fact much more than others., the fact is that every writer tries to improve his skills as he for she represents her other price of work.. Comments tell us that We have improved from before.. Just tell this.. Well I am a happy go girl
Awsomeeee … Happy birthday to my princess hv a nice day … Love u a lot
Thank u so much ansa dear., i thought my family also treated me as princess.. Just at 12.. They wished me .. Loaded my rooms with gift.. Brought a triple layered truffle chocolate cake but as I cut the cake , next instance two other cakes were smashed right at my face and then started the cake fight,, lol.. MADe a mess out of my beautiful face.. Hehehe
Superb..nice ending..
Thank u mahjabeen.. ☺️☺️
No words to express awesome
Aww .. That was so sweet.. Thank u Sonu.. ☺️☺️
it was really good but still I feel u ended it in hurry but can understand your problem… Happy Birthday dear?…
Tysm ireena for understanding my problem and again tysm for my birthday wishes.. U r a srk fan .. Even I am his jabra fan.. ???
Advance b’thday wishes dear.. And awesome ending… Plzzz come with a new ff rather than ss
Thank u Anu for wishes and glad u liked the series.. Will surely try to come back with a ff but not in the next month.. If possible , next month I can post an os but no chances of a ff.. I’ll be extremely irregular if I take the risk of writing a ff
Awsm….
Glad you liked it ahana.. ☺️☺️
Read all d chappy in one go
N I must say u r marvellously talented such a beautiful description of feelings that too on swasan was lyk icing on cake
Advance happy bday dear
M luking forward for more such stories from u
Thank u poota.. The way you have described your appreciation for me is too good.. Thank u again.. If you want any link to my previous works .. Comment .. I’ll give you the links.. ☺️☺️
Nice and ya happy birthday in edvance
Thank u .. ???
Nice
Thank u .. ??
superb dear 🙂
advanced happy birthday 🙂
Thank u so much for your comment dear.. Love u loads… Shruti
What say, nice. Well written!! Loved to the core. Advance birthday wishes!! Keep smiling and god bless you ?
It’s so sweet of you Sindhuja.. And ha.. May God bless me .. Lol
Wow amazing dr… i hope u will soon come back with new os or ts or ss… take care bye
Will try for sure to post an os before going to London but after reaching there.. No chances .. Full Concentration on my studies .. I am a nerd without spectacles Na.. ??
Superb..nice os series..ur writng skill is superb..and happy birth dy..god’s blessing always be with u…
Thank u .. Thank u so much G_S.. Credit of writing skills goes to my teacher.. One to whom my gratitude filled respect will always go.. She is the one who has groomed me fully.. From a shy girl made me confident and bold
nyc
Thank u s
Awesome
Tysm maha.. ??
it ws awam….bt u ended it soo fast….i expct some strng sword fight btw swasan….anywayz write more os
Thank u pari.. Even I thought to add some scenes but couldn’t .. Sorry if you were disappointed.. I’ll try to come back fast
Thank u so much for this story anu ji.no words to describe its value.just got relieved and feeling relaxed.it would be great if everyone gets purepure and unconditional love easily.anyways thank u once again!
Priya.. U have such beautiful thoughts dear.. I am so impressed by your words.. May God guve u the happiness u deserve.. ??
Wish evry1 gets pure and unconditional love like this!thank u so much dear anu!no words to describe its worth and goodnessgoodness of the story! Advance bday wishes!
Thank u once again for your wishes dear.. Love u .. ??
Happy Birthday dear Anu…..stay blessed….stay happy always….
Wow its was awesome…..the whole series….well i have commented on all the episodes of this series…..
I loved the first para….description of the night….very well written….n swara’s description is also quite good….. the ending is also awesome…..
I will wait for your next os…..
Woa that was dot at 12:00!!!
Yes it was at dot 12:00
Omg nita.. Right at 12 u wished me .. So special.. Thank u so much.. And u know because of u .. Smile is plastered on my face.. Thank u so much again
Superb….
Ty anjali
Wow it wars speechless
Aww love u rosey.. Tysm
Guys I have read all your comments but I am feeling extremely sleepy now.. Will connect with you all in morning