HI GUYS………ALL OF YOURS COMMENT HAVE BOOSTED UP MY CONFIDENCE……NOW I AM HERE TO ENTARTAIN YOU WITH ONE MORE OS……
GUYS I HAVE WRITTEN 3 FFS:
1. SWASAN MAGICAL LOVE [FINISHED]
2. SWASAN MY CRAZY LOVE
3. SWASAN LOVE ME THODA AUR
ONE OS:
1. SWASAN TRUE LOVE OS BY HEMANSHI
THIS LINK CONTAINS ALL OF THEM……….http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/5244/?profiletab=posts ……….…PLEASE READ IN CASE YOU HAVE MISSED………
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So the story starts……..
SWARA IS THE REAL SISTER OF KAKALI AND SMIN AND COUSIN OF SHRINJAL
Swara was a sincere college girl and one of the topper in her class…….sanskar was her best friend according to her but according to sanskar he is more than a friend to her………sanskar was in top 5 among all the students in the class……..first he didn’t use to study well but slowly and gradually hen he started falling for swara he started studying well to impress her…….
Swara never even thought that why he behaves so good with her………why only he likes to be with her………why he doesn’t moves with his friends and with her……….why he often calls her and chats with her…..
ONE DAY
Sanskar [in mind]: yarrrrr…………I will have to tell the truth to swara that I love her and I cant live without her…………but how should I tell her…….she will never accept me……and I will be completely broken if she rejects……but I will also have to tell her as the whole college is behind this girl………and if I don’t tell her and what if someone takes her no no……..i cant take risk……if she will reject then I will make her fall for me……….but I will not tell her today I will tell her after a week
AFTER A WEEK
In this one week…….swara started enjoying his company…….she shared all her secrets with her and even he doesn’t lets the cat out of the bag……he solves all her problems……in these days the swara who was addicted to studies is now a bit addicted to sanskar……..she started liking him……sanskar’s love for her was increasing with every passing minute……
Sanskar [monologue]: swara…….today I will propose you and I know you also love me…….and u r just not accepting it…….but trust me my princess I will make you realise that no one will keep you more happy than me……….but now I have to propose you with a grand arrangement……….
Sanskar went to swara who was waiting for him in the canteen
Swara: oh godddd………so long you took to just brin a burger from the canteen…..you don’t know how hungry I am………..well I will scold you afterwards now give me my burger I am very hungry
Sanskar chuckled seeing her and gave her the burger
He was lost in her and she was busy in eating her burger
Sanskar: why you always call me in canteen
Swara: because it’s my favourite place [just like you kakali…….heehheeh]
Sanskar chuckled
Sanskar: you are impossible…….
Sanksar continued: swara…….woh I wanted to ask you something
Swara [while eating the burger]: ask na
Sanskar: voh will you come with me for a lunch???
Swara: yes sure why not…….but let me tell you…..the food shouldn’t be less……you know na I am a big foodie like my kakuuu……..so no less food and yaa the hotel should be 7 star……..and there should be a soft drink also……the gentry of people should be good
She kept on speaking her demands
Sanskar: okkkkkk okkk ok baba all this will be there but now you will come na meri maa
Swara chuckled and said: yess
Sanskar: vese who teaches you to speak this much
Swara: my sister kakuuuu
Sanskar: she is totally your carbon copy……..she is a big foodie [I don’t know exactly kaku but you mentioned in one of your comment so….]……….she loves canteen…….
Swara chuckled
Swara: chalo now its time for the class
AFTER THE COLLEGE
Sanskar took swara to a 7star hotel’s room and proposed her
Sanskar: swara today I want to tell you something…….swara the day I saw you I fell for your innocence for you……..i don’t know what is our future but I know that my present and future is only you…….SWARA I LOVE YOU……..I LOVE YOU SWARA…….MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU IS NOT LESS THAN HELL AND WITH YOU IS MORE THAN HEAVEN
Swara was just shocked listening this…….she was just standing at a place………..
Sanskar made her sit on the bed and took her hands in his hands
Sanskar: swara I can understand your emotions……you are shocked but pls once once tell me your feelings……..pls swara
Swara: sanskar but I never thought you more than a friend
Sanskar: that means u don’t love me [swara nodded a slight no]
Sanskar: swara then why do you tell me all you secrets……..whhy you trust me so much swara………why you care for me…..why you feel alone without me…….why you love spending time with me….why you are sad when I am sad and why happy when I am happy…….why swara why????
Its because you love me………you are just not ready to believe your love………
Swara take your time and think about this once……come now I will drop you to your home
He got up and was leaving when swara held his wrist and pulled him on her due to which they both fell down on the bed with sanskar on top of swara……they both had a sweet eyelock broken by sswara
Swara: sanskar I love you too
Sanskar was on cloud nine hearing this……he wasn’t able to believe it……..
Sanskar: say again
Swara: I LOVE YOU TOO
Sanskar hugged her tight and kissed all over her face……….
Swara: but sanskar……our parents….will they agree
Sanskar: swara if our love is true then no one can separate us……..
Swara: and what if it isn’t true
Sanskar: shhhhh I have full trust on my love………I am sure that my love is true…….dont say a word against my love……
Swara smiled and sanskar kissed her forehead
Sanskar: now let’s go tomorrow we both will talk to our parents and make them agree for our marriage
Swara nodded a yes and they both left
Sanskar dropped swara to gm mansion and left to his home
Swara went inside and saw shekhar and sumi sitting along with her three sisters i.e. shrinjal kakali and simin……..
Kakali: shona you came…..we were waiting for you since so long
Swara smiled and came inside
Simin: where were you
Swara: woh I went for a lunch with my friend
Shrinjal simin and kakali winked to each other…….
Shrinjal: achha di we wanted to talk to you and spend some time with you let’s go up
Kakali: ha ha let’s go I have to tell you the breaking news for today……..
Swara: khabrilal again started [haahahahahah sorry for this kaku……don’t throw draggers…..]
Kakali made faces and everyone laughed
Sumi: you four go upwards and talk we both have some work in the market……..
They four went up
Simin locked the room’s door
Kakali: suno suno suno so aaj ki breaking news hai ki maine apni behn yani swara gadodia ko sanskar maheshwari ke saath BLUEMOUNT HOTEL se bahar nikalte dekha
Swara was shocked listening it while they trio bursted laughing
Simin: but kaku sanskar maheshwari nhi jijuuuuuuuu
Swara: youuu you allll
They trio again laughed
Kakali: vese shona I have one picture…….you want to see it??
Kakali showed her pictures of sanskar’s confession, sanskar kissing her forehead, they both lying on bed with sanskar on top of her……..
Swara: from where you got all these
Kakali: shona at least you should have closed the door before doing this
Swara: but it was closed
Kakali: not fully…….it was open slightly
Simin: so shona maa baba ko kab batayegi humare hone wale jiju ke bare me…….
Swara blushed and turned her face
Shrinjal: see the great swara gadodia to be swara maheshwari is blushing
Swara: shrinjuuu…………I don’t know whether baba will accept sanskar or not??
Kakali: shona jiju said na that if love is true then why to worry…….
Swara: haa but
Kakali: no but vut today tell everything to maa baba
NIGHT
Swara told everything to her parents……..shekhar was about to slap her when a strong hand holds his hand…..yess sanskar held his hand and stopped him from slapping swara
Shekhar: you how dare you stop me…..
Sanskar: uncle you can slap me but not my shona
Shekhar became hell angry and was about to slap him but sumi came n stopped him…..
Sanskar: uncle pls at least listen to me once
Shekhr: get out of my house
Sanskar: but uncle…..
Shekhar: get outttt
Sanskar: uncle please at least once
Shekhar gt angry and brought a gun from inside and pinted it towards sanskar…….
Swara came in front of sanskar
Swara: no baba…..please noooooo……..please baba
Shekhar: swara get aside
Swara: baba please
Shekhar: swara I said get asideeeeee……..or else my gun will run over you also….
Sanskar: swara get aside pls swara
Swara: no sanskar I cant risk your life
Sanskar: swara just shut up you don’t know what you are doing……just get aside or else he will shoot you……
Swara: I don’t care about myself but you should be alive
Sanskar: no swara
Swara ignored his words and went towards shekhar
Swara: baba have you seen how much he loves me……..from the dae we know each other till now he has been with me…..in my every problem……..please baba……..I LOVE HIM………I LOVE HIM A LOT…….please for your daughter………pls
Sumi: shekhar only he can keep my swara happy……pls accept it
Kakali: baba I have seen his care for shona…….n I want him to be my jiju……pls baba
Simin and shrinjal: even we want that
Shekhar: okkkk but he has to pass some exams……
Simin: but papa is this a school to pass exam……
Shekhar: he has to pass some tests and if he gets succeeded then he can marry swara but if not then swara ask him to get out of our lives
Shemish left inside and swasan were having a cute eyelock
Sanskar hugged swara
Swara: sanskar are you sure you will pass these tests
Sanskar: yes swara I am damn sure……….my love is not so weak…….and I have to win…..for you, for me, for our love, for us……..
Swara smiled in tears and cuddled in him…..
Kakinjal [kakali, simin, shrinjal]: ahemmm ahemmm
Swasan came into senses and broke the hug
Kakali: so now we should call you jiju……..
Sanskar: of course Sali sahiba
Sanskar to swara: vese swara I came to tell you that my family has accepted you….
Swara: what really but what if baba rejects you…..
Simin: shona why you want jiju to say again and again that ur love isn’t so weak to fail in these tests………..
Sanskar: even I wanted to say that………
Sanskar: vese I just know swara has 3 sisters I don’t know which sister is whom
Swara: she is kakali
Sanskar: oh ur carbon copy…….khabrilaal
Kakali and swara giggled
Swara: she is shrinjal
Sanskar: shrinjal…..that shaitaan chotu shrinjal right
Shrinjal: right jiju
Swara: she is simin
Sanskar: everyone’s favourite……..bubbly simin……..
Simin: jiju you know everything about us…….
Sanskar: yes ur sister keeps on blabbering about you……
They spent some time and sanskar left
NEXT DAY
Shekhar took a lot of tests of sanskar like making food, cleaning house, hurting himself by piercing a glass in his hand, slapping himself 100 times in continuation and walking on a road burning with hotness for 20 minutes bare foot
After that Shekhar took swasan sumi and her sisters to a temple with 1000 stairs
Shekhar: so sanskar you have to climb these stairs in 5 minutes…….without stopping…..if you do this then you have passed the tests and swara is urs…….
Swara: what baba………but why these stairs
Shekhar: swara shut up
Swara: baba
Sanskar: I will do this………I will climb these In 5 minutes……..
Swara: but sanskar…..
Sanskar: shh swara……I will climb them and prove that my love isn’t weak…….
Sanskar began climbing the stairs while swara was crying badly……..all except shekhar was consoling her………..
3 minutes passed sanskar climed 790 stairs 110 were still left……..four minutes were about to get over……..
Swara was crying badly……..
Only one second left to 5 minutes and a sound came
“SWARA SEE I REACHED”
The sound was of sanskar……swara who was crying bowing her head down lifted her head up and saw sanskar……….
She had tears of happiness
Swara: sanskar come down……..
Sanskar started descending the stairs…….with great difficulty he descended 300 stairs and his leg got twisted as a kanta pierced in his each leg and blood was oozing badly from his leg………he was rolling down the stairs……..by now his head was also bleeding……….
Swara: sanskarrrrrr
She ran to him and took his head in her lap
Sanskar [semi-conscious]: s w a r a a
Swara: sanskar nothing will happen to you…….just wait….
swara: kakkuu maa call ambulance…..pls maa
@HOSPITAL
Swara was lying like a lifeless body……
Shekhar was feeling guilty for his deeds….
Swara went to him
Swara [angry]: mr. shekhar gadodia if something happens to him then I wont leave you and I swear I will leave Kolkata and go away from you
Shekhar came forward and was about to hold her but she stopped him……..just then doctor came out of ot
Swara rushed to him
Swara: doctor how is he???
Doctor: miss swara he is fine and conscious now you all can meet him after he is shifted to normal ward
@SANSKAR’S WARD
Swara entered the ward and hugged him tight……
Sanskar to shekhar: so uncle am I passed
Shekhar: uncle nhi papa…….and sanskar your love for her has proved that TRUE LOVE NEVER LOSES
Sanskar: rreally thank you thank you sooo much uncle……….
Shekhar: phirse uncle bola toh gun nikal dunga……….
All laughed hearing him and shemish blessed swasan……..
by now maheshwaris also came and blessed swasan
dp: shekhar ji what if we make them marry tomorrow itself with the engagement today
sanskar: yaa papa this is the best idea
kakali: jiju…….aapko badi jldi hai……..[jiju u are in a great hurry]
all laughed and swasan blushed
NEXT DAY
Swasan got married with all the rituals……..it wa s time for their first night………
Swaara was waiting for sanskar in the room when he came……swara’s head was covered with a veil and she was a bit nervous…….
Sanskar came to her and lifted her veil and she hugged her……..
Sanskar: jaan…….today I wont let you sleep
He carried her in his arms and they consummated
AFTER 5 YEARS SWASAN HAD A CUTE DAUGHTER NAMED SARA AND A SON NAMED ROSHIT
THEY LIVED HAPPILY FOREVER
…………………THE END……………………
Well guys I am so happy with your response on my previous os………guys those wo don’t read my ffs pls pls pls start reading………guys don’t forget to leave ur comments below and yaa I want to dedicate this chappy to all of you……..hope you enjoyed it……..