Hello..
This is my first attempt of writing an OS..I heard this story and like the concept.. Hope u guys like it..
Swara married to sanskar 3 years ago. Sanskar works for a company And swara is a housewife. Swara is huge fan of daily soaps. But sanskar doesn’t like these stupid serials. He hates them because of these serials most of the time she neglects him..
After doing work Sanskar returns to home . he is continuously knocking the door. Swara opens it after 10 minutes.
Sanskar?:” where were u shona? I was knocking the door since 10 minutes.”
Swara:” offo, sanskar ji. I was busy.”
Sanskar: ” where ???”
Swara:” sanskar ji, I’m watching shakti, u know Harman ji is about to save somya but…”
Sanskar: ” but what ?”
Swara:” but advertisement came. And I opened the door. ?”
Sanskar fumes with anger?:” swaraaaa ”
Swara: ” oops sanskar ji.. Advertisement is over. U go take ur dinner. ” she leaves to watch the TV..
Sanskar: ” aww I hate these serials, I hate this Harman also..” So atlast sanky goes to kitchen and takes his dinner.. But swara is still busy in watching serials. Sanskar goes to his bedroom and starts doing his works.
After watching serials swara comes to bedroom.
Swara:” sanskar ji.. Milk.”
Sanskar: ” keep it on the table. ” he holds her hand. “Shona sit here ”
Swara:” sanskar ji how’s ur day?”
Sanskar: ” boring, let’s do something interesting.”??
Swara:” what sanskar ji? What will I do”sanskar pulled her towards him. And slightly kisses on her cheeks.
Sanskar: ” love me.”
Swara(blushes?):” sanskar ji.. Ap bhi na..” With this sanskar removes her sari and lay her down on the bed. He undoes her clothes. And his also and came top of her.
Sanskar: ” shona U look more pretty when u blushes..” He moves towards her lips just then someone calls her.
Swara:” sanskar ji, stop someone is calling. ”
Sanskar: ” let it be shona don’t disturb me. ” but swara checks the phone.
Swara:”Sanskar ji it’s kavya’s call”
Sanskar: ” shona talk her tomorrow.. Na please. ”
Swara :” sanskar ji we have full night na.. Please.. ”
Sanskar?:” OK but cut the call soon. ” huh gossip Queen kavya.
Swara :” hi kavya..”
Kavya:” areyyy swara did u saw shakti today. Omg what fight .. Harman is too good.”
Swara(excitedβΊ):” ya kavya. I just love Harman. I wish he would my husband.. Such a caring guy..” Sanskar looks towards swara in shock
Sanskar (” she is prasing that Harman before me. Who the hell is he..?”)
Swara continues the serials gossips with kaya for nearly one hours. Sanskar is hell iretated by this.. As soon she disconnects the call. He becomes happy. He starts doing his work..?
Swara :” sanskar ji.. ”
Sanskar busy in kissing her?.:” hmm..”
Swara:” u know what sanskar ji.. Thapki changed her look. She became bani.. Still bihan find that she is her wife. If I will come to change my look will u able to recognize me.”
Sanskar: ” yup.. ”
Swara :” how sanskar ji.. ”
Sanskar bites on her shoulder.. :”aww sanskar ji..”
Sanskar: ” I’ll recognize u with this love bite..??”
Swara:” sanskar ji.. U know today happened.. To Somya”
Sanskar: ” what happened??? And who is this Somya..”
Swara :” offo sanskar ji she is Harman’s wife.. ”
Sanskar: ” hmm..”? he is hell iretated with her talks.. But continues his work.
Swara:”Sanskar ji u know Harman ji is very caring hubby.. I wish he would my hubby.. He loves her wife.. Madly.. ”
Sanskar: ” I too love my wife.. Now shona stop ur gossips.. Let me do my work..” He moves towards her lips.. And starts caressing it with his thumb..
Swara:” but sanskar ji her wife is not like me.. She is different.. Somya is very lucky na she get very tall, handsome hubby.. I just love Harman ji very much..he is so so cute..?” this is enough for sanky..
Sanskar: ” who the hell this Harman.. I’ll kill him..”
Swara :” if u kill him then what will happen to Somya..”
Sanskar:”shut up swara.. This Harman and Somya spoiled my mood.”he tooks his blanket and sleeps on his side..
Swara :” what happened to sanskar ji… May be his very tense for somya.. Sanskar ji is very kind hearted na. Can’t see anyone in pain.” She too sleeps…
Next morning?
Swara:” sanskar ji.. It’s ur tea.”
Sanskar ?: ” I don’t want it give it to ur Harman ji.”
Swara:” sanskar ji u r so sweet u cares for Harman ji a lot. I’ll give him but I don’t know where is he?.. “?
Sanskar (she is too much.)?. :” I don’t want it. ” swara sits on his laps..
Swara:” sanskar ji.. I know u r tense.. I should not tell u all this yesterday night.. ” she kisses on his cheeks… And then his lips … Sanskar becomes happy..
Sanskar: ” ya u should not tell that to me..”
Swara:” I know sanskar ji… U r very much tense for somya.. But don’t worry Harman ji is with her..”
Sanskar?:” tense or me..huh..?” sanskar gets calls from kavita.
Kavita: ” sanky.. U need to come office.. There is someone important work.. Boss is calling u.”
Sanskar:” OK I’m coming kavi..”
Swara (‘ huh I hate this chipkali kavi.. Huh my foot. ‘):” sanskar ji don’t go..”
Sanskar: ” I’m going.. U just take care of ur Harman ji..?” he leaves for office.
Just then kavya comes.:” namestey jiju.. Where going ”
Sanskar: ” office.. ”
Kavya:” it’s Sunday.. Going office or to meet ur girlfriend.. ” swara stares at sanskar.?
Sanskar: ” what is the need of girlfriend when u r here. ‘Sali’ is half wife na?” he leaves..
Kavya:” what is this swara, u have no control on ur hubs.. I think he must have an affair …”
Swara:” no.. He loves me he can’t live without me..”
Kavya:” u want to know his reality then I have a plan.. ”
Swara:” what plan..”
Kavya:” u just write a letter that u r bored with him and that’s why u r leaving him.. Then check his reaction.. ”
Swara:” OK.. But I’m damm sure he would not cheat me..”
With this swara is ready with her plan.. She writes the letter and keeps it on table and herself hide under the bed… “Now I’ll see what will u do without me..”? After sometime sanskar comes.. He calls.her.
Sanskar: ” shona, where r u.. ? ” don’t know where is she door was also open.. He is very much tense and continuously calling her.
Swara is smiling..” Hehe ? I knew it sanskar ji.. Can’t leave without me. This kavya is worng..”
Sanskar searches her then his eye falls on the letter kept in side table of bed..he reads it.
“Sanskar ji, I know u will be very much hurt after reading the this letter.. But no need to search me. I m leaving u because I’m bored with u in these 3 years …U even don’t like , that I used to watch the serials. Now I need freedom and change… Now no need to disturb me. Let me live my life peacefully ..Bye..” Sanskar gives no reaction after reading it he is quite for a minute.
Swara:” hahaha swara ur sanskar ji.. Look at him. Now I’ll give him surprise.. ” She is about to came out but..suddenly sanskar started dancing..
Sanskar: ” yeppii…. Woo hoo.. Yess yess.. Now I’m free.. Now I can do anything.. Finally my stupid wife.. Did one good work.. In her life.. Now sanky U r the boss.. No stupid serials.. No stupid.. Talks.. Don’t know how much I irritated with her continuously talking.. During our romance.. ” he starts singing the song..
Swara is heart broken.. ? kavya was right…
Sanskar calls someone..: ” hello kavi dear.. There is a good news.. Swara left me.. Now we r free to meet.. No one would come between us.. Kavi dear today we will enjoy together.. U give me address I’ll pick u from there. “He writes the address on the same letter… ” first we will watch movie then tonight together in my home.”
He opens the Almera and wears new clothes and applies deo.. ” kavi dear… I’m coming “he leaves..
Swara comes out with broken heart.. ” how can u do this to me sanskar ji.. She starts crying. Then she looks towards the letter “I’ll see where they r going..” She reads it.
” ur legs r visible, from under the bed.. Stupid girl.. I know this must be kavya’s idea.. Now stop crying.. I bought two tickets.. Of ‘ aye dil hai muskil’ .. Not only Harman ji.. Sanskar ji also loves her shona.. And be ready for tonight.. “She starts blushing?” and now stop blushing.. I waiting for u outside.. Come soon..”
Hope u guys like it….?????
87 Comments
How cute story it was!!!!! I just loved it,swara is too much innocent yr n sanskar loves swara so much.. Aaww how beautifully u adore it dea… Awesome one…
Thanks a lot…. Dear…???? I’m happy u like it
Hahahhahahahahahh aa ?????????????really sometime we Girls get really too much involved in serial that we ignore everyone even we take tansion will they get toghter…or who is the New villan..whose is betraying whom you cant belive dear I am one them…Swasan are my favt..that why cant See their sepration ????
Sorry I forgot to give you coments it was Amazing loved it????
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Good one
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Aww so cute…loved the last. It
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lol….superb
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damn funny yr…. π π
kitna hasi mai ……
thank u for dis epic π π
keep writing………
Mai bhi bahut hasi.. Likhte hue???
Very good dear
Though its your first one its amazing
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It was really funny and sweet
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Awesome..?
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Hahaha awesome
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so funny..
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All in one yaar…..
Emotional
Funny
Seriously awesome os…
Loved it
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Hahahaa..Too funny at the end…
Nice story..
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Awesome ?????? amusement.
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nice
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bhahahhahahahhah……i can’t stop laughing huh!!!
this is too much, reallt, many house wife should read it …
Thanks yrr…. I wish every house wife could read it…??
It was hilarious but that kavya’s idea, I have read it before..It was a Whatsapp message…BTW I loved it in Swasan form
Me too read kavya’s idea … But just add some swasan part in it… I’m happy u liked it ???
Sweet os.. ?
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Hahahahaha i loved it…
I knw abt dis story or concept still i loved it…
U wrote it beautifuly ?
Poor sanky swara is so irritating he wanted to do romance bt ?
Poor sanky ?????
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it was damn funny i’m going lol
loved the letter
Thank u… Shona is too much..?
Romantic husband with TV serial addicted wife????????so funny and awesome
Thanks Bhawna u r my true friend…???? love u
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Lovely….. Its amazing
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its toooi good
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hahahaha…LOl. Funny n cute. Sanskar’s reply is awesome
Sanky rocks…?????
Awwwwe…Lovrd it yaar..srsly its toooooo Cute n Adorable OS..Sanskaar Ji Rocked n Swara Shocked ??????. .Too Good ..Loved it..
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Damm funny… I to love it…
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Awesome
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Hahhaha..loved it dear..its sooo cute
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Loved it dear…….
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Bichara sanskar ???loved it….. ?????????
Thank u