Hey!! Its kritika here, back after four months. Some of you might remember me, for some of you I may be new. So actually I wrote a short story named “we are perfect for each other”. I have an awesome concept for its season 2, definitely not continuation though, but all I need is a good response. If I don’t get so, I will end it in the next episode..! it is not necessary to read season 1.
here goes a glimpse of the story!
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We were friends, then a couple, then a married couple, then 2 bodies but one soul. Today, we are just beside each other but I cannot see you, I cannot feel you, I cannot talk to you. My dear, I cannot respond you. It feels horrible.
I can hear you, love. Speak, speak. Take care of him, never let him feel alone. I know I am a very bad person. I cannot play any role in my life than living like a dead.
I never did that, sanskar! I know you believe me. But I am just hurting you now. You are crying because of me. Just me! Why do not you kill me god!
I am feeling something wet on my chest. Its him , oh god!
He is crying, with our seed in his arms. I have always been with him. To love him, to tease him, to console him, to make him happy! But today I cannot even see him.
just go home sanskar! Its hurting me. Go from here with our seed. Its piercing my whole body. My head aches! Aah..! I cannot say anything. It seems my vocal chords have died. I cant move a single part of my body.
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A/N
how is it? is it too bad? i am writing after 4 months!
ahh, if i will be happy with response, part 1 will be posted on 1 november. a special reason for that 😉
#comment_please
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31 Comments
superb…painful
Thank u dear
Nyc
Ty
Very nice
Thanks dear
Superb…
Continue soon
Tysm
Nice..plz continue..tc..☺
Tysm sweetie!!! U too tc
Next part jaldi nikal
Next part jaldi post kario. … Madam ji
Sure piku!!! N thank u for your comment!!! U too post ur ff soon
Nice continue
Ty priya
Swara is in coma???
Meher mumma!! Log ffs mein coma se wapas ane ke liye hi jate hai!??
You’re backkk yay iy’s amazing continue soon
Thank you soooooooo much dear
Nice
Ty
The words used are so touchy!!! Swara coma mein hai kya??????? M excited to read d next part!!! 🙂
Ita good re!!! ???
Luv u chotu???
Thank uuuu tii dii..
Love u too??
welcome back dr… do continue… it’s nice..☺☺
Tysm soo much nive dear!!
nice continue soon
Thanks dharani
Nice
Awesome
Wonderful
Awesome dear